Fusion Sprite Advice

[halls]

can anyone tell me if this is good or not and what i need to do on it. it's a fusion of groudon,torterra,grotle's bush thing, and rampardos' tail. and go easy on me as this is my first pokemon spirte.

and srry i cant get him transparent.

 

[frenzyplant]

its ok since its ur 1st sprite. but i would position the tail to the back so it looks like its connected and also the body, it doesnt look right to me. maybe a little fatter might look better for this sprite. dont worry, i had some bumps in the road at the beginning of my sprite journey. check mine out if u wanna c them: Frenzy Sprites on the Sprites and Sprite Comics.