*I need help* My Amateur Trainer Sprite and Other Trainer/Back Sprites

[chaojimbo]

***My Trainer Sprites from OLDEST TO NEWEST***

Spoiler: Trainer Sprites

2006 (I was 10 Years old):

2007-'09?(I was 11-13 Years old):

2010(I AM 14):

***My Back Sprites from OLDEST to NEWEST***

Spoiler: Back Sprites

2006:

2009:

2010:

***HELP!!!***

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I have been spriting for years and I have kept making my sprites better and better. I can keep improving but I can't seem to make this hair correct...

This is my current sprite:

I need the hair to look more skaterish or shaggy etc. I am not sure what to call the hair .

I an giving permission to spriters to edit my sprite and try to create better hair for him...I would prefer the hair not blocking the eyes either.

Extra Credit: The arm that looks like it is trying to flex a muscle needs to be pulled down at his side; resprited. Thanks.

Here are examples of what I want the hair to be like (I made these/I am in the picture):

(The split is usually above the right eye ((In YOUR view)), not in between)

So, I need criticism and help. Hopefully I can get some. Thanks for reading!

 

[Tunolipede]

Is this the sort of thing you're looking for?

I done what I could; I hope it's what you were aiming at ^^

 

[chaojimbo]

Is this the sort of thing you're looking for?

I done what I could; I hope it's what you were aiming at ^^

It is pretty good, I will try and mess with the hair a bit later though, it does need a little bit of changes.