P.R.O.J.E.C.T

[Zepzune]

[OOC: Anyone can join, you may do whatever you feel like, there is no storyline here....yet]

BIC:

Anne felt the brisk sea winds blow her hair gently. She leaned over the railing of the ferry, which was painted white, with a dark red rim. She jumped up on the railing and sat on it, seeing the approaching region ahead. many lights reflected off the boat, and onto the water. Anne smiled and looked up into the night sky, seeing the stars disappearing from the lights of the city. Anne looked over to her cabin, which had a pink door and a purple handle, and saw two Persians laying against each other. She looked over to the swimming pool and saw a Dewgong asleep underwater. She smiled and again, looked into the night sky.

"It's so good to have a rich daddy" she said smiling at the ferry "I mean, you get your very own ferry" she smiled as she looked at the city again, which was approaching fast. They finally docked at the harbor and Anne let a smile land on her face. She walked over to the Persians and brought out two pokeballs.

"Return" she said as a red line shot out of the center of the red and white pokeball and caught the Persans on the back. They turned red and withdrew into the pokeball. She smiled at the Dewgong and dipped her feet in the pool, pulling out a pokeball and pointing it towards the seal pokemon "Return" she repeated as the pokemon withdrew into it. She arose to her feet once more and walked to the front of the ferry, she climbed down the ladder and walked on to the elm dock, she then walked off the dock slowly and tiredly, as she walked into the soft sand. It buried her feet and made her feel happy. She walked out of the sand, and put on her flip flops once more. Taking a deep breath, Anne walked up to a huge mansion and walked in. There was paintings of people with pokemon and beautiful bird pokemon. A Mr.Mime walked up to Anne and smiled at her.

"Mime" it said happily as it took her soft hand and lead her upstairs. She walked into a huge room, with a queen sized bed, and a window at the head of the bed. She sat upon the bed, and Mr.Mime smiled at her

"Mime, mime" it said closing the door behind him, and walking out of the room. She smiled out at the window and then saw the beautiful ocean reflect the lights of the city.

"Finally, i'm home, in Blackthorn City" she said smiling as she removed three pokeballs off of her belt. She pointed them at the ground and a red beam shot out, releasing her pokemon. She smiled and put the two sleeping Persians on the end of her huge bed. She smiled at the Dewgong and put him in a small pond at the corner of her room. She then opened a closet door and there, in front of her, was a huge walk in closet. She walked in and closed the door behind her. When she came out she had sweat pants on, that went down to her ankles, and a pink shirt with a Happiny on it. She smiled and got into bed. Wondering what would happen tomorrow. She smiled and slowly closed her eyes, quickly falling fast asleep.

 

[Brendan Savem]

Brendan sat in the pok

 

[Zepzune]

Anne's eyes opened, showing a deep blue cascade color. She rubbed her eyes, trying to hide the tiredness from them. She got up and looked out the window, seeing the boy and his Machop. She rolled her eyes at them and sighed, they had woken her up, Anne opened the suite doors and walked out. She stood at the double staircase, and tip-toed down to the bottom, finally, Anne walked to the oak doors and slowly grabbed the handle, pulling it. The heavy door swung open, filtering light into the dark house. She walked out and saw the boy walking still, she caught sight of the tiredness in his eyes and she bit her lip.

"Hey, are you looking for a place to stay?" Anne asked, wrapping her arms around herself to keep her from freezing. Her blue eyes reflected the light that was given by the city. Her long, silky, blond hair was in a ponytail. She had a headband on, that was blue. Her face lit up and she started to walk over to the tired boy. "Because if you are, you're aloud to stay here, we have a guest bedroom" she said as her cheeks turned a rosy red from the cold. She then looked at the Machop, and turned around, going back to the mansion "If you want, i can get Mr.Mime to get you guys some food, and new clothes" she said. The only reason she was doing this was to shut them up, i mean, he had a loud booming voice, and she didn't want him to wake her up again, so she decided, what the heck. And plus, her dad always said to put others before herself, and then she would get another beach house. So it was win, win. She stood at the entrance of the double door and looked at him "Well?" she asked smiling at him. "It's getting cold, so make up your mind" she said smugly, but smiling.

 

[Brendan Savem]

When the girl from the mansion appeared at the doors. Brendan was caught by surprise. The mansion looked like it was deserted at first, though mansions tend to give that feeling. From experience, he knew that rich people (especially teens) have quite abnormal abilities when it comes to looking perfect, such as sensitive ears. There were no surprises on how she managed to hear him outside. However, the surprising thing was that she was allowing him to stick around until his ferry arrived (possibly). This was something that was rather new thing he noticed in rich people.

"It's getting cold, so make up your mind," she said smugly, this interrupted Brendan's train of thoughts. He only just noticed how cold it was getting. The hike through ice cave did that to him. He looked at his Machop and shrugged. Machop nodded. Brendan then turned back to the girl.

"Alright then, we might as well stick around for a while. At least until the ferry to the league arrives" Brendan answered

 

[Zepzune]

Anne nodded and gestured for him to come in, she walked into the mansion and went down a hallway, slowly, Anne stopped at an oak door, with a fancy carving on it. She pulled on the latch, and it unlocked, It swung open and the lights flicked on. She walked inside, and there was a king sized bed at the end of the room, there was beautiful artwork on the walls, and a window, like the one in Anne's room. She briskly walked over to a huge closet door, she opened it firmly and brought out a mini pokemon bed, Anne put it down at the end of the king sized matress and looked at the boy.

"Your pokemon can sleep here" Anne said firmly as she went over to the side table that was beside the bed. She laid out a holder for pokeballs on It. "You can keep your pokeballs here" she said as she took out a key from the rack, beside the door. She put it in his hand "You can lock it up too" she said going over to the entrance of the room "Well, see you in the morning, the Dining room is right beside this room, so feel free in the morning to ask the chef to make you something" she spoke quietly as Anne walked out the door, but stopped halfway."Oh, and if your not looking for anything fancy, theres cereal in in the cupboard, above the fridge, night" she said as she walked out and closed the door. She slowly walked back up to her bedroom and opened the door.

The room lit up, and Anne slowly closed the door and sighed. She removed the ponytail and hair band from her head and put it in the closet, then slowly walked over to her bed and sighed. She walked over to her mirror, and sat down on the oak chair. Anne slowly put on her slippers and looked in the mirror, then looked down at the necklace she was wearing. Her fingers slowly opened it and there was a picture of her and a boy smiling, holding hands. She bit her lip "Tyler...I miss the old days" she said as she closed it, at the same time, she took it off and put it in a cabinet right near her bed. She got up and looked out the window "I hope you win your contest" Anne spoke, still biting her lip, as she once more, sat on her bed and sighed. She laid back and looked at the ceiling for awhile. She lightly closed her eyes, and fell into a deep sleep.

Roar woke up and looked at Anne peacefully sleeping. He got up and stretched, and then walked on the bed over to Anne. He laid down beside her, and fell asleep.

 

[Yoshimitsu]

Right you miserable lot.

Read this. If I don't see signs of improvement, the topic will be locked.

 

[Kalseng]

Avan sped towards the city, riding atop his mantine. The brisk air ruffled his blue-tinted black hair. Avan cast his eyes out over the wtaer, hoping to see something interesting like a new water poekmon he hadn't encountered. There were none, other than the occasional magikarp or tentacool. This didn't ruin his mood, however. Avan always enjoyed riding on Mantine, he enjoyed Swimming with mantine, and he enjoyed the sea. It had taken him a while to travel all the way to blackthorn from Olivine, but he figured at this rate he'd have traveled all around johto, and be back in Olivine in under two weeks. Mantine swam up to the dock, gliding effortlessly through the water. Avan scrambled up on deck, and recalled Mantine into its pokeball.
Blackthorn City was smaller than Avan had imagined. It had its gym, the pokemon center, the pokemart, but not many houses. It must not have too many people because of the journey through Ice Cave that was required.
It was relatively late at night, but hopefully Avan could find a home before too late If not, he'd group toether with all of his pokemon and they'd sleep out in the lake, Avan and Vaporeon on top of Mantine, and Poliwwhirl floating next to them. So, Avan went in search of a house that looked like it could accomadate more than one person. he found a large house, almost mansion-like, and the lights were off in all of the rooms. Avan hoped someone was awake. He knocked on the door as loud as he oculd have, hoping to stir someone awake. He heard the rustling of sheets, aand Avan sighed a sigh of relief. He needed somewhere to stay, and he wasn't about to sleep in a pokemon center again. Last time they didn't even let him sleep there.
He looked through his bag, making sure that no water had leaked in. The materials to make his water-proof bag were expensive, and Avan had brought enough money for the basics. No leaks were in his bag, so he pulled out his towel and srappped around himself to dry off. He heard the shuffling of feet, and Avan looked at the door to see if anyone was coming.

 

[Zepzune]

Slowly, the door started to open. A Mr.Mime stood at the entrance confused, he scanned the trainer and then directed his attention back to the boy's face. "Mime....." it said drowsily as it scanned the trainer once more. "Mime, mime, mime mime mime mime" it said as it turned around to see a man. The man walked up to the boy and scanned him, like Mr.Mime had done earlier. He dismissed Mr.Mime and then turned his attention back to the boy.

"What do you want?" he asked firmly, annoyed about all these disruptions that had been happening earlier tonight. The man turned around after being startled by an opening of the door. Anne walked out and rubbed her eyes, finally pushed to he limit. She walked down, stomping her feat, and then finally reaching the door.Pushing her father aside.

"What the hell do you want? Its three thirst-seven at night, and i am very tired" she said as she looked at him deeply in the eyes "Who are you anyways?" she asked as she shook her head "Whatever, come with me" she said as she lead the way to a room beside the one Brendan was staying in. She opened the door, and the room was identical to Brendan's. She walked in and pulled the sheets over to the end of the bed and pointed to it. "Here, sleep here" she said yawning, and stretching. She went over to him, and bit her lip "Oh, and, next morning, go into the dining room, and ask the chef to make you whatever you want, and, theres cereal in the cupboard above the fridge" she said yawning again "And don't disturb me, because im tired!" she said slamming the door, Anne always gets grumpy when she is woken up two times.

Finally, she reached her room and opened the doors again, revealing light into the house again. She walked in slowly and fell on her bed, hugging Persian as she fell asleep fast.

But, for some odd reason, she had a dream that night. There was a whole bunch of dark pokemon surrounding her, in test tubes. They were all black, there was ten in total. Gardeivor, Rhydon, Kirlia, Ralts, Rhyperior, Rhyhorn, Torchic, Combusken, Blaziken and a Mew! She could see all of them, but she couldn't move. She then blacked out.

[OOC: How about we all have the same dream, because thats gonna be the storyline]

 

[Yoshimitsu]

Zepzune, Kalseng, you don't seem to be learning. I want you both to go and read the grammar thread VERY CAREFULLY, then start replying again. If you carry on abusing grammar the way you have been doing, the topic will be locked and the pair of you banned.

 

[Kalseng]

[[OOC: I do not think it is wise to involve mew without specific permission from a moderator. We should not do such things.]]

Avan was still in shock as the door slammed shut behind him. He didn't have enough time to thank this lady for her kindness. Avan thought nothing of it, and dropped his bag on the floor. He retrieved a long string, tape, and clothespins. He taped the two ends of stings to either side of the room, and hung his clothing up to dry. He threw a towel out underneath them, and layed down on the bed. It took him but a minute to fall asleep, and he drifted off into deep, unbreakable sleep.

Avan woke up the next morning, his hair wild and mangy, with the bed sheets scattered about the room. "What a strange dream... Ah. I forgot to put up my dream catcher last night." Avan said as he reached into his bag and retrieved his black dreamcatcher. It had gems on the bottom, with feathers of a supposed legendary pokemon. "Oh well... such things happen when you are not careful of nightmares." Avan shrugged and took down his now dry clothing. "Didn't she say I could have the chef make whatever I wanted for breakfast?" Avan grinned broadly. "Then I shall eat like a KING for breakfast! Though I shall not eat her out of house and home." Avan left for the dining room.
Avan sat down at the dining room table. He looked aorund for a moment. "Hello?" He called. "Is there a chef? I was told I could have what I wanted for breakfast..." A chef came out and bowed in front of him.
"How may I be of service?" The chef asked. He had a french moustache, like your tereotypical chef would.
"Yes... This may seem rather strange but..." Avan was cautious, as to not overstep his boundaries.
"No no. I gaurentee you, whatever you want, we shall have it made with haste and ease. Do not worry!" The chef reassured him.
"May I have a grilled salmon on a bed of rice, with a glass of milk? And an Ommelette with onions, green peppers, cheese, salt and pepper in it?"
The chef stared at Avan a moment, and looked at his figure. It confused him how he could eat so much and still maintain such a nice physique. "Yes... right away..." The chef said blankly.
"Yeah, after swimming half the way here, I got pretty hungry."
"Where did you say you came form?" The chef asked.
"Me? Well, Olivine. But I swam here from Mahogany Town." Ava replied. The chef stumbled as he walked to the kitchen, and looked back at him.
"Ah, that's how." He said under his breath as he walked to the kitchen.

"Ah! That is the most delicious meal I've had since I left Olivine!" Avan said after finishing his meal in under fifteen minutes. The chef stood there, mouth agape. "Haha! What wonderful cooking! Thank you, chef!" Avan chimed. He was smiling, his plates completely clean. "Do you have someone who can make some pokemon food? My mantine must be hungry from swimming all that way. And Vaporeon and Poliwrath haven't eaten since we left from Mahogany Town, either. Please?" Avan requested.
"Y-yes, right away. How much will you need?" The chef asked.
"Well... we won't be making another stop until we reach Cherrygrove, which is a considerably long hike..." Avan calculated in his head. "I'd say about six, maybe seven cans of water pokemon food. Actually, make that nine in case I catch another pokemon between here and there. And I shall leave the money on the table." Avan offered.
"No, I refuse. We are doing this because Lady Anne asked us to." The chef politely replied.
"O-okay..." Avan said. As the chef entered the kitchen, Avan heard footsteps coming from the hallway, and Avan turned towards the door, and saw the person enter the room.

 

[Yoshimitsu]

Okay, that's enough. I'm locking this now.

Kalseng, you need to revise your use of paragraphing.
Everything is written through dialogue. It's just boring and tedious to read.
The huge blocks of text in mostly Kalseng's posts are irritating on many levels.

It's abuse of SIMPLE GRAMMAR RULES. If you want to stay here for much longer, you need to get your brains in gear and think about what you're writing. Spend a few hours reading the grammar topic.