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Pokecharms: A Chronicle

Doctor Oak

Staff member
Overlord
This is inspired by Nem's similar work, but is part of a differently established 'universe' as it were. Note that this is not specifically related to Nem's 'Inner Demons' and any similarities are a coincidence as this will be more wide-reaching and more political in a sense than Inner Demons.



Pokecharms: A Chronicle.

Deep within the bowels of the Internet there lies what would be analogous to a country in the Old World. That country is known as the United Fans Of Pokemon, UFOP. A country like you would expect, made up of cities and communities — but in a world outside of any reality you could fathom. In this world, fantastic things become real, people become more than they ever could in the Old World — and entire cities can be built up and led by the most ordinary... and the least ordinary of people.

This is one tale from one such city. A city unlike any other. The city... of Pokecharms.

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"GET YER TRAINERCARDS HERE! GET YER TRAINERCARDS HERE!" A robot, dressed oddly in the fashion of an Old World market trader yelled across the busy high street — the main promenade in the whole of Pokecharms. Opposite were a number of huge buildings — as well as an open arch that led into a huge green field followed by high-rise skyscrapers on the horizon. Emblazoned across the archway was the word "The Forums"...

Nemesis walked through the lush green fields of the entrance to the Forums, four leafed clovers surrounding him everywhere as a constant reminder of the city's emblem. He watched the younglings run about and play — not allowed to enter the Forums properly until they had come of age, but encouraged to enjoy the benefits of the main city in the meantime — and smiled. It almost made him remember a time when he would have been amongst them — had the city been around at the time, of course. Those days were a long time past though. Much had happened in the years since — some he regretted, but playing his part in the creation of this city was most certainly not one of them. Unlike many other cities in the country, Pokecharms was a place of beauty, where even the buildings seemed to be at peace with the nature that surrounded them, somehow. The rest of the country, however, seemed to embrace angst and darkness like a merciless lover. Time was, that was exactly what Nemesis was looking for, but he saw something more in the potential of Pokecharms and was determined to uphold that — whatever the cost.

As he came up towards the main part of the Forums, the real heart of the city, he continued to be surrounded by greenery in trees and grassy paths but they had been joined by huge, towering buildings — as well as a few smaller ones in amongst them — and the tallest among them was the Staff building. A massive emblem of the city affixed to its tallest floors so the entire city would be able to view it, the building was a fully functional control base for the city, and effectively home to all the staff who helped to keep Pokecharms running. Nemesis had been gone for so long now, he couldn't wait to get back to his room, sleep in his own bed. That, and seeing everyone again after all these months of travelling was one of the only things keeping him on his tired feet as he continued to shuffle through town — greeting and being greeted by passers by on the way.

"Seems Nem's back from his assignment." A young — but not that young, let's not get carried away here — female voice called across the control room as she watched out the window at the growing commotion in town as Nem headed towards the building.

"Hmm? Oh... good." Came the distracted sounding reply, followed by the squeak of a leather chair as it swivelled around and was suddenly vacated as its former occupant headed over to the window to see for himself.

"Think he got the plans?" The woman enquired.

"Whether he did or not doesn't really matter any more, Katie..." Alex replied, reaching for a sheet of paper in the pocket of his long, white, lab coat and handing it to Katie.

"... like it or not, as of now — war is inevitable."

Katie looked down to the sheet of paper, as Alex continued to watch Nem's slow return. In her hands was a copy of a newspaper's front page — the country's best selling newspaper, even... and tomorrow's edition. Dread suddenly shot through her, though, as she read the damning headline — little else fitting onto the page for it:

[size=72pt]Joe Merrick Murdered - Serebii DotNet Collapses.[/size]
 
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Doctor Oak

Staff member
Overlord
Nemesis had finally made it back into the staff building, after apparently everyone in the city had stopped to welcome him back. He was sorely tempted to just sneak into his room and crash out, but he knew his arrival wouldn't have gone unnoticed and it was probably best just to break the bad news and get it over with.

Entering the control room, the entire administration staff was already there waiting for him. He waved a greeting as he took a seat at the discussion table between Katie and Alex, Stel and Rachel either side of those two. He guessed by the downbeaten look on their faces they'd already figured out he was unsuccessful.

"Sorry guys." He apologised in advance and sat back in his seat.

"Sorry? Does that mean you didn't get the plans then?" Rachel piped up, slightly confused — causing Nem to end up with the same feeling as he slowly figured out that he'd misunderstood why everyone was looking so down.

"Wait, you didn't know? Then... why's everyone looking like someone just died?"

"Because, someone just did." Alex quietly replied as he slid the printout of the newspaper's front page across the table. Nem read the headline and looked up in disbelief.

"It can't be. It... just... no." He turned to Alex beside him with fear in his eyes — and saw a spark of it there in his friend's too.

"I'm afraid it is. There's no word on what exactly went on — the city's been completely shut off, with thousands trapped inside and no way in or out." Alex took a breath as he, and the others took a second to think of all those people stuck there. "But, we have been able to verify with those that DID get out just before the collapse of the city's administration that Joe is, indeed, dead."

Alex got up from his chair at the centre of the table and walked over to the huge computer bank on the other side of the room. "The worst part is that it seems whoever did it was an outsider." Tapping on a bunch of keys and fiddling with the smexy new touch screen interface that had only been installed, he loaded up a map of the UFOP on the screen above him and turned to face the group again.

"There is no doubt about it. This was carried out by someone looking to destabilise the country - to put us all at war with one-another." He stood, voice grave but professional over the situation, with his hands deep in his lab coat's pockets.

"But," Katie turned, staring confusedly at the map. "why?"

Alex turned back to the control panel and started up a program he'd apparently been working on previously.

"Serebii DotNet is the largest city in the country — and Joe Merrick's position as head honcho gave him unparalleled access to the power to effectively control the entire country. An enviable position..."

The map showed the sudden removal of Serebii DotNet from the heartlands of the country, and suddenly flashes of red dots appearing across the countryside.

"You remove that position, and you're left with a vacuum. A vacuum that plenty of people are going to want to try and fill. Hundreds of cities out there, all of them looking to take Merrick's place and absorb Serebii into their own city."

The red dots on the map began to grow larger, and then there were less and less.

"Smaller cities wouldn't stand a chance — alliances would take their place, more and more cities joining together until all that's left..."

Finally, all the red dots had vanished — bar two large ones that sat square in the middle of the city's map.

"Two supercities. Two empires. Only one can survive, and to the victor go the spoils of Serebii's corpse."

The map was left with just one large red dot in the centre of the screen, and then turned black as the program was shut down.

"You're saying the entire country is going to be at war with itself?" Nem gulped.

"No question about it. This entire country is going to be torn apart as every city either teams up with those they think they can trust or tears the throats out of those they think they can't in order to be the one that takes Serebii's place." Alex sighed as he stepped down towards the table again.

"Well, what the desu can we do about it?" Stel emphatically demanded, pounding the table.

"We don't have many options. We can either sit here and hope we're ignored, prepare to defend ourselves or decide what side we're going to fall on when the alliances start rolling in."

"What about fighting?" Nem questioned as Alex sat down beside him again — confused as to why he apparently hadn't even considered this an option.

"This is a city of peace and was created to escape conflict. I will not send this city to war to pick the bones of a friend's dead city." He was tempted to raise his voice, but he held himself back. He had to keep his composure, or he could be sure that no-one else would.

"There is... one more option..." A voice suddenly came from the other side of Alex, and the entire table turned to look at Rachel. Which, naturally, caused her to become a bit self-concious about it and start fidgeting with her own, black, lab coat.

"What do you mean?" Alex questioned, unaware of any serious possibility he may have overlooked.

"Well... Everyone's going to be fighting over who gets to take over Serebii because of the amount of people in it, right?" Everyone nodded in agreement, although they hadn't really considered it that way.

"What if we got the people out?" Alex suddenly turned to face the others at the table, who were just as shocked as he was at the proposal.

"It'd... work... in a sense. The city wouldn't have much left worth fighting over, so any major conflict should really be diverted — but the city's shutdown. There'd be so much difficulty getting in, let alone out — and it'd be EXTREMELY dangerous." The possibilities were racing through Alex's head. He was good with strategies, good with 'seeing' the future in what 'could be', but this stood out to him as little more than a suicide mission.

"Sorry... I was just thinking that we could avoid the war altogether if we could just get the people out..." Rachel looked down, unable to catch the eye of the others.

"I'll do it." Nemesis stood up, and everyone looked up — including Rachel.

"You what?" Alex replied as he too stood up.

"I'll do it. I'll get into Serebii and I'll get those people out." Nem stared into Alex's eyes, determined to convince him that this was the right answer.

"You've only just returned from a failed mission to get the plans for Joe's latest project! You're in no position to be going back in there."

"Actually, I'm the best guy for the job — I was examining every nook and cranny of that city for the past 5 months... and I reckon I've got a way in."

Alex attempted to come up with an argument, and looking across at Stel, Rachel and Katie didn't present any arguments from them either. Eventually, he just gave a sigh that seemed to let Nem know he'd won.

"I'll go. I'll get those people out — and in the meantime, you guys can try to hold off the war as long as you can." Nem was already heading towards the door, adrenaline pumping and ready for action.

"Wait." Alex called, pulling him back from exiting altogether. "You can't go in there tonight — if you're found snooping around before this news breaks tomorrow, you'll be considered a suspect. We need to let this cool down for a day before we try anything."

"...right," Nem nodded as he turned to exit. "gotcha." And the door shut behind him, masking his sigh of relief as he carted himself to his room and collapsed into his bed, a smile on his face despite it all.
 
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*implodes from the awesome level*

This is brilliant Alex, I love how the plot is already pretty much full swing. Excellent writing, and I hope you'll keep it up.
 
Serebii dies and Pokecharms takes over its city?! War then commences?!

That would be an amazing story even without the Pokemon. Please continue, Dr. Oak.
 

Linkachu

Hero of Pizza
Staff member
Administrator
Nah, Pokecharms isn't taking over. It's trying to help get people OUT of Serebii's City so that a war over its people doesn't happen - or at least that's how I took it XD

Anyways, interesting one, Alex. Very different from Nem's, which is nice because I enjoy original stories surrounding these concepts. Pokecharms sounds like a nice place to live... unlike the rest of the country. It sounds down-right depressing XP

I'm intrigued to see where the story will go from here, and what roles everyone will play. Are you planning to bring in more members, or did you specifically decide to keep it as original/admin staff only?

The only constructive feed back I can give (beyond what I've already mentioned to you) is that a couple of times I couldn't be sure who was saying what. I think one of the lines in question was said by Alex, but because of your choice of wording it seemed almost as if Rachel had said it.

Anyways, looking forward to reading more of this. Keep it up plzkthxbai :)
 
Oh cool, this is gonna be so sweet! And agreeing to Katie, Pokechamrs does sound like a pretty cool place to live.

I like the plot, and it's already in full swing. Write moar please.
 
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