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  1. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    Part Eleven Perspective: Richter Natalie, Alice, and I arrive in Veilstone City after a two-hour bus ride from Solacean. This is actually a trip I make often, if I just want to get away from the backwater Solacean Town for a few hours, and take in this much more culture-filled city. Looking at...
  2. Valin

    The Will to Go On

    That got past me completely, but yeah, now that you mention it, I guess that also means that it's THAT Will.
  3. Valin

    The Will to Go On

    Let me guess... Aaron is THAT Aaron, right?
  4. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    Thank you to everyone who decided to help on what Eevee should evolve into. Ultimately, Leafeon got the most votes, but I actually started this installment when Flareon was ahead, and I decided to stick with it. I should have made a deadline. Oh well, live and learn, I guess. Still, I'd like to...
  5. Valin

    A Memorable Journey

    There are also quite a few places on this site where a proper accent-e is used, so you could copy and paste "Poké--" and use that for all the instances where it's needed. Anyway, it's a pretty interesting start.
  6. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    All right, then! So far, it's: Flareon: 2 Leafeon: 1 Glaceon: 0 I was also thinking of asking which "Hitmon" you wanted Tyrouge to evolve into, but I'd already made that decision.
  7. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    Besides Eevee, she has Fearow, a normal/flying-type, Kabutops, a rock/water-type, and Tyrouge, a fighting-type. She doesn't have any ice-types. Anyway: Flareon: 1 Glaceon: 0 Leafeon: 0
  8. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    Part Nine Perspective: Natalie The next week goes by with me training my Pokemon with Alice and Uncle Richter, and with Kabutops's addition, as well as Fearow, I can say for sure that my team has gotten much stronger. Richter and Alice have even used some of their regular Pokemon to help...
  9. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    Despite what I said, the ideas came pretty fast, and I was on a roll today, so here's the next installment. Enjoy! Part Eight Perspective: Natalie Another sleepless night passes, followed by another coffee-empowered morning. I'd probably only been to Sunyshore City once in my life, and...
  10. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    Part Seven Perspective: Natalie On a grassy plain, located on Oreburge's outskirts, another training session goes on... “Geodude! Rock Throw!” “You too, Geodude! Rock Throw!” The two rock heads, with arms where their ears should be, respond to Richter and Alice's commands, and extend their...
  11. Valin

    Tila-Story of a Pokemon Trainer (CH3!)

    Re: Tila-Story of a Pokemon Trainer (Prolouge) It's a decent start (though I'd recommend you begin the story after Tila gets her starter, just briefly describing it, as it allows the story to get to its meat faster, but hey, it's your story). The main issue I have is that the dialogue really...
  12. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    Part Six Perspective: Alice It was a fifteen minute run to get from the Pokemon Center to Richter's sister's house. Richter and Billy are totally winded by the run, while I'm also tuckered, but not feeling under the weather. Police training. Gotta love it. The house is a pretty plain...
  13. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    Part Five Perspective: Alice Richter, that guy Billy, and I head to one of Oreburge's Pokemon Centers. There, I hand in all six of my Pokemon for healing (while only Gardevoir, Blaziken, Roserade, and Altaria got hurt badly, I fought a few victorious battles before Richter showed up, so...
  14. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    (Continuing...) “Galla-- Huh?” Before I can give a command, Gallade, acting on his own, charges straight at Gardevoir. That's weird... He's usually so obedient... “Gardevoir.... Hey! Wait!” At the same time, Gardevoir disobeys Alice, and starts powering up one last Shadow Ball attack. “Huh...
  15. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    Part Four Perspective: Richter I'm probably one of the few people who think this, but I like hospitals, though perhaps not for the right reasons. If it's not an accident or illness, it's a result of a human getting attacked and injured by a Pokémon that was still successfully driven off, but...
  16. Valin

    The Superior Beings

    Part Three Perspective: Natalie I'll admit Uncle Richter is different than the guy I remember, though now that I am forced to think about it, maybe it is for the better. I know if I were a Pokemon, I wouldn't wanna be treated like a fighting machine and trained mercilessly. It's been five...
  17. Valin

    Johto University

    This story is pretty good, and I'd like to see where it goes from here. Still, if there's anything I would like to point out, it's that Mason's antipathy toward Theodore just feels a bit forced, like he's actively looking for reasons to dislike him, but maybe that's just the kind of guy he is...
  18. Valin

    Pokemon Battle Thread

    This is a battle I was thinking of writing for the next installment of my story. Before I begin, however, I'll introduce the major characters that will be present, just so you get to know them. Richter: Age 29. The story's narrating character. A skilled trainer, who once aspired to becoming...
  19. Valin

    Pokemon Battle Thread

    Pokémon fanfiction is a subject that, for the most part, I've been struggling in. Delivering an engaging plot... making the characters likable and believable... The thing that got me interested in writing fanfiction in the first place was to make teams of all my favorite Pokémon, like Gallade...
  20. Valin

    Working Title: Monra's Unfortunate.

    First of all, speaking from personal experience, if you're looking for feedback, you won't get a whole lot of it here. If you want more people to critique it, I suggest posting it on writingforums.org. As for the story itself, it's very well-written. The problem, however, in my opinion, is that...
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