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I just posted one of the original drafts to see how much of response it got, coz the final edit of the novel is over 1000 pages. And I had to make sure I didn't waist my time for no reason. I'll start posting the real Hollow Valley when I find it, its in my room somewhere :)
Well...considering you both have a talent, I uploaded the first page as a test to see if people read it, you mind checking it out, give me some pointers. Its called Hollow Valley:Hellfire
Ok, its just that I've written a novel, roughly 1000 pages long and I put my soul into so to speak. And I just didn't know weather people would read it if I put it up on this site, coz it would take forever to rewrite it again
Night felt a rush of pure joy, finally Inti had uncovered the opportunity he needed to prove his worth on the team. His knowledge of the wilderness, his adaptability and tracking capabilities could finally be used. "You should lead us Inti, you are the leader after all. I'll cover the rear...
Night extended his arm and gave Haru a firm handshake, although a slight nervous tremble escaped from his body. "Axcel! Garchomp! Get over here and say hello!" Night laughed as he watched the two dragons race out from the cargo hold. They came running over, flicking up stones and dust as they...
Night cautiously peered out from around the rear of the plane. He could see the rest of the team, he knew their names, but yet never laid eyes apon his new companions. He saw a girl, pretty and friendly looking, watching a luxray and he blushed as he hid back behind the plane.
He had only few...
The ramp to the plane's cargo hold lowered slowly with a loud, mechanical screech. It let out a heavy thud as it slammed against the earth, throwing up dust that blew over towards Inti. A dull squawk eacaped from the darkness of the cargo hold. Suddenly in a flurry of yellow and blue, Night's...
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