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Darcel stared at Coal, amazed how he is still speaking. He instantly placed his hand onto his stump, and began healing him. He hesitantly picked up the dismembered arm, placing it onto the wound. He forged the two together, giving Coal his arm back. "You're very reckless sir. " He mumbled...
Alright.. But how does this 'Blake' even know of the outcast's whereabouts and the whole government situation? I didn't get to read the little thing you made about him.
We are already introducing villains? Not to be a jerk, but the story isn't even sturdy yet. There are characters bleeding out, not everyone's together, random things keep happening, and idk if its a good idea yet.
Ah, I like the realism in the rp compared to the original outcast. The last one seemed more like a fan fiction, while this one is nearly like a novel.
subtracting my shitty posts though
What even is going on?
Dasken and Shawn are talking, Ahndrey is randomly in the mineshaft now and no one seemed to notice, how is no one paying attention to the rock man with a tracking device, why is this rock man holding a sword and approaching Shawn and Dask? What is this story line
Darcel sat down, staring into the depths of the cave. I should've took a sample before he went in there... how are we gonna know if he is hurt? he repetitively played out worst case scenarios in his head, making him feel worse about the situation.
Nora held onto the handkerchief and snuggled up...
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