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Your name obviously doesn't reflect your spriting ability - those are fantastic!
I'm very impressed, especially by the hair, by your sprites. I can see how much work must have gone into it, and I am very very impressed.
My only gripe is the blonde part of the fringe - it seems a bit more...
[17:35] * Umaro throws Mog at a Tonberry
[17:35] Do what your boss says and make me a color! >=O
[17:35] O.O;
[17:35] * Mog is stabbeddead
[17:35] there
[17:35] you're red now.
[17:35] ....
I deleted them because they were absolutely shite and don't deserve to even exist, let alone to be put in the TC Maker.
Learn to SPRITE, not badly recolour, then try again.
The fact that you are openly REFUSING good, solid advice from members with far more experience in sprite comics than you proves your own overwhelming ignorance and stupidity. You do NEED anything other than yourself, a computer and a functioning paint program to make a sprite comic. I have only...
I disagree there - you don't need anything other than yourself, the sprites and some backdrops.
Grammar, for one, isn't anything to do with spriting.
Neither is correctly ordering the panels of the comic.
Finally, I think most fathers would be pissed off if their son had just attacked. These...
It's like a Nobody from KH2 and a Luxray had a baby o.o
I actually rather like it. Those colours definitely suit Luxray, and the scarf is excellently sprited in. Well done!
The order of your comic confuses me. It took me three read-throughs to figure out that it went:
Top right -> Left -> Middle Right -> Bottom Right.
Additionally, the grammar is... not very good, to say the least. Piccolo says:
"I did it because he cant know what im going to tell you theres a...
Because it's a comic using sprites. Duh.
That's a warning for SPAM.
My advice would be:
Get a good plot
Maybe make the comic bigger? Make the panels bigger to hold more action?
Backgrounds!
Maybe speech bubbles?
Keep the panel boundaries straight - use a template for every comic, rather than...
I'll warn people in that scenario if they fail to rectify their mistake.
I know for a fact with post you're referring to. I've actually checked this post, and there is no real reason why that image isn't showing, as the URL and image tags seem fine.
It's more of an incentive to fix the post...
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