Private/Closed A Kalos Seeker

[InTheForest]

"It seems my first challenge from this group is baby fox." Slice grinned and got in a battle stance. Both claws glowed with the energy of Shadow Claw. Shadow shared the smile before frowning.

"Do you know where a good arena is? I highly doubt Nurse Joy would like to come back and the lobby was destroyed." Shadow glanced around at the center, when a machine whirred up, dimly lighting up the center with the center's backup lights.

"The generator is finally on. Maybe Nurse Joy will come back now." Erin commented, her dimly lighted surroundings darkened her face. King was staring at Slice with wide eyes while glancing at the smaller Fennekin every once in a while.

 

[Thunder-]

Cinder stayed silent, listening to the other Pokémon and humans talk. She didn't want to get involved in the mess between the smaller Fennekin and Weavile if she could help it. Though, if push came to shove, she'd step in to try and stop the fighting. They were in a Pokémon Center after all. That was no place to start a fight or battle at.

"I wouldn't mind battling you, Slice. Or you King for that matter. Or even you, Fennekin! I think it would be a lot of fun!" the Fire-type told them, her tail was wagging happily at the thought. "But a Pokémon Center isn't the best place for one.."

Rose watched the others speak, keeping quiet. If she needed to step in, she should. Other than that, she kept her mouth shut. She looked at Erin, who had spoken about the power being back on. She hadn't noticed that until it was pointed out by the other girl. Nurse Joy would be back any moment since it was. After that, well, there was no telling what was going to happen. Wait, a battle?

She turned back to the other trainers and frowned. They were going to battle now? Well, she assumed that that would be fun to watch. The small Fennekin did seem like she really wanted to battle that Weavile..

"Oh a battle!" Cinder cried happily. "I can't wait to see the out come of it! I wanna battle next though!"

 

[InTheForest]

King grinned as he had an idea. "Hey, Cinder, how many friends does you trainer have? Does she have enough or a 3-on-3 battle? But, if she doesn't thats okay, we can just battle, you and me." King smiled as he thought of the other two Pokemon Erin has.

Erin started to look around, focusing on the backrooms, but still couldn't spot Nurse Joy.

 

[Thunder-]

The Fire-type turned to face the Grass-type at he spoke. She listened as he asked her the questions that he wanted to know. After he was done, the fox nodded, thinking about at the other Pokémon that Rose had with her. A Fletchling and a Pikachu were the other two Pokémon that was on the team.

"Yeah! She has a Fletchling named Ace and a Pikachu named Zapper," Cinder replied. "What Pokémon does your trainer have?"

Rose looked up as she heard footsteps against the hard floor. Nurse Joy was coming back. Once the older girl appeared in the room, the younger one turned to face, as did her Fennekin, wondering what was going on.

"Sorry about that everyone," the nurse told the trainers and their Pokémon. "Everything is back up and running. Is there anything I can do to help you all with?"

Seeing as how that question didn't matter to her, Cinder turned back to King, and waited for the Grass-type to answer her question.

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

Spencer laughed a bit.

"Of course not here. Let's head outside, the centers always have a natural battle field out back." He said. He nodded to Fennekin and she perked up following him at his heels as he lead everyone outside of the center.

Do I think I can even stand a chance? He asked himself. This Weavile seemed really strong. But then again, Fennekin and him had been training as well.

--

Hm, finally Spencer finally got some sense into him. I'm gonna show that wild mut the true strengths of a pure blood.
Fennekin told herself. She walked in strides, following behind Spencer.

 

[Thunder-]

Rose watched them go before she followed after them. She told Nurse Joy that everything was fine for her. The nurse nodded, watching them leave the room. Cinder looked up, seeing her trainer headed off with the other human and Fennekin. The Fire-type turned back to King.

"Come on, King!" she barked happily, before running off after her trainer.

 

[InTheForest]

King nodded and ran ahead to chat with Fennekin. "Oh! Erin is training to be a fighting specialist! Other than me, there is Bishop the Meditite and Knight the Riolu! Hmm, we might have a problem with Ace..." King thought of what his trainer might do against Ace the Fletchling as he walked with Cinder to the Center's battlegrounds.

Erin sighed and ran to catch up with King. She was glad he made some friends though. Since King was still a Chespin, her other two Pokemon weren't close to him due to the lack of a fighting type. "Hey, Rose! King and your Fennekin seem to be getting along great." Erin slowed down so she could also chat with Cinder's trainer, Rose.

Shadow and Slice walked coolly side-by-side, softly talking a battle plan. "Okay, Slice, Fennekin is still in its base form, so it won't have an extra typing for us to work on. I want you to focus on Dig, and lets start it off with Torment, so if it has something like Flame Charge it can't keep using it." They nodded as they made their plan to execute.

(OOC: Is this like the games where it is only four moves or can you learn past four?)

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

((No, I'm having it be a bit more realistic, where the pokemon don't have necessarily any levels or limit of moves))

Once they arrived at the battle field, Spencer turned to Shadow.

"Here's to a great battle!" He spoke. He usually is never this perky, but battle usually did this to him. Turned him to a bit of a different person.

Spencer made his way to his side of the field, and Fennekin hopped Infront of him.

Let's see what this cocky slicer can do. Fennekin thought to her self, growling.

"Fennekin, remember, don't get too roulade up, it is just a battle." Spencer called out to Fennekin. Yeah, she was a couple inches smaller than the averge Fennekin, but if she lost control things could get ugly - more so for herself.

Fennekin ignored her trainers comment, and focused on the Weavile Infront of her.

 

[Thunder-]

The Fennekin looked at her friend at this. His teammates sounded really cool, and they had awesome names as well. Or, at least she thought so anyway. The Fire-type blinked when he said that there might be a problem with her Flying/Fire-type friend, Ace. What was wrong with the little bird? Or, rather, could be wrong with him?

"Your friends have cool name, King! What would be a problem with Ace though? He's really nice," Cinder told the Grass-type. She turned and looked at the two other trainers that were about to battle. "Who do you think's going to win?"

Rose looked at Erin when she spoke, before looking back at their two Pokémon. She nodded once before turning to look at the other girl. "Yeah, they seem to be friends already, don't they?"

(Understandable. So they can have any moves, rather than just four and no levels? That's pretty cool!)

 

[InTheForest]

Shadow took his place in front of Spencer a few feet away. "To a great battle," Shadow nodded as Slice lept in front of Shadow in a battle stance. "Whenever you're ready." Slice smirked over to Fennekin. Many plans formulated into his head as he took in the trees, the flat arena and the short stature of Fennekin.

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

Fennekin growled as she waited for Spencer to command an attack. She noticed the height of Weavile and thought of ways to use that to her advantage.

Spencer thanked Shadow. "Ok Fennekin, Ember!"

Fennekin growled and multiple flame sparks shot out from Her mouth at Weavile. Spencer had a plan, he just wondered if it would work.

 

[InTheForest]

Slice's claws glowed with Shadow Claw as he slapped the embers away some touching him, the ones falling touching the sandy battlefield before fizzing out.

"Slice, jump. Then use Torment!" Shadow called out as Slice jumped over the flames until he landed close to Fennekin.

"Your nothing more than small runt, baby fox. You may think you're all that but once the weather forecast predicts rain you fizzle right out. Poor baby fox. Did your brothers and sisters ever play with you, or where they to afraid you will come running to mommy because they played a little to rough." Slice whispered these words so only Fennekin could hear them, angering her so she couldn't use Ember or any more twice in a row.

(OOC: Thunder it didn't show your posting till now so sorry for lack of reply. Also, this might be the last posting of the night. By the way, do you mean Ace is a Fletchinder because Fletchling is Normal/Flying)

BIC:

"Oh, its nothing wrong with Ace. I mean he has an advantage over me, Bishop, and Knight, with him being part Flying. And your names are awesome too! Yours at least make sense: Aces are usually pilots and pilots are like Flying type humans, Cinders have something to do with fire, and Zaps are electricity." King thought on what his teammates names meant. They were all suppose to be apart of this game called Chess. "I think Slice is going to win, he's evolved."

Erin smiled as she watched King's range of expressions. "It's great King finally has a friend. This is good for him. Have you ever wondered what Pokemon are saying sometimes?" Erin glanced at the ongoing battle between Slice and Fennekin to watching her own Pokemon.

 

[Thunder-]

(It's quite alright! When I post something, I gotta wait for it to be approved before it can be shown to you guys. Oh. I thought it was still a Fire/Flying-type. I'm not far in Pokémon X, or the Anime of it. So sorry. But yeah, Ace would be that then.)

"Oh! That makes sense now! Your name's are strange for your typing, but I like them anyway! They're different. You know?" Cinder replied, nodding. "Yeah, I think he'll win, but we can't put the other Fennekin out yet. Surprises happen after all."

Rose chuckled lightly at the question that was asked. She did wonder what Pokémon were saying sometimes, and wished that she could understand them. Though, she was happy that King was getting along so well with Cinder. It made her happy to see her Fire-type make a friend outside of her own team.

"Yes. I wonder what they say at times. I wish I could understand what they say. I think it would be cool to, don't you?" she asked, while watching the two Pokémon battle. "Who do you think will win, Erin?"

(Alright, if you do leave for the night, good night!)

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

Spencer smiled.

"H-Hush your mouth!" Fennekin barked. Her eyes went wide as she had no idea how he knew that.

She started feeling emotional, but Spencer's voice snapped her out of her pitty party.

"Hidden Power!"

Fennekins body began to glow, and multiple glowing orbs appeared and smashed into Weavile, sending him tumbling back.

"Ad unfortunately for an ice type like yourself, when the flames spark you melt like a candle" she hissed back.

(( Yeah Thunder, it's more convenient for everyone in my opinion. Plus I think: if pokemon were real, would we all going around trying to track our Pokemons' strength by just thinking up numbers for them to be categorized in? xD ))

 

[Thunder-]

(Right, right. That's understandable. I agree with that as well. If Pokémon were real, we really wouldn't know their level, unless we used the games as help on it. As for moves, I think being able to learn more than just four is much better. For, in the wild, a Pokémon would need certain kind of moves to get food, water, and to fight off other Pokémon that wish to harm them. Doing it the way you have it, makes it that much more real-life like.)

 

[InTheForest]

Slice and Shadow were momentarily surprised at how she was able to send him back. As their shock finished going through them, Shadow's red eyes gleamed wit dangerous excitement, rivaling his own Pokemon's eyes.

"Okay, Slice! Full on Blizzard! Don't even give them the change of digging out!" Shadow called to Slice putting emphasis on the word dig as a hidden command. Slice created a full on blizzard, blocking the view of Fennekin and digging underground, the snow from Blizzard covering the entry hole. When the snow finally let up, there was fallen snow everywhere and Slice was missing.

"Yeah, but how is she going to find him in this Blizzard? Brrr... I'm not good in the cold..." King shivered as the snow reached them. King swatted at the falling snow as it fell on him.

Erin nodded in agreement, thinking about how great it would be to understand Pokemon, before she took in the question as well as the scene before her.

"I want Fennekin to win, but if Slice keeps pulling off these disappearances, than I don't see how she can win." Erin commentated worriedly. Looking over to Shadow and remembering Slice's eyes, she couldn't help but shiver. 'There is something weird about those two. Something dangerous.'

 

[Thunder-]

"Here, let me help you!" Cinder flew a bit of fire around where she and King stood. She was careful not to hit him with the attack, as she knew that Grass-type Pokemon were weak against Fire-type attacks, and she didn't want to end up hurting her friend. She would feel terrible if she ended up doing that, when all she wanted was to help him keep warm. "Is that better, King?"

Rose watched her fox blew fire around her and her friend. Her eyes widened a bit at this, but she relaxed slightly when she saw that Cinder was using it to attack the Grass-type with. She smiled before turning back to Erin. "I agree, on that. Though, don't count Fennekin out yet. Anything could happen during this battle."

She turned back to said battle, going quiet as she watched it play out. She frowned though. Something about Shadow and Slice was..odd. They seemed nice enough sure, but there was something about them that made her feel uneasy. It was almost as if they were bad, dangerous even. And she didn't like that feeling that she was getting. Rose shrugged it off however, knowing that one should not judge another simply by how they acted or said. Everyone had their own reason for doing something, and judging someone so quickly for it was not the way to handle it.

 

[InTheForest]

King smiled gratefully as the snow around them melted a bit. "Yeah, nice and toasty! Thanks a lot, Cinder!" King did a little dance in the area where they stood to show he was fine now.

Erin watched gratefully as the snow around her Chespin melted, allowing him to warm up quickly. "Anything can happen in a battle. A miss, a critical, a status effect, anything can change the playing field." Erin easily agreed, but wondered were Slice went and how Fennekin will deal with snow up to her chest, hindering her movements.

 

[Thunder-]

The Fire-type chuckled as she watched her friend dance around in happiness. She was happy herself, knowing that she had made her new friend happy and more comfortable as they watched the battle. It would be no fun if they weren't enjoying both said battle and what was going on around because of the other two Pokemon fighting.

"You're welcome, King! Glad I could help!"

Rose nodded in agreement with what the other trainer said. Which all of it was true. It all depended on how the Fire-type was going to react to the snow that was covering her up at the moment. That, and whatever else Shadow ordered Slice to throw at the tiny Pokemon.

"This is true. It all depends on how Fennekin reacts to what Slice throws at her, and what her trainer tells her to do and not to," she agreed.

(Alright you guys, I'm going to bed for now. See you all later!)

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

Spencer noticed through the side of his eye Cinder, Rose's Fennekin blowing heat to keep Erin's Chespin warm.

Ah...if only my Fennekin were that friendly....wait! That's it! He thought to himself. A new plan arrived in his head.

"Fennekin, Flamethrower!"

Fennekin wasn't affected much by the blizzard damage wise, but it was a surely good blinding move for Weavile to cloak itself somehow. But just using her instintcs, she aimed in the direction she last saw Weavile, and a strong flame burst from her mouth.

It flew by and melted any snow that it came around, and when it fizzled out, Fennekin and Spencer could clearly see the hole that Weavile jumped into, but Weavile was no where to be seen.

"Ok Fennekin now wait there!" Spencer called out.

"What!? No way you idiot! He'll attack me from behind!" Fennekin hissed.

She knew Spencer couldn't understand her but the unagreemeant was easy to hear in her tone.

Against Spencer's will, Fennekin charged at the hole.

"F-Fennekin! Quit!" He tried to command her.

She didn't listen. She charged and jumped above the hole, her body beginning to glow. Then, she shouted her name and 4 glowing orbs the size of the hole shot down into it, tracing the path and charging at Weavile.

 

[InTheForest]

Shadow smirked. If Spencer and Fennekin worked together, it might have worked, but instead...

"Now, Slice! Dig with with a little jab." Shadow commanded and Slice jumped out of the ground where Fennekin used to be. Unperturbed by the lack of hitting his opponent, he charged forward and past Fennekin before using Poison Jab from behind Fennekin, knocking her into the path of her own incoming attack.

"Ouch." King flinched as he saw the Poison Jab hit Fennekin in her side. "I hope Fennekin isn't poisoned by it. Even without poisoning, Poison Jab can pack a literal punch." King sat on the sandy dirt that showed signs of both freezing and burning.

Similar to King, Erin flinched as well. Poison Jab was one of the more powerful Poison type moves, ranking 5th in pure power of poison type moves, and had a small chance of poisoning the target. "The battle could also depend on bond and experience. While I think their bond is great, he doesn't have the experience to utilize the bond in battle, while Shadow and Slice work as a team consistently." Erin noted with curiousity. 'Now what are you going to do?'

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

Along with King and Erin, Spencer flinched. It was hard to see his Pokemon get hit with an attack like that.

"Dang it." His plan could've worked so well, but Fennekin didn't wait. Spencer knew it was partially his fault as well though.

Fennekin whimpered loudly as she was jabbed, and got knocked into the hole. Luckily, she fell in after the hidden power orbs came out of the other hole of Weaviles dig, so as Fennekin came out she landed safely on the ground. The dust cleared, and thankfully Fennekin wasn't poisoned. But another attack like that and she would be.

"Fennekin, we got lucky! Let's get it together." Spencer spoke empathically to Fennekin. They may fight a lot, but with the closeness between them, it was almost like Spencer could feel the pain of attacks that Fennekin received.

The fire fox took his words into consideration. She wanted to beat Weavile, and maybe if her and Spencer were on the same page things would be easier. She turned her head and nodded, resulting in Spencer's eyes glowing with excitement. It was rare when Fennekin and Spencer would willingly cooperate on the same terms.

"Ok, We can't let another attack have the same affect! Use Charm!"

Fennekin sat, titled her head slightly, one of her eyes closing in a wink. Visual hearts quickly shot out at Weavile, not hurting him, but decreasing his attack.

Charm, other than Ember, was the one of the two moves Fennekin had mastered. In grooming contest Fennekin would have to use that move to infatuated the audience, and it gave her many points.

"Ok Fennekin now quickly, Iron Tail!"

Fennekins tail glowed,becoming hard as steel.

 

[InTheForest]

Shadow's eyes widened before he let out a loud laugh. "Slice, stand still and use Nasty Plot!" Slice stood, a rigid post, and thought dark and evil thoughts, allowing his mind to become his Dark typing, raising his Special Attack.

"Well, baby fox, will you fall into our trap?" Slice hummed this out to Fennekin, not moving or opening his eyes.

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

"Don't count on it!" She hissed.

"Use Flamethrower!" Spencer called, saving iron tail for something. He was testing his boundaries now.

Fennekin roared out once again a mighty flame blast, and it hurdles towards Weavile.

 

[InTheForest]

Due to Shadow's command, he let the attack hit him, knocking him back a few feet. He grinned as Shadow shouted a move he liked. "Use Revenge, and point-blank Dark Pulse!" At this point, Shadow was to into the game to hide his commands. Slice rushed up to Fennekin and delivered a punch that was weakened due to Charm and the burn across his chest, before charging up Dark Pulse and firing it at her.

 

[Thunder-]

Cinder watched the battle with wide eyes. The two Pokemon were really going at it. Though, when the other Fire-type was hit with the jab, she cringed, wincing slightly. That had to have hurt the smaller fox Pokemon. And she felt bad for her because of it. She saw the other trainers, place her own, flinch when the attack had hit. "It's a good thing she didn't get poisoned. That would have hurt much worse than if she had."

The Fire-type watched as Slice threw a Dark Pulse at Fennekin, and she covered her eyes with her paws, not wanting to see the out come of the attack. Rose watched the battle, never taking her eyes off it, aside from the flinch that she made before. The battle was really getting good, but she was worried about the other Fennekin. She hoped that the fox Pokemon was going to be alright, if the attack hit her.

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

Spencer's heart began to beat harder and harder. Dark Pulse at point blank would do a lot more than just knock out Fennekin. He wanted to shut his eyes, for he didn't want to bare the outcome, but a shocking result came in his surprise.

When the Dark Pulse hit, it faded. A red and orange energy seeped through the dark aura attack, and when it fully fades, Fennekin stands there, growling. Fire hurdles around here body, charging up every second.

Spencer's eyes grew wide. What was this?

"F-Flame Charge!?" He had no idea that his Fennekin knew this attack.

Fennekin barked loudly, and a big flame blast hurdled quickly at Weavile, hitting him point blank this time. Spencer was impressed and surprised, but even though the fire type move would badly damage Weavile, Fennekin was already weakened, and it wouldn't be enough to knock out Slice.

 

[NocturnalNetwork]

OOC: I'm sorry, but I'm leaving this.

 

[Thunder-]

(Aw, okay. Bye Latias!)

Cinder's eyes widened when the Dark Pulse hit the other Fire-type Pokemon. She winced slightly as it did, before she looked back and gasped. A red and orange light had appeared around the smaller Fennekin. She had learned a new move! The bigger Fire-type smiled happy for the smaller one. Though, she knew that it wasn't going to do much to Slice, it was still a surprise to see.

Wow. Fennekin learned a new move in the battle! Rose thought. She was surprised that the smaller fox had done so. But, at the same time, she was happy for the Fire-type as well. However, she knew that the attack the Fire-type had used wasn't going to be another to win the battle. If it did, that would be more surprising than the Flame Charge.

 

[InTheForest]

Shadow clapped his congratulations for the apparent new move. The move packed a punch, knocking Slice in the air, but it wouldn't be enough, and even the other trainer could see that. "Slice, be cautious, she's faster now! Rapid fire Dark Pulse at Fennekin while you're in the air!" Shadow commanded Slice, who jumped high in the air and began firing Dark Pulses at Fennekin.

King was watching the battle now closely in wonderment. Fennekin had learned a new move with some type of boost (King could never remember what stat boost goes with what without guessing) that would surely help, and he hoped that whatever stat boost will help her dodge the incoming Dark Pulses.

Erin smiled in recognition of Flame Charge, a move that even though none of her Pokemon know, was a popular move for fire types for the added speed, its popularity just under Flamethrower. This might turn the battle around, if he could use the right combo to dodge Slice's Dark Pulses and attack with a greater speed.

(OOC: Bye Latias, it was nice roleplpaying with you even though it was short! I realized that Slice can learn Surf as an HM while reading his moves lists. I won't be mean and use it, especially since Shadow would've already used it. Are abilities implemented in battles? Just to make a note: if they are, Blaze would've been activated by now, which would power Fennekin up.)

 

[Thunder-]

(I would think so, yes.)

Cinder and Rose watched the Weavile do as he was told to do and fire more Dark Pulses at the Fennekin. The bigger Fire-type turned her gaze to King, who had been silent for some time now. She wondered what he thought of the battle going on now. And there was only way to find out. To ask.

"Whatcha think about the battle now, King? Who do you think will win now? Fennekin or Slice?"

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

(( oh ok Thank You Forest! ))

Spencer a had remembered that. Flame. Charge also boosted speed, and with Fennekins current condition, a certain something was just waiting to happen.

Fennekin began to gain a fiery aura, and began growling. Blaze! It kicked in! Although, it may not be the most help right now. Surely a few strong hits would knock out Fennekin at this point.


The Dark Pulses came hurdling at Fennekin, but thanks to Blaze, along with the speed boost stat, Fennekin was much quicker on her feet. Fennekin easily dodged the first Dark Pulse, but Spencer had forgot it was rapid fired! Fennekin was able to scatter around the area quickly to dodge the Dark Pulses, but Fennekin started growing tired, and when Weavile delivered the final Dark Pulse blow, Fennekin tried to stop running, skidding in attempt to stop, but Dark Pulse hit her head on.

Spencer winced and jumped at the loud noise it caused, along with the explosion dust that had risen from the attack. He stared intently at the smoke to see the outcome, and just as he had thought, Fennkin laid there, unconscious.

"Ah...man." Spencer spoke. He figured that the evolved Weavile would beat him and Fennekin, but his fox runt had quite a few surprises during battle.

"Thanks so much, Fennekin" he said, holding out his PokeBall. The fire fox absorbed into her PokeBall through a flash of red light.

 

[InTheForest]

(Yeah I was wondering. If it had kicked in sooner and Shadow was a nicer trainer, it might have gone your way.)

"Great job Slice." Shadow watched as Slice landed on the ground facing up, tired out from the rapid Dark Pulses. "Good thing your PP didn't run out." Shadow pulled out a black and white pokeball with a yellow 'U' on it, an UltraBall, and let the red light absorb Slice, who had his eyes close with a smirk. ''Good game, friend. If Blaze had kicked in sooner, you might have won." Shadow nodded in respect to the younger trainer.

"Aw, it ended before I could reply! I was hoping Fennekin, because of Slice's nasty burn and stat reduction, but it looks like Slice won." King sighed, but clapped anyways, seeing as Slice was no longer on the field. King decided he was going to congratulate Slice later when he was healed.

"It seems Shadow won. I was hoping Blaze would help them power through, but it doesn't seem so." Erin sighed but smiled and went up to the two boys to congratulate them. "Great job, you too."

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

(( Hey guys, I have a question. Somebody wants to join our RP, but he wants to own a Weavile. I know that that pokemon is already taken by Shadow. However, I have to ask Forest, is Shadow a character that you want to fully own, or was he just a secondary? Because since Shadows full identity isn't revealed, I told the guy that if you gave permission, he could have Shadow as his character, but he can change his name and age. But if you want to keep Shadow throughout our RP, I won't let him. So I just wanted to ask you how you felt about it. ))

Spencer approached Shadow and bowed slightly.

"Thank you for the amazing battle! That Weavile is amazing." He told him.

Spencer knew he should've trained more, and that was definitely one of his big priorities.
Now he knows to train Flame Charge, so that they can master it, and use the affects to their advantage.

 

[Bravan]

(Hello everybody)

"Umm Mentor, I uhh you didnt let him win did you", a tall,medium long jet black haired fellow walked up from practically thin air.

"Oh shinji,i had no idea you were watching" shadow seemed to straighten himself up and take a more serious tone. "No this trainer and his fenniken are quite the team"
(New to rp so i hope this is good)

 

[InTheForest]

Erin noticed the new person and waved 'Hello.' She wasn't sure about the new person so she drifted closer to Spencer and took note of their interactions.

(It's okay, just capitalize names (Like Fennekin and Shadow) and don't forget periods, exclamation marks, or question marks. And the way you were phrasing the interaction, it seems to say Fennekin won, but she lost (not to put it bluntly to be mean).)

 

[Ace_TrainerAce]

(( yep what Forest said, no hand also make everything past tense, just like you did in your post. You're doing great. ))

Spencer laughed

"Nope, he didn't. Your mentor is a great battle strategist." He told the boy that had just walked up.

"I'm Spencer. Nice to meet you. I'll be right back, Fennekin needs tending to."

Spencer made his way back around the pokemon center and entered the sliding doors. He approached Nurse Joy and gave her his PokeBall. No serious injuries were inflicted upon Fennekin, so the natural refresh machine is what she placed the PokeBall in.

Within a minute Nurse Joy returned the PokeBall to Spencer, who released a reserves he'd and healed Fennekin, who still had a slight attitude for losing, but this time she seemed a bit...different.

 

[InTheForest]

Erin turned back to glance at King who happily chatted with Cinder, and trusting the fire type to watch King, she followed after Spencer, not liking the newcomer ninja boy who was apparently watching the battle along with them. Erin sat on the Center's cushioned seats and waited for the others to come inside to speak of an idea she had.

 

[Bravan]

Shinji had only seen the pokemon battle,as he had a fixation on watching his mentors weavile move in battle.

Shinji, a dorky fellow,heard someone say "hello".
"Oh hell..oh." Shinji said as his eyes went from his mentor towards the sound of the greeting.
as Shinji had only caught a glimpse of Spencer and Erin walking into the pokemon center,he fixated his eyes on Erin.

"Gwaaah!" Shinji had exclaimed,
as if imaginary hearts had tooken the place of his eyes,like a cartoon character,fell back,and got quickly back up,trying too keep his somewhat nonexistent cool.

 

[InTheForest]

(Spoiler Alert: There is one more girl for your Shinji to fall in love with)

Erin, hearing the fall, jolted up and ran quickly to look outside. Not glancing out fast enough, she called out.

"Is everyone all right? Who fell? Are you guys okay?!" Erin glanced at the two creepy-ninjas, but focused her eyes on King, Cinder and Rose, who were completely fine, though King was done chatting and was quickly running to meet Erin. Kneeling down, she let King jump into her arms.