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Analogy: The Sea Otter

Cause I know Sem would like the otter thing. And really...this does describe me quite a bit.

I am a sea otter.
My lazier days are spent doing nothing, like how a sea otter floats motionless.
Otters are playful as pups, and I play a lot too, even if I'm not a kid.
Once an otter is hungry, it goes to its pantry for food, like me going to a store.
Its focus is unyielding, nothing can stop it once it starts. I never quit, as does an otter.
Its cleverness is like an elder's wisdom, its craftiness is a stream of water, going from calm to rapid ever so suddenly.
The ocean is the otter's playground, mine is the Internet.
The sea otter is me, a playful mischievous thing, like a leprechaun, running around.

One off. Doubt I'll make another, and if I do, it won't be about me. It'll be about other people.

And critism is welcomed. No trashing it or else I kill you. You can keep those thoughts to yourself.
 
I like it,

THOUGH,

Typically you don't do the following:

Its cleverness is like an elder's wisdom, its craftiness is a stream of water, going from calm to rapid ever so suddenly.

Without a self-comparison.

But, you know. TYPICALLY.

Rebellion, breaking down walls, paving new roads, cup a tea and all that.
 
you forgot that thing it does with the rock and clams :p

But I like it Jet. The Sea Otter in itself screams cuteness, fun and innocence, and it gives this poem that same feeling.
 
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