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Ask to Join Captured by the Evil Team! (part 2: new RPers weclome)

Once Gaeboo told them what they could do, Michael and Jodi entered the house, where they found him asleep on the ground. "I almost want to give up my sleeping bag for him... Oh, he'll survive until the morning." Michael said with a cheeky, but kinda guilty smirk. He sighed and went up to Eli's room. When Jodi looked around the room, she noticed a flyer on the table. "Something about a... Halloween party.... Hm...." She whispered, wondering who left that there. She shrugged and went to her room.
 
Renz got to his feet. He exited the house and went into the front yard, blushing slightly, but quickly stopping himself. The way Gaeboo had worded that had flustered him. He quickly forgot this, however, when he saw his mom walking up the road. He waved to her, and as soon as she caught sight of him she rushed forward and hugged him. Her voice was muffled as she spoke.

"Renz... I've been so worried about you..."

"Mom, I'm fine."

“How was I supposed to know that? You didn’t answer any phone calls for a month!”

“Mom, I already told you, on my adventure we got stuck somewhere for a few hours. Once we got out it turned out a whole month had gone by.”

His mom was silent for a moment, still hugging him. Then she let go and stepped back, faint traces of tears in her eyes.

“Tell me what happened since you last checked in. No, don’t worry about me. I know you’re safe now.”

With some slight hesitation, Renz began to give a breif account of the last few days... I mean month... from first meeting up with the group to the events leading up to and of the VR, and how they had wound up here. Of course, the story was slightly twisted, but that was to be expected. Renz also answered a few questions from his mother. After a moment Renz gave a yawn.

“Mom, I gotta get some sleep. I’ll talk to you tomorrow. G’night.”

Terisa almost tried to stop him, but forced herself to stop. She smiled back, waved, and walked towards the Pokémon Center.

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Once inside, Renz left the couch/pullout bed for Kathren, and began arranging a bed nearby. He pulled out the blanket from his bag, folded it so it would be half under and half over when he laid down, and set his bag down for a pillow. He climbed into the makeshift bed, and tried to fall asleep. It took a few minutes, but he was already pretty tired so within 10 minutes he was fast asleep.
 
Kathren laid down on the pull out bed and was about to thank Renz, but he was already asleep. She quietly sighed to herself as she forced herself to sleep. It was not the most comfortable thing in the world, but it served its purpose well. She had someplace semi-comfortable to sleep on, unlike Renz, Michal, and Jodi. Eventually, her mind found sleep after what seemed like an eternity.
 
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When the morning came, an odd thing happened, Maker woke up before Azumi. She sat and looked at her sleeping twin, who was curled up in the edge of the bed, Nana spread out in the middle and Maker on the other edge. She wondered how could Nana take up so much space?
Maker slowly got up to avoid waking them up. She looked at herself in the mirror with a grumpy look. "Why red Maker? We should've stayed blonde." She told herself. She walked out, went to the bathroom and washed her face, then did one side ponytail on her hair. She went downstairs and noticed that the closet was open and so was the front door.
She ran outside looking for Whiton, ready to send out her Charizard, but to her surprise, he was just by the front door smoking a cigarette.

Whiton chuckled. "What? You thought I ran away?"

Maker took a deep breath, feeling relieved. "Yes. How did you..."

"Get free? We are experts on creating traps. We have to learn these kinds of things." He put out his cigarette. "So anyone else awake?"

"No. Just me I think. Why?" Maker reached for her Pokeball.

"I have to go back in, don't want someone freaking out when they see me." He smiled and walked back inside. He went into the closet and closed the door behind him.

Maker watched him the whole time. She then went back outside and sent out her Rapidash. "Hey Roy, let's go get some breakfast for everyone." The stallion yawned and shook his head. Maker got on and they left, going further into town.
 
Renz had a pretty decent sleep, even though he had slept on the floor. He woke up to a stiff back, but he had dealt with that before during his adventure, and it was only a minor annoyance. He got to his feet quietly and began stowing the blanket back in his bag, and then looked over to see if Kathren was awake yet. As far as he could tell she was still sleeping, so he went over to the the kitchen. His bag of candy from the night before was still sitting there, so he decided to see what was inside. He opened it up to see... peppermint sticks. He pulled one out and looked at it. Meanwhile, Ty, who was still out of his Pokéball from the night before, was still snoozing in between the spot where Renz’s bed had been and the pull-out bed.
 
"Ouch!" Michael snapped awake to his arm being pinched. He looked at the other kids in the room. Eli was still asleep. Jodi's Trumbeak was sleeping on her, but that didn't seem enough to wake her up. Then he looked to his right. His Gligar was catching some Zs, right next to him. Michael turned to face him and whispered. "So that's what pinched me. He must've gotten out of his Ball... How interesti-OW!!" He felt a sudden pain in his back. He turned to his left, where he saw his little Tangela, dozing off. "So you got out of your Ball too, huh? So that makes two of you..." He sat up and rubbed his eyes. He looked down at his torso. He was still wearing his day clothes. "I guess I was so sleepy I didn't change... Wait, do I even have other clothes?... Oh well." He got up and called back his two little Pokémon. He left the room, leaving Jodi to sleep for a few minutes longer. He went downstairs, checking if anybody was awake. He couldn't really see anything, because he was too sleepy and he needed to adapt to the lighting in the room, so he just whispered, careful not to wake up anybody that was sleeping. "Is anybody awake?"
 
Renz put the peppermint stick back into the bag, and was about to put it into his bag when Michael came down the stairs. He waved, and then whispered back.

“I am. I think Kathy is still asleep. And I don’t know about any of the others.”

He pulled out a chair, trying not to make too much noise and then sat down.
 
Maker returned with Roy, she found small stand nearby selling pies and she bought a few. She also went by the local store to buy milk. She dismounted Roy and left him outside to enjoy the grass nearby, she figure that could help mow the lawn.
She walked inside and noticed Renz first. "Renzy McEnzy! Good morning!" She said out loud. "I brought breakfast!" She set the paid and milk on the table.
She then noticed Michael. "Michael!" She ran over and hugged him. "I've missed you! Even though you're around, I feel like we haven't bonded lately, ya know?" She then noticed the sleeping Gaeboo and whispered. "You guys should keep it down. So who wants pie?"
 
Michael smiled at the sound of his fellow travelmate. He was about to say something when Maker barged. She was loud, as usual. Michael put a finger to his mouth and shhhhhhh'd her, pointing at the sleeping Kathren and Gaeboo with his other hand. Then he was hugged by her, and thought that he could let it slide. But when the redhead told them to keep it down, Michael couldn't take it anymore and yelled at her. "Are you serious right now? Why are you like this? We were keepin' it down, and then you just came in speakin' sooooo loud that everyone from Kalos could hear ya!!!"... But not out loud. He did snap at her, but only in his mind. In reality, he just scowled with his fists clenched. He sighed in defeat and leaned againts the wall. Afterwards, his eyes darted to the pie and all the anger washed away.
 
Maker laughed at Michael's weird movements. "He is just so adorable." She told Renz. She went through the kitchen looking for a knife. Opening and closing drawers and cabinets until she found one, in the most obvious one, next to the stove. "Sheeesh I'm going to have to label these for Gaeboo."
She passed the knife to Renz. "Here you cut them, Azumi doesn't let me use knifes..." She said a little ashamed. She grabbed some cups and set them down. "I can help with the milk though!"
 
Renz groaned. It was bad enough to have the pies sitting in front of him on the table, but to have to interact with them? Torture. He still took the knife and began cutting the pies, groaning internally. Even though he was not the biggest fan of pies, these still looked very good. After a moment he had the pies cut into neat slices, and then he put away the knife in the sink and washed his hands. Gluten.. Why do I have to have this intolerance...
 
Maker was humming as she placed a piece of pie on each plate she had brought out. She set one for Renz, Michael and herself. "Do you guys want milk?" She asked as she prepared the cups.

A knocking was heard from the closet. "Can I have some?" A faint voice was heard.
 
Renz internally facepalmed as Maker set a plate in front of him. He tried to think of a polite way to push the pie away.

“Umm... Maker, just so you know I have a wheat intolerance. Pie crusts are made of wheat. Thank you, though.”

He considered letting Piloswine out to eat the pie. That Pokémon would eat practically anything, and would certainly enjoy a slice of pie. His train of thought was interupted by the sounds from the closet under the stairs.

“Umm... Maker, who’s in there?”
 
Maker was confused as to why the pie was rejected. Then she got nervous with Renz's question. She laughed nervously. "That's um... The closet... Man! Yeah. Gaeboo has a closet man." She thought for a second and realized it wad a bad answer. "Okay no... Um you see I might have accidentally..." She tried to explain it. "Like not on purpose... I brought..." Just then Eli walked in. "Eli Deli! You want some pie? I brought pie!" She began serving him a piece, hoping Renz wouldn't ask again.
 
Michael's face lit up as he saw Maker cut out a slice of pie for him. He sat at the table and devoured the pie. Then, he heard Renz saying he had wheat intolerance. He grabbed the plate and put it in front of him. "Thank you!" He whispered with a smirk. He was about to devour it when he heard a suspicious voice coming from the closet. "I bet it's Maker's ex-boyfriend." He said with a snicker.

Jodi woke up, due to her face being tickled. When she opened her eyes, their bottom half was covered with feathers. She groaned and called Trumbeak back into his Poké Ball. She got dressed and slowly made her way downstairs. "Hey..." She whispered to the others and rubbed her eyes. "Pie? Can I have some?" Michael groaned and gave her the plate that he took from Renz.
"We were just talking about the creepy voice coming from the closet. Maker was saying it was a closet man. But when Eli came, she just tried to change the question. I think it's one of her exes!" Jodi opened her mouth to ask about that, stopped for a moment to think, and then resumed eating the pie.
 
"WHAT????!!!!" Michael whispered with a shocked expression.
"You locked Whiton in Gaeboo's closet?" Jodi asked, her eyes wide. Michael looked at the closet.
"Is it because you realized he has a thing for you?
"Maker, what if he goes beserk and breaks out?" And then, the two of them started whispering over each other, Michael asking questions and Jodi going over the risks of keeping him in there.
 
Renz wasn’t sure how to react to this. Maker had locked Whiton in a closet? Although the thing was not funny in itself, Renz found there to be a sense of irony. Once, Whiton had had Maker in a closet, but now the tables had turned. He sipped his milk, trying to decide upon a course of action.
 

The Dark Fairy

Previously Eliiiscool
Eli put down his fork "Excuse me? Whiton is here? and hes locked in a closet?" "Told you" Many emotions ran through Ei head as he tried to decide whether he wanted to let him out or not
 
"How did you know?" Maker asked surprised. "It's not my fault though!" She began to elevate her voice. "Gaeboo threw up blood on me and so I went to get new clothes and he was like 'help' and I was like 'na-ah'" She held up her finger and moved it in the air. "I told him ' you're evil and broke my fingers and people don't like you ' so he was like ' okay ' then I was bout to leave and I saw some men began to beat him up and I couldn't let them kill him! It's just not in me! So I brought him and Gaeboo was like ' grrrrr what have you done grrrrr punch punch in the closet grrrr ' and I was like okay you know?" She caught her breath. "Then I bought the pies. Which Renz didn't like..." She was a little offended by that.

Azumi heard Maker's rant but didn't make out what she was saying and decided to sleep more, which was odd for her, and she had never woken up after so many people so she was embarrassed.
 
Renz took in Maker’s explanation, and the comment at the end.

“Maker, it’s not that I don’t want to eat the pies. I have an allergy to wheat.”

He looked over at Ty, who was still sleeping. He wanted to let out another Pokémon, but he wanted to let the others sleep and letting out another Pokémon would just cause more noise.
 

The Dark Fairy

Previously Eliiiscool
Eli sat back and rubbed his chin "Well, do we trust him? Should we trust him?" "No" "I would agree with you for the first time, if maker had not saved him or whatever" Eli sighed and looked over at maker "Has he changed?"
 
"Oh..." Maker was surprised by what Renz said. "Sorry I didn't know. I'll get you something once I'm done eating, promise!"
She then gave Eli a weird look. "I'm lost, who are you talking to? I don't know if he has changed! Evil or not... He doesn't deserve to get killed like that." She kept looking at Eli, she swore she saw him talking to himself.
 

The Dark Fairy

Previously Eliiiscool
Eli leaned forward and placed his chin in his hands "You know those copies of us in that VR world, I kind of promised to bring mine with us, and I kind of did..." "Kind of?" "Yeah, yeah"
 
Renz shook his head.

“It’s fine, Maker. I always keep some food in my bag, no need to go out.”

He felt his Pokédex vibrate, and pulled it out. It was his mom, saying she would be over after breakfast. Renz thought for a moment, thinking what would be the outcome. What would she think of his new friends? Would they have to wait outside while the rest were waking up? What wo-

His chain of thought was interupted by Eli’s statement. “WHAT!” He started to shout, but suddenly realized that he was trying to be quiet. “What? Those doppelgängers were evil! They were trying to KILL us!” He hissed.
 
Michael and Jodi looked at each other with wide eyes. "So you're saying," Michael began speaking. "that the guy who broke five of your fingers, the guy whose teammate almost killed Eli got saved by you, because he didn't deserve to die?" Then, Eli dropped the weirdest fact.
"Huh, Eli has now a second person in his head and the thing with Whiton is still weirder." Jodi said with a surprised expression, just before Renz yelled 'WHAT' and hissed like a crazy person.
"Woah, chill, you weirdo!" Michael whispered with an upset expression. "Not all the copies were evil. Mine was awesome! And apperantly, si was Eli's."
 
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The Dark Fairy

Previously Eliiiscool
"Yeah, I was clearly the most violent" Eli shrugged "Well, my copy just called me over to talk, we did, and he told me he did not want to fight, something about being killed..." "not wanting to fight makes me good?" "better than them in my books, anyways, then I promised to bring him back"
 
“Well I’m sorry for not noticing your doubles were nice, mine was trying to kill me.”

Renz looked pretty angry, remembering the events of the VR, and how Kathren’s and his own opposite had been. He took another drink of milk, and began to calm down.

“Okay. So maybe they weren’t all out to kill us. But I still would not trust one.”
 
“Because they were bleeping attacking us with their Pokémon!”

Renz was starting to get angrier again, so he stood up and walked over to Ty. He sat down on the ground, petting the sleeping Pokémon to try and calm himself. Ty’s fur was naturally warm, and it was pleasant to pet the fire type. He did this for a moment, trying to not be so angry, but not doing a very good job. He kept raging internally about the Spinda King and his minions, and he took his hands off Ty and put them over his face.
 
Maker ate silently as she listened. She was too confused and embarrassed to ask since it seemed everyone else understood. Plus, the heat was off from her and on Eli now, yay. But of course, she had one strong doubt that she couldn't take her mind off.
"Is your other you in your head cute?" She asked Eli.

Whiton knocked on the closet door again. "So..can I have pie?"
 

The Dark Fairy

Previously Eliiiscool
"Should I try to press my point?" "Absolutely" "I doubt you, but okay" he looked over at Renz again "Do we even know why they were? I mean yeah, to take out bodys, but did we stop to consider how bad it must be to live in there for them to do that?" "I was fine with it"

Eli forgot about Renz and turned a little red "What?" "Is That what she's concerned about?"
 
Michael rolled his eyes at Renz's behaviour. "Sheesh, he's a little like me when I get angry." He whispered to Jodi.
"Yeah, it's really weird watching him get so angry over someone that wasn't real." Jodi whispered back to him. They gave him one last look before turning to Eli and Maker. "What does head cute mean?" Jodi powered her voice even more and asked Michael.
"I think she's saying he has a cute head... Maybe?"
 
"I have a cute head! No bumps, I shave my hair once just to find out." Maker said proudly. "What I meany is, if the other Eli is cute, I didn't get to see everyone's doubles. Mine had ugly blue hair and Azumi's looked pretty nice." She looked over at Renz and Ty, she wanted to go pet the Typhlosion.

"So it's that a no? Come on guys! I'll take the one Renz didn't want!" Whiton called out from the closet.
 
"Already took it!" Michael told Whiton with a proud smile. He turned back to the others. "Seriously, Maker? The blue hair that your copy had was nice. But I thought that it would be a colour that you would like." He gave her a knowing look. Jodi gently elbowed him and spoke.
"Seriously, you liked Punk Azumi's style? Well, actually, that seems like something you would like. The edgy style is really... you... Anyway, should we wake Azumi up? She may know what to do about Whiton."
 
"Why would you think that? I rejected a shiny Ponyta because of it's blue flames. Plus, Roy was just to handsome to say no to him." She looked at the window where you could say Roy scaring off some random bystanders. "And we can't tell Azumi yet, can you imagine her reaction? She is a cop and whatnot, not to mention she still has a grudge against the boogers. I say we keep Azumi out of the house until further notice." She began picking up plates and cups. "Someone wake up Gaeboo already."
 

The Dark Fairy

Previously Eliiiscool
Eli shrugged "He sounds like me, a slight bit less energetic, a lot more bored, he looks like me, except he had a green suit instead of a red one" "It was a nice suit, can we get another?" "Maybe sometime Halt"
 
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