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Where should plot be?

  • Galaxy in Future

    Votes: 9 50.0%

  • Medieval Age

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Superhero World

    Votes: 5 27.8%

  • After-Apocalypse World

    Votes: 4 22.2%

  • Something Else (your idea)

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Total voters
    18
  • Poll closed .
MihajloJedi

MihajloJedi

Previously m1h4jl0
Yesterday, I got an idea.
I want to make RP that will have more parts. It should be at least trilogy, but if we make whole franchise that'd be awesome. I was thinking about making something as @Jagson Chronicles of Necros, but I could not make decisions where would plot be. Now I want you to write your suggestion and maybe I will get idea.
 
Jagson

Jagson

Well Chronicles of Necros/ Tales of Aquarias was originally a story idea I hade based off of various fantasy novels I've read or listned to ( Lord of the Rings, A Song of Ice and Fire, The Circle).
While I had a somewhat fleshed out plot and lore for it I could never put pen to paper. Not to mention I'm not that great at writing if you guys have read any of my posts.

Anyways back to the point I created Knight'sfall as a sort of side story that could weave into the first book. After a while it ended up taking over the main story completely. So I decided that what would've been the second book would be the foundation for the second Rp and so on.

Just make an rp if it does well enough create a sequel and go from there.
 
Jagson

Jagson

Alright the Q series is a scifi/ space opera series I have been working on since my sophomore year of high school.
If you want me to give the complete lore for it let me know just know it will be a few days to compile everything. As for my idea here it goes.

The A sector of the Galaxy is in shambles after two consecutive wars the four major goverments of the sector ( The Confederation of Free Planets, Galactic Community, The Wraith-Star Empire, The Coven.) As well as the three minor govements ( The Terran-Vegan Alliance, The Aqustria Republic, The Mulich Dynasty) are unable to protect planets that they once had strong holds on. As such raiders have been piliging planets. In order to keep the peace multiple Mercanary companies have been contracted by the goverments One such company is the Nova Brigade.

Nova brigade is made up of five star ships of various designs. Their mission is to defend planets from pirates and raiders
What do you guys think?
 
MihajloJedi

MihajloJedi

Previously m1h4jl0
Wow I am amazed. Story is pretty dope, but you still need to work on governments. I need to know more about them. And one more thing, name for Brigade sounds really cool, but its too common.
Poll is active for 4 more days,if you want RP to start as soon as Poll finishes I am OK with that. But I would prefer more 1 week, so we can make story a little more perfect.
 
Jagson

Jagson

It's coming. Currently working on governments history, and politics.
Here's the first one. It's very rough will probably polish it later

Time wise this will fallow the Terran measurement of years Before Exodus (B.E.) and After Exodus (A.E.) to keep things simple.
History
1 A.E.
After a powerful solar flare made Earth uninhabitable. What was left of the human race that wasn't off planet at the time migrated to a colony known as Tera prime. They kept the colony's existence a secret not wanting the Galactic Community to know about it. Human's renamed themselves Terrans and created a stable government.
2 A.E.
The scientist created a stable cloaking field. While Terrans kept themselves secret to the GC they been secretly building up a military force to protect themselves
They got word that a group of revolutionaries declared war on the GC. Unlike other terrorist groups they seemed to be more organized. The Terran government after a close vote decided that they would remain neutral during this war wanting to stay out of the GC cross hairs
4 A.E
While they have continued remaining secret they have been observing the war. After they got intel about an upcoming attack on the Revolutionairy strong hold on Vega they sent four cloak ships and a captured GC Chimera class Dreadnought to help evacuate the people from the coming slaughter.
The Massacre of Vega lead to the death of millions of Vegans. Those that survived from the help of the Terrans were escorted to the planet Caleous were they tried to rebuild. Seeing how the Terrans fought and bled to protect them the Vegan remenent joined them. Offically creating the Terran-Vegan Alliance.
6 A.E.
Over the next two years Terrans and Vegans were able to recruit a few other Systems to join their small alliance. In the process they created a sizeable strike force.
The Alliance has noticed that the Revolutionaires now calling themselves the Confederation have been able to push back the GC.
The confederation contacted the alliance with a plan they belived might end the war an attack on the GC capitial planet of Quzac.
After a nearly unanimous vote the Alliance agreed to join in the battle.
The Battle of Quzac is one of the bloodiest battle in galactic history. The Alliance using their cloaking tech were used to transport troops to the surface. While their ground forces were tasked with taking and holding Fort Carson. By the end of the battle only one third of the Alliance task force was still breathing
7 A.E.
With their ten star systems the Alliance has an open election for their government officals. This lead to General Cal Greyson becoming the first official leader of the Alliance.
10 A.E.
Boarder and trade disputes between the Alliance and Confederation starts to think their bonds. At the planet Jomark a group of confederation officers started to seize supplies. Some citizens saw what was happening and tired to stop it only for a small fire fight to break out killing two Terran children. This caused the Alliance to sever their ties with the confederation.
14 A.E.
The Alliance allows the Second knight order to establish two bases in their territory.
20 A.E.
A group of unkown Aliens later to be called the Coven attack the Alliance world of Jomark leading to the Alliance going to war against them. They swallowed their pride and asked the confederation for help. They didn't respond
21 A.E.
The Alliance lost two more planets Narzra and zeroes to the Coven. The race was somehow able to see threw the Alliance's cloaking tech. by the end of the year only Terra and Caleous remained.
Battle of Terra
The Coven stormed past their defenses as the weakened and broken alliance tried to fight back only to lose most of their fleet in the first few hours of the battle. As all seemed lost help arrived not the Confederation but the remade Galactic Community. With their help the Coven was pushed back.
23 A.E.
With the help of their allies the Alliance got their fighting spirit back as they were able to reclaim their lost territory. Afterwards with the help from the GC they started attacking the Coven on Confederate planets.
24 A.E.
After the ten year squabble the Alliance and the Confederation rejoined forces leading to the now unified Military of all the goverments known as the Galactic accord.
25 A.E.
After the war the Alliance went to rebuilding and restoring their boarders. They improved their tech not wanting to be caught unprepaired again.
26 A.E.
The United Galaxy was formed. This was away so that each of the goverments could stay up to date on each other and help each other out when needed.
39 A.E.
A new threat from what is called the B sector emerged. The Alliance pushed their troops forward knowing that peace would eventually fade. 49 A.E.
While Alliance territories had yet to be affected by the Ashari their military has been stretched out from one battlefield to the other. Without the defense raiders have started attacking multiple planets. President Adar gave the order to bring back their troops much to the dismay of most everyone.
52 A.E.
The Ashari invaded the alliance planet of Serenity cutting of most of the alliance from Tera.
The second battle of Tera. It was swift as the Ashari hit them hard and repeatedly resulting in all of the fleet being destroyed. The ground battle lasted four days before the Ashari Anubis executed President Adar and most of the council effectively destroying the Alliance
59 A.E.
As the Ashari were finally destroyed the A sector of the galaxy tried to put themselves back together. The Alliance was remained keeping the name as other weakened planets joined them.
62 A.E.
The Alliance started to get back on it's feet. Though they had heard about some minor war that happened in the GC/ Confederation territories. The Alliance chose to stay out of it. As such they were able to stabilize their control and make the Alliance a thriving civilization.

Politics
They have a democratic like system. They choose their leader who is given complete control over the Alliance for his/her term.
 
Jagson

Jagson

4 B.E.
After being crippled by a terrorist group known as the Knights the Galactic Alliance was turned into the Galactic Comunity. As two thirds of the senate was slaughtered Chancellor Cero took it upon himself to be the leader the people needed him to be.

In order to track down the remaining Knights Cero created the Setari program. This involved volunteers being trained in the use of the Knight's weapons of choice a saber ( A metal that crates a solid beam of energy based on the person's emotion and energy output.)

Among the first to join the Setari a mute man incased in metal named Callius and a mysterious woman only known as Stalker.

3B.E.
The GC went to become more Military based. As Cero belives that a time of darkness will be approaching.

Around this time a man wearing a white mask with one eye completely blood shot and the other dim. He started spewing propaganda about how bad the GC is.

2 B.E.
The GC force the Neutral planet of Namiria to join the GC as they had a certain metal that would make a starships haul stronger. Some resistance occurred lead by a former Knight named Johan Morriland who made the planet his home a year back. In the end Morriland gave himself up so that the people would be safe. He was sent to a penal colony of mykar to do hard labor for the rest of his life

Queen Catherine of Quzac started to speak out against the GC stating that this was not what the Alliance would have stood for. She was later arrested for harboring enemies of the GC. She was publicly executed by Callius one week later. causing a major outcry of civilians.

The GC started to back track helping out planets affected by natural disasters, and raiding victims.
1 B.E.
Riots started to happen on nearly every planet. As well as terrorist cells. Each Cell ended up being defeated in timely order. The most imfamous of them was the Red Sun Rebellion
The Red Sun Rebellion
A small strike force of ships attacked the GC mining planet of Mars. The battle was swift as the Red Sun took over the planet. Their victory didn't last long as a fleet of GC battle cruisers and Chimera class dreadnoughts attacked the planet. in force. Only two rebel ships got out of the hellfire that was the GC's orbital bombardment. Within a short period of time one of the ships the Toshizo it's crew either killed or imprisoned
The Hiroshima made it to earth to seek refuge. when the GC asked the Earth government to release them they said no.
1 A.E.
Seeing what the GC was capable of all rebellion ended

Needing money to fund their Military and other resources the GC implemented the Pronz tax. resulting in every citizen having to give thirty percent of their earnings to the government.
 
Jagson

Jagson

Working on it.
2A.E.
Arian Wilu Dyer veteran of the Wraith War as well as the Mulich incursion is promoted to the rank of Grand Admiral

With continual civil unrest two senators Erica Leaf the junior senator of Quzac and Senior senator Twilia of Mythos declare independence. They quickly left Quzac and started getting resources for what would be known as the terrorist group the Revolutionaries.

During a prison riot on Mykar Johan Morriland escaped killing two guards, thirty prisoners and injuring fifty more. Stalker and Callius were sent to recapture but he was able to get away.

War was declared near the end of the year as the Revolutionaries attacked and captured the planet sneed. A primarily desert planet in the back end of the GCs territory

3 A.E.
The GC turned the civilians against the Revolutionaries as they recaptured Sneed.

Thinking that the so called Revolutionaries were defeated the GC pulled their Military away from their boarders only to lose three planets nearly simultaneously.

Over the next few months the GC lost ten planets. In response The GC tightened down their control keeping the boarders defended.

The GC raised the taxes again so that they could fund the war effort. Dyer launched the Canoran campaign leading to planets being taken and repelled by the clashing of the two forces. While Dyer had more ships the revolutionaries Commander of arms was a little more skilled tactition.

Planets Nimeria and Vega seceded from the GC hurting their manufacturing and recruits.

The GC launched operation Draw back under Admrial Zulu. The plan was to retake Nimeria. The operation was short lived as the commander of arms was able to not only repel the GC forces but also kill Zulu in the process.
With more and more loses at key positions the GC had to pull back. Atleast that's what they wanted the revolutionaries to belive.

Over the planet Laziria Stalker shot down Callius star ship beliving him to be too weak.
4 A.E.
Operation: Hammer
Fallowing a plan created by Dyer he was secretly able to divide the revolutionaries into four groups located in Vega, the Solian ship yard, The Nucron nebula, and their capital Mythos. the idea was that as soon as the trap sprung all groups will be hit at the same time.
The Sacking of Vega
Lead personally by Dyer the plan was to break Vega's military force as well as their fighting spirit. With twenty Battle stars, twelve Chimera class Dreadnoughts, eight cruisers, and four interdictor cruisers to keep them from escaping. Everything was going fine at first as they destroyed Vega's defense fleet. As they got ready to deploy ground forces four ships appeared out of nowhere and bombarded one of the interdictor turning their gravity wells off. With the ship's destruction eighteen Vegan star cruisers were able to escape.
Reeling from the set back Dyer kept to his plan and started the ground assault. The battle lasted two days as every male and female Vegan fought to their last breath. By the end of the battle millions of vegans died as well as the Revolutionaries commander of arms.
Battle of the Ship Yards
Taken three months prior the Revolutionaries planed on using the secluded ship yards to create and repair their capital ships.
Four battle stars appeared in a coordinated strike destroying their defenses in a matter of minutes. Eighteen revolutionaries were able to escape
Nucron
With the help of a created leak Dyer gave information that the Cero and his top crew were heading threw the Nucron nebula. The revolutionaries sent four strike forces lead by the man in the white mask known as Toby O'Riley and Johan Morriland, a Sitari turned revolutionary Lee Thomas, and Lewi vong. Minutes after the Revolutionaries ships appeared and the two squads boarded Cero's personal ship the Liberty. Eighteen Battle stars appeared and quickly whipped out the Revolutionaries fleet.
Each squad was attacked leading to many casualties. The tide of the battle turned as a four unkown ships appeared and attacked the battle stars. While they didn't have more powerful guns they did have stronger shields. One of the ships rammed into the air lock of the Liberty.
As twenty marines took defensive positions around Liberty's air lock a single man walked out of the unkown ship. He had eyes as golden as any sun and grey skin. He activated his saber and within seconds all twenty of the marines laid dead at his feet. The man made his way to the throne room. When he made his presence known it shocked both Toby and Cero. The man introduced himself as Renovamen formerly known as Callius. With Toby's help Renovamen killed Cero. His dying words were "They're coming."
Only eight revolutionaries survived the battle.
After the battle the Chancelor position went to the supposed leak and aid to Cero Silvia
Battle for Mythos
Unlike the other battles which were all successes in one way or another this battle was a complete wash for the GC. As Admerial Cham didn't arrive when he was expose too leading to Mythos being alearted about the attack. The Revolutionaries on Mythos fought valiantly leading to Cham not being able to break their defenses. As he tried to retreat multiple Wraith ships appeared flanking them. The entire fleet was destroyed
With wraith support and Silvia's incompetence as a leader the what would've been end of the Revolutionaries only made them stronger gaining support in many neutral systems.
6 A.E.
The GC continued attacking the revolutionaries but they were getting quicker and smarter While the GC continued to put up a strong front they were starting to break on the inside.
Silvia while being charismatic and powerful in her own right she was a terrible tactition. causing more lives and currency wasted than necessary.
While involved in a training excersise with an isolationist group known as the Aquarians (Not the same as the Aquaris republic). They after more than two decades decided to join the GC. While the exercise was over Quzac. Dyer recived word that a small fleet of Revolutionaries was seen entering a system les than ten light years away from Quzac as such he and his fleet went to intercept them. This left only twelve GC Ships in Quzacs orbit. Two hours into the training mission the Aquarians started to use live ammunition on the GC ships imoblizing them. While that was going on the Aquarians General Olivia Rylon(Necros) took over control of Quzac's ground defense. Within minutes of them shutting down Quzac's shields thirty revolutionaries now known as the Confederation laid siege to Quzac.
Quzacion battle
As the ships left subspace the GC's true defense force jumped in as the hundred Battle Stars and Chimeras laid waste to the Confederations strike force. On the ground the 58th battalion destroyed any Confederate ground forces. Rylon was captured and her men executed.
one day after the battle was finished as Dyer returned back to Quzac with his fleet. The Capital was attacked by Confederate ground forces that appeared out of nowhere. In space the full force of the Confederation fleet as well as their Wraith, Aquarian, Alliance, and some minor factions allies attacked.
The battle of Quzac lasted two months as the GC fleet was fractured. Silvia was presumed dead as the Confideration took the capital. The ship yards, and most of the key defensive positions. Dyer surrendered and ordered a retreat.
 
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Jagson

Jagson

Yeah I see that. Unlike the other goverments the Confederation and GC are were most of my attention is at so I went into a little too much detail. When I finish GC's history I'll be a little more vague.
 
Jagson

Jagson

6 A.E.
After the loss of Quzac what was left of the GC command went to the Space Station Avalon. Renovamen confronted them there. He belived that the current command was curropt and gave them a simple request join him and change the GC for the better or die. Three of the command joined him among those were Grand Admirial Wilu Dyer and Senator Anotha of Aris. As for the rest Renovamen blew up a window in the chambers they gathered at and sent them into the vacuum of space.

7A.E.
Renovamen, Dyer and Anotha created a triumvirate to govern the people. At the same time they signed the treaty of Quzac that ended the war between the GC and Confederation.
20 A.E.
The GC had stayed durmant during most of this time keeping to themselves. In that time they built a stable government and powerful military. That was until they were attacked by the Coven. They repelied their attackers with ease. Though that didn't stop them from continual raids.

21 A.E.
The GC continued to push back their attackers though they lost two planets in the process. Deciding it would be best to get help they agreed to join the Confederation when they asked for help. They also sent a fleet to help defend the Alliance at Terra prime.
23 A.E.
Renovamen died in combat sacrificing himself so that his twenty seven year old son Ness would survive. After his death he gave his role on the triumvirate to Ness.
Though the Alliance did suffer the lose they under Dyer's military leadership lead several successful campaigns against the Coven. leading to him holding his title of one of the greatest military minds of the galaxy

26 A.E.
The GC joined the United Galaxy. during these times the GC sent aid to many of the planets under their control and those in other control that where affected during the war.

Unknown to most the Sitari created a shadow government with the propose of overthrowing the current regime to bring the GC back to how Cero planed it.
39 A.E.
They arrived. The time of Darkness that Cero predicted finally came as the Ashari started their crusade on the B sector. The GC joined the war effort on behalf of the United Galaxy as they combated the Ashari in nearly every campaign.
53 A.E.
Drew the son of Ness joined a mercenary group that recruited from all goverments as a way of striking and protecting planets that were under constant harassment from Ashari and raiders. That groups name N-OPS. He became a well known Ace pilot for the mercenaries
59 A.E.
During the final battle of the Ashari War Admiral Dyer rammed his ship into the ship lead by the Ashari's war lord Anubis. With the destruction of both ships the combined Sector B Military was able to defeat the Ashari at the planet of Migido.
60 A.E.
Seeing that the GC was weakened the Sitari made their move attacking multiple planets in the GC and Confederation.
62 A.E.
With the help of the protectert pseudo mercenary group the Second Knight Order the Sitari were defeated. The GC under the leadership of Councilor Drew, Grand Admiral Haze, and chief of staff Riolu.
Do to the government still being weak from the two wars they started to focus on helping their planets thrive before moving on to help others.
And with that the GC is finally finished.
 
SageNeb

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
cool to see how all of the governments history interact with each other. I assume in B.E. the Mulich Dynasty and Wraith-Star Empire had some kind of wars with the Galactic Alliance? The Aquastria Republic seems to have the most little information so far... I wonder how the Coven was before they attacked the terran-vegan alliance
 
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