Well I decided to hop on and do a critique or two. Kagex, your sprites are the lucky winners of gettting some. I'll only pick out a couple though. Before I get into the negative stuff though, I will say I think you are good at spriting.
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Shargodon I would have to say is very well done. It looks like a likely evolution, it seems to match Pokemon style, and it in general looks cool. The concept in general is a little weird, I never thought Sharpedo was in need of an evolution.
Near the eye, the two lines going across the hollow area, they don't look exactly right to me. They don't look like Sharpedos, which seem to bridge the gap. They more so look like they are on the inside. They also don't' seem to be curving in the same way, so they could match maybe a little better. I'm not sure how to fix it, maybe thickening it will help though if do able.
The dark blue like border around the yellow part on his head seems a bit off. If the palette limitations allow, I'd say add just a new border color for it, the blue doesn't match the yellow.
The yellow stars on the fins seem very flat. I don't know if that's what you wanted though. I'm assuming though they are meant to be spikes though. The one on its right fin could have a point with what angle it's on in my opinion. The one on its left fin doesn't exactly fit. The way it was done worked well on Carnivine, but it doesn't seem exactly right on yours.
All these problems though was really just me scraping at the bottom of the barrel. The sprite is very well done, and in my opinion is great.
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Quakeon is interesting. I'm not sure I like the idea of it being a rock/ground, Eevee is kind of the type to just have one stand alone typing.
I can't decide if I like the shading on the main two rocks on the body. I'll look at it and go "something doesn't look right" then I'll think about it and go "wait, not it makes sense" then a second later its "something doesn't look right" all over again. I just can't get a good grasp on if it was done well or not.
The rocks on its head are cool, but then again I'm a fan of Sandslash so of course they would be
. I think though they could use some work. The back two seem to be in odd positions and sticking out to the right too much.
I do also find the legs brown legs sticking out of the rocks a bit weird. The main problem is that they look like they are just kind of glued onto the rock, not coming out or part of it.
The last issue I could have is the rocks look a tad shiny in a few spots, almost metallic like. Maybe find a way to tone that down or change the color on them to be more rock like.
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You Wes is really good. It looks a lot like him. A little bit of a issue though, Wes seems to have a black collar around his neck from his undershirt, like a turtle neck, which you kind of don't have represented even though I believe that we'd be able to see it if he was standing like that. Should be able to be added, lower the jacket a bit and add it where his neck would be. Seems to go as high as his mouth.
His visor thing could look a tad more shiny and metallic. Adding a white highlight in it could help.
I like how he is holding a black Pokeball, just seems like a small and neat detail.
The pants could also be more strap-like. His seem to have bands going around them or something.
Also one more nitpicky character detail. He seems to have yellow eyes.
The overworlds are looking really good though.
ot and loz:mm.
