Re: Lukario's scetchy booky thingy~
O.O I didn't know I missed so much stuff...
Anyways, I'll start with the first massive upload~!
Most of these drawings are good. Everything looks much better proportion-wise~
On your Umbreon and Espeon pics, the noses are too big. They should just be a smal black dot on the end of the muzzle. I also love the way you drew the eyes, especially Espeon's, very cute~
On the Arcanine everything looks pretty good. the body looks a little bit thin near the chest area, and gets wider as you go farther back. That makes the body look a little bit weird. Another thing, its missing one leg. You might want to add that. You also might want to make the mouth go up further, like you did on Genar, so it looks super-awesome-chibi-squee and stuffs.
The Gengar, I like. It might look a little better if you move the mouth up a little more, I think it looks a little low. You also missed a couple white spots on its back that you might want to fill in.
Linky looks so cute 'w' Again, the mouth shouldn't be connected to the nose. You are also missing one very important detail: the cheeks!
Empire looks so cute with his little expression and stuffs. I love his pudgey little body and I want to squeeze him~!
I'll just skip this 'Konata' person because I have no idea who she is :c
iFlare is really cute~ I love the little sparkly eye. *gasp* The mouth...it's connected to the nose! Not a big problem, but it should just be a small, black, triangular dot. I also think the body looks a bit thin, too. It also looks like you went easy on the chest fluff.
I have a question to ask you now that I've seen KoL. Do you use the default colors on Paint? If you make your own colors the drawing looks a lot better. It also looks like you save in .jpg or something, but only on some pics. The edges on some pictures get blurred and distorted.
KoL is pretty good overall. I don't have much to say about it.
Apple the Ampharos is so cute~! I love the little apple you added in his pudgey little hand.
The eye is pretty good. I like how you added all the little details and veins and stuffs.
Alex Rose is pretty good. I remember her on here. Now she is the guest Kerorogirl. The blinking eye also looks a little big. Try to make it the same size as the other eye if you can.
Jolteon is actually really good. I don't have much to say about it, except that the purple in the eye looks a little off, becaise my Jolteons turn out like crap too
Bayleef is super adorable. Everything about it looks good. ^^
So, yeahs. That's all my crit. Hope it's not too long~! Keep up the good works