[glow=red,2,300][/glow]hello people. i am a n00b an it's bludy obvious ( damn straight XP ). i only started this thread cos im workin on a manga ( being top in art counts 4 something 
). i've got the basic story.. half the characters down and a landscape the size of london to use as background sceneryy in the comic. trouble is... the story can't progress because.. well.. i'm out of ideas!!
i'd appreciate it if u could give me a start on enemies, or even some side stories :x... but first i need t put down the basic outline
( gulps )
a big war in the spiritual world between elementals( good guys ), nomads( also good guys ) and harleqs( nomads/elementals who've been posessed by demons ). the harleqs beat the elementals. they all die. the nomads( they use elec instead of wind / ice instead of water... you get the point ) beat the harleqs. their leader orders them to pull back. one of the harleq generals who went back to the nomads causes a catastrophe. two weapons left at the point where it occured. a scythe, and a bladed pistol.
20000 yrs later. two boys ( protagonists ) find the weapons while pissing around in an allleyway. they have scars that all members of their family have carried since calamity ( BOOOM ). the scars react to the weapons. weird dothack stlye bracelet appears.
protagonist a ( elec elemnt ) gets blded pistol + bracelet turns into ion cannon. proagonist b ( poison elemnt [shadow nomad])
gets scythe + bracelet turns into a soul draining blade.
they find out ( sooner or later ) that they have to stop the harleqs, but it turns out that protagonist b is actually descended from the outcast harleq general ( GASP ). so he defects. ohiro-kun ( protagonist a) gathers all his nomad friends and goes to stop tsenbo
( protagonist b) from causing anothe calamity. the quest begins...
it's a bit long i know but hey! that's what i've managed to do so far :-\...
please tell me if u hav any ideas
). i've got the basic story.. half the characters down and a landscape the size of london to use as background sceneryy in the comic. trouble is... the story can't progress because.. well.. i'm out of ideas!!i'd appreciate it if u could give me a start on enemies, or even some side stories :x... but first i need t put down the basic outline
( gulps )
a big war in the spiritual world between elementals( good guys ), nomads( also good guys ) and harleqs( nomads/elementals who've been posessed by demons ). the harleqs beat the elementals. they all die. the nomads( they use elec instead of wind / ice instead of water... you get the point
) beat the harleqs. their leader orders them to pull back. one of the harleq generals who went back to the nomads causes a catastrophe. two weapons left at the point where it occured. a scythe, and a bladed pistol.20000 yrs later. two boys ( protagonists ) find the weapons while pissing around in an allleyway. they have scars that all members of their family have carried since calamity ( BOOOM ). the scars react to the weapons. weird dothack stlye bracelet appears.
protagonist a ( elec elemnt ) gets blded pistol + bracelet turns into ion cannon. proagonist b ( poison elemnt [shadow nomad])
gets scythe + bracelet turns into a soul draining blade.
they find out ( sooner or later ) that they have to stop the harleqs, but it turns out that protagonist b is actually descended from the outcast harleq general ( GASP ). so he defects. ohiro-kun ( protagonist a) gathers all his nomad friends and goes to stop tsenbo
( protagonist b) from causing anothe calamity. the quest begins...
it's a bit long i know but hey! that's what i've managed to do so far :-\...
please tell me if u hav any ideas
