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Open Miracles In Memphis (Discussion)

One word: Buildup. Show us how Aharon's past as a slave affected him, and how it continues to do so now. Maybe have him show symptoms of trauma-related mental illnesses, like post-traumatic-stress-disorder (Flashbacks, vivid nightmares, panicking when coming into contact with things that remind sufferers of their trauma). Show us how his leftover emotions from that time are slowly eating him alive, and then the final straw happens, and BANG! He snaps, and gets akumatised!
 
I'm actually writing an original story about a character who has it XD I can elaborate on his symptoms, if it helps. The character in question was hit by a distracted driver, and his main triggers include seeing silver Jaguars (The car that hit him was a silver Jaguar), being yelled at (Prior to being arrested, the man who hit him was screaming and fighting with the police, claiming that character had ruined his life), the smell of salted caramel (He was hit outside a bakery, and salted caramel cookies were what he'd bought before being hit). When triggered, he often needs to ground himself, by distracting himself with small details about his environment, or else he will most likely end up having a panic attack.
 

BoredSnowglobe

Previously OtisRolePlays
Name: Maia

Age: 12

Gender: Female

Class: Lower Class, she works as a farmer.

Appearance: She has light brown hair, with blue eyes. Maia wears a tan colored wrap-around gown.

Hero Appearance: She has a hawk mask, and hawk wings. The wings and the mask are brown, with some white stripes.

Abilities: Since she is based on the god,
Horus, she can control the weather in the sky, and Maia can fly too.

Personality: She can be kind, but hates how she is treated. Maia is shy, but very strong. She can easily be tricked, and Maia is ambitious.

Weapons: She has a staff, and she can control the weather a bit easier with it. The staff has a Golden hawk at the top of it. Maia can also use the staff as a weapon.

Miraculous: She wears a necklace, and it has a hawk made out of stone on it.

Kwami: Ika

Kwami Animal: A brown Hawk

Kwami Abilities: Flys, and is very fast, and smart. They can be very tricky and clever.
 
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BTW forgot to mention, when Aharon fixed the area up with the spell 'Ma'at', that was a one-time thing, since doing it requires him to be at his utmost power, and Eye of Horus will be needed for combat in every villain fight from now on.
 

BoredSnowglobe

Previously OtisRolePlays
Ooo okay, I’ll change it to Ra.

Name: Maia

Age: 12

Gender: Female

Class: Lower Class, she works as a farmer.

Appearance: She has light brown hair, with blue eyes. Maia wears a tan colored wrap-around gown.

Hero Appearance: She has a hawk mask, and hawk wings. The wings and the mask are brown, with some white stripes.

Abilities: Since she is based on the god, Ra, she can shoot out fireballs out of her hands, and the fireballs are almost as hot as the sun if it makes contact with someone, and Maia can fly too.

Personality: She can be kind, but hates how she is treated. Maia is shy, but very strong. She can easily be tricked, and Maia is ambitious.

Weapons: She has a staff, and the staff has a Golden hawk at the top of it. Maia can also use the staff as a weapon.

Miraculous: She wears a necklace, and it has a hawk made out of stone on it.

Kwami: Ika

Kwami Animal: A brown Hawk

Kwami Abilities: Flys, and is very fast, and smart. They can be very tricky and clever.
 
The royal family (Including Takhat and Imi) are visiting the House of Life, under their father's orders. Aharon is supposed to be there, to help deal with the influx of freed slaves in need of treatment, but his PTSD from when he was a slave is getting to him. Everyone is also trying to guess who Hawk Moth could be, while waiting on stamdby for his next attack.
 
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