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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%
  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
I’m not trying to make Tomiko look weak. In fact, this battle is showing the resilience of Tomiko to keep on getting up even if she still has barely done any damage. Tomiko is still able to use her hands after all the lightning and she is still standing after Kiro’s last attack. That’s impressive for a genin to withstand all of that. However, during the whole battle so far, there hasn’t been any reason for Kiro to use his sharingan. That isn’t saying Tomiko is weak, it’s just that her actions to this point haven’t resulted in her gaining the advantage. Maybe if Tomiko had played it differently, the results might’ve been different. It’s just that the actions she has taken already has lead to her downfall. I forgot who said this quote but it went something like it doesn’t matter how powerful the ninja is, if they’re outsmarted, then they will lose. It was something like that, I don’t really remember.

As for being on another level, don’t forget that Rock Lee deserved to also pass, it’s just his bad luck that he had to go against Gaara. Same here. If Tomiko had done some different moves early on, she might’ve had the upper hand. Either way, as a character, Tomiko should be proud of herself for still standing up.
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
I get that. Though I don't like how Tomiko will be portrayed as a result given Retro's desire, if this is what Retro and you all want for the sake of plot I will allow it. Never have been one to allow personal feelings to get in the way of a story and won't start now.
Well, it all depends up to you. If Retro wants to use Sharingan, he can, after all it seems like a perfect opportunity. If his original plan of not using it at all is stronger than your desire to have him so Tomiko doesn't look weak, he can do that too. Technically it'll end up being his decision, but I probably shouldn't interfere since I show favoritism with Kiro XD
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
@Retro Master the battle could end up in a draw or something like Raiku shows his Susanoo for the first time or something (which'd be dope) before Kiro does and ends up being able to leave and succeed in the mission (though not really since the only body that still had Sharingan was his dad's) and then maybe a medical ninja could transplant the eyes for EMS, this is all super planned out tho XD
 
I’m not trying to make Tomiko look weak. In fact, this battle is showing the resilience of Tomiko to keep on getting up even if she still has barely done any damage. Tomiko is still able to use her hands after all the lightning and she is still standing after Kiro’s last attack. That’s impressive for a genin to withstand all of that. However, during the whole battle so far, there hasn’t been any reason for Kiro to use his sharingan. That isn’t saying Tomiko is weak, it’s just that her actions to this point haven’t resulted in her gaining the advantage. Maybe if Tomiko had played it differently, the results might’ve been different. It’s just that the actions she has taken already has lead to her downfall. I forgot who said this quote but it went something like it doesn’t matter how powerful the ninja is, if they’re outsmarted, then they will lose. It was something like that, I don’t really remember.

As for being on another level, don’t forget that Rock Lee deserved to also pass, it’s just his bad luck that he had to go against Gaara. Same here. If Tomiko had done some different moves early on, she might’ve had the upper hand. Either way, as a character l, Tomiko should be proud of herself for still standing up.

Well given you can make electric super bombs with Kiro I find it hard to imagine. Just seems no matter what I think of Kiro has this perfect counter to it. Even making the arena try to crush him did nothing but give Kiro a big weapon to fire against Tomiko.
 
Well given you can make electric super bombs with Kiro I find it hard to imagine. Just seems no matter what I think of Kiro has this perfect counter to it. Even making the arena try to crush him did nothing but give Kiro a big weapon to fire against Tomiko.
Kiro was originally planning to use the gauntlets against her. It just happened that things went his way. That attack wouldn’t have happened if Tomiko kept her gauntlets on and did something else.
 
But then if Tomiko kept her gauntlets on (Which I don't think should have channeled that much electricity to make a bomb that big, even if it was cool as hell) she would have become a cripple given if I just had her yank her full arms away with her gaunlets on you (And others) would have rightfully complained how unrealistic that was if she just shook it off. Which would have been fair.

Just have to understand how frustrating this is form my perspective. If Tomiko can't compete with Kiro even without the Sharingan what hope does she have to do it when he gets MS/EMS? Again I am gonna do whatever is good for the plot just want a chance to let my feelings out is all. Just seems no matter what I try to do he is unphased. And I do try to change Tomiko's style/tactics up.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
I’m an ok drawer. This is sample material:
 

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SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
That looks really good. If you manage to be able to draw my new profile picture I'd appreciate it very much. You don't have to if you don't want to, of course.
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Jinchurki’s especially. People are after them. Plus Reaver might have died, so technically he was the first :p
I have a plan for my MAIN Jinchuriki. Near the end of the Kiri Political Conflict Akatsuki will come, yadayada, Kai cures Kanshi of his darkness, Akatsuki gets a piece of Shukaku's chakra so he doesn't die.
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
I might do it, but I might need more visual details to make an accurate drawing.
Ask all you want XD I can't think of things off the top of my head, but I can supply you will his default appearance. If you need more details I'll try. This is his bio's appearance: White Cloak with Uchiha Logo; black cargo pants (most ninjas seem to have this); sandals; red eyes; gray bandanna on mouth; a bit long black hair, mostly spikey
 
Have an essay due tomorrow as a matter of fact. Along with a Digital Media assignment due the day after and those take forever. Sorry I can't respond as often as you need of me.
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
It's alright, I understand. I should probably be studying for my state's CBT (computer based test) too but I'm too lazy XD
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
I was thinking of everyone in their final forms and this is the conversation I got:
Raiku as perfect susanoo yawning while Kiro in perfect susanoo comes over.
Kiro: LEMME FIGHT YOU NOW!!! ILL KILL THE REST OF YOU UCHIHAS!!!
Raiku: Nah I'm too lazy, besides kuraokami and ameohabari will probs rek you lol
Kanshi: *Comes over with Shukaku fully released* ILL KILL YOU BOTH!
Kai: *Comes over with to his cousin using Ice-Style*Chill, aren't you over this?
Hashima: *Comes over with Mud Golem* What's wrong?
Kai: My cousin's being stupid
Tomiko: *comes over with Earth Golem* Of course Kanshi is
Yukimaru: *comes over shyly with Isobu fully released* W-why are you guys fighting?
Kin: *comes over with Saiken fully released* Shut up! LET THEM FIGHT AND KILL EACH OTHER! MUAHHHAHAHHAH
Sagiso and Azumi: People from the 5 Big Nations sure are dumb...
Sagiso: *transforms into 2 tails fully released and Azumi gets on top too*After all, they even got in a stupid war for no reason.
Yasu: *comes over with seven tails fully released* Why's everybody coming here?
Madoka: *uses her puppet to climb over Chomei*
Yasu: Eek! It's a spider!
Madoka: No, it's Raven! Hahahaha!
*to be continued*
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Yes. My question which I couldn't think of any way for Kiro to reply to without him sounding like a socio/psychopath:
"You killed nearly everyone I loved. My own family, and then you went against my village and joined an evil power hungry person in his quest for world domination. Why?" Raiku asked, his and Kiro's sword next to each other's throat, his Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan awakened.
 
The following is just a potential preview. Things may change...

Yes. My question which I couldn't think of any way for Kiro to reply to without him sounding like a socio/psychopath:
"You killed nearly everyone I loved. My own family, and then you went against my village and joined an evil power hungry person in his quest for world domination. Why?" Raiku asked, his and Kiro's sword next to each other's throat, his Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan awakened.

Kiro laughed in Raiku’s face, not even bothered by the fact that the tip of Raiku’s sword was at his throat. “Why you ask?!” Kiro’s tone changed dramatically into darkness. It took all of Kiro's might to not slit the Uchiha’s throat open without risking his own. “If only you knew the half of it...” Kiro started to say, matching Raiku’s Eternal Mangekyou with his own Mangekyou. “Do you want to know why I can never achieve the same eyes as you?” Kiro glared deep into Raiku’s eyes, casting a genjutsu on him, allowing Raiku to see his past...

... I haven’t even fully developed Kiro’s past yet lel, but it will most likely be sad like all the others.
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
he has fing MS and he still doesn't realize that the official was the one that killed his family and not the uchiha, when tf will he learn?
 
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