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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%
  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
(Sorry for repeating this Shen) Warning in advanced. Woke up at 5:30 vomiting, did it again like a couple hours later and then again just 10 minutes ago. So I am likely not to be active today. Apologies in advanced to all will try to sleep it off and recover quickly.

orry @Godjacob, I've had the plan to make Katsuo Kraken based from the start. I only pitched the ides to you for Azumi because I didnt expect to come back at the time. But I'd be willing to give you that summon...



For a fight.

Well, no. I don't want to take something you've had planned for that long because of my little "hint". I can find and edit it into another creature. Like a sea serpent or something.
 
(Sorry for repeating this Shen) Warning in advanced. Woke up at 5:30 vomiting, did it again like a couple hours later and then again just 10 minutes ago. So I am likely not to be active today. Apologies in advanced to all will try to sleep it off and recover quickly.



Well, no. I don't want to take something you've had planned for that long because of my little "hint". I can find and edit it into another creature. Like a sea serpent or something.
Thanks for informing us, get well soon!
 
(Sorry for repeating this Shen) Warning in advanced. Woke up at 5:30 vomiting, did it again like a couple hours later and then again just 10 minutes ago. So I am likely not to be active today. Apologies in advanced to all will try to sleep it off and recover quickly.



Well, no. I don't want to take something you've had planned for that long because of my little "hint". I can find and edit it into another creature. Like a sea serpent or something.
See, now I feel bad for beating you to that idea...run with it though, I'm pretty sure I've got a completely different variant of Serpent than you do.

Talk of summons aside, get well soon. Drink lots of water, re-hydrate yourself and stock up on electrolytes. Eat lights, and get lots of rest. Get well soon~
 
Hmm...random thought. Who do you think is the tallest and shortest of all our characters?
Michi is the runt if you exclude mouse-boy Kou.

Tallest is harder to guess, godjacobs characters tend to be on the shorter end, or at the least Tomiko is. My characters aren't meant to be tall...maybe Kiro, Mori, Kai, Shura, Katsuo

They're the oldest among males, who are generally taller than females.

This excludes older Ocs.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Michi is the runt if you exclude mouse-boy Kou.

Tallest is harder to guess, godjacobs characters tend to be on the shorter end, or at the least Tomiko is. My characters aren't meant to be tall...maybe Kiro, Mori, Kai, Shura, Katsuo

They're the oldest among males, who are generally taller than females.

This excludes older Ocs.
Ah so Kou and Michi are at lowest and i personally am thinking Katsuo should be the tallest, for some reason. From his drawing he seems like he should be taller
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
I can agree with this. Katsuo has a lot of raw physical ability so I picture him with an imposing figure. (As imposing as a 14 1/2 year old can get)
Looks like most everyone agrees haha
Hmm, guess we could just collect the heights of all the OCs and go from there.

He was on his kraken legs in that pic iirc, so its kinda hard to judge.
Hmmm that’s a good idea. Would do well for character interaction and immersion as well
 
Tomiko is the shortest among my cast. Kenji the tallest and everyone else around average height for their ages.

See, now I feel bad for beating you to that idea...run with it though, I'm pretty sure I've got a completely different variant of Serpent than you do.

Oh, you did a serpent? *Tosses computer*

I'll think of something else. Hopefully when I gain the strength to post again.
 

sSoul

Previously Swirled
What if Kiro won that fight?
Then he wins.

Usual rules apply.
Well on the topic of what it's, ones been swirling through my mind. What if Taiyo won against and even killed Azumi, I don't doubt the power of FBS at that point to either kill or do serious damage at point blank range. For one, the most obvious one, I believe Taiyo would have become a Chunnin since Zaku and Katsuo would have still taken each other out, and Taiyo would be slightly less optimistic since he did just kill someone, he may even bind with Kiro because they both killed people.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Well on the topic of what it's, ones been swirling through my mind. What if Taiyo won against and even killed Azumi, I don't doubt the power of FBS at that point to either kill or do serious damage at point blank range. For one, the most obvious one, I believe Taiyo would have become a Chunnin since Zaku and Katsuo would have still taken each other out, and Taiyo would be slightly less optimistic since he did just kill someone, he may even bind with Kiro because they both killed people.

Well Kiro and Taiyo are like opposites. Taiyo is honest and open to those he meets, making bridges. Kiro is a parasite that sucks the use out of people before tossing them away, a master of lieing and burns bridges

Kai: *gets triggered*
 
Well on the topic of what it's, ones been swirling through my mind. What if Taiyo won against and even killed Azumi, I don't doubt the power of FBS at that point to either kill or do serious damage at point blank range. For one, the most obvious one, I believe Taiyo would have become a Chunnin since Zaku and Katsuo would have still taken each other out, and Taiyo would be slightly less optimistic since he did just kill someone, he may even bind with Kiro because they both killed people.

Well, that's a downer scenario XD

Speaking of that, I should go lie back down. Let the medicine kick in, be back ASAP. Hopefully to post and not drag the plot to a crawl.
 
Well Kiro and Taiyo are like opposites. Taiyo is honest and open to those he meets, making bridges. Kiro is a parasite that sucks the use out of people before tossing them away, a master of lieing and burns bridges

Kai: *gets triggered*
Well, I won't really argue the second one, but I think that first part is just Kai being willfully gullible. Kiro kinda just moves to wherever he sees benefits.
 
Who are these people?
Well, they stem from the 14th Century Chinese Classic Shui Hu Zhuan, which has quite a few different translated names, but I prefer to call it Water Margin, or Outlaws of the Marsh.

The 108 Stars of Destiny represent the -History Lesson Omitted-. So basically, 108 Demonic Overlords banished by a supreme god and them reborn as 'Outlaws' who banded together in the book.

They're composed of 36 Heavenly Spirits and 72 Earthly Fiends, for a total of 108. I'm basing Nadeshiko off these guys because 108 was a nice niche number for a very small village of shinobi, and they have some freaking cool titles and Star Names.
 
Alright - so here are my ideas for Star positions for my characters.

Candidate Positions for Sagisō
*** - my favorite.

Heavenly

10. Noble Star - Little Whirlwind***
16. Agile Star - Featherless Arrow***
20. Speed Star - Magic Traveller
21. Deviance Star - Red Haired Devil
36. Skillful Star - Wanderer***

Earthly

1. Leader Star - Resourceful Strategist
25. Correct Star - Demon King of Confusion***
51. Empty Star - Little Conquerer
57. Hidden Star - Sneering Tiger

Candidate Positions for Baiyan

Heavenly

2. Strength Star - Jade Qilin
6. Majestic Star - Panther Head***
25. Defense Star -Winged Tiger***
27. Sword Star - Tai Su who stands his ground***
30. Damage Star - White stripe in the Waves***
36. Skillful Star - Prodigal

Earthly

6. Majestic Star - General of a Hundred Victories

Candidate Positions for Koki'o

Heavenly

4. Leisure Star - Dragon in the Clouds
7. Fierce Star - Fiery Thunderbolt
19. Flight Star - Impatient Vanguard
24. Investigative Star - Unrestrained
35. Crying Star - Twin-tailed Scorpion

Earthly

9. Fierce Star - General of Holy Fire
13. Whole - Fiery Eyed Suan-ni
37. Latent Star - White Flower Serpent
 
*cough*

I wanted your opinions, not your likes...but likes are good too...
So imo...

For 25, Sagisō may be a demon but she’ll never be a king. Then again you could just switch it.

10 makes a little sense cuz she does does have wind style. But ‘little’? I think that sounds negative lel

Sagisō will technically be wandering around once she becomes a mercenary so I do like 36 for that. She’s also skillful so that’s a +

Lastly, I just like 16 in general. 30 too.
 
Hmmm, seems like 25 and 36 got an equal number of votes.

I'll go with 36, the Heavenly Skillful Star, I've seen the Skillful star get characterized as a Maid and I've got a soft spot for those.

So;

27. Sword Star - "Tai su who stands his ground" > Sword Star - "Pertinacious celestial" - Baiyan Lianhua
Tai Su referring to stars hence celestial/empyrean, and standing his ground in reference to tenacity, though Pertinacious sounds fancier.

35. Crying Star - Twin-tailed Scorpion > Koki'o Kāneshon
Think I'll leave this one as in, no changes. "Twin-Tailed Scorpion" is a pretty cool Epithet by itself, I don't believe it requires changing.

36. Skillful Star - Prodigal Wanderer > Sagisō Ajisai
This one also doesn't require any changes.


Since Koki'o is the Crying Star, and the Crying Star (35th) often works as a pair with the Savage Star (34th) the Savage Star will probably end up being her sister -related by blood. Twins at that. Maybe...





Oh, I'd like to point out now, that the Star Rankings aren't numbered by strength.

I believe the strongest stars are jointly referred to as the 5 Fierce Tiger generals and their names and Positions are;

5. Brave Star - "Great Blade" Guang Shen
6. Majestic Star - "Panther Head" Lin Chong
7. Fierce Star - "Fiery Thunderbolt" Qin Ming
8. Prestige Star - "Double Clubs" Huyan Zhou
15. Steadfast Star - "General of Double Spears" Dong Ping

Stars are also characterized by their titles;

E.g.

The 20th Earthly fiend - Efficacious Star "Divine Physician"
wouldn't be stronger than the 68th Earthly fiend - Inferior Star "Living Goddess of Lightning"

Ah, you're on your own for remembering which stars are which though :blush:
 
....I am so, soo lost on this whole star thing.
There's a novel called Water Margin.

I'm basing Nadeshiko's characters off that.

Nadeshiko Kunoichi will come with the titles and star names of the characters from the novel.

There are 108 stars in total, hence 108 Nadeshiko Kunoichi.

Oh, you'll need to choose a Star Name for Tayuya if she joins. Let me show you the list.

1. Leader Star | Protector of Righteousness

2. Strength Star | Jade Qilin

3. Knowledge Star | Resourceful Star

4. Leisure Star | Dragon in the Clouds

5. Brave Star | Great Blade

6. Majestic Star | Panther Head

7. Fierce Star | Fiery Thunderbolt

8. Prestige Star | Double Clubs

9. Hero Star | Little Flying General

10. Noble Star | Little Whirlwind

11. Wealth Star | Striking Hawk

12. Fulfillment Star | Lord of the Beautiful Beard

13. Solitary Star | Flowery Monk

14. Harm Star | Pilgrim

15. Steadfast Star | General of Double Spears

16. Agile Star | Featherless Arrow

17. Dark Star | Blue Faced Beast

18. Guardian Star | Gold Lancer

19. Flight Star | Impatient Vanguard

20. Speed Star | Magic Traveller

21. Deviance Star | Red Haired Devil

22. Killer Star | Black Whirlwind

23. Minute Star | Nine Tattooed Dragons

24. Investigative Star | Unrestrained

25. Defense Star | Winged Tiger

26. Longevity Star | River Dragon

27. Sword Star | Tai Su who stands his ground = Baiyan Lianhua

28. Balance Star | Boatman

29. Guilt Star | Short-lived second brother

30. Damage Star | White stripe in the waves

31. Defeat Star | Living King Yama

32. Secure Star | Sick Guan Suo

33. Wisdom Star | Daredevil third brother

34. Savage Star | Double-headed Serpent

35. Crying Star | Twin-tailed Scorpion = Koki'o Kārneshōn

36. Skillful Star | Wanderer = Sagisō Ajisai

1. Leader Star | Resourceful Strategist

2. Malignant Star | Guardian of three mountains

3. Brave Star | Sick Yuchi

4. Prominence Star | Ugly Prince Consort

5. Magnificent Star | Wood Dog of Well

6. Majestic Star | General of a hundred victories

7. Hero Star | General of heavenly vision

8. Unique Star | General of Sacred Water

9. Fierce Star | General of Holy Fire

10. Literature Star | Sacred Handed Scholar

11. Upright Star | Iron Faced Magistrate

12. Wide Star | Golden Wings Brushing against the Clouds

13. Whole Star | Fiery eyed Suan Ni

14. Stong Star | Multicolored Tiger

15. Dark Star | Milticolored Leapored

16. Assist Star | Heaven Shaking Thunder

17. Meet Star | Divine Mathematician

18. Aid Star | Little Marquis of Wen

19. Help Star | Comparable to Rengui

20. Efficacious Star | Divine Physician

21. Beast Star | Purple Bearded Count

22. Minute Star | Stumpy Tiger

23. Bright Star | Ten Feet of Blue

24. Savage Star | God of Death

25. Correct Star | Demon King of Chaos

26. Wild Star | Hairy Star

27. Crazy Star | Lonely Fire Star

28. Flying Star | Eight-armed Nezha

29. Walking Star | Sky Soaring Great Sage

30. Skillful Star | Jade armed Craftsman

31. Bright Star | Iron Flute Deity

32. Forward Star | Dragon Emerging from a Cave

33. Retreating Star | River Churning Clam

34. Full Star | Jade Flagpole

35. Succeed Star | Long-armed Ape

36. Complete star | Stream leaping tiger

37. Latent Star | White Flower Serpent

38. Differnet Star | Fair Skinned Gentleman

39. Manage Star | Nine-tailed turtle

40. Handsome star | Iron Fan

41. Music Star | Iron whistle

42. Victorious Star | Flowery Necked Tiger

43. Speed Star | Arrow-hit tiger

44. Guardian Star | Little restrained

45. Ji Star | Knife-Wielding Demon

46. Devil Star | Giant in the clouds

47. Demon Star | Touching the sky

48. Tranquil Star | Sick tiger

49. Concealment Star | Golden-eyed tiger cub

50. Remote Star | Tiger slaying general

51. Empty star | Little Conquerer

52. Solitary Star | Gold Coin Spotted Leopard

53. Complete star | Demon Face

54. Short Star | Forest emerging dragon

55. Horn Star | Single horned dragon

56. Prisoner Star | Dry Land Alligator

57. Hidden Star | Sneering Tiger

58. Level Star | Iron Arm

59. Harm Star | Stalk of Flower

60. Slave Star| Life taking judge

61. Detective star | Green eyed tiger

62. Evil Star | Faceless

63. Ugly Star | Stone General

64. Number Star | Little Yuchi

65. Yin Star | Female Tiger

66. Execute Star | Gardener

67. Strong Star | Female Yaksha

68. Inferior Star | Living Goddess of Lightning

69. Health Star | God of the Dangerous road

70. Rat Star | Daylight rat

71. Thief Star | Flea on a Drum

72. Hound Star | Golden Haired Hound

My recommendations are in this format
 
Well on the topic of what it's, ones been swirling through my mind. What if Taiyo won against and even killed Azumi, I don't doubt the power of FBS at that point to either kill or do serious damage at point blank range. For one, the most obvious one, I believe Taiyo would have become a Chunnin since Zaku and Katsuo would have still taken each other out, and Taiyo would be slightly less optimistic since he did just kill someone, he may even bind with Kiro because they both killed people.
This is a great what if... well for me to think about anyways considering how much this would affect Kiro. It would have a major impact even if Taiyo doesn’t kill Azumi. Like then what if Kiro and Taiyo tie along with Zaku and Katsuo? Who wins then?

If we go the Kiro beats Taiyo route, then he wins the whole thing. That right there prevents him from being humiliated and destroyed mentally. He does not go to the hospital room to think about Sagisō’s wirds. In fact, Sagisō doesn’t even go to Kai for his help. I think that’s also where she let him know about being half-Xeno. Oh and Raiku doesn’t offer a therapy session.

Taiyo keeping his arms intact should also be taken into consideration since presumably he doesn’t blow them out, unless for some reason against Kiro.

Anyways, during the invasion, Kiro would go with Kai and try to stay out of it. I have two reasons. First, when Azumi won and the invasion started, she chose to go for the scroll. Presumably, Kiro would be in the same postition as her. When the invasion starts, Kiro would also be able to get away.

The second reasoning would be he wouldn’t try to join the Sound yet. With him winning, Kiro would see no reason to offer himself to Orochimaru for more power. In fact, with Dosu and Zaku in the medical wing, they would not find a weakened Kiro. Most likely, Kiro would find his way to Kai or the other way around (since Kai did come back for him) and Kiro would probably be in the Mist right now, having betrayed no one.

As for the battle underground, that still happens except Sagisō does not go rescue Kiro. In fact, there’s a high probability she doesn’t join the fight against Reaver. Actually, scatch that, does Reaver even appear if Kiro wasn’t knocked out. For this, I’ll say he did. I’ll also say Sagisō joins the fight. Since Kiro is not there, when the flood comes, Sagisō does not have to use her flickering wind shadow to rescue him. She escapes without having to use it. However, Furījia still nearly drowns. When Sagisō sees Raiku performing CPR, rather than being completely drained, she still has a substantial amount of chakra left.

Basically meaning Raiku and perhaps Taiyo would be killed.

The Sound chase arc also happens but Kiro and Kai aren’t there. But an even bigger point is Tayuya does not get captured. The factors that led to her capture were in fact Kiro and Kai. Without those two their, there is absolutely no reason she goes to Zaku.

In the Mist, Kiro now gets to bond with Kai and the others while everyone else chills on the Leaf until this mission.

I think that’s about it. I like ‘what ifs’ and this was a pretty good one to think about. :up:
 
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