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Ask to Join Naruto: Lost In The Abyss {Discussion}

Muza

Muza

Previously Bedazzled
Making a Naruto RP

Rules:
1. Pokecharms rules
2. No godmodding
3. Jutsu mustn't be overpowered
4. AGAIN NO GODMODDING
5. Have fun!
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Character Sheet-
Name:
Gender:
Age: 12-16
Appearance:
Personality:
Rank:
Clan:
Kekkei Genkai:
Release:
Jutsu:
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My Bio-
Name: Tanjiro Uchiha
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Appearance: Tanjiro is a young man of short stature and a pale complexion. He has straight-edged black hair of varying lengths, the longest reaching down to his shoulders and the shortest stopping at his cheekbones, which he wears down with two shorter strands hanging between his eyes. His eyes are almond-shaped and tilt upwards on the far sides, and are unusual due to Tanjiro possessing heterochromia—his right eye is yellow and his left eye is turquoise. He is partially blind as he can barely see out of his right eye.
Personality: Sasuke's personality
Rank: Chunin
Clan: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan (Mangekyo Sharingan)
Release: Lighting, Fire, and Earth
Jutsu-
Chidori (Lightning)
Fire Ball Jutsu (Fire)
Earth Wall Jutsu (Earth)
Great Fire Ball Jutsu (Fire)
Earth Pillar Jutsu (Earth)
Summoning Jutsu (Lizard)
Phoenix Flower Jutsu (Fire)

and Jutsu can be up to 7 we learn more later in the RP
 
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D34N.U5R

D34N.U5R

~RaylessSage~ said:
(Sorry for double post)

@DripNinja @gutens @Shikowara Interested?
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Neato. I'm in.

Name: Kowaro Uzumaki
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Appearance: Kowaro is a young boy of short stature and a complexion dangerously close to pale. He has blue hair, unlike most people of the Uzumaki clan. He seems to has green almond-shaped eyes, turning blood red when he becomes enraged. He is also quite skinny.
Personality: Naruto's personality, except that Kowaro's a vegetarian.
Rank: Chunin, ready to become Jonin
Clan: Uzumaki
Kekkei Genkai: Rinnengan (becomes visible when he senses unusual Chakra)
Release: Unknown
Jutsu:
  • Transformation Jutsu
  • Summoning Jutsu (Toad)
  • Summoning Jutsu (Bird)
  • Earth Pillar Jutsu
  • Fire Ball Jutsu
  • Water Clone Jutsu
  • Basic Clone Jutsu


Am I in?
 
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EnviousWorm

EnviousWorm

I'm interested. Is there anything I should know about the timeline/what's going on in the world before I make a bio?

Prob gonna stick with the character I've been using for naruto au's for a bit now if you're OK with that!
 
Shikowara

Shikowara

Previously Lily May
Heyyy, @EnviousWorm! Didn’t think you’d be joining~ I’d like to actually get to know your character because I haven’t actually read any of your posts because I’m too busy reading the others that apply to me XD
Anyways, here’s my bio, @~RaylessSage~:

Name: Mizuko Narumi
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Appearance: Mizuko is about 5’7”, and has a fair complexion. His hair is long and orange, and his eyes are a pale green. He usually wears a white t-shirt, a green chunin vest, black pants, dark blue sandals, and
Personality: Mizuko is very quiet due to not being able to hear himself half the time and just being shy. He’s not as shy has Hinata, but yeah. He very smart too. He likes shogi because it gives him a chance to interact with people without actually talking. He has a fear of sharp things and doesn’t like them too close to him.
Rank: Chunin
Clan: Narumi
Kekkei Genkai: None
Release: Water
Jutsu:
Basic Clone Jutsu
Transformation Jutsu
Water Sword (Water)
Water Armor (Water)
Water Release: Water Shuriken Technique (Water)
Water Chains Technique (Water)
Ocean Wave (Water) (I made this one up, it’s basically water manipulation)
Random Facts:
He’s deaf but rarely uses sign language because no one understands it. He usually wears hearing aids but sometimes just likes to just write on paper.
His first name means “water child” and his last names means “the roaring of the sea”.
 
EnviousWorm

EnviousWorm

Shikowara said:
Heyyy, @EnviousWorm! Didn’t think you’d be joining~ I’d like to actually get to know your character because I haven’t actually read any of your posts because I’m too busy reading the others that apply to me XD
Anyways, here’s my bio, @~RaylessSage~:

Name: Mizuko Narumi
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Appearance: Mizuko is about 5’7”, and has a fair complexion. His hair is long and orange, and his eyes are a pale green. He usually wears a white t-shirt, a green chunin vest, black pants, dark blue sandals, and
Personality: Mizuko is very quiet due to not being able to hear himself half the time and just being shy. He’s not as shy has Hinata, but yeah. He very smart too. He likes shogi because it gives him a chance to interact with people without actually talking. He has a fear of sharp things and doesn’t like them too close to him.
Rank: Chunin
Clan: Narumi
Kekkei Genkai: None
Release: Water
Jutsu:
Basic Clone Jutsu
Transformation Jutsu
Water Sword (Water)
Water Armor (Water)
Water Release: Water Shuriken Technique (Water)
Water Chains Technique (Water)
Ocean Wave (Water) (I made this one up, it’s basically water manipulation)
Random Facts:
He’s deaf but rarely uses sign language because no one understands it. He usually wears hearing aids but sometimes just likes to just write on paper.
His first name means “water child” and his last names means “the roaring of the sea”.
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Lol fair! Tryna run an rp also can make it harder for you to distinguish your character as well. But this'll give you a chance to meet a younger version of Keito!
 
Muza

Muza

Previously Bedazzled
@gutens and @Shikowara accepted and @EnviousWorm

What sort of going on is that Kumo and Iwa, are being total douchebags and stole some forbidden scrolls, from Suna, Konoha, and Kiri and there trying to start a war, so the Kages' put together a revtrival team to find the missing scrolls.
 
EnviousWorm

EnviousWorm

~RaylessSage~ said:
@gutens and @Shikowara accepted and @EnviousWorm

What sort of going on is that Kumo and Iwa, are being total douchebags and stole some forbidden scrolls, from Suna, Konoha, and Kiri and there trying to start a war, so the Kages' put together a revtrival team to find the missing scrolls.
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Gotcha. Just for a run down, my character is a genjutsu specialist w/ an early specialization in interrogation techniques. In most other rp's he starts to train in Worm Senjutsu. If you're hesitant about that I understand, though I do have a write-up on how it works that I could send you. But the long of it is, the Senjutsu is also genjutsu based, w/ some ninjutsu. But it's not meant to be nearly as large a buff as Toad Senjutsu.

Also, to clarify, he doesn't finish the training until he's a jonin/in his mid to late 20s, so this would also be an incomplete Senjutsu
 
Prof.Ninja

Prof.Ninja

Previously DripNinja
Character Sheet-
Name: Hoseki Uchiha
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Appearance: Tobi, but just no Akatsuki Clouds on the cloak and a Gunbai on his back.
Personality: Hoseki is rather quiet, but can be very cocky at times. He has trust issues with anyone younger than him, because of a incident, that happened in his life, he also a scrolls in his cloak that can summon his puppet, named Inazuma.
Rank: Jonin Level Anbu
Clan: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai: Kamui Sharingan
Release: Fire, Earth, and Lightning
Jutsu:
Fireball Jutsu
Great Fireball Jutsu
Chidiori
Summoning(Bat)
(My own move) Lightning Devil (Used with Inazuma)
Earth Wall
Phoenix Flower Jutsu
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Image from Naruto Shippuden
 
Muza

Muza

Previously Bedazzled
DripNinja said:
Character Sheet-
Name: Hoseki Uchiha
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Appearance: Tobi, but just no Akatsuki Clouds on the cloak and a Gunbai on his back.
Personality: Hoseki is rather quiet, but can be very cocky at times. He has trust issues with anyone younger than him, because of a incident, that happened in his life, he also a scrolls in his cloak that can summon his puppet, named Inazuma.
Rank: Jonin Level Anbu
Clan: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai: Kamui Sharingan
Release: Fire, Earth, and Lightning
Jutsu:
Fireball Jutsu
Great Fireball Jutsu
Chidiori
Summoning(Bat)
(My own move) Lightning Devil (Used with Inazuma)
Earth Wall
Phoenix Flower Jutsu
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Image from Naruto Shippuden
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Your In and you spelled chidori wrong
 
EnviousWorm

EnviousWorm

I'll take it you don't have a problem with the senjutsu stuff I talked about earlier then lol. I'll have a character profile up tonight when I get out of work
 
EnviousWorm

EnviousWorm

Character Sheet-
Name: Keito Ugokasenai
Gender: (M)
Age: 19
Appearance: Soft brown eyes; long, spiked brown hair pulled into a tall top-knot (Shikamaru's hair but longer). A scar that stretches down the left side of his face, from forehead down to the neck (to the side of the eye). Wears a black jumpsuit with a rope belt, no shoes. Has a cloak much like Naruto's red and black sage cloak, except it's dark brown and forest green, the phrase "Wamufurendo" (Worm Friend) etched down the middle of the back.
Personality: Thoughtful, careful, caring and kind. A strong strategist with a keen eye for investigation, but displays strong empathic leanings -- even toward shinobi of other villages. Quite distanced from many in his own village, though not out of any malice or disregard. Very concerned with his own destiny.
Rank: Tokubetsu Jonin
Clan: Ugokaesenai
Kekkei Genkai: N/A
Release: Earth/Wind/Yin
Jutsu:
Inspired by puppet masters and shadow possession jutsu alike, the Bunraku genjutsu is designed to remove free will via invasion of the mind, replacing a victim's control over their body with the jutsu user; the victim cannot cast release if the user is telling them not to. In turn, the user can make the victim fight their friends for a short time, until the victim is physically harmed in some way (or someone is able to release the genjutsu).

At D-Rank, the user can only use Bunraku on one target for a short period of time (up to two minutes, depending on the user's chakra control), and cannot use Bunraku again until twice that time has passed (up to four minutes). The Bunraku user cannot move while projecting their will over their victim. Victim must be within eyesight to be targeted/victim of the Bunraku.

By B-Rank, the Bunraku caster can move out of sight of their victim once the jutsu has hit; however, more than one hundred feet of distance naturally breaks the Bunraku. The Bunraku can still only target one victim, but it is faster to cast and lasts longer (up to five minutes, depending on user's chakra control). Once Bunraku has been uses, the user must once again wait, but the recharge period is now as long as the jutsu lasts (up to five minutes).

S-Rank Bunraku users can target an Area of Effect, circumference up to ten feet. Though it still only lasts 5 minutes, the re-charge time for the Bunraku drops drastically to just one minute. At S-Rank, the Bunraku can be cast consecutively at a major chakra/physical cost (3 times in one fight is considered life-threatening). The Bunraku user can move up to two hundred feet out of sight of any victim - however this, too, in considered a heightened physical/mental cost; though a boundary, it's considered an "extreme" boundary (even 100 feet pushes the limit).
The victim is locked away in a dream-like state, suddenly finding themselves in an elusive concoction of corridors and vault doors. Each twisting path and opened door unveils a painful memory or a visceral fear. Victims can find their way to the end of a labyrinthian maze of their trauma, releasing themselves from the jutsu. But time passes different when under the Maindo Keimusho, and is in fact controlled by the user; an hour under the genjutsu can last a mere second, or vice versa. Similar to the Bunraku, Maindo Keimusho is considered the back-up to the Puppet Theatre genjutsu. Once a victim is near release from the Bunraku, the ninja casts the Mind Prison genjutsu to further trap their victim, either to capture the victim, or escape if the user is in such a position.

At D-Rank, Maindo Keimusho is again subject to one target. Although the victims don't have to be in sight after the jutsu has been cast, the user must maintain intense mental concentration to keep up the illusion. Using Maindo Keimusho is immensely draining on the ninja. As long as the victim does not break free from the genjutsu, the user can keep the illusion up as long as their control and flow of chakra allows them to. The illusion is more muddled, as the user's insight into their victim's mind is less-clear. Foggy hallways and eerie sounds make up for the lack of detail, and the imagery of specific memories is again more vague, often kept to one memory in specific.

At B-Rank, the Maindo Keimusho can be used to delve more intimately into a victim's mind; memories are clearer, fears easier to find and extort. A B-Rank user of Maindo Keimusho can leave a victim immobile for hours even after the genjutsu is broken, just due to how real and invasive the imagery is. The user can mix and match different memories, leaving the victim disoriented, and can even create a monstrous incarnation of a personal fear, used to hunt the victim down through the labyrinth of their mind prison.

S-Rank users of Maindo Keimusho can target two people, the caster able to swap memories from the minds of either person to create different kinds of nightmares. Skilled casters will use recent memories to trick their victims, delaying their realization that they're trapped in a genjutsu; then the user unfolds different layers of horror over the victims, until their mind is so encompassed by their fears that escaping the genjutsu alone is incredibly hard. If two people find themselves victims, their manifestations can meet in the twisting maze, though this has only been recorded once in history. Weaker opponents who find themselves under the grip of an S-Rank Maindo Keimusho have been known to remain in a comatose state after being released from the genjutsu, some for several months.
A sensory genjutsu triggered by physical touch, or through use of the Thousand Screaming Worms technique (see below); this jutsu creates the sensation of a large number of earthworms crawling their way into your skull, slowly replacing your brain with worms.
A sound-based jutsu technique utilizing a clew of worms that transmit a psychic scream, paralyzing foes with their painfully high-pitched squeal, which seems to echo off itself in an endless loop; at its highest pitches, triggers a powerful Thousand Burrowing Worms technique.
Summoning Jutsu
Earth Release: Mud Wall
Wind Release: Air Bullets

[Let me know what you think. The first two genjutsu I listed (Bunraku, Maindo Keimusho) are meant to be Ugokasenai clan Hiden genjutsu, whereas the other two (the Worms ones) are Senjutsu abilities. I've included by write-up about Worm Senjutsu.]
 

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~Nilion~

~Nilion~

Ive been peeking in on this thread every incensed in awhile to how it’s going, and I gotta say-

~RaylessSage~ said:
You guys ready to start
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OK
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What a mic drop. Imagine if they just never came back. XD

I might think about taking up a second Naruto to if it ever picks up in here again. Just letting y’all know that more are interested.
 
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DemonicHoneyBun

DemonicHoneyBun

Name: Izuku Uzumaki
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Appearance: He has short yellow messy hair, Blue eyes, peachy skin and a slightly muscular build. He wears fingerless gloves with a red coat and long blue pants with his favorite blue flip flops.
Personality: He’s cheerful, energetic, strong willed, kind and charismatic he loves talking about being a great hokage someday and that he’ll enjoy being alive every second of everyday he can also be blunt and straight to the point at times.
Rank: Chunin
Clan: Uzumaki
Kekkei Genkai: Lava release
Jutsu: Wind, Lighting and Water
Rasengan-Wind
Multi-shadow clone
Summoning(Toad)-summoning
Evil windmill water shuriken-water
Wind dragon-Wind
Control loss-lighting
Lightning blast-lighting
 
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