@Mystic Zander the figures are Brandon and Zander. It was from Anthony’s POV. 
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Ah, I couldnt quite understand with how you worded it. Ill fix it now.
*Literally had to just delete an s* XD
*Literally had to just delete an s* XD
@StormingCobra55 Would really appreciated another reply. If your busy thats fine, but id at least like to cease interacting with your oc if thats the case.
Working on a reply.
When we reach page 7, i will have a post with a brief description about Jack, Chance, and Griffin. Basically, it will say where they are and what their plan is. They will develop their plan over the course of pages 7-9. At page 10, they will set it into action and start to hunt for the adventurers. By page 14, they might have them all rounded up.
When we reach page 7, i will have a post with a brief description about Jack, Chance, and Griffin. Basically, it will say where they are and what their plan is. They will develop their plan over the course of pages 7-9. At page 10, they will set it into action and start to hunt for the adventurers. By page 14, they might have them all rounded up.
Think so? Things are about to heat up on my end, and Madison will end up in places so crazy that the bad guys will probably bring more danger to themselves trying to get her out of there. 
Anyway, I'm having trouble understanding your latest post because you skip across large distances with no transitions. I also recommend you break your posts up into sections using "~~~" or "---" to denote different points of view (mainly when your characters are in different places. If it's just Brandon and Anthony in conversation, same place, I can understand who's talking most of the time.)
And thanks for updating us in the discussion when asked for a response this time, instead of waiting days then silently posting like before.
Anyway, I'm having trouble understanding your latest post because you skip across large distances with no transitions. I also recommend you break your posts up into sections using "~~~" or "---" to denote different points of view (mainly when your characters are in different places. If it's just Brandon and Anthony in conversation, same place, I can understand who's talking most of the time.)
And thanks for updating us in the discussion when asked for a response this time, instead of waiting days then silently posting like before.
@E.K.A.N.S. added that in.
@Mystic Zander there is only one other person in the group, @Yusa ’s character Ray. And she hasnt responded for a while. Madison and Collax are on the other side of the lake.
If you were referring to the guy on the Charizard and the other guy, they're in Sinnoh. They recently scanned the island to see if the survivors were still alive.
If you were referring to the guy on the Charizard and the other guy, they're in Sinnoh. They recently scanned the island to see if the survivors were still alive.
He was referring to Madison and Collax. Notice how I put a skip after I ended dialogue with you, that was the transition to the other side of the lake, sorry if it was vague, everyones location to one another was a bit of a blur so I was hoping a small skip would allow me to cut around the water..
It would probably take about five minutes for him to travel to the other end of the lake. And they’re not exactly in the same group, Madison hates Brandon’s group at the moment, except Ray.
Zander is currently impartial and wouldnt know that as he had just arrived, he's simply learning the faces of the island.
And five minutes is reasonable, lake would be small enough for him to easily see Madison and Collax from the other side so thanks for the clarification.
And five minutes is reasonable, lake would be small enough for him to easily see Madison and Collax from the other side so thanks for the clarification.
Also, Halt/Aura is in this. Gonna find an accurate bio, but just saying.
(I'll use a new oc for this since I was request and I will add my later char JC who in reminder has a shiny Umbreon as a bond partner NOT as a starter)
Name: Naga
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Appearance: She is a light skinned young lady with light blue eyes with her right appearing completely blind that her bang covers. She has white long hair that is pulled up in a pony tail with light purple highlights on her hair. She wears casual clothing wearing a white dress with purple flowers on it with white flats on her feet with the straps wrapping around her ankles. She wears glasses upon her face along with a purple scarf around her neck and a cross necklace hidden underneath. She wears a white and light purple flower in her hair.
Personality: Gentle, Shy, Sweet, Warmhearted
Likes: Anything cute, Bows, Flowers, Reading, Pokemon Contests
Dislikes: Pokemon that are hurt for no reason, sounds of thundering and lightning
Starter: Eevee(F)(Ribbon)
Skills: Able to control a difficult situation within others, Performing contest strategies
Goals: To become a Master Pokemon Coordinator
Other: Blind in her right eye, Has two order brothers
~Coming in later~
Name: JC
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Appearance: She is a light skinned young lady with dark brown hair pass the shoulder with a bang covering her right eye. She has light blue eyes with a well feminine build but light. She wears casual clothing with a purple and black plad shirt that is buttoned up with a tank top underneath along with black capri shorts with black open toed flats on her feet. She wears glasses upon her face along with bandages around her wrists and ankles. She wears a silver and black cross necklace around her neck with a gold and black rubic like cube attached to her belt. She wears a Hawaiian like fedora with Hawaiian flowers at the side that is tilted slightly to cover her right eye which her bang covers and also has a black Hawaiian side bag with a purple flower on it around her shoulder.
Personality: Quite distant, Gentle, Calm minded, Strategic, Strongwilled, Thinks before she acts, Cold(Only with her enemies and opponents)
(Bond)Partner: Blue(F)(Shiny Umbreon)
Pokemon: River(F)(Primarina), Wolfa(F)(Midday Lycanroc), Gem(F)(Flygon), Celosia(F)(Toucannon), Blade(F)(Absol)
Siblings: Shadow(M)(brother)
Likes: being there for her friends with a helping need, Reading, Helping out any species of Pokemon
Dislikes: People that irritate her too much, People who ask too many questions about her, Know it all's, People who treat Pokemon in the wrong way, People who think their better then others
Goal: To become a Pokemon Strategist Master
Other: wears a hooded cape and wolf mask, understands Pokemon by feeling and emotion
Name: Naga
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Appearance: She is a light skinned young lady with light blue eyes with her right appearing completely blind that her bang covers. She has white long hair that is pulled up in a pony tail with light purple highlights on her hair. She wears casual clothing wearing a white dress with purple flowers on it with white flats on her feet with the straps wrapping around her ankles. She wears glasses upon her face along with a purple scarf around her neck and a cross necklace hidden underneath. She wears a white and light purple flower in her hair.
Personality: Gentle, Shy, Sweet, Warmhearted
Likes: Anything cute, Bows, Flowers, Reading, Pokemon Contests
Dislikes: Pokemon that are hurt for no reason, sounds of thundering and lightning
Starter: Eevee(F)(Ribbon)
Skills: Able to control a difficult situation within others, Performing contest strategies
Goals: To become a Master Pokemon Coordinator
Other: Blind in her right eye, Has two order brothers
~Coming in later~
Name: JC
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Appearance: She is a light skinned young lady with dark brown hair pass the shoulder with a bang covering her right eye. She has light blue eyes with a well feminine build but light. She wears casual clothing with a purple and black plad shirt that is buttoned up with a tank top underneath along with black capri shorts with black open toed flats on her feet. She wears glasses upon her face along with bandages around her wrists and ankles. She wears a silver and black cross necklace around her neck with a gold and black rubic like cube attached to her belt. She wears a Hawaiian like fedora with Hawaiian flowers at the side that is tilted slightly to cover her right eye which her bang covers and also has a black Hawaiian side bag with a purple flower on it around her shoulder.
Personality: Quite distant, Gentle, Calm minded, Strategic, Strongwilled, Thinks before she acts, Cold(Only with her enemies and opponents)
(Bond)Partner: Blue(F)(Shiny Umbreon)
Pokemon: River(F)(Primarina), Wolfa(F)(Midday Lycanroc), Gem(F)(Flygon), Celosia(F)(Toucannon), Blade(F)(Absol)
Siblings: Shadow(M)(brother)
Likes: being there for her friends with a helping need, Reading, Helping out any species of Pokemon
Dislikes: People that irritate her too much, People who ask too many questions about her, Know it all's, People who treat Pokemon in the wrong way, People who think their better then others
Goal: To become a Pokemon Strategist Master
Other: wears a hooded cape and wolf mask, understands Pokemon by feeling and emotion
@LunarSilvally accepted.
I’m sorry, I just don’t get notifications for this
Hope it isn't too late for me to join.
Name: Scarus Ante
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance: See sprite in trainer card.
Personality: Somewhat of a loner who avoids others because he sees them as in the way of his goal, and isn’t afraid to break rules.
Likes: Cartography, Pokemon Battling, Winning.
Dislikes: Bugs, losing.
Starter: Squirtle
Skills: Cartography and Battling.
Goals: To completely map the new region and try to build the first city.
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance: See sprite in trainer card.
Personality: Somewhat of a loner who avoids others because he sees them as in the way of his goal, and isn’t afraid to break rules.
Likes: Cartography, Pokemon Battling, Winning.
Dislikes: Bugs, losing.
Starter: Squirtle
Skills: Cartography and Battling.
Goals: To completely map the new region and try to build the first city.
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Accepted, although another character already has Squirtle as their starter, may get confusing if and when they encounter each other.
IK. I saw that, but we can tackle it when we get there.
Actually, I’m changing my starter to trapinch. I hope that is better.
Actually, I’m changing my starter to trapinch. I hope that is better.
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Alright, that works.
It's morning, Scarus. Not sunset. Let's be consistent.
Ok. I didn't see that, thanks. I’ll edit now.
Just realized, I should probably ask if Lasran is an island or a continent?
Just realized, I should probably ask if Lasran is an island or a continent?
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Okay... so @Mystic Zander skipped to night. I guess you @Zixal and I can continue our timeline in the day and act like the second part of Zander's post happens when we're done. I was planning for some shit to happen today, that's why. We're all over the place again.
Everyone seems to enjoy playing around with the time of day. When I skipped from night to morning, I asked if everyone was okay with it first.
Everyone seems to enjoy playing around with the time of day. When I skipped from night to morning, I asked if everyone was okay with it first.
Uh, you dont have to take my post as law. I simply wrote out my events for the day, you could still add what you wanted to do for the rest of the day, I was simply able to fit mine into one post. Zander will be going through quite a number of short skips as he plots the area we're currently located.
We speak in past tense specifically for this reason.
Sorry if that felt like I was forcing night on you. not the intention.
@Pokéboy098 I cant be for sure but it is a new Region, and most regions seem to range from the scale of large island to small continent (Except Alola of course). Considering they sent several young trainers, we could assume its on the smaller side of the scale.
We speak in past tense specifically for this reason.
Sorry if that felt like I was forcing night on you. not the intention.
@Pokéboy098 I cant be for sure but it is a new Region, and most regions seem to range from the scale of large island to small continent (Except Alola of course). Considering they sent several young trainers, we could assume its on the smaller side of the scale.
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Whatever you want it to be
I think it's a big ass island right now but as we explore it might get bigger...
Honestly, it would be more convenient for my character if it was an island, but continent would work too. I don’t want to make any decisions about the region since I didn’t create it.
@StormingCobra55 How large would you say the Lasryn Region is? Large Island? Small Continent?
@Pokéboy098 Dunsparce wasn't out
Oh. Ok.
Okay. That just means he might not be back shortly, if we decide to do something else the rest of the day and don't end up seeing him. Good, Madison needs some time to cool down
Poor Peter. Wonder if that was the same leg.
I'm seeing parallels between him and Madison. My girl hated Sterling's flute, your guy hates Naga's violin. Which of our characters is more despicable?
Omg Naga is so sweet
Ngl, I did kinda forget her name because you've been calling her "she" this whole time XD
Oh yes sorry lol Naga is actually one of the sweetest girls @E.K.A.N.S. that she does not like fighting with others lol yet alone argue
He must be fighting by Let’s Go Pikachu/Eevee rules. LOL.
Here @StormingCobra55 not the same sheet, but it has basically the same info. I will fix it if you need me to.
Name:Aura (Halt) Willow
Age: I believe about 30? I forgot our formula.
Appearance: Aura has short black hair with the tips dyed blue. His right eye is blue, yet his left is white as it is blind. Aura wears a black vest over a blue shirt. Sometimes he wears a pair of sunglasses as bright lights ruins his eyesight. He does wear some long black pants held up by a rope belt.
Personality: Aura doesn't like to show his feelings out to everyone and does his own thing. He respects those he meets as acquaintances, nothing more. Sometimes, as Aura feels the need to, he will begin to say something important but chose not to. Other than that, Aura doesn't mind being a teacher as he often helps others after battles on how to improve. He does have a hole in his heart though.
Goals: Aura wants to live a peaceful life after all he's been through and given up.
Past achievements: Forena as inside man. Joining International Police. Many missions for IP. Saved regions behind the scene. Achived Mega Evolution. Learned to read the aura.
Pokemon: (Long breath)
Lucario->Mega Lucario
Heracross
Flygon
Salemence
Melotic
Porygon-Z
Darmanitan
Rhyperior
Name:Aura (Halt) Willow
Age: I believe about 30? I forgot our formula.
Appearance: Aura has short black hair with the tips dyed blue. His right eye is blue, yet his left is white as it is blind. Aura wears a black vest over a blue shirt. Sometimes he wears a pair of sunglasses as bright lights ruins his eyesight. He does wear some long black pants held up by a rope belt.
Personality: Aura doesn't like to show his feelings out to everyone and does his own thing. He respects those he meets as acquaintances, nothing more. Sometimes, as Aura feels the need to, he will begin to say something important but chose not to. Other than that, Aura doesn't mind being a teacher as he often helps others after battles on how to improve. He does have a hole in his heart though.
Goals: Aura wants to live a peaceful life after all he's been through and given up.
Past achievements: Forena as inside man. Joining International Police. Many missions for IP. Saved regions behind the scene. Achived Mega Evolution. Learned to read the aura.
Pokemon: (Long breath)
Lucario->Mega Lucario
Heracross
Flygon
Salemence
Melotic
Porygon-Z
Darmanitan
Rhyperior
Everyone hates each other now
I'm replying soon (in an hour, I don't know how you guys managed like 20 posts in the span of the last one)
.......I really don’t know how to use my char
...Damn.
Shaynuh's doing her own thing, I'm doing my own thing and got story arcs planned... so idk? Do what we're doing ig? Develop your character maybe? All I know about Ray's goals from your bio is that "she wants to be the best," maybe elaborate on that? What's she doing on Lasryn of all the regions she could've chosen, where's she from, what's her family like, how's she handling being on an uninhabited island so far away from home? What'll she do to survive? I'd like to know.
These are just ideas and you don't have to answer all of them in one RP post, you can develop them gradually but it's whatever you wanna do lol
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@FrostCrispz this bio is good. Accepted.
@Red Gallade still planning on Sterling’s return?
@Pokéboy098 its an island.
Getting ready to post soon.
@Red Gallade still planning on Sterling’s return?
@Pokéboy098 its an island.
Getting ready to post soon.
Ok. Thanks.