This is my first topic, so please, comments, opinions, and tips.
Pokemon
The Unown Mystery Pt 1
Introduction
In the world of Pokemon, humans can capture Pokemon and befriend them. Others battle with them, some with evil intentions. Children everywhere go on a Pokemon journey at age 10. Some are even good enough to be part of the Elite Four. The goal of many is to be the best in the world, like Nick Tohema.
Chapter One: The Abduction
Far to the southeast of Kanto, five archaeologists were exploring the mysterious ruins of Seven Isle. Seven Isle is part of a large archipelago called the Sevii Islands. The five archaeologists and their Pokemon were reading some strange writing on the wall.
"Well that's weird. Slowking can't make anything out of this." one said. The cameraman spun around to look at were he was pointing. Seeing that Slowking's "crown" was on. If it loses the "crown" then it forgets everything temporary forgets everything.
The Claydol tried to decipher it, but failed as well. The chief looked confused, Slowking was able to decipher anything. "Nown!"
"What was that noise? Is someone groaning?" the chief asked. "Nown!" He saw something move, about ten actually. The others looked around, they had obviously heard it. They readied their Pokemon.
"Nown! Nown! Nown!" the ten objects flew towards them. The Xatu used a Light Screen to protect them. They all gasped, all the while the cameraman rolled. The objects were shaped as the writings, almost like ... Pokemon!
The startled creatures started glowing as they fired a Hidden Power attack at them. The people and creatures disappeared, but the camera and pokemon lay there. The Xatu grabbed the camera with it's talons and used fly to go to the only one who could help.
Sorry if indenting bothers you :-\, but this is how I typed it on my program...
Again, comments, opinions, and tips.
EDIT: No, my trainer card wasn't for Nick Tohema
Pokemon
The Unown Mystery Pt 1
Introduction
In the world of Pokemon, humans can capture Pokemon and befriend them. Others battle with them, some with evil intentions. Children everywhere go on a Pokemon journey at age 10. Some are even good enough to be part of the Elite Four. The goal of many is to be the best in the world, like Nick Tohema.
Chapter One: The Abduction
Far to the southeast of Kanto, five archaeologists were exploring the mysterious ruins of Seven Isle. Seven Isle is part of a large archipelago called the Sevii Islands. The five archaeologists and their Pokemon were reading some strange writing on the wall.
"Well that's weird. Slowking can't make anything out of this." one said. The cameraman spun around to look at were he was pointing. Seeing that Slowking's "crown" was on. If it loses the "crown" then it forgets everything temporary forgets everything.
The Claydol tried to decipher it, but failed as well. The chief looked confused, Slowking was able to decipher anything. "Nown!"
"What was that noise? Is someone groaning?" the chief asked. "Nown!" He saw something move, about ten actually. The others looked around, they had obviously heard it. They readied their Pokemon.
"Nown! Nown! Nown!" the ten objects flew towards them. The Xatu used a Light Screen to protect them. They all gasped, all the while the cameraman rolled. The objects were shaped as the writings, almost like ... Pokemon!
The startled creatures started glowing as they fired a Hidden Power attack at them. The people and creatures disappeared, but the camera and pokemon lay there. The Xatu grabbed the camera with it's talons and used fly to go to the only one who could help.
Sorry if indenting bothers you :-\, but this is how I typed it on my program...
Again, comments, opinions, and tips.
EDIT: No, my trainer card wasn't for Nick Tohema
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