So, hey, I'm kinda confused. This is taking place in a Battle City tournament, right? Like, I know that it isn't the same Tournament with Marik or the Rare Hunters, but a few details would be nice.
Also, no offense
@Shinx_Shades but when Dahlia dueled Zak, there were a ton of errors. Not that it wasn't a good duel, I had a lot of fun writing it and stuff! It's just that I always try to keep the number of cards a character is able to use in my head, so my characters can't make impossible moves (like playing four cards from their hand one turn when they should only have three).
Here were a few errors I noticed:
Performapal Longphone Bull's effect allows him to add a Performapal from the deck to the hand, not special summon a monster from your hand (like Zak did with Cyber Dragon).
Cyber Dragon Nova allows you to special summon a machine monster from your extra deck when it's sent to the grave by an opponent's card effect, not by battle.
When Zak summoned Battling Boxer Nova Kaiser for the second time, you didn't explain how Zak got Red Gadget on the field, because Zak had already used up his normal summon on Green Gadget.
Please don't think I'm bashing you or anything. You're a pretty good RPer, and I've been having a lot of fun with this RP,so far. I'm just trying to help people become the best RPers they can be!