That's better. AcceptedOk I have edited my character
(I hope it's a bit better)
Thanks for giving me feedback on my character instead of turning me down like some other people have.
That's better. AcceptedOk I have edited my character
(I hope it's a bit better)
Thanks for giving me feedback on my character instead of turning me down like some other people have.
I'm sorry. There's a lot to think about. Accepted.Seeing as I was not accepted I'm going to assume my character is a bit too powerful. If anyone could give me some critique I'd be happy to make changes.
The laser beams aren’t Normal laser beams, they are the suns energy, so they create heat around themSure. His bones aren't flammable but his flesh has that frustrating tendency to combust when subjected to radical increases in local temperature. Lasers would be less effective since they would usually just cut down to his bones but true fire has a way of working around defenses and to be clear, while his armor does a great job of covering the weak points of the normal human body, it's not perfect.
I do know about them. I don't have one in mind as of yet because it's hard to think of one suitable for my quirkYou know ultimate moves from the anime? I have one for later, so basically they use all their energy to create like a little sun bomb and it explodes
Here’s an idea, you can make them come out of his body from all over, then go back in, and that can be his ultimate move.I do know about them. I don't have one in mind as of yet because it's hard to think of one suitable for my quirk
I thought about that. I'm not sure if I want to do that. That kind of move is pretty defensive and my OC is more about offenseHere’s an idea, you can make them come out of his body from all over, then go back in, and that can be his ultimate move.
I would say that you might be able to make a shield of gas. It wouldn't be impenetrable but if you enter it, you have to be prepared for the fact that you might not come outMy character's quirk is too deadly that I cannot think of an ultimate move, any suggestions?
I'd say that unless you have a blunt object or some sort of fire/ice/laser quirk, your best bet against such an opponent (which reminds me of Kirishima but the armor is on the inside) would be to attack the nerves. Technically fire, ice and laser do that, but I mean that the biggest chance you would have is to train in martial arts (or if you have a fire/ice/laser quirk you just train to be precise with them)
Yua is wanted in 20 different countries for identity theft. XDWhat would a good ultimate move be for Yua? Like “Identity Steal” or something like that where she acquires someone and then morphs them to pass as them?
I'd say Yua's quirk work similarly to Mystique's mutation in X-men. She can copy some mutations like Wolverine's claws but not something like Jean's or Cyclops's mutations. And yes, Mystique can transform into animalsIf that's the case, would she gain their quirk as well?
Like I said lolHer quirk is manifested from the acquisition of DNA, so if it was a natural-born quirk she’d probably have a weaker version of it, but if their quirk was not tied to their DNA (i.e. Takashi’s quirk) then she wouldn’t get it at all.
This just reminds me even more of Mystique. She once copied Wolverine's claws but they were mostly for show because of Wolverine's adamantium buffYeah, but a weaker version; either smaller or more fragile in some way.
And one where he just has a huge neck.I mean... There is a guy who has a quirk where he can just stretch out his eyeballs...
The more I think about the latter category, the darker and sadder I realize such a person's situation in life would be. Just look at Soramitsu.So, if there is a school for people with good quirks, such as U.A., and there are multiple other schools... that means that there would be a school for people with absolutely terrible quirks, quirks that are so random or so detrimental that it would worsen them?
Not that it matters much but I would like to know whether or not he can affect his own gravitational pull (sort of like Ochaco but only on himself) or if he affect his mass. I guess an ultimate move would be that he somehow learns how to do this to others and either sends them flying or makes them crash into the groundUltimate moves huh?
Can't really think of anything for Wyatt, since his quirk is kinda simple. I do have a couple things in mind, but they work more like improvisations.
Uhh... If it's based on willpower you could perhaps pull a jedi mind trick on someone?What would be a good ultimate for Kiara? Her quirk is primarily defensive so she does need some offensive power.
No you're right. Though I always like to speculateI mean, at this point, we don’t really need to be worrying about ultimate moves... we can always cross that bridge when we get to it? Or does that sound like I’m a procrastinator who never faces her problems head-on and prefers to work around them which is entirely, completely, and utterly true?