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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion
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Man this thread is just packed with messages
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
That it is XD
SageNeb
Previously 5DigitNeb
Inb4 Sagiso becomes as strong as the sage of six paths lol
this discussion got like over 10 pages when the RP thread only got 1 more since I last checked
sSoul
Previously Swirled
The power of ideas, also @Shen: Ghost Gym Leader someone is trying to join, might wanna get on with that.
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Not only did I accept him, but I’m asking him a question he is yet to respond to
Leaf village?Quick question, what village is he a part of?
Also yeah, that’s perfectly fine, we are always accepting new arrivalsaccepted!
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Okay that works. Welcome aboard
Character sheet:
Name: Shura Hyuga
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Jutsu type: Taijutsu, Wind style Ninjutsu, Byakugan, Bukijutsu
Description: has short black hair, wears a face mask like Kakashi’s, wears the normal black shirt and pants Naruto style ninja suit with the tactical vest over it.
Bio: Reserved and calm, doesn’t like social interactions. Backstory is on TBD
Likes: Sweets, reading, being alone
Dislikes: Loud noises, spicy food, annoying people
Missions completed: D-30 C-16 B-2(one of which was thought to be C class)
Name: Shura Hyuga
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Jutsu type: Taijutsu, Wind style Ninjutsu, Byakugan, Bukijutsu
Description: has short black hair, wears a face mask like Kakashi’s, wears the normal black shirt and pants Naruto style ninja suit with the tactical vest over it.
Bio: Reserved and calm, doesn’t like social interactions. Backstory is on TBD
Likes: Sweets, reading, being alone
Dislikes: Loud noises, spicy food, annoying people
Missions completed: D-30 C-16 B-2(one of which was thought to be C class)
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Another Hyūga that’s around the same age as Sagisō, interesting... 
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Accepted! Interesting...! Another hyuga.
Another Hyūga that’s around the same age as Sagisō, interesting...
Exactly what I was thinking haha *shipping intensifies*
SageNeb
Previously 5DigitNeb
We’ll see if he can beat her tho...Another Hyūga that’s around the same age as Sagisō, interesting...
More Hyūgas is always a good thing. We need to teach these Uchiha's what for! Especially since the Hyūga's are the self-proclaimed strongest clan in Konoha~ (Well, they were pre-Shipudden lol)
Can't have all these Uchihas running around so rampantly, we'll wage a Hyūga vs Uchiha crusade once we've gathered enough followers and wipe them out.
Can't have all these Uchihas running around so rampantly, we'll wage a Hyūga vs Uchiha crusade once we've gathered enough followers and wipe them out.
SageNeb
Previously 5DigitNeb
Raiku: oh god I'll be dead before I even get ms lol
SageNeb
Previously 5DigitNeb
Name: Zino Hyuga
Gender: male
Age: 15
Jutsu type: wind style; lightning style; tempest release (custom kekkei genkai); sharingan (one tomoe); byakugan
Description: light brown hair; blue shirt with a stormy cloud; white sleeves like the one sasuke has; normal ninja clothes; black eyes; the konoha flak jacket
Bio: His father was a Hyuga and his mother an uchiha. Because of the father being from the Hyuga clan that was the family that Zino is from. His parents died before he was a month old and thus barely remembers anything about them. Zino's grandparents from his father's side took care of him due to them being from the same official clan as Zino. He never knew about his family from the uchiha clan until his grandfather died, which caused him to awaken his Sharingan.
From this he learned of his other relatives which his grandparents had kept secret from him. However because of them having taken care of Zino for many years he forgives his grandma but learned a lot about his uchiha side from his newly found relatives including how to utilize the sharingan.
When he first awakened his byakugan he was very confused on why he didn't have two to which his grandparents told him it was a special dna effect, though Zino still didn't understand but accepted the reason. His nature affinity is lightning but ever since he awakened his sharingan he started learning wind style from his grandmother and eventually merged the two by accident into tempest release in a training session. He learned the fire ball Jutsu from his uchiha clan relatives but is yet to know any other fire style techniques. He was thought to be a prodigy from his relatives due to him learning new techniques easily but he never acknowledges it himself.
Likes: His grandma
Dislikes: annoying people
Missions completed: 15 D-Rank; 7 C-Rank; 3 B-Rank
Other: basically a backup of the Sagiso x Kiro baby if the ship doesn't happen. Also he's a chunin
Gender: male
Age: 15
Jutsu type: wind style; lightning style; tempest release (custom kekkei genkai); sharingan (one tomoe); byakugan
Description: light brown hair; blue shirt with a stormy cloud; white sleeves like the one sasuke has; normal ninja clothes; black eyes; the konoha flak jacket
Bio: His father was a Hyuga and his mother an uchiha. Because of the father being from the Hyuga clan that was the family that Zino is from. His parents died before he was a month old and thus barely remembers anything about them. Zino's grandparents from his father's side took care of him due to them being from the same official clan as Zino. He never knew about his family from the uchiha clan until his grandfather died, which caused him to awaken his Sharingan.
From this he learned of his other relatives which his grandparents had kept secret from him. However because of them having taken care of Zino for many years he forgives his grandma but learned a lot about his uchiha side from his newly found relatives including how to utilize the sharingan.
When he first awakened his byakugan he was very confused on why he didn't have two to which his grandparents told him it was a special dna effect, though Zino still didn't understand but accepted the reason. His nature affinity is lightning but ever since he awakened his sharingan he started learning wind style from his grandmother and eventually merged the two by accident into tempest release in a training session. He learned the fire ball Jutsu from his uchiha clan relatives but is yet to know any other fire style techniques. He was thought to be a prodigy from his relatives due to him learning new techniques easily but he never acknowledges it himself.
Likes: His grandma
Dislikes: annoying people
Missions completed: 15 D-Rank; 7 C-Rank; 3 B-Rank
Other: basically a backup of the Sagiso x Kiro baby if the ship doesn't happen. Also he's a chunin
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Hoooooold on. Sharingan and byakugan? Starting to sound marry sue-ish to me.
Him and Shura could potentially get along
also, I was just bombarded with like this morning
what arc are we on btw?
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
We are finishing up the orochimaru invasion
Hmmm, the dynamics of both eyes together might sound good but one eye each slightly nerfs both eyes. The ranges for the eyes are very different and their abilities don't impose on each other. furthermore, the MS is reduced to 1/3rd of its ability because he can only get one ability from his eye and he can't use Susanō.
He'll be an absolute beast in Taijutsū though as long as he can keep his opponent in range of both eyes, and the Byakugan can extend the range of Genjutsū (but considering he's not a genjutsu specialist then *shrugs*), and with the Sharingan, he can copy Ninjutsū, but relying on his kekkei genkai to fight will prove hard. While he can track people with the Byakugan, it's not like the Sharingan where everything comes automatically, it has to be trained, which will prove very difficult when your body is running on autopilot from the Sharingan's eye of insight. Since he was raised as a Hyūga that shouldn't be too much of a problem.
Unless he specifically trains it like a Hyūga, then he won't be able to predict the movements of people who aren't in the range of the Sharingan. Basically, you can be in the range of the Byakugan but still avoid the Sharingan altogether, and having only one eye will sorta hurt depth perception but that's not really too important (He probably won't be the most accurate with Kunai throws). You can probably escape the range of the Sharingan without him noticing because he'll still be able to see you with the Byagukan, I don't really know. Either way, it'd still be really interesting to see how the character plays out.
The only real downsides are little to no depth perception(Ability to gauge distances) so shurikenjutsu probably isn't for him, and the MS will get only one ability. Other than those two I can't really think of any solid down-sides. Since he grew up as Hyūga he'd probably battle more to their style which handles most of the automatic vs manual training required to keep the Sharingan and Byakugan on the same level with prediction abilities.
Hmmm, also I imagine that taijutsū mastery will rely mainly on the Byakugan until he gets to 3-tomoe. Since the Byakygan is stronger at capturing high-speed movements he'd basically be watching something moving at two completely different speeds with each eye, and I can only imagine that being disorienting. Until he gets to 3 tomoe and the gap closes a bit it'd be like watching slow motion and speed up at the same time.
As an overview, Ninjutsū and Taijutsū would be his strong points.
On a side note, some of these could be the complete opposite situation. (Like the Byakugan being unable to keep up with the Sharingan's speed because the strength of the Byakugan is determined by bloodline and training.)
Unless he specifically trains it like a Hyūga, then he won't be able to predict the movements of people who aren't in the range of the Sharingan. Basically, you can be in the range of the Byakugan but still avoid the Sharingan altogether, and having only one eye will sorta hurt depth perception but that's not really too important (He probably won't be the most accurate with Kunai throws). You can probably escape the range of the Sharingan without him noticing because he'll still be able to see you with the Byagukan, I don't really know. Either way, it'd still be really interesting to see how the character plays out.
The only real downsides are little to no depth perception(Ability to gauge distances) so shurikenjutsu probably isn't for him, and the MS will get only one ability. Other than those two I can't really think of any solid down-sides. Since he grew up as Hyūga he'd probably battle more to their style which handles most of the automatic vs manual training required to keep the Sharingan and Byakugan on the same level with prediction abilities.
Hmmm, also I imagine that taijutsū mastery will rely mainly on the Byakugan until he gets to 3-tomoe. Since the Byakygan is stronger at capturing high-speed movements he'd basically be watching something moving at two completely different speeds with each eye, and I can only imagine that being disorienting. Until he gets to 3 tomoe and the gap closes a bit it'd be like watching slow motion and speed up at the same time.
As an overview, Ninjutsū and Taijutsū would be his strong points.
- For taijutsū using both eyes at the same time can only be crippling since he's only at 1 tomoe. He'd need to cover one of the eyes (like how Kakashi closes his right eye when he's about to use the Sharingan.) That'll be mostly fixed once he gets to 3-tomoe though.
- 1 MS ability
- No Susanō
- Might have difficulty accurately telling the distance between himself and objects but that only means he might not be able to throw Kunai all that well. (This only applies to object that are solely in the range of the Byakugan. Anything in the range of both eyes will be an easy target.)
- Would have to train the Byagukan to sync with the Sharingan.
On a side note, some of these could be the complete opposite situation. (Like the Byakugan being unable to keep up with the Sharingan's speed because the strength of the Byakugan is determined by bloodline and training.)
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Hmmmmm this actually clears things up a lot. @Nebulix if this is true, and they actually do dampen each other’s abilities quite a bit, they I accept your character. But just know i’ll Be keeping a very keen eye out for Mary sueish activities
Btw did you mean me when you said this?
What arc would be after the Kohona Crush arc? In the original it was the search for Tsunade arc but I was wondering if we’re going to change it since I Minato is still alive in this, I don’t know if Hiruzen Sarutobi is still alive thought.
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Okay. So here’s the rundown:
Hiruzen is dead, so is sauske, naruto, and Kushina. Shizu is still alive and Itachi is stills ith the leaf. Minato is currently fighting two hokage, two jinchurki, and orochiamru..
After this arc, it would be the Chase the sound four, where the sound would retreat deafeatedbor the victor of the invasion. And the other nations would send their first repomders to take out the sound four, orochiamru, and his two jinchurki before they can get themselves back to a state where they can invade another location
I get your main idea, but I personally feel this is way, way too big a personal risk. It can be "balanced" but it could also be incredibly OP and just a character having both Kekkei Genkai screams Mary Sue to me.
Though at this point I think you could justify having a character with the powers of the Sage of Sixth Paths at this point. If you all are okay with this then whatever if it happens it happens but this is all starting to get a bit too much for me. Feel like I need to inject some Hashirama cells into my characters to compete at the pace of these OCs given really anything seems to go.
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Trust me, I would not have accepted it if Kyuu didn’t clarify it, even then it seems very Mary sueish. I’ll make sure there isn’t any huge advantage. From what I hear, both of the eyes have been watered down due to them both being there, so they are weaker than standard. So this hyuga’s sharingan is inferior to Uchiha as well as their byakugan inferior to hyuga. So inferior eyes to both, but managing to combine them.
But I’m still watching VERY carefully because I have that same bad feeling you do
I get that, but even 50% of one eye can be counter balanced by the capabilities of 50% of the other eye given their different skill sets.
Just feel like being "gifted" is being way too prioritized in this. Tomiko is gonna have some gates, which along with her improved Earth-style should mean she might be okay. But the rest of my OCs are completely screwed over since I don't think a skilled Water-user with a sword or liquid shadow stuff can compete with an EMS Sharingan User, Boil Release User & Jinchuriki combo, and an Uchiha/Hyuga hybrid among others.
SageNeb
Previously 5DigitNeb
You do realize he’s my character right? He should be pretty ez
Shen: King of Digimon
Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Zaku isn’t gifted. He had to be surgically altered in order to use his Chakra at all. Most would have thought Shikamaru would have been screwed over because of his one trick pony shadow jutsu, but he managed to kill an Akatsuki member and nearly another with that one ability.
But I do agree that the double eyes are a bit pushing it
Don't say that, you can always improve as a writer with experience. Just gotta do your best and not beat yourself up.
SageNeb
Previously 5DigitNeb
I agree I just really suck at battles and tactics lol.