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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%

  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%
  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
SageNeb

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Shen: Ghost Gym Leader said:
True, but He really hasn’t been doing much either. His biggest accomplishment so far is taking in Tsuki under his wing. Your characters need to get some more screen time man :p
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Thanks. Maybe they’ll be thought of if they fight -shrugs- don’t worry your just saying this cuz Raiku failed in the first exam. If he didn’t he’d have at least done something in the forest of death
 
Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Nebulix said:
Thanks. Maybe they’ll be thought of if they fight -shrugs- don’t worry your just saying this cuz Raiku failed in the first exam. If he didn’t he’d have at least done something in the forest of death
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That did kind of cripple his screen time albeit

Nebulix said:
No raikus definitely getting scrapped.
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That being said it would just be a waste to be killing him off, and then you’d inevitably regret doing that like Hashima
 
Godjacob

Godjacob

DarkHydraT said:
"I am Mori Utamara, a genin from the Hidden Stone. I want to become a ninja respected far and wide and become a ninja my Tsuchikage can rely on. If I can't keep my word to an enemy, I can't keep my word to my Tsuchikage. The blood I spilled from my hand both symbolises my goal being my life and it shall be my apology to you. I vow to not use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu again in this fight, if I do I quit being a ninja and give you my forehead protector."
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Given Tomiko wants to be Tsuchikage, this guy feels like a perfect compliment to her XD
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Godjacob said:
Nah screw that. The most she gets is 8 Gates. She'll get to the top doing stuff anyone can do if they give it their all and work hard enough to achieve. Basically what Rock Lee should have been.
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Oh, I'll show you a fighting style or two that she can try to pick up. She won't be able to replicate it without a dojutsu but it should give you some good ideas of how to work earth style. I'll do it during Hinagiku's fight with Kabuto, it'd be cool is Tomiko could conveniently watch the battle.
 
Godjacob

Godjacob

kyuukestu said:
Oh, I'll show you a fighting style or two that she can try to pick up. She won't be able to replicate it without a dojutsu but it should give you some good ideas of how to work earth style. I'll do it during Hinagiku's fight with Kabuto, it'd be cool is Tomiko could conveniently watch the battle.
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Well, I'll be sure to get them out of the tunnel when that happens. Thanks for the heads up.
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Alright @Shen: Ghost Gym Leader , I've more or less finished up with the summons. instead of furry, I ended up going with Fleece, and for swift, well I did still use swift, but the swift for her name is the Pacific Swift, which is also a bird so it fits pretty well.

Filolials look like this
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So they're ridden like this;
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Naturally, any OC can also request to form a summoning contract with any of these summons through Hinagiku.

I think Yasu would be interested in the Filolials, I did kinda steal some of their abilities from him.
 
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DarkHydraT

DarkHydraT

Shen: Ghost Gym Leader said:
Reaver knew that the stab would in the back of his opponet was no doubt making it weaker than before. Even so, the stone ninja was much stronger built that probably didn’t hamper him enough to be equal to Reaver on a physical level. While Reaver cursed his small stature, he didn’t seem to mind this battle. As long as a battle was fought with bravery and honor on both sides, he didn’t neccisarily need to win....

However....

Reaver our his scythe blade up defensively, the sword piercing the metal due to the strength of his enemy. While it did pierce the side of the scythe blade, it didn’t go far enough in to damage Reaver himself. Using his newfound leverage, he took the long handle of the scythe and seemed to attempt and pull the clamped sword like a hook, readying a punch toward Mori’s face with his steel skinned gloves



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Kai and the Yuki contingent began to leave the village. The majority of the mist fleeing with them. Kai has Kiro in the back of his mind, questioning about his safety, especially considering he nearly drowned today, needing special care to stay alive...special XENO care. He could hardly image what horrors they put him through. As he left he could help but glance back at the shambles of the village behind him.

“Kiro....make it back.”
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It is always the Xenos. They are everywhere. Keep an eye out Kai
 
Retro Master

Retro Master

Kakashi Sensai said:
”yeah but a beast could run circles around your brain” Qoute Kisame
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Think about it though, maybe it would be better to start developing one character before adding in another. Take Nebby for example, he keeps making new characters and scrapping the previous ones before giving them any development. I’m not trying to say not to but just be careful not to go to far ahead.
 
Kakashi Sensai

Kakashi Sensai

Retro Master said:
Think about it though, maybe it would be better to start developing one character before adding in another. Take Nebby for example, he keeps making new characters and scrapping the previous ones before giving them any development. I’m not trying to say not to but just be careful not to go to far ahead.
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dude I was just saying Kisame’s line, I didn’t mean anything by that :'|
 
Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Retro Master said:
Think about it though, maybe it would be better to start developing one character before adding in another. Take Nebby for example, he keeps making new characters and scrapping the previous ones before giving them any development. I’m not trying to say not to but just be careful not to go to far ahead.
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So much truth in this. And then you start getting attached to the few you have. Take Kai for an example lol
 
Retro Master

Retro Master

It’s like the original series for example. The characters that got more screen time (excluding Sakura) were atleast able to hold their own during the later parts of the story. The ones that lost screen time ended up being fodder. That’s the same thing that can happen here and it just wouldn’t be fair if a character who barely gets any development is able to compete with one who got loads of it...
 
Kakashi Sensai

Kakashi Sensai

Retro Master said:
It’s like the original series for example. The characters that got more screen time (excluding Sakura) were atleast able to hold their own during the later parts of the story. The ones that lost screen time ended up being fodder. That’s the same thing that can happen here and it just wouldn’t be fair if a character who barely gets any development is able to compete with one who got loads of it...
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none of my characters develop anyway
 
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