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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

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SageNeb

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Luna and Sky's claws on Kiro reminds me of when Kiro put a kunai next to Hashima's neck. Point is it's basically an instant lose if you move so for normal people who need hand signals to get out they're done. Either forced to surrender and not fight afterwards or what happened to Hashima
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Oh, and @Godjacob ~
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Omega Good Job~

develop with the ideas you're using, its got lots of versatility.
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Okay, so the song is Magia, it's the Ending to Puella Magi Madoka Magica, or it's alternate name Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica.

Sections of the lyrics near the start are meant for Kiro, the parts that speak to lust and greed, which he's free to interpret in his own way, along with a few other sections that may apply to him.
Stifle all your doubt
Let your lust cry out
I will help you swallow your hesitation
So trust me
Cause you yearn with greed
Though your heart may bleed
Will we fade away from this world,
With no hope to hold onto?

Other parts of the song are actually meant for Kai, starting from...
One day it will come true
That wish you have inside you
To save the one that you love
(Is that a selfish act?)


and of course, whatever else Shen may think applies to him.
(Edit: This section might also double as an Allusion to Tomiko x Yasu

Those are the two characters I had in mind when I chose the song, and their current dynamic works excellently, I probably couldn't have orchestrated a better scene even if I tried.

You can actually listen to the song here
 
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Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
kyuukestu said:
Okay, so the song is Magia, it's the Ending to Puella Magi Madoka Magica, or it's alternate name Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica.

Sections of the lyrics near the start are meant for Kiro, the parts that speak to lust and greed, which he's free to interpret in his own way, along with a few other sections that may apply to him.
Stifle all your doubt
Let your lust cry out
I will help you swallow your hesitation
So trust me
Cause you yearn with greed
Though your heart may bleed
Will we fade away from this world,
With no hope to hold onto?

Other parts of the song are actually meant for Kai, starting from...
One day it will come true
That wish you have inside you
To save the one that you love
(Is that a selfish act?)


and of course, whatever else Shen may think applies to him.
(Edit: This section might also double as an Allusion to Tomiko x Yasu

Those are the two characters I had in mind when I chose the song, and their current dynamic works excellently, I probably couldn't have orchestrated a better scene even if I tried.

You can actually listen to the song here
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That’s shockingly deep and fitting for this scenario. I’m suprised by the accuracy. I wonder what retro might think of this?
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Lemme actually break down which sections of the song allude to characters RQ (From my perspective)

One day the light of love
Though it may seem far away
Will shine again in your eyes
(Transcend and rise above) {Kiro, Kai,

But there's only one dream
And it’s been ripped at the seam
This world will end in ruin
(And I'll lose all I love) {Kai}

Stifle all your doubt
Let your lust cry out
I will help you swallow your hesitation
So trust me
Cause you yearn with greed
Though your heart may bleed
Will we fade away from this world,
With no hope to hold onto? {Kiro}

I remember you from a dream I thought was truth
You bright with magic and I blinded by my youth
All is wish is for your hand to hold, you see
Only your smile kills the dark in me.

With these hands I try to hold what I cannot seize,
I’m like a rose thrown into a violent breeze,
All my strength’s blown away
With my heart, I will stay
Praying for light
Guiding my wish with all my might

One day it will come true
That wish you have inside you
To save the one that you love
(Is that a selfish act?) {Kai, Tomiko, Yasu}

It will capture your heart,
This love born under the stars
You'll say words you've never heard
(Just how would you react?) {Yasu, Tomiko}

If I can go on and not lose my way
I will sacrifice all my heart and let it fray to pieces
What I really need is a spell to cast
To stand up against all the pain
And fear that will always last {Kai, Sagisō, Kiro, Mori}

You are still lost in a dream, like a memory
I’m not the same, it would seem, I’m still wide awake
Until we open our eyes at the same time
I will keep marching on, into your light

With these hands I've picked a rose
And have stopped its life
Only now I understand, it’s not what’s right
Deep inside I'm alive - for my love I'll survive
I won't regret making this sinful wish of mine

The stories that I heard as a child
Kept me dreaming
Where magic run free,
And stars held captive remain always gleaming

The fairy tales I loved have taught me (have taught me)
No matter what hurdles there may be
Your wish comes true
(Was I a fool to trust in those lies?) {Tomiko, Taiyo}

In the night wild with fright, the old magic stirs
Blooming with grace,
It will rise up to meet your face
"With your hands you can change this whole world of yours.
Everything that you wish for is in your grasp" {Azumi}

All I want is to forever dream with you,
To live a life where all of me is alive,
Deep inside I will give all my love just to live,
I won't regret making this sinful wish of mine."

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I'll probably add more names as I actually think about it.
Rohan Kishibe said:
I'm tempted to have Shura play JoJo's bizarre adventures' second OP Bloody Stream with a trumpet, trumpets exist in Naruto right?
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I have no clue tbh:D
 
Retro Master

Retro Master

Nebulix said:
Luna and Sky's claws on Kiro reminds me of when Kiro put a kunai next to Hashima's neck. Point is it's basically an instant lose if you move so for normal people who need hand signals to get out they're done. Either forced to surrender and not fight afterwards or what happened to Hashima
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Well, that’s the point for going after the neck. It’s especially why I had Kiro respect his position when he had the claws by his neck. I would’ve been a hypocrite had I called it out. As for now, Kiro simply isn’t fast enough yet to avoid the bloody outcome had he chosen too resist.
 
sSoul

sSoul

Previously Swirled
Godjacob said:
I feel like Jiraiya would have given a description of what Tsunade looked like during the 10 hour time skip. But Taiyo's question seems to imply he didn't. How should I work this @SoulDemon
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Hmmm, Idk, I may not be able to give a decent answer, but I’ll try. Tsunade’s appearance was never explicity stated so I was going off of that logic but I dont know right now.
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Rohan Kishibe said:
How well would the Byakugan see through a face mask? If it could then why didn't Naruto and gang just ask Neji to see what's under Kakashi's mask
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How would the byakugan not see under a face mask? Unless it's crafted from very special material which is able to block the byakugan, then there's no reason to believe he byakugan couldn't see under it. There are few things which have proven to be capable of blocking the Byakugan, and the only one I can think of is the barrier jutsu performed by the Sound 4.

I don't think Neji would've helped them though, and the mask episodes are mostly gags.
 
Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
kyuukestu said:
How would the byakugan not see under a face mask? Unless it's crafted from very special material which is able to block the byakugan, then there's no reason to believe he byakugan couldn't see under it. There are few things which have proven to be capable of blocking the Byakugan, and the only one I can think of is the barrier jutsu performed by the Sound 4.

I don't think Neji would've helped them though, and the mask episodes are mostly gags.
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Seeing as he can even see through shino’s big coat and even to the point where he can see his bones inside his body...yeah...a mask won’t stop it
 
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