Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Well one can only learn through trial and error, I've been in many RPs in my one year of being here, and now being surrounded by talented writers, some of their techniques are bound to rub off on me, such as Kyuu's style of separating post segments per character. I'm sure these guys will rub off on you.

^this. Souldemon is 100% right about this. You’ll come around. You’ll see~

 

[SageNeb]

Well one can only learn through trial and error, I've been in many RPs in my one year of being here, and now being surrounded by talented writers, some of their techniques are bound to rub off on me, such as Kyuu's style of separating post segments per character. I'm sure these guys will rub off on you.

You talk as if i might improve

I mean slowing down on learning new techniques and powering up isn’t a bad idea. My mistake was giving Kiro power up to early and now I’m beefing them so he has some room to grow going forward. Maybe even relearning the lightning armor from the ground up for example.

my most notable mistakes are letting raiku fail the first exam because or my stupidity effectively killing off my character and me not even being able to make a character development from that and losing interaction and killing of hashima

 

[SageNeb]

Same dude. Last year I was a completely different rper. After being apart of this RP alone, I have made monumental leaps in my writing. Basically I went from trash to decent and it’s thx to you guys

After a year ive learned how to make trash posts even longer effectively spreading more garbage

 

[sSoul]

You talk as if i might improve

my most notable mistakes are letting raiku fail the first exam because or my stupidity effectively killing off my character and me not even being able to make a character development from that and losing interaction and killing of hashima

Well improving is natural in the process of RPing, you can attempt to find my first post on here and see how much I've improved, even if my progress was slow, and I'm still making progress. As for the second point, use that experience to learn not to kill off your character too early, I have yet to let anyone die in any of my RPs, I wish to make sure that their mark is left on the RP before I let them bite ZA dusto.

 

[Retro Master]

You talk as if i might improve

my most notable mistakes are letting raiku fail the first exam because or my stupidity effectively killing off my character and me not even being able to make a character development from that and losing interaction and killing of hashima

You will improve

Raiku was kinda my fault so you can’t blame it on bad writing, even if you didn’t know how to pass the exam. Hashima was also kind of my fault cuz I wanted you to go along with it back then. As for development, Raiku did pull a complete u-turn after failing. One moment he was talking about how Uchiha blood tasted and the next, it was if he forgot. Since you want him to be pure, focusing on the internal conflicts rather than forgetting them is a good start.

 

[SageNeb]

Honestly i dont even deserve to be here, everyones better than me, even soul which started after me in this website and hasnt even watched the show at all. At least he can make good character arcs and ideas for characters.

Everyone else is more descriptive and better than me at writing and just roing in general to the point I don’t even compete

 

[SageNeb]

You will improve

Raiku was kinda my fault so you can’t blame it on bad writing, even if you didn’t know how to pass the exam. Hashima was also kind of my fault cuz I wanted you to go along with it back then. As for development, Raiku did pull a complete u-turn after failing. One moment he was talking about how Uchiha blood tasted and the next, it was if he forgot. Since you want him to be pure, focusing on the internal conflicts rather than forgetting them is a good start.

Exactly im so bad i dont even know ehat im doing!

 

[SageNeb]

This stuff should be going in a convo but we dont even have an alive one

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Our Emperor has spoken

 

[SageNeb]

“Raiku is a waste of space that should be scraped off the face of the earth.

raiku: I can say the same about you walnut brain!

Lol if he actually goes to the mist tho...

 

[sSoul]

So how should Seiun deal with Kai's army of ice, I think maybe a line of lightning balls for the smaller ones and two depth charges would cover it, but that might cost some chakra, so I really want an effective jutsu that his multiple targets, does such a jutsu exist? If not then I'll have to invent one.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

So how should Seiun deal with Kai's army of ice, I think maybe a line of lightning balls for the smaller ones and two depth charges would cover it, but that might cost some chakra, so I really want an effective jutsu that his multiple targets, does such a jutsu exist? If not then I'll have to invent one.

Perhaps if you invented one. But weather it will do the trick is another matter entirely

 

[kyuukestu]

So how should Seiun deal with Kai's army of ice, I think maybe a line of lightning balls for the smaller ones and two depth charges would cover it, but that might cost some chakra, so I really want an effective jutsu that his multiple targets, does such a jutsu exist? If not then I'll have to invent one.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Ball (Lightning Ball)

They have a slight explode on contact effect if I remember correctly.

 

[Retro Master]

Tomiko, and presumably Kiro, were pelted by the lightning spheres one after the other as jolt after jolt of electricity ran through Tomiko's body which caused the Iwa-nin to scream in agony. Soon enough the impact of the multiple spheres caused an explosion as Tomiko was blasted away had been sent crashing into the ground with sudden impact.

Here’s an in thread example of the lightning balls being used.

 

[Godjacob]

Here’s an in thread example of the lightning balls being used.

Tomiko:....you couldn't he picked a different example.

 

[sSoul]

Tomiko:....you couldn't he picked a different example.

Taiyo: In all fairness, your not the only one who spends most of their screen time getting their anus royally handed to them.

 

[Godjacob]

Man, Raiku with the shade to Kiro. Was not expecting that XD

 

[Retro Master]

Sorry if my post seemed lackluster but I kinda rushed it. Surprisingly, I was actually having difficulty figuring out what too say. Especially too Tayuya lel But it got mad late and I also didn’t wanna keep you guys waiting so I ended up with that...

 

[SageNeb]

Sorry if my post seemed lackluster but I kinda rushed it. Surprisingly, I was actually having difficulty figuring out what too say. Especially too Tayuya lel But it got mad late and I also didn’t wanna keep you guys waiting so I ended up with that...

Me 80% of the time. I’m gonna wait for godjacob to post

 

[sSoul]

I’m gonna wait for godjacob to post

Me 80% of the time, I guess I can work on a response for Kai, catch knifes, try to wiggle out of the Centepedes, fun, fun stuff. Also doubting that Kai will be satisfied with what Seiun has to offer due to my lack of strategy but I guess it'll work out in the end.

 

[SageNeb]

Me 80% of the time, I guess I can work on a response for Kai, catch knifes, try to wiggle out of the Centepedes, fun, fun stuff. Also doubting that Kai will be satisfied with what Seiun has to offer due to my lack of strategy but I guess it'll work out in the end.

Hey you’ve still won more fights than me!

 

[kyuukestu]

Did that post in class, was a bit Iffy though. Should be enough to get Sagisō's attitude across though.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

*cringes* I just finished updating the Kai post. There was so much autocorrect

 

[kyuukestu]

*cringes* I just finished updating the Kai post. There was so much autocorrect

eh, that's what happens in fantasy Rps since half the terms we use aren't recognized as official words.

 

[SageNeb]

Bye-bye Kiro~

 

[Grand Master Koop]

before shifting his Tayuya.

Ok

 

[Retro Master]

Bye-bye Kiro~

Why though?

 

[sSoul]

Where are Taiyo and Sakura staying, cause he has a lot of unyielding rage and if he can't release it, something bad will happen.
Hopes it near the Hyūga manor so Taiyo can challenge Sagiso or Kiro, one of the two. Or maybe even spar with Raiku or Shiho.

 

[kyuukestu]

Where are Taiyo and Sakura staying, cause he has a lot of unyielding rage and if he can't release it, something bad will happen.
Hopes it near the Hyūga manor so Taiyo can challenge Sagiso or Kiro, one of the two. Or maybe even spar with Raiku or Shiho.

Challenge accepted. This'll...be tricky though on my end.

 

[sSoul]

Challenge accepted. This'll...be tricky though on my end.

How? H O W? You got it wasy, if this does happen, I'll likely screw up and you'll win and I'll look dumb.
|Feeling Meter| Needs Support

 

[Godjacob]

I mean, in my head, they are in the inn of the village they went to to get Tsunade.

Unless one can think of a good reason they would have made it back to Konoha already.

 

[sSoul]

I mean, in my head, they are in the inn of the village they went to to get Tsunade.

Unless one can think of a good reason they would have made it back to Konoha already.

So is Taiyo just gonna be festering with unholy amounts of rage or what?

 

[Godjacob]

So is Taiyo just gonna be festering with unholy amounts of rage or what?

So, something like this?

 

[sSoul]

So, something like this?

Precisely.
These are more words so I don't get demonetized for having only one word.

 

[Godjacob]

I don't know, curious what Shen or kyuu think would be best. It doesn't seem logical for them to be back in Konoha...but the image of Taiyo going crazy and crashing into the Hyuga Compound is almost too priceless to pass up XD

 

[kyuukestu]

I don't really know how long their journey took, but I get the impression that it wasn't long. They could probably make it back into the leaf by the evening or tomorrow morning if they rushed based on the urgency of the situation.

It's merely a short time skip away.

 

[SageNeb]

Why though?

Well he’s found a better place to be if he wants to do his objective

 

[SageNeb]

Why is everyone liking my posts, I’d prefer a conversation

 

[Grand Master Koop]

Where are Taiyo and Sakura staying, cause he has a lot of unyielding rage and if he can't release it, something bad will happen.
Hopes it near the Hyūga manor so Taiyo can challenge Sagiso or Kiro, one of the two. Or maybe even spar with Raiku or Shiho.

Fight Shiho, this way I can show off what she can do

 

[kyuukestu]

Fight Shiho, this way I can show off what she can do

Hehe, or Shiho can fight Furijia, they should be around the same age.