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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%
  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .

sSoul

Previously Swirled
I mean....

Sakura: NO! I am not gonna fall into that damsel role. Taiyo can be the macho hero for some other girl.

Gonna go offline to work on my draft response. I look forward to everything I will inevitably miss.
Nice
@E.K.A.N.S. you've been summoned!

You need to yay or nay this ship of a Pink haired Tsundere with a Hyper-active lecherous kid.
The fricc, I'm not sure we can allow this RP to become M rated yet.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Sagisō

Skipping back and forth between the bamboo poles, performing a myriad of acrobatics as both she and her clones crisscrossed in mid-air, Sagisō had a pleased smirk on face. Although she hadn't perfectly learned the Twin Lion Step, she'd at least got down the basics and could feel herself making steady progress. Perhaps, within a month or two, she'd be able to perfectly execute the twin lion step without issue. A mix of glee and concentration had her sinking into her own thoughts, but Shura's voice soon arrived and snapped her out of it.

Halting her training, and allowing her body to miss her targetted bamboo pole by a thin margin. Sagisō, instead latching onto it with her hand as she fell, used it as a pivot, swinging her body around it as she descended in a spiral. Smirking towards Shura she quipped, "Of course I'm not doing the same training as you, I already got the basics beaten into me before the Chūnin exams, I haven't lost them yet. You're curious~? Would you like to see the results of my training?"

With a hint of challenge creeping into her voice, she goaded Shura to battle. Her arm having been broken for the past few months and having been reduced to low-intensity training, Sagisō was itching to stretch her muscles, and sparring would be the perfect medium.

Woah woah WOAH. Twin lion step. That’s waaaay too powerful for a genin to have don’t you think?
 
Woah woah WOAH. Twin lion step. That’s waaaay too powerful for a genin to have don’t you think?
She won't complete it until the next time skip, she's merely training it right now.

It's why I've been solely focusing on Sagisō's chakra control.

Sagisō won't really...graduate from genin? well, not in the foreseeable future since she won't be in any ninja village for quite some time.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
She won't complete it until the next time skip, she's merely training it right now.

It's why I've been solely focusing on Sagisō's chakra control.

Sagisō won't really...graduate from genin? well, not in the foreseeable future since she won't be in any ninja village for quite some time.

It’s simply too much. She’s already stronger than neji naturally. Now she will get a tailed beast AND now twin lion step next time skip. It’s too much kyuu
 
I’m more concerned on how many people actually think Sagiso is still genin level
Right?

But no worries Shen, she'll be training that technique for some time to come, I didn't particularly have anything else I wanted her to train since she doesn't need any sorta major power boost at this point. It'll be several more months in RP before she can actually use the Twin lion step.
 
Hm. Okay. But as far as twin lion step goes I don’t mind that she learns it, out it’s just way too quick to learn a perfected version. Especially since shippuden Hinata only managed to around the pain arc
Shippuden Hinata learned it in a couple of months, and Sagisō's isn't a perfected version, its not even a close to completed version. It's completely un-utilizable in battle because it's unstable in terms of its form, and I've yet to even start her training on the chakra absorbing section of the jutsu.

She's got lots more to do before it's anywhere near the Perfected Twin Lion step.

I've done my fair bit of research on the jutsu;

Hinata only started learning it after Ino told her about Naruto's Rasenshuriken.

In the anime, it is shown that during some time in Part II after learning from Ino of Naruto's new technique, Hinata trained with Neji to develop her own. By expelling chakra from the tenketsu as an innate ability exclusive to the Hyūga, and using precise chakra control, Hinata was able to shape the chakra around her fists in the form of blue guardian lions, as witnessed by both Neji and Hanabi.

So she learned it in the time after Naruto Used the Rasenshuriken and before Pain attacked the village.

She learned it within the 79 episodes between the Rasenshuriken's debut and the Twin Lion Step's debut, or in terms of Manga chapters 98 chapters. Considering the number of arcs that would've happened in said number of episodes, it took her several months to learn, approximately.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Shippuden Hinata learned it in a couple of months, and Sagisō's isn't a perfected version, its not even a close to completed version. It's completely un-utilizable in battle because it's unstable in terms of its form, and I've yet to even start her training on the chakra absorbing section of the jutsu.

She's got lots more to do before it's anywhere near the Perfected Twin Lion step.

I've done my fair bit of research on the jutsu;

Hinata only started learning it after Ino told her about Naruto's Rasenshuriken.



So she learned it in the time after Naruto Used the Rasenshuriken and before Pain attacked the village.

She learned it within the 79 episodes between the Rasenshuriken's debut and the Twin Lion Step's debut, or in terms of Manga chapters 98 chapters. Considering the number of arcs that would've happened in said number of episodes, it took her several months to learn, approximately.

The timing at that point between learning new skills is less than the norm...especially for a retain Uchiha and uzumaki. At that point the writers were stuffing people with power ups to keep up, even if it didn’t make sense time wise.

But I see your point. Perhaps then I could go with the unperfected version
 
The timing at that point between learning new skills is less than the norm...especially for a retain Uchiha and uzumaki. At that point the writers were stuffing people with power ups to keep up, even if it didn’t make sense time wise.

But I see your point. Perhaps then I could go with the unperfected version
The unperfected version is useless, it's not even a version. Well, more aptly it's inefficient.

Around each of her fists, blue balls of fiery chakra swirled unsteadily, its form appeared to be irregular as if Sagisō hadn't been able to properly control her own chakra, and the manifestation of chakra seemed to be a bit on the shaky side, as the jutsu seemed to flicker in and out of existence.

What's she's training right now is the Twin Lion-Shape, which is to say just making the lion images, which is a feat of sheer form transformation. By the next time skip, I'll have her start on another part of the jutsu.

Using it as is now is like a more wasteful vacuum palm since it would, in essence, do the same thing, strengthen a palm blow, except it'd have the chakra cost of something like 8 trigrams rotation. Totally not worth it.
 
“Shippuden matatabi Sagiso”
Shen: she’s only genin she can’t fight jonin and stand a chance
Personally, at that point, I think I'd have Sagisō avoid fights since the Akatsuki will be hunting her. The only thing I have planned for Shippuden Sagisō is Azumi's betrayal, other than that, she'll probably be a reclusive cat-woman. Oh, and she'll frequently head to the Mist to check on her best buddy, Kai.

I'd probably main Furījia, or Baiyan since they'll be more relevant to the plot at that point.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
“Shippuden matatabi Sagiso”
Shen: she’s only genin she can’t fight jonin and stand a chance
While I know your joking, she’d at least be chunnin by then lol. And a jinchurki usually means they are a rank higher sooo jounin level.


Oh, and she'll frequently head to the Mist to check on her best buddy, Kai.
Because you know he just LOVES house calls from half breeds
 
Because you know he just LOVES house calls from half breeds
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Personally, at that point, I think I'd have Sagisō avoid fights since the Akatsuki will be hunting her. The only thing I have planned for Shippuden Sagisō is Azumi's betrayal, other than that, she'll probably be a reclusive cat-woman
Reminds me when I said Kiro wouldn’t be doing anything significant after the massacre... oh wait that’s still the plan :p ;)

@Retro Master whats kiro gonna do this arc?
Uchiha stuff I guess. Maybe they’ll be more lenient about him wandering the village. What about Raiku, is he going?
 
Nah, I believe in you Jacob! My most hyped fight of this series!

Hard to get excited for it, Kiro and Sagiso are gonna be so OP and then just...vanish from the plot to avoid the consequence of actually being OP. It's terrifying, and frustrating to a degree cause I want this fight to be hype but logically there'd be no reason to get hyped for it given how many leaps Sagiso is gonna make.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Reminds me when I said Kiro wouldn’t be doing anything significant after the massacre... oh wait that’s still the plan :p ;)


Uchiha stuff I guess. Maybe they’ll be more lenient about him wandering the village. What about Raiku, is he going?
Or maybe brought to be cannon fodder. After all, what’s better than using a ninja that you wouldn’t mind dying?
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Reminds me when I said Kiro wouldn’t be doing anything significant after the massacre... oh wait that’s still the plan :p ;)


Uchiha stuff I guess. Maybe they’ll be more lenient about him wandering the village. What about Raiku, is he going?
I don’t know to be honest. I don’t have anything planned or interactions. I guess if someone in the team wants to talk to him they can
 
Hard to get excited for it, Kiro and Sagiso are gonna be so OP and then just...vanish from the plot to avoid the consequence of actually being OP. It's terrifying, and frustrating to a degree cause I want this fight to be hype but logically there'd be no reason to get hyped for it given how many leaps Sagiso is gonna make.
Eh, stop underselling your self so much, it's not like Sagisō's gonna cake walk Azumi or anything, Azumi's a strong fighter in her own respects, and I'm actually excited to fight her as Baiyan.
 
I don’t know to be honest. I don’t have anything planned or interactions. I guess if someone in the team wants to talk to him they can
This might sound selfish but if you’re not sure, help me out with the Uchiha. Flesh the clan out you know. Have Raiku try and show Kiro the good of the Uchiha... it’ll make it a more emotional decision to kill them all if he becomes conflicted.
 
Eh, stop underselling your self so much, it's not like Sagisō's gonna cake walk Azumi or anything, Azumi's a strong fighter in her own respects, and I'm actually excited to fight her as Baiyan.

I'm not underselling. You are the one underselling how OP a Hyuga Master, Jinchuriki Sagiso is gonna be. There is little to no scenario where Azumi puts up any fight.

Shadow Possession? Sagiso can easily see that with her Byakugan. Or break free of it with her Jinchuriki boost.

Water Style? Rotation can block it. Byakugan to avoid the worst.

Kenjutsu? Byakugan Gentle Fist stomps Azumi close range.

I don't undersell myself, I just don't see a scenario where this ends up being a remotely fair fight. You vastly underestimate how OP Sagiso is gonna inevitably become in this plot. I will do my best...just don't be disappointed when that best proves to be ineffective.
 
I'm not underselling. You are the one underselling how OP a Hyuga Master, Jinchuriki Sagiso is gonna be. There is little to no scenario where Azumi puts up any fight.

Shadow Possession? Sagiso can easily see that with her Byakugan. Or break free of it with her Jinchuriki boost.

Water Style? Rotation can block it. Byakugan to avoid the worst.

Kenjutsu? Byakugan Gentle Fist stomps Azumi close range.

I don't undersell myself, I just don't see a scenario where this ends up being a remotely fair fight. You vastly underestimate how OP Sagiso is gonna inevitably become in this plot. I will do my best...just don't be disappointed when that best proves to be ineffective.

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@Godjacob Fighto~

Well, my input is you're thinking about it too linearly.

Umbrella kenjutsu is excellent for controlling the distance in a fight. Hmmm, have Azumi learn some swordsmanship from Baiyan. You've been swinging around that umbrella like a club all Rp lol, but what you really should be doing is using it to crowd control. You can control distance by opening and closing the Umbrella at close distance and peppering with Senbon.
 
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SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
This might sound selfish but if you’re not sure, help me out with the Uchiha. Flesh the clan out you know. Have Raiku try and show Kiro the good of the Uchiha... it’ll make it a more emotional decision to kill them all if he becomes conflicted.
This arc doesn’t seem like a good time considering he’s probably leaving soon
 

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@Godjacob Fighto~

Well, my input is you're thinking about it too linearly.

Umbrella kenjutsu is excellent for controlling the distance in a fight. Hmmm, have Azumi learn some swordsmanship from Baiyan. You've been swinging around that umbrella like a club all Rp lol, but what you really should be doing is using it to crowd control. You can control distance by opening and closing the Umbrella at close distance and peppering with Senbon.

Believing only goes so far.

But that advice is sound, and we'll see where the interaction with Baiyan and Azumi goes now that I've had her begin discussion between them. I just hope you can at least see why I have these reservations for the fight when I keep hearing all this Sagiso stuff is all.
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
I'm not underselling. You are the one underselling how OP a Hyuga Master, Jinchuriki Sagiso is gonna be. There is little to no scenario where Azumi puts up any fight.

Shadow Possession? Sagiso can easily see that with her Byakugan. Or break free of it with her Jinchuriki boost.

Water Style? Rotation can block it. Byakugan to avoid the worst.

Kenjutsu? Byakugan Gentle Fist stomps Azumi close range.

I don't undersell myself, I just don't see a scenario where this ends up being a remotely fair fight. You vastly underestimate how OP Sagiso is gonna inevitably become in this plot. I will do my best...just don't be disappointed when that best proves to be ineffective.
Lol I’m even more pessimistic about my battling prowess, don’t worry godjacob you’re fine.
 
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