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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%
  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
I died then I woke up before actually falling asleep. Tbh I also took breaks, did some work and got a little distracted yesterday.

But yeah, the first twenty paragraphs or so is like right before the actual exam. I’ve been thinking of showing how Kiro acted during his academy days so I figured I might as well add that in here.

I’ll try to finish ASAP but I also don’t want to hold you guys back so plz feel free to continue on.
 
I died then I woke up before actually falling asleep. Tbh I also took breaks, did some work and got a little distracted yesterday.

But yeah, the first twenty paragraphs or so is like right before the actual exam. I’ve been thinking of showing how Kiro acted during his academy days so I figured I might as well add that in here.

I’ll try to finish ASAP but I also don’t want to hold you guys back so plz feel free to continue on.
You have some serious dedication and your fingers must be barely hanging on. Twenty paragraphs, sheesh
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
I died then I woke up before actually falling asleep. Tbh I also took breaks, did some work and got a little distracted yesterday.

But yeah, the first twenty paragraphs or so is like right before the actual exam. I’ve been thinking of showing how Kiro acted during his academy days so I figured I might as well add that in here.

I’ll try to finish ASAP but I also don’t want to hold you guys back so plz feel free to continue on.

You have some serious dedication and your fingers must be barely hanging on. Twenty paragraphs, sheesh
Wow....let’s take a moment and appreciate having someone like retro have this much dedication 0-0 *claps*
 
Feels like this is slowly becoming who can write the longest most fleshout backstory xD

Well, constructive competition is always good.

*cricks fingers*

Gonna have to at least double the length for my next backstory, gotta aim for the 10k word count.

jkjkjk Probably

well then, make the words count Retro~

Oh, and we should all start bringing gifts for Godjacob's funeral. He has like...10 lengthy backstories to do? R.I.P.

*Burns Incense*
 
Feels like this is slowly becoming who can write the longest most fleshout backstory xD

Well, constructive competition is always good.

*cricks fingers*

Gonna have to at least double the length for my next backstory, gotta aim for the 10k word count.

jkjkjk Probably

well then, make the words count Retro~

Oh, and we should all start bringing gifts for Godjacob's funeral. He has like...10 lengthy backstories to do? R.I.P.

*Burns Incense*
I feel genuinely bad for him, I have one character who has basically no backstory since he actually had a decent youth and I have yet to discover what to do with the other one
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Feels like this is slowly becoming who can write the longest most fleshout backstory xD

Well, constructive competition is always good.

*cricks fingers*

Gonna have to at least double the length for my next backstory, gotta aim for the 10k word count.

jkjkjk Probably

well then, make the words count Retro~

Oh, and we should all start bringing gifts for Godjacob's funeral. He has like...10 lengthy backstories to do? R.I.P.

*Burns Incense*
If it was a competition, then I already won XD
I feel genuinely bad for him, I have one character who has basically no backstory since he actually had a decent youth and I have yet to discover what to do with the other one
Hey, there’s beauty in simplicity
 
Nah man, I'll be fine. *Shoves anxiety and pressure into a box*

In truth, only Kenji & Madoka need full on backstories revealed. I think I've revealed enough of Tomiko's childhood by this point, minus the mysterious figure who asked why she kept getting up. Sakura's childhood is more mundane, and I aim to dive into that when she talks with Kiro. Azumi's backstory has been hinted at enough times, but whether I reveal her full on backstory and when remains to be seen.
 
I feel genuinely bad for him, I have one character who has basically no backstory since he actually had a decent youth and I have yet to discover what to do with the other one
Well, definitely R.I.P godjacob Fufufu, with godjacob out of the way I'll be able to take over Konoha! kukuku!
But, all things considered, only Main Oc's would get lengthy backstories. I'll need to kill off Minato though, and like...every other named character. Too pacifist.
Azumi, Kenji, Tomiko...I'd say those are the characters who'd sorta require a back story to have the same depth as other Main Ocs. This'll be a good opportunity to plunge the world into Chaos! I'll need to hurry and work out the kinks in Sagiso's new Hiden -Tempest, or maybe Hurricane Release?The name still needs some work.
Hmmm, strictly speaking, it won't be a terribly large amount of work to do. The first order of business will be to betray and subjugate Sunagakure. Then we'll slip their poison into the streams of the land of waterfalls and annihilate Takigakure.
On the topic of Mori, well, backstories don't need to be tragic. I don't particularly consider Furijia's to be a pity story, since I just want to use it to flesh out her ideology and turn her into a character who's mostly nice but understands when to be ruthless. Ruthless enough to unite the ninja forces within the land of Fire and then march on Kusagakure, kukuku.
You can make a casual type of backstory, like first mission or something like that. My first ever attempt at Rping was writting out an assassination~ Well, lemme not give Shen any ideas on how to assassinate the Daimyo, I'll leave out the evil monolgue on this one.
Or do something like his Academy days and how he came to admire Tomiko. Your rock kingdom will be a kingdom of dust after I'm through with it though, so don't put in too much effort. kekek~
You and godjacob can make the world all Fuwafuwa Before I dye it red with the crimson of anarchy! I wonder if I can devise a plague-release? Disease is usually a good way to sow chaos.
Or even where he got his scar from, it should be quite the story. So too will the bards sing of the dark ages when the fire nation- I mean, the Land of Fire attacked!
 
Well, definitely R.I.P godjacob Fufufu, with godjacob out of the way I'll be able to take over Konoha! kukuku!
But, all things considered, only Main Oc's would get lengthy backstories. I'll need to kill off Minato though, and like...every other named character. Too pacifist.
Azumi, Kenji, Tomiko...I'd say those are the characters who'd sorta require a back story to have the same depth as other Main Ocs. This'll be a good opportunity to plunge the world into Chaos! I'll need to hurry and work out the kinks in Sagiso's new Hiden -Tempest, or maybe Hurricane Release?The name still needs some work.
Hmmm, strictly speaking, it won't be a terribly large amount of work to do. The first order of business will be to betray and subjugate Sunagakure. Then we'll slip their poison into the streams of the land of waterfalls and annihilate Takigakure.
On the topic of Mori, well, backstories don't need to be tragic. I don't particularly consider Furijia's to be a pity story, since I just want to use it to flesh out her ideology and turn her into a character who's mostly nice but understands when to be ruthless. Ruthless enough to unite the ninja forces within the land of Fire and then march on Kusagakure, kukuku.
You can make a casual type of backstory, like first mission or something like that. My first ever attempt at Rping was writting out an assassination~ Well, lemme not give Shen any ideas on how to assassinate the Daimyo, I'll leave out the evil monolgue on this one.
Or do something like his Academy days and how he came to admire Tomiko. Your rock kingdom will be a kingdom of dust after I'm through with it though, so don't put in too much effort. kekek~
You and godjacob can make the world all Fuwafuwa Before I dye it red with the crimson of anarchy! I wonder if I can devise a plague-release? Disease is usually a good way to sow chaos.
Or even where he got his scar from, it should be quite the story. So too will the bards sing of the dark ages when the fire nation- I mean, the Land of Fire attacked!
First off, great attempt at hiding evil monologue. Second, Fuwafuwa?
 
Azumi, Kenji, Tomiko...I'd say those are the characters who'd sorta require a back story to have the same depth as other Main Ocs. This'll be a good opportunity to plunge the world into Chaos! I'll need to hurry and work out the kinks in Sagiso's new Hiden -Tempest, or maybe Hurricane Release?The name still needs some work.


All you are is chaos XD

In truth I just don't know how to organically get out these backstories. Tayuya required a specific situation for her info dump and Tomiko's had been in rather fitting places. Azumi isn't the type to share her backstory and up till recently there'd been a lack of anybody Madoka or Kenji could share it with.

I could just have them daydream as they travel. But that solves Madoka, Kenji to a degree not Azumi.
 
All you are is chaos XD

In truth I just don't know how to organically get out these backstories. Tayuya required a specific situation for her info dump and Tomiko's had been in rather fitting places. Azumi isn't the type to share her backstory and up till recently there'd been a lack of anybody Madoka or Kenji could share it with.

I could just have them daydream as they travel. But that solves Madoka, Kenji to a degree not Azumi.
Funny enough, my first ever in-depth OC was a Chaotic Blade Dancer, she's done nothing but cause Chaos, whether it be setting entire praries on fire because she tripped over a root, or ridding a monster into the heart of town.
 
Sounds fitting enough for you, chaos and destruction everywhere you go
Lmfao, and I was one of the tamer members of the RP. Though...the guild receptionist was not happy when I got Unicorn blood all over their floors. She docked from my pay ~w~

But, since I got tagged with Vampire, I figured I might as well be a full-on Demon Lord.

Though...whenever I play Kingdom Royale I only ever win as the revolutionary ~w~ Maybe Chaos is just in my blood. Well, speaking of chaos that'll probably be Hyo for this RP, and Sagiso whenever she's being mischevious.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Lmfao, and I was one of the tamer members of the RP. Though...the guild receptionist was not happy when I got Unicorn blood all over their floors. She docked from my pay ~w~

But, since I got tagged with Vampire, I figured I might as well be a full-on Demon Lord.

Though...whenever I play Kingdom Royale I only ever win as the revolutionary ~w~ Maybe Chaos is just in my blood. Well, speaking of chaos that'll probably be Hyo for this RP, and Sagiso whenever she's being mischevious.

Chaos huh? Then if your chaos, call me despair~
 
Lmfao, and I was one of the tamer members of the RP. Though...the guild receptionist was not happy when I got Unicorn blood all over their floors. She docked from my pay ~w~

But, since I got tagged with Vampire, I figured I might as well be a full-on Demon Lord.

Though...whenever I play Kingdom Royale I only ever win as the revolutionary ~w~ Maybe Chaos is just in my blood. Well, speaking of chaos that'll probably be Hyo for this RP, and Sagiso whenever she's being mischevious.
Chaos does seem to fit you, and I am checking every post for hidden messages now
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Chaos huh? Then if your chaos, call me despair~
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I have a hard time invsioning Reaver shipped with anyone, although Baiyan is really trying to push the limits of that XD

Reaver doesn't seem like the romantic type to me XD

Baiyan is more likely to end up dead than ending up with Reaver, let's be honest. Azumi is the only one with relative control over him

Oh yeah, cause Azumi has done just a wonderful job keeping Reaver in line so far XD
 
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