Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

[DarkHydraT]

every oc has their own pace i believe

Both are rather ambitious, and they'd do their best to enter the Chunin Exams. Taji might skip if she doesn't feel confident enough but Mori would certainly participate in the next one.

 

[kyuukestu]

Where do you guys think the story will be by next year? Will this be dead? Will we be in Shippuden?

Another question would be where do we see our characters next year? It would be cool to look back on this next year and see what we were thinking and what changed compared to now.

Seven or Eight clothing changes for Sagisō. A husband, or a wife if neither Kiro nor Kenji can get their shit together. But the rest depends on when Shippuden actually arrives. At this rate Sagisō could be in her 20s before Shippuden comes, or she might be more around 18 or so.

 

[SageNeb]

Most potential? History shows it should likely be an Uchiha or a Jinchuriki. Kiro specially has a good ceiling given his Curse Mark.

Kou can be however strong Shen decides to be. Could have crazy potential.

Katsuo is my vote if I had to pick based on our characters. He is top tier without even knowing how to master the balance of his blood, once he gets that man...

I feel like that's too hard to choose because it really depends on the creativity of the character. I don't think I'd have as much as others since I'm better at imagining arcs that character abilities. Though then again I stopped doing that since I had enough for the RP... well maybe me since if I see someone having more potential than me than I could just make up some more.

 

[DarkHydraT]

Seven or Eight clothing changes for Sagisō. A husband, or a wife if neither Kiro nor Kenji can get their shit together. But the rest depends on when Shippuden actually arrives. At this rate Sagisō could be in her 20s before Shippuden comes, or she might be more around 18 or so.

Seems Sagiso has a thing for Lightning Style users

 

[SageNeb]

Seven or Eight clothing changes for Sagisō. A husband, or a wife if neither Kiro nor Kenji can get their shit together. But the rest depends on when Shippuden actually arrives. At this rate Sagisō could be in her 20s before Shippuden comes, or she might be more around 18 or so.

If she's close to 16 now then she'll be close to 18 when Shippuden starts

 

[Godjacob]

Seems Sagiso has a thing for Lightning Style users

I honestly still don't get what Kenji did to get any interest from Sagiso at all. Feels slightly forced given their only major interaction was her stomping him in XD

 

[Retro Master]

Nebby’s plan to destroy the Leaf btw

Alright, time to FUCK up Konoha: (Plan by Orochimaru, definitely not me)

• Since it has no Bijus, we're pretty good
• I'll plant a bunch of seeds to throw everyone into chaos and make a civil war
• I'll also eventually cause the Uchiha to fuck themselves up
• Release the Bijus inside of my two Jinchuriki and destroy Minato
• I'll kill sensei
• Danzo takes over as Hokage
• Finished.

 

[kyuukestu]

Seems Sagiso has a thing for Lightning Style users

Zander said no (though ironically Katsuo is a lightning style user now), and I don't see a very high level of synergy with any other male Oc. They wouldn't get along as well with her.

 

[SageNeb]

Nebby’s plan to destroy the Leaf btw

don't you mean orochimaru's?

 

[Retro Master]

don't you mean orochimaru's?

Technically you created it tho lel

 

[SageNeb]

Technically you created it tho lel

I think if you read the fine print it clearly states plan by orochimaru.

 

[kyuukestu]

I honestly still don't get what Kenji did to get any interest from Sagiso at all. Feels slightly forced given their only major interaction was her stomping him in XD

What did Kiro do to get her interest? *shrugs*

 

[Godjacob]

What did Kiro do to get her interest? *shrugs*

....beat her? Like she legit lost this should be over for husband searches XD

 

[Retro Master]

I think if you read the fine print it clearly states plan by orochimaru.

Okay Nebby whatever you say lel

I get a sense of nostalgia reading through the old convos btw. It’s like we were just discussing the stuff a few days ago.

 

[DarkHydraT]

Okay Nebby whatever you say lel

I get a sense of nostalgia reading through the old convos btw. It’s like we were just discussing the stuff a few days ago.

Feeling old yet?

 

[Retro Master]

I feel like that's too hard to choose because it really depends on the creativity of the character. I don't think I'd have as much as others since I'm better at imagining arcs that character abilities. Though then again I stopped doing that since I had enough for the RP... well maybe me since if I see someone having more potential than me than I could just make up some more.

You were creative with this eye ability

ok so I thought of an ability for Raiku's Right Eye MS:
Kuraokami:
The eye starts to bleed and rain starts to appear from the sky. Eight dragons appear from it and take the form of dragons, destroying things with fire. Raiku can control them, but the jutsu costs a lot of chakra and it, like every other MS ability, causes his eyesight to deteriorate.

Basically dragon fire destruction. and if he's like inside some place he uses his sword, Ameohabari, to summon the dragons.

I think you dropped it tho

 

[kyuukestu]

....beat her? Like she legit lost this should be over for husband searches XD

Yea, that would justify an interest in him now, but prior to this 90% of their interactions was Sagisō dragging Kiro out of some dangerous situation, and him monologuing about how she's ruining his life.

Perhaps if Kiro was the type to take the initiative then yes, but given that he shows no direct interest she's also not going to throw herself at him cause she's not Sakura she's too prideful. It's more of a 'criteria to marry me is defeat me' rather than 'defeat me and instant marriage'.

Everyone who defeats Sagisō is qualified to marry her, but not everyone that defeats Sagisō will marry her.

 

[DarkHydraT]

Woah, sudden name change!

 

[DarkHydraT]

Everyone who defeats Sagisō is qualified to marry her, but not everyone that defeats Sagisō will marry her.

Obviously, otherwise we might have a harem on our hands

 

[Godjacob]

Yea, that would justify an interest in him now, but prior to this 90% of their interactions was Sagisō dragging Kiro out of some dangerous situation, and him monologuing about how she's ruining his life.

Perhaps if Kiro was the type to take the initiative then yes, but given that he shows no direct interest she's also not going to throw herself at him cause she's not Sakura she's too prideful. It's more of a 'criteria to marry me is defeat me' rather than 'defeat me and instant marriage'.

Everyone who defeats Sagisō is qualified to marry her, but not everyone that defeats Sagisō will marry her.

AU Sakura: Hey!

Also I thought they just kidnapped the guy regardless of choice? Naruto is Sasukesexual and showed no interest in the kunoichi chick but she still forced the issue no?

 

[kyuukestu]

Obviously, otherwise we might have a harem on our hands

Sagisō doesn't believe in multiple husbands :v

 

[kyuukestu]

AU Sakura: Hey!

Also I thought they just kidnapped the guy regardless of choice? Naruto is Sasukesexual and showed no interest in the kunoichi chick but she still forced the issue no?

Their marriage had already been promised though xD

They would kidnap the guy, but I can't really do that in AU? So I opted to just drop the defeat = forced marriage and have it be a criterion instead.

 

[Godjacob]

Their marriage had already been promised though xD

They would kidnap the guy, but I can't really do that in AU? So I opted to just drop the defeat = forced marriage and have it be a criterion instead.

AU Sakura: Seriously what more do I have to to in the RP to prove that the top of my priorities is not getting with a guy?

Probably for the best so I can support the concession. Though between this and the Hyuga Curse Seal I do notice you swipe away any negative culture customs of villages/clans you like to make them more squeaky clean XD

 

[Retro Master]

First Kiro and Sagisō interactions:

When the Hokage had called for all the examinees to the 'loading dock', the Hyūga had been going over her equipment and getting her weapons ready. Although she was good at shurikenjutsu, it wasn't really her preferred form of combat. Over the past week, she'd placed an order for a specially crafted weapon that'd suit her needs a bit better. She'd wanted to show it off during her meeting with Azumi, but the weapon simply hadn't been ready yet. It'd been delivered mere moments ago, in a small flowery box, and the smile on Sagisō's face couldn't have been brighter. Since she'd left she hadn't had the chance to follow any of the guides but a quick scan with her Byakugan found all the exam candidates piled into a dark corner of the stadium. Not the most welcoming area, but who was she to judge.

As she made her way to the loading dock she noticed a rather disheveled young man pacing around the waiting room idly. There was a look of panic about him as he swept his hands through his hair and muttered curses under his breath. It was rather obvious that he'd been an examinee, and it was even more obvious that he was completely lost.

"...lame." Sagisō watched him for a few brief moments before pity filled her eyes and she decided to lend a helping hand...or in this case a voice. "Sigghhhh~ To think there'd actually be someone who'd gotten lost on their way to the fields..." She waved her hand towards him idly. "Follow me, stick close and try not to disgrace yourself anymore... To think there were also people like you among those cocky Kiri-ninja... I really don't know where that 'Kai' gets his confidence from with teammates like you..."

Kiro had nearly lost his composure by the time he heard a soft voice speak near him, causing him to tense up. ‘Lame?’ He did his best to regain his composure as he turned around to see the person who spoke. ‘It’s that girl...’ Kiro’s mind immediately jumped to the same young woman he saw before the exams started. The one who kept her eyes mysteriously covered. Kiro allowed his eyes to interlock with hers to be able to get a better look at them. ‘Magenta.’ They had something interesting about them but Kiro couldn’t quite place it. Before thinking about them further, Kiro was suddenly sent back to reality when he noticed Sagisō was waving. He managed to catch the tail end of her first statement but didn’t get to process it in time as his answer showed. “Yeah...” Kiro said as he started to actually listen to what she was saying.

Halfway through the rest of her words was when Kiro actually realized what she was doing. ‘She insulted me, didn’t she?’ However, Kiro’s expression didn’t reveal his thoughts as he just slightly smirked and let Sagisō have her moment. It was not often one got the chance to catch a disoriented Uchiha. He managed to catch the interesting segment about Kai and wondered what she meant by her statement. He decided to keep that thought for another time as he had more pressing things to attend to. Kiro spoke up after she was done speaking. He wanted to give a response to her accusations but decided against that as he would rather not have her just walk out on him. “I appreciate the help.” Kiro instead said, a bit surprised by his grateful tone. He understood why it was though. “Lead the way please, I’d rather not make an embarrassment of myself anymore than it has to be.” Kiro spoke as he prepared to follow Sagisō.

Sagisō merely nodded, at least this mist ninja didn't have his head so far up his keister that he could- cough. "At least you're not as bad as other kiri-ninja that I've met, just a bit lame... But I hear if you try really hard you can overcome your...errrr, navigational deficiencies."

She wasn't exactly sure how this guy had made it past the forest of death (Maybe luck?) but she wouldn't question it. There were only a few people that she genuinely wanted to fight; the Uchiha, and Azumi. She didn't even care for the Chūnin exams as much because she knew it was possible to achieve chūnin without passing the exams, in fact, most ninjas had earned the chūnin rank without the examinations. Maybe after the exams had ended she'd spend a few months in Konoha before returning to Nadeshiko Village.

With that thought, Sagisō paused, abruptly freezing mid-step and turning into a statue. 'Now that I think about it... I'm of age... I'm expected to only come back once I've found a husband...' The sudden realization had been the cause of her abrupt freeze. If she really got defeated during the chūnin exams wouldn't she need to marry the victor? Her eyes flew back to the figures that she'd seen in the waiting room, 4 of them had been males and if she included the candidate behind her... well he'd probably get eliminated in the first round anyways. He didn't look too reliable. Though, to be fair none of the guys seen really looked like 'husband material'. The kiri-nin(Zaku) seemed to wear a stupidly cocky sneer on his face, there was one guy who seemed to be panicking before the exam had even begun(Yasu) and had taken to breathing exercises, the guy behind her was clearly a lost cause (Kiro), and the last two(Yasuo & Taiyo)...well she wasn't really sure what to think about them. She had a favorable impression of the guy who'd bombed Kai, but she wouldn't marry him over that.

Considering the people gathered here were supposed to be the elite of the younger generation... the ninja world seemed to be lacking...

Kiro wondered what had happened between Kai and this female to get her so worked up about Kiri-Nin. Kiro didn’t know Kai that well so he couldn’t figure what about Kai had set her off. His mental tone did change when Sagisō brought up his navigational difficulties. ‘Of course the one time I get lost.’ Kiro just sighed as they continued to walk. He took this time quickly analyze her features. She was quite beautiful and if Kiro had a more lighthearted personality, he probably would’ve been interested. Instead, Kiro figured that her body was used as a tactical advantage that could be used against other weak-minded males. Something about Sagisō did give off the vibe that her looks wasn’t the only thing to her. Other than her body and her eyes, Sagisō’s attitude felt much different compared to the women he had scene. Kiro would definitely have to keep an eye out for her.

Once they arrived at the area they were supposed to be at, another genin walked up to them soon after. ‘So her name is Sagisō.’ Kiro wondered how Katsuo seemed to know as much as his name, much less his skill. Kiro just nodded in respect before Katsuo walked the other way. “So he’s your opponent?” Kiro spoke before he thought it through. “Anyways, Sagisō, thanks for the help once again. It’s a shame that we met on such terms, but I would recommend you not too underestimate me should we face each other.” Kiro warned Sagisō, but thanked her the same time. Hopefully he finished his fight fast so he could witness her battle against Katsuo. Just judging by their demeanor, it seemed like a battle that must be watched. Kiro then headed over to the location he was supposed to be at, without getting lost, before awaiting the next orders.

Unfortunately I think this is their only good interaction. I need to have Kiro up his game lel

 

[Godjacob]

First Kiro and Sagisō interactions:







Unfortunately I think this is their only good interaction. I need to have Kiro up his game lel

Still beat Kenji, who has literally nothing apart from their fight which was his aforementioned ass kicking.

 

[DarkHydraT]

First Kiro and Sagisō interactions:







Unfortunately I think this is their only good interaction. I need to have Kiro up his game lel

I know how you feel. If I keep acting like this, Yasu will have no competition

 

[kyuukestu]

AU Sakura: Seriously what more do I have to to in the RP to prove that the top of my priorities is not getting with a guy?

Probably for the best so I can support the concession. Though between this and the Hyuga Curse Seal I do notice you swipe away any negative culture customs of villages/clans you like to make them more squeaky clean XD

The curse seal is actually still there. Sagisō even has one, I just haven't mentioned it because I can't decide where on her body it put it.

The difference with this curse seal though is that all the Hyūga have it.

 

[Godjacob]

The curse seal is actually still there. Sagisō even has one, I just haven't mentioned it because I can't decide where on her body it put it.

The difference with this curse seal though is that all the Hyūga have it.

#TIL

But still the fact it is everyone kinda removes the messed up aspect behind it of making an entire section of the clan literal scapegoats

 

[kyuukestu]

First Kiro and Sagisō interactions:







Unfortunately I think this is their only good interaction. I need to have Kiro up his game lel

Lmfao, I have fond memories of Yasuo. xD

 

[Retro Master]

He took this time quickly analyze her features. She was quite beautiful and if Kiro had a more lighthearted personality, he probably would’ve been interested. Instead, Kiro figured that her body was used as a tactical advantage that could be used against other weak-minded males. Something about Sagisō did give off the vibe that her looks wasn’t the only thing to her. Other than her body and her eyes, Sagisō’s attitude felt much different compared to the women he had scene. Kiro would definitely have to keep an eye out for her.

Kiro was definitely checking her out here tho lmao

 

[DarkHydraT]

Kiro was definitely checking her out here tho lmao

More evidence to back up Kiro not being gay, even though Sagiso wondered

 

[kyuukestu]

#TIL

But still the fact it is everyone kinda removes the messed up aspect behind it of making an entire section of the clan literal scapegoats

It was still present prior to Hina taking control, then she raged a bloody purge throughout the clan.

I might implement some other quirks for them, but I'd need to think of something solid first.

 

[Godjacob]

You know the Curse Seal does make me wonder why the Uchiha never adopted or were forced to adopt it when they were alive given that (In canon) their eyes are objectively a billion times better, more valuable and more dangerous in the wrong hands.

 

[kyuukestu]

You know the Curse Seal does make me wonder why the Uchiha never adopted or were forced to adopt it when they were alive given that (In canon) their eyes are objectively a billion times better, more valuable and more dangerous in the wrong hands.

Because the Sharingan was never more valuable until all the Mangekyou stuff. Part 1 Sharingan was utter garbage for anyone who wasn't already an Uchiha.

 

[kyuukestu]

AU Sakura: Seriously what more do I have to to in the RP to prove that the top of my priorities is not getting with a guy?

Sagisō: Eternal Spinster...well, there's always Taiyo's harem. Don't lose hope! Fighto~!

 

[Godjacob]

It was still present prior to Hina taking control, then she raged a bloody purge throughout the clan.

I might implement some other quirks for them, but I'd need to think of something solid first.

Yeah, just worry that you side step anything that puts them in a bad light is all nothing more through this AU tweak.

Because the Sharingan was never more valuable until all the Mangekyou stuff. Part 1 Sharingan was utter garbage for anyone who wasn't already an Uchiha.

It grants literally all of the same powers as the Byakugan minus the 360 degree vision with the added benefit of Ninjutsu/Genjutsu copying. Even Part 1 they were better eyes.

And you can't just say the Mangekyou and stuff doesn't exist

 

[kyuukestu]

Yeah, just worry that you side step anything that puts them in a bad light is all nothing more through this AU tweak.



It grants literally all of the same powers as the Byakugan minus the 360 degree vision with the added benefit of Ninjutsu/Genjutsu copying. Even Part 1 they were better eyes.

And you can't just say the Mangekyou and stuff doesn't exist

Yea but it also made Kakashi bedridden after using it for what...15 mins against Zabuza?

'All the same powers' is far too strong a phrasing. Genjutsu/Ninjutsu copying vs Gentle Fist. *shrugs* It's a preference I suppose.

 

[DarkHydraT]

You two can argue about which Dojutsu is better, I am going to do research for a Shippuden jutsu by wachting a show. One of the more fun ways to do research

 

[Godjacob]

Yea but it also made Kakashi bedridden after using it for what...15 mins against Zabuza?

'All the same powers' is far too strong a phrasing. Genjutsu/Ninjutsu copying vs Gentle Fist. *shrugs* It's a preference I suppose.

Kakashi is not an Uchiha. Itachi even comments that Kakashi lacks the stamina of the Uchiha to make full use of the eyes, that is on the make-shift surgery to get it not the eye.

And Gentle Fist is an Taijutsu style not a product of the Byakugan. Yes they take the most advantage of it but it is not an inherent power of th eyes like the Sharingan.

 

[kyuukestu]

With regards to a bad-side to them, I just haven't had time to write it in. There are a few things I have in mind for them, but they need a bit more polishing to correctly fit their current capabilities.