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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%

  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%
  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
Mystic Zander

Mystic Zander

Nukas

Nukas

Previously Kid_Nukas
@Retro Master I heard you were looking for a mangekyou sharingan design
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kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Only 6 Valks are present.

Bryn, Regin, and Waltraute also didn't reveal themselves to Yukimaru. They entered from an entirely different section of the island and hid so themselves in the forest they could get to Darui's team. Yukimaru shouldn't know they're there. Even saying he noticed the flare, he still shouldn't be able to pin-point their numbers.

They're with Kenji, Aisha, and Taji, who got left way back when Yukimaru bulldozed a part of the island. They're a distance away and still shrouded by remaining forestry.
 
Retro Master

Retro Master

Nukas said:
The group was comprised of the Uchiha she had helped not too long ago, a very young kid, and a pink-haired konoha-nin healing an otogakure-nin. It was quite an interesting group, to say the least. She decided to talk to the Uchiha from before. "So for an Uchiha, you seemed pretty friendly with the Kiri-nin and the Otogakure kid here. Why would an Uchiha such as yourself be friendly with them and not the ninja from Konoha?"
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Kiro seems friendly now! Wow, my boy has come so far ;_; :D
 
Retro Master

Retro Master

Grand Master Koop said:
It feels out of character to me, this didn’t really feel like his gentlemanly act nor did it seem like his selfish acts. Seemed a bit too flirty for Kiro

Then again I don’t recognize Kiro’s personality that well
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Yeah I can see what you mean. I was just bored of going with the same formula of him thinking and asking questions so I just added an extra comment to try something else.
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

kyuukestu said:
Hyōryugetsu

Releasing a tense breath, the Hozuki waded into the circle of the Yuki's influence. Since the Ice wielders of the Mist were here, and the beast had been dealt with, her retreat became unnecessary. However, given the Yuki Clan had arrived, Hyo figured it wouldn't be much longer before the other forces of the mist arrived. Just on cue, hurtling over the horizon was a tidal wave of an army, in every sense of the phrase. The stretch of roiling ocean that had made up the tidal wave had been composed of the various members of the Hozuki Clan, and riding the wave was the Fifth Mizukage.

Mei

As the wave of shinobi hit land, crashing against the beach, off the wave stepped the Mizukage, and from within the wave emerged Shoshitsugetsu. As the woman made their entrance, the tidal wave died down, the Hozuki diffusing into the ocean, seething with the waters.

With a coy smile, Mei greeted, "Pleasant evening isn't it, Lord Raikage?"

~~Scene of the Battle~~

"Seems you've spoken a bit too soon Darui." Chuckling, Aesir made a signal to the remaining Valkyries. Ever the one to have something in his back-pocket, the Valkyrie leader immediately threw his cards on the table. The rumbling thunder clouds, scattered as they were, stick cackled with lightning. Black Lightning. The Four Corner's Liger Bomb formation had drawn power from all the Valkyries, however, their power primarily went to forging the thunderstorm needed for the technique. Furthermore, the ones to direct the technique had not been the four black lightning users of the Valkyries. Aesir had them hoist back before engaging, resulting in the descent of four blue Ligers rather than four black ones.

Although a significant amount of the cloud's power had been spent with that, the Valkyrie's most powerful lightning users still stood at the ready, furthermore, they had something else prepared to assist their attack.

Circling the sky was Kara, one of the two Valkyrie's who'd not participated in the previous group attack. She'd just finished weaving her hand seals, and was prepared to go at any moment. Should things head south, she would be able to sweep her wind and lightning chakra into a vortex that would channel and slightly amplify the might of the next combined attack. It wasn't up to the standard of the thunderstorm they'd created earlier, but it was better than nothing.

As tension in the air rose, Mei chuckled dismissively. "Let's not get ahead of ourselves. It seems you've done us a bit of a favor dealing with this beast, however—" Narrowing her gaze on Ay, "You should be fully aware of how sensitive possession of these biju are, the Water Daimyo would not be happy to hear I turned a blind eye to the land of lightning claiming such a creature."

"However, a conflict in these circumstances...the losses for both parties would be more than they were worth." Wearing an expression of thought, the Mizukage calmly proposed, "The Mist can retreat, but we'd rather not leave completely empty handed."

Following her statement, Mei relayed a small list of materials, a payment of sorts. They were not particularly expensive, and certainly didn't compare in value to the biju, but as they said, one's man trash was another man's treasure. Woven into her request, amidst the pool of other miscellaneous items, were materials that would hasten the recovery effort of the Mist.

However, as to not inadvertently betray their condition, she'd expertly woven them between a plethora of other materials, allowing no certain conclusion to be drawn based on her request alone.

Continuing on, she proposed, "Things have been quite...hectic as of late. The attack on Konoha, the escape of your own jinchuriki, the appearance of this Biju. Even just one of these would be a major event! So many of them, so close together, this matter should be discussed...don't you think?"

Though she hadn't been direct, her intention of gathering a Kage's Summit was clear, so too was the fact that she was requesting the Raikage throw in his vote. With two Kage backing this summons, things would go much smoother.

Koki'o

Now near 10 km away from the scene, the confrontation between the Mist and Cloud was no longer visible, having receded over the horizon.

"This should be far enough, don't you think?"

Giving Kiro an eerie smile, the Crying Star tensed her fists. She threw a look towards the nearest Jonin, Hinagiku, and spoke cheerily. "Hope you don't mind the distraction~"

Biting her thumbs, she took of running, weaving hand seals as she did. "I would give the dead-weight to the clone if I were you~"

Her intention was clear, the kidnapping operation began now. From her position, it would take her only a handful of seconds to close in on Kiro.

Hinagiku

Hina only sparred a passing glance towards Koki'o and her altercation with Kiro refocusing her attention elsewhere. The Hyuga Matriarch was, apparently, unconcerned with the Nadeshiko kunoichi's advance on Kiro. From her one glance, she'd gathered, compiled and assessed the data about the situation.

Expression, Posture, Heart Rate, Depth of breath... all the little knicks and knacks in body language that the Nadeshiko could project had been captured by Hinagiku's Byakugan. She then judged that the intent to harm or even kill was completely absent from the Nadeshiko's assault. This was merely a scuffle between children.

Although she paid a modicum of attention to the events, the bulk of her attention was better placed elsewhere. Pakura and Kakashi had yet to reconvene with them, along with a number of the genin who lagged slightly behind. In addition, the altercation between the Cloud and Mist was also an event she watched closely.

Kumogakure had just lost their own jinchuriki, so if they failed to take this one then their power would certainly dip, such information which literally foretold the balance of the powers that be were to be grasped at every opportunity, and relayed with the utmost of haste.
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TL;DR

Hyo is with Kai

Mei and the Hozuki arrived

The Valks and the Hozuki are in an attack ready position

Mei offered a short list of materials Kumo could use to buy the Mist's retreat

Mei also proposed the Kage Summit

Koki'o gonna scuffle with Kio

Hina is watching...everything :v
Specifically she's paying attention to Pakura, Kakashi, the Mist-Cloud development, and the genin who've yet to set foot on the island.
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Name: Koki’o Kaneshun

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Village: Nadeshiko Village

Jutsu Type: Fire Release, Calling on Tears, Poison Specialist

Description: Generally, she was quite the looker, Cerise-carmine locks the depth of whose color went above and beyond. Rubies, Blood, even the light of the Sharingan, when compared to Koki'o hair, these things weren't even qualified to be called 'red'. Such exotic hair framed an impish face and curious eyes, she was fairy-like both literally and figuratively, but more in line with the fairies of old, the merciless pranksters that they were. She appeared both intriguing, and paralous, creating a unique charm that drew thrill-seeks, one that seemed to say, 'this one, is going to be a wild ride.'

Likes: Scorpions (Duh!), Singing (she's quite bad)

Dislikes: Lightning Release,



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Name: Shaula

Race: Scorpion

Nature: Fire



Name: Lesath

Race: Scorpion

Nature: Fire
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The fabled Koki'o

I didn't write this so much as I copied it. I knew I'd already thrown in a description for her in the RP thread itself, so it was just copy-pasting stuff into the Character Sheet.




Also, for the next arc, as a likely villain/side-character for Tomiko a cameo from Shinobi Road, Melia Kamizuru~

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Name: Melia Kamizuru
Gender: Female
Village: Iwagakure
Clan (If any): Kamizuru
Nature Affinity: Honey/Beewax Release,
Kekkei Genkai (If any): Apis Regina (Hiden)
Skills (kenjutsu, shurikenjutsu, etc.): Bee-based Ninjutsu, Rapier based Kenjutsu, Space-time/Fuinjutsu

Appearance: Melia wears a small golden tiara, matched against a black and yellow dress, and a honey-brown scarf.

Personality: Imperious and condescending, Melia has what might be described as a princess complex. However, her clan’s history and village philosophy have also melded into her personality. She believes in prosperity for the village and her Clan, even at the cost of sacrificing herself, or others.

Age (9-13): 10
Age: 15

Other: Mugen

Apis Regina:

Apis Regina is a Hiden that must be started at birth to have any effect. Mimicking the way Queen Bees are raised with Royal jelly, Apis Regina requires the user to be fed and treated with special royal jelly at the moment of their birth.

This process alters the body, fostering the growth of honey and wax-producing glands which give access to Honey release. Apart from Honey release, Apis Regina grants the user more Bee-like traits.

These traits can be emphasized through the [Coronatione Regina] technique.
 
Retro Master

Retro Master

Grand Master Koop said:
Yeah what Kyuu said
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May I ask what the point of saying that was? I understand you like restating stuff on Discord but I’m certain Swirled would be able to read what Kyuu said himself considering it was literally the last post in the discussion that was a direct reply to him.

Tbh idm but it just seems like a spam post to me since you didn’t really add anything lel
 
Grand Master Koop

Grand Master Koop

Retro Master said:
May I ask what the point of saying that was? I understand you like restating stuff on Discord but I’m certain Swirled would be able to read what Kyuu said himself considering it was literally the last post in the discussion that was a direct reply to him.

Tbh idm but it just seems like a spam post to me since you didn’t really add anything lel
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I just like doing these things alright


Also we arrived at the village right? At least Team Hina did?
 
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