Ah so this is what you meant ok Discord, let me read through it and I’ll give my opinions
Damos was a poet?- Poem of Damos
It was a poem about Damos, not by Damos lolDamos was a poet?
Well that changes things. Why a random poem about Damos in a scene that has nothing to do with him? Unless... Jako is somehow connected to Damos.It was a poem about Damos, not by Damos lol
Well that changes things. Why a random poem about Damos in a scene that has nothing to do with him? Unless... Jako is somehow connected to Damos.
Kai: laughs in Pure bloodHalf-Xeno
Sagisō: *Checks Calendar* Don't worry best buddy, I'll come visit you for Easter.Kai: laughs in Pure blood
I read that as best man first lmaoSagisō: *Checks Calendar* Don't worry best buddy, I'll come visit you for Easter.
Heh, that changes the meaning of the sentenceI read that as best man first lmao
Kiro: Say hi to Kai for me
Depends on how long I keep procrastinating for :vHow long until Sagiso and Tayuya’s bout reach a closing point?
Well, remember when I said they we'd implement a 'point' system, and points could be used to proxy the influence of the Clan? This is where the missions come in.@kyuukestu
Don’t recall you bringing up the idea for the Hyūga being able to deploy village approved missions until now. Correct me if I’m wrong but instead of taking missions directly from the village itself, now Leaf shinobi will have the choice to just take missions from the Hyūga instead?
Since most of the focus is on Kin in Suna, got now you can either do something solo, or train with Yasu.Hmm... I've been focusing a lot on Raiku and I want to think of things I could do with Sema... I can't think of things I can use as a basis to expand on tho. Can you guys help?
Hmm... I've been focusing a lot on Raiku and I want to think of things I could do with Sema... I can't think of things I can use as a basis to expand on tho. Can you guys help?
^I would suggest maybe exploring her personal background, expanding what she is as a character by figuring out her motivations, hopes, dreams, etc that sort of thing. So we can see a glimpse of what it is to be Sema
First off, 900 hundred pages! Sweet! As for Sema, try expanding on her daily life or relationships with others. Does she help old shopkeepers or does she tell children stories about her job? As for her skill showing, she could knock out a burglar with an arrow that has a blunt end instead of a sharp arrow tip. It also adds some life to the world and makes a nice segway to show how society thinks about herHmm... I've been focusing a lot on Raiku and I want to think of things I could do with Sema... I can't think of things I can use as a basis to expand on tho. Can you guys help?
I don't even know what the village looks like. Please can you tell me so I can continue with my postExpand on Suna Neb, Make Suna a well built nation
That kinda helps? Not reallyThere are images online you could look up for reference.
Wait I'm looking for a post I made with Rasa, He described Suna in it a bitThat kinda helps? Not really
Did you find it?Wait I'm looking for a post I made with Rasa, He described Suna in it a bit
Making his way through the Sand Village, Rasa looked around at the various bright sceneries presented to him. From the children busy playing on the streets to the adults moving from place to place, either working or just to have fun. A slight gust of wind picked up a bit of sand in a swirly motion before blowing off into the wall of a nearby building. A small smirk appeared on the Kazekage’s face, this was the village he has worked so hard to maintain, but that wasn’t all the only side of his beloved village.
Arriving at a much... gloomier part of the village, the scenery completely changed, as did Rasa’s expression. The streets were dirty and full of old houses and building, some of which are even falling apart. The area was not filled with the laugh of children or the gossips of workers on their breaks, instead a dead silence was looming in the air. The streets were barren, spare for the few unfortunate souls who are finding themselves homeless. A sanitary mess was in front of passing spectators. Rasa lowered his gaze his smirk completely faded from his face, this sight reminded him of what he has yet to accomplish as Kazekage, a bright future for everyone in his nation.
Well I can't get Hama-sensei a gift...might as well try to get one for Kai..." She psused sfter her last statement before letting put s chuckle or two, "I feel like I know Kai even less than I do Hama-sensei..." Regardless, her direction didn't change.
Time to change that~
Gotta love Naomi for totally shipping Mori and Tomiko"Well, friends for now anyway...." Naomi thought to herself, hiding a sly grin behind Mr. Snugglebottom as she glanced between Tomiko and Mori.