You. Not exactly a Mary Sue, but some sueish qualities.
What don't you care about? Also long time no see.…I Don't CARE anymore.
I get the Rotom being the "special Pokemon", but what flaws? Is it that he's a rushing little 13 year old that doesn't give a shit and interrupts Mafia battles 'cause he wants to help?No, I didn't have a problem with that.
I meant the special Pokemon, little flaws, and such. I guess he's a bit underdeveloped? He had no defining personality traits. For example, Raina is a little blunt asshole with no empathy and is weak and underdog-like. She has her father so you feel sympathy for her and so she has more depth.
In real life, I would have cried and ran away. Now, I just have the Linoone because it felt cool.I meant shadow Linoone, Rotom is awesome.
That's more of your desicion as a RP writer.
He wants to help because he's caring and compassionate, one of the few traits he has.
YESS!!! THIS IS WHAT I LIKE IN CHARACTERS!Well, I realize I am coming off as shallow minded, and I am. I really am. I'm sorry.
That's just because the way I RP is different than your approach.
Usually I plan out my character to give them personality and a slight backstory. I plan out scenarios for these characters and I should stop trying to make others RP the way I do. But it's just a suggestion, please give him more depth. He seems one-dimensional.
Maybe give him a character arc similar to Angel's eye, Luke's Lucario, and Raina's father.