Lets get several more conversation scenes in and then back to the action 
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The Dark Tournament
- Thread starter Astralkitsune
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Sorry, I've been doing stuff today. I think, at least 
As for June's size, she a bit taller than the average Delphox. Five foot. Still puts her below Cassie and Lin though.
My next post will be up soon. Can't promise tonight, but maybe I'll get lucky. It definitely will be interesting, and I actually have to ask Astral about something that might be relevant soon...
I'm glad my post came out good! I thought it might've been a bit underwhelming on Gerald's side, but apparently not! Thanks for the praiseyou masterful writer, that was an incredible entry.
I loved seeing the zest in June, that hot flame burning in her core. She made some strong arguments too.
I absolutely loved the way you made it so that Salem's touch managed to make her momentarily forget about her need to explode. I wanted his skills to be good, but you've delivered more than I dared hope for. Awesome, and thanks so much.
The interaction between Gerald and Cassie was very good as well. I liked reading Gerald's observations of her mental state. Oh and I apologize for Ajax pushing Gerald earlier
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Btw, how tall is June? Sources say the avarage Delphox is about 150cm, which would make her only slightly shorter than Lin and Cassie and almost a foot shorter than Salem.
As for June's size, she a bit taller than the average Delphox. Five foot. Still puts her below Cassie and Lin though.
My next post will be up soon. Can't promise tonight, but maybe I'll get lucky. It definitely will be interesting, and I actually have to ask Astral about something that might be relevant soon...
No you totally should post something tonight! I've had to cut my response post in two because everyone's too eager to hear June's opinions on Lin actions and Arrow's words.
It's a shame that I knew what was coming as soon as I saw the thumbnail. Although, if Salem meets a Team Rocket cutie, then I'm sure that this is the way he'll deal with things.
Ahahah, I literally laughed my head off! That was a riot! Nice find, Chroc
I can't really see Salem acting this way in canon, but still very hilarious.You know... there is a part of me that really wants to deny this...
Lol
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Let me know if the scene took too abrupt of a turn xD I kinda wanted to get in another action scene, but if this seems too random I can edit it or redo it.
@Mega Gallade X @Astralkitsune
Let me know if the scene took too abrupt of a turn xD I kinda wanted to get in another action scene, but if this seems too random I can edit it or redo it.
I don't have a problem with it
Holy crap, it's the Nidoking that tried to eat Akira!
*Cough* Delilah is totally gonna need that doctor otherwise Beedrill is gonna die or something. *Cough*
Chrocey's been hinting at it for a while nowHoly crap, it's the Nidoking that tried to eat Akira!
Just saying, I've changed Floyd's team. It needed a Healer. (Lilligant)
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What kind of post is this?
I like that you choose Lilligant. I'm having big plans for one myself
So Nova when are you going to post 
You work really hard Teapot and your very quick at your job I really appreciate it.
You're an absolute legend Teapot, thanks again.
In a few minutes.So Nova when are you going to post
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Post is up.
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Yeah, I seem to be developing a habit of adopting all the poor abandoned deadly pokemon that were never killed xDHoly crap, it's the Nidoking that tried to eat Akira!
I figured since we found Dr. Nevashi, maybe that Nidoking wasn't terribly far away. Could also indicate they're going the right direction to find Shade and Cassie's camp, not that they would know.
...was I that obvious? lol I feel like I've been waiting for a doctor to be a part of the team so that I could REALLY mess up my characters. Like, every scene from The Revenant kind of messed up.
That reminds me, I forgot to put something at the end of my post.
Scrambled Togepi?
Eh, not really.
I'll shut the hell up now.
I'll shut the hell up now.
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Awesome! When you get there, you can probably find the storage unit Cassie built to store Maverik's cooked meat in, and the innards stash by the hut where Cassie's boots would also be.
For any indication of Maverik and Alex being there, I'd say there would still be some Pidgeot feathers scattered around, and in the innards stash, you could probably find a claw or beak, as well as a finger or two from Alex. Shreds of his clothes would probably still be laying around as well.
Have fun!
Alright, it's taken me a long time before I finally settled on which Martial Arts Style would most closely resemble the forms that I imagined Salem to be trained in. There are a ton of Arts out there and all have their cool points and focus.
What I wanted for the inhabitant of Regalo Del'Mar was a defensive art that focused on redirecting the flow of an opponent, into a throw, and then followed by a lock to remove the need for further fighting. Flowing motions were very important because I wanted them to be inspired by the push and pull of ocean waves. It's not a perfect fit, but the closest I got was the Korean Martial Art Hapkido. Here's an example.
What I wanted for the inhabitant of Regalo Del'Mar was a defensive art that focused on redirecting the flow of an opponent, into a throw, and then followed by a lock to remove the need for further fighting. Flowing motions were very important because I wanted them to be inspired by the push and pull of ocean waves. It's not a perfect fit, but the closest I got was the Korean Martial Art Hapkido. Here's an example.
Awesome! When you get there, you can probably find the storage unit Cassie built to store Maverik's cooked meat in, and the innards stash by the hut where Cassie's boots would also be.
For any indication of Maverik and Alex being there, I'd say there would still be some Pidgeot feathers scattered around, and in the innards stash, you could probably find a claw or beak, as well as a finger or two from Alex. Shreds of his clothes would probably still be laying around as well.
Have fun!
Those boots damn well better be gucci.
That's awesome! I actually have that same flowing aspect as a character trait of my OC Diana. She's a dancer who pretty much only catches pokemon that can move as smoothly as she can. I might have to steal this fighting style from you to build her character xD
Oh my gosh...I found actual footage of June's rebuttal.
This is 100 % accurate.
Well, the Mathew's already given her awesome gloves and a custom fedora, he might as well have given her Gucci boots.
Wow, he's got it bad.
Well, the Mathew's already given her awesome gloves and a custom fedora, he might as well have given her Gucci boots.
Wow, he's got it bad.
One minute he's all sweet talk and giving you gucci, the next he's weirdly killing rats with durable pocky sticks.
Whoever said the dating scene wasn't hard is full of it. Just ask Apollo xD
Poor Apollo
He's probably being eaten by monkeys as we speak...Poor Apollo
Angry revenge monkeys
He's trying to prove that he can provide for his lady by any means.
On a side note I am trying to figure out how much anime jank I can pull with Amara concerning Vibrations, mathematics and distance calculation. The game is supposed to have a bit of an anime feel but I don't want to completely break peoples suspension of belief.
You know, there's a plan for a follow up Campaign in the making where Salem goes to Unova. You could have Diana meet Salem and he could teach her in canon. If you dare putting your female character in front of this flowing man of course. She might want to catch him
)Also, I don't know what your character is like but there is only one type of dance on Regalo Del'Mar, and it's strictly female only. Usually performed at the Amnis Colo ritual. It looks something like this:
If you remember from Salem's flashbacks, he's always been interested, on an almost hypnotic level, in the motions of these dances. His brothers thought he was just ogling the girls, but it was the flow of the dance that captivated him. If Diana dances anything like that Salem's going to be very interested in her.
Get some inspiration from Rain Man. You're old enough to know what I mean.
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Quick question, how tall is Amara?
No one is as tall as Floyd
But ye, with how small some of the girls in this campaign are you'd probably want to know if Floyd needs to kneel in order to spot them
So, posted, feels a little meh but let me know if it reads okay, I didnt want to take too much liberty with what the pokemon would do or if it would get hit by my(Orions) attack or not so I just left off with him swinging and will leave it up to astral as to whether or not he connects anything haha