My apologies, I thought it was the Gengar and not his brother talking. You're good there.
I understand that your case broke, but regardless, Rule 1 of the RP thread requires that you use proper grammar and punctuation in your RP. The rule was made by Sylvie to ensure that all posts are of high quality. Please go through and edit your post, to fit the standards set by the rules.
Only the first letter of the first word of a sentence should be capitalized, with the exception of proper nouns such as names, the species of a Pokemon, and the titles of things (Pokemon Center, Santalune City Gym, Pokemon, ect.)
Further more, when a character speaks, the transition from text to spoken word is usually denoted by a comma.
Example: Jason said, "Cyndaquil, why don't we head for Lumiose City next?"
Other than that, just make sure you're spelling words correctly. Spellcheck should help you there.
Last thing, try and ensure that you use the proper variant of a word; as in, make sure you're using "there," "they're," and "their" correctly. Same goes for the words "to," "too," and "two."
Obviously you're allowed to make mistakes, none of us are perfect when it comes to our grammar, and I'm certainly not either. But we need to be able to at least read your posts without difficulty.
@Zman890