I'm now attending to the Fakemon of my region. I first did the grass guy, but then later, at school, I had nothing to do. I was doodling, trying to figure out how to fix my very horrible fire starter. I was finally able to conceive and idea, and here it is. So I skipped the grass starter family and did the fire starters, they needed the attention more anyways. They aren't quite the same as the previous ones, but at the same time they are. The new story is that an evil spirit harbors a doll. Eventually the said evil spirit attracts hate and ill willed feelings. This eventually causes the doll to burn. Fire-Fire/ghost-Fire/ghost still. I like this guy a lot better. Also I thought for a moment that perhaps this guys story is too 'brutal' for Pokemon, but hey, Pidgey's eat Caterpie, Houndoom's howl is said to be the grim reaper coming, Dribloom tries to abduct children. I think he fits right in
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The one in the top right corner is one with borders. I liked the one without, but I kept that one just to show it off.
I can already see I need to work a little bit more on the transition. My plan right now is to take the middle form, add more flames and stuff, so it's closer to the last stage. Unless people think it's fine the way it is.
Also hopefully my critiquing has been going good. I haven't been yelled at or anything. It takes forever to do them, it'll be hard to keep up. It's also pretty hard to decide what to critique. Generally most people here do requests, and I don't like to critique a request. In the past, critiquing requests never worked out the best. I'd comment on something about it, but usually it would be pointed out "I couldn't avoid such mistake, it was a request." I kind of get that view point, at the same time I don't. I just overall just try and avoid them if I can.