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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%
  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
Errr no why does everyone think Kiro will immediately be executed coming back XD. I’ve already said how he couldn’t. But if you act like a missing nin, that increases your odds of death tenfold
Cause it seems too plot pushed for him to get off scot-free. Especially since if the Mist are as good as Jin claims at investigation they'd easily find out that the whole mind control thing was a lie. Unless they're going ignore the fact that they have a willing traitor in their midst, Kiro's death is an inevitability.
 
Errr no why does everyone think Kiro will immediately be executed coming back XD. I’ve already said how he couldn’t. But if you act like a missing nin, that increases your odds of death tenfold
We’re talking about the Mist. The one village that takes everything from murderers to traitors much more seriously. If anyone else even dared to even accept the curse mark from Orochimaru they would be executed. Kiro did not only do that but he attempted to go with the Sound. Wouldn’t keeping Kiro alive be a double standard?
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Cause it seems too plot pushed for him to get off scot-free. Especially since if the Mist are as good as Jin claims at investigation they'd easily find out that the whole mind control thing was a lie. Unless they're going ignore the fact that they have a willing traitor in their midst, Kiro's death is an inevitability.

We’re talking about the Mist. The one village that takes everything from murderers to traitors much more seriously. If anyone else even dared to even accept the curse mark from Orochimaru they would be executed. Kiro did not only do that but he attempted to go with the Sound. Wouldn’t keeping Kiro alive be a double standard?

I never said Kiro would get off Scott free either. I’d appreciate it if words weren’t put in my mouth.

The curse mark is to their knowledge a tool of brainwashing. It’s a perfect scapegoat. If it weren’t there, Kiro would be totally screwed. But they have a solution for this...

Kiro won’t be welcomed back on a throne of pillows, nor will he be welcomed back at a guilotine
 
I never said Kiro would get off Scott free either. I’d appreciate it if words weren’t put in my mouth.

The curse mark is to their knowledge a tool of brainwashing. It’s a perfect scapegoat. If it weren’t there, Kiro would be totally screwed. But they have a solution for this...

Kiro won’t be welcomed back on a throne of pillows, nor will he be welcomed back at a guilotine
So they're going to lie to themselves? Cause that's kinda what it sounds like.

Once the Mist investigates, they'll be fully aware of what the curse mark is and how it isn't a tool of brainwashing.

What you're suggesting sounds like they'll willingly believe a lie and just claim that the curse mark brainwashed Kiro despite knowing that isn't the truth.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
So they're going to lie to themselves? Cause that's kinda what it sounds like.

Once the Mist investigates, they'll be fully aware of what the curse mark is and how it isn't a tool of brainwashing.

What you're suggesting sounds like they'll willingly believe a lie and just claim that the curse mark brainwashed Kiro despite knowing that isn't the truth.

...yet the masterful tactics of the leaf couldn’t even detect that? They had him in a torture chamber and couldn’t find that. It would be perfectly reasonable to assume this mysterious mark would be responsible. Their first impulse would be to seal the mark and give him a mist ninja to look after him. Other measures will be determined. But their suspicion will never die. Jin never liked him
 
...yet the masterful tactics of the leaf couldn’t even detect that? They had him in a torture chamber and couldn’t find that. It would be perfectly reasonable to assume this mysterious mark would be responsible. Their first impulse would be to seal the mark and give him a mist ninja to look after him. Other measures will be determined. But their suspicion will never die. Jin never liked him
I guess my view of the Mist is just different. In reality, I just don’t see them being this lenient. If they’re not gonna kill him then Kiro should be held in prison somewhere. Instead of hating the Uchiha, he’s gonna want to massacre the Mist instead lmao
 
...yet the masterful tactics of the leaf couldn’t even detect that? They had him in a torture chamber and couldn’t find that. It would be perfectly reasonable to assume this mysterious mark would be responsible. Their first impulse would be to seal the mark and give him a mist ninja to look after him. Other measures will be determined. But their suspicion will never die. Jin never liked him
The Leaf are fully aware of what the curse mark is :T

The Brainwashing is just BS Sagisō made up on the spot to get her way, and since it was more convenient Anko played along.

One look at Kiro with the Byakugan or the Sharingan, and they'd be able to tell he isn't under any form of genjutsu mind control. The Mist has Ao, who was able to faintly detect Obito's Mind control over Yagura, there's no way he'd get tripped up by a curse mark.

Even taking a step back and assuming it isn't genjutsu mind control, but some other form of Mind control, the leaf would still be perfectly aware of what the curse mark does because they've had Anko for years.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
I guess my view of the Mist is just different. In reality, I just don’t see them being this lenient. If they’re not gonna kill him then Kiro should be held in prison somewhere. Instead of hating the Uchiha, he’s gonna want to massacre the Mist instead lmao

It’s not only the curse mark, but also Kai defending him. The curse mark buoyed him life, and Kai bought him some leniency. If he only had the curse mark, you’d be right in assuming he’d just rot in a prison somewhere...or worse...

The Leaf are fully aware of what the curse mark is :T

The Brainwashing is just BS Sagisō made up on the spot to get her way, and since it was more convenient Anko played along.

One look at Kiro with the Byakugan or the Sharingan, and they'd be able to tell he isn't under any form of genjutsu mind control. The Mist has Ao, who was able to faintly detect Obito's Mind control over Yagura, there's no way he'd get tripped up by a curse mark.

Even taking a step back and assuming it isn't genjutsu mind control, but some other form of Mind control, the leaf would still be perfectly aware of what the curse mark does because they've had Anko for years.

To answer this, Mei would not allow his death as he is her pet. She could have ao look into it and lie, not have him look into it, or simply not remember. There’s many of scenarios where this doesn’t happen which I can easily list off
 
To answer this, Mei would not allow his death as he is her pet. She could have ao look into it and lie, not have him look into it, or simply not remember. There’s many of scenarios where this doesn’t happen which I can easily list off
That's practically asking me to shoot myself in the foot.

I'm 100% certain that should I do that it'll get used against me in the later struggle for power. If it was just to protect Kiro then yes, no one would've been able to touch him. But what complicates this is that he's a traitor, and willingly betrays the village. For Mei to insist on protecting a traitor would reflect extremely poorly on her.

At its basics, this is a fight over the Sharingan, and the only reason Kiro would not die is because of the Sharingan...but, this does give me an idea. Very well, should Kiro actually return to the Mist I'll have Mei intervene and keep him alive.
 
That's practically asking me to shoot myself in the foot.

I'm 100% certain that should I do that it'll get used against me in the later struggle for power. If it was just to protect Kiro then yes, no one would've been able to touch him. But what complicates this is that he's a traitor, and willingly betrays the village. For Mei to insist on protecting a traitor would reflect extremely poorly on her.

At its basics, this is a fight over the Sharingan, and the only reason Kiro would not die is because of the Sharingan...but, this does give me an idea. Very well, should Kiro actually return to the Mist I'll have Mei intervene and keep him alive.
No, don’t shoot yourself in the foot. In fact, this will make it where if the Yuki ever do decide to revolt, they can’t use this against Mei.

Remember this right here...

Page 392, post 15671.

I, Retro Master, owner of Kiro Uchiha, hereby grant Kyuukestu, owner of Mei Terumi, the right to kill Kiro Uchiha should any of these conditions be met.

Condition 1: Should Kiro’s attempted betrayal be revealed...

Condition 2: Should the Mist realize Kiro hasn’t been brainwashed...

Condition 3: Should Kiro expose himself...

Condition 4: Should a trial be held...

Condition 5: Should Kiro step foot in the Mist...

Should any of these conditions or any other that I’m too lazy too think of be met, Kyuukestu has the right too have Mei order Kiro’s execution.


I also hold the right to retract this statement if I so choose...
 
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SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
No, don’t shoot yourself in the foot. In fact, this will make it where if the Yuki ever do decide to revolt, they can’t use this against Mei.

Remember this right here...

Page 393, post 15671.

I, Retro Master, owner of Kiro Uchiha, hereby grant Kyuuketsu, owner of Mei Terumi, the right to kill Kiro Uchiha should any of these conditions be met.

Condition 1: Should Kiro’s attempted betrayal be revealed...

Condition 2: Should the Mist realize Kiro hasn’t been brainwashed...

Condition 3: Should Kiro expose himself...

Condition 4: Should a trial be held...

Condition 5: Should Kiro step foot in the Mist...

Should any of these conditions or any other that I’m too lazy too think of be met, Kyuuketsu has the right too have Mei order Kiro’s execution.


I also hold the right to retract this statement if I so choose...
clickbait we're only on page 392
 
No, don’t shoot yourself in the foot. In fact, this will make it where if the Yuki ever do decide to revolt, they can’t use this against Mei.

Remember this right here...

Page 392, post 15671.

I, Retro Master, owner of Kiro Uchiha, hereby grant Kyuuketsu, owner of Mei Terumi, the right to kill Kiro Uchiha should any of these conditions be met.

Condition 1: Should Kiro’s attempted betrayal be revealed...

Condition 2: Should the Mist realize Kiro hasn’t been brainwashed...

Condition 3: Should Kiro expose himself...

Condition 4: Should a trial be held...

Condition 5: Should Kiro step foot in the Mist...

Should any of these conditions or any other that I’m too lazy too think of be met, Kyuuketsu has the right too have Mei order Kiro’s execution.


I also hold the right to retract this statement if I so choose...
Nah, I'm good

I'll have Mei intervene with the Sharingan as a basis and then place Kiro under the surveillance of the ever noble Yuki clan.

If everything goes well and, Kiro becomes an upstanding Mist citizen and contributes to the village, then Mei will gain Rep as the one to have kept him in the village and spared his life.

Should Kiro end up betraying the village or getting killing by leaf Anbu sent by Root, then the Yuki clan clearly screwed up their one job and the backlash won't hit Mei.


Essentially, I'm going to take all the rewards should this turn out well and then pass off all the blame to the Yuki clan should this fail horribly and Kiro decides to betray the Mist.

Also kyuukestu, and Terumī.
 
Well you know 1st of all, I have to find my character, 2nd of all everyone passed to Genin or chuunin by now except for right? XD
I just saw a dude mentioned me so i came at the rush of sasuke speed (Totally faster than naruto you haters)
We having clans right?
And fill me in on what's happening right now because i have no time to read up

Name: Chikao Uchiha
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Jutsu type: A little bit of fire but also some lightning
Description: This dude wears a shirt with the uchiha symbol on the back of shirt, shorts, and regular shoes. Also set a side the clothing traditional weights are inside them to give him a little extra training.
Bio: A boy raised in Hidden Leaf with fabulous life nothing wrong, just him with his issues. 1st taking down Chunin exams then heading straight for the top.
Likes: Darkness, being hidden away in the shadows away from society.
Dislikes: Being with others especially unaware of who they are.
Missions completed: 5 D, 2 C, 3 B, 0 A or S
Here and only a few have passed to chunin
 
That helps, should I just say Im just a genin and move on or do you have something else in mind?

What has taken place and where should i start?
Yeah, staying a genin is alright. His Uchiha friend Raiku also failed the first exam so I guess interacting with him would be a good starting point. There may or may not be another Uchiha to interact with but that’s still TBD.

As for what has taken place, the Sound invasion already happened. The fourth hokage was crippled by Orochimaru. There was a Sound chase arc that sent most of our OCs out. The only thing they really was the capture of Tayuya, one of the Sound 4. They also captured Kiro, an Uchiha who tried joining up with the Sound as well an ice Nin named Kai. Right now is just a little rest period before we timeskip to the next arc. However, things might change as the Yuki-Clan has just invaded the Leaf and may perhaps start attacking civilians if they don’t get what they want.

Eh, someone else could probably do this better than me though.
 
Just came back from a long, long day of school. I am so sorry for leaving you all hanging :(...

So I guess Kai just casually assaulting two people means shit now? Just go back home and face no consequences. And somehow the Yuki still think they have any leverage in all this. They are complete morons. This only rivals the Kaguya clan in sheer stupidity no offense Shen XD.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Just came back from a long, long day of school. I am so sorry for leaving you all hanging :(...

So I guess Kai just casually assaulting two people means shit now? Just go back home and face no consequences. And somehow the Yuki still think they have any leverage in all this. They are complete morons. This only rivals the Kaguya clan in sheer stupidity no offense Shen XD.

...well I take major offense XD.

Like said, That was more comic relief than anything else. I seriously want to go back and remove kai’s assault even though I can’t. And we already discussed that if it was brought to the yuki’s Attention as being a thing, action and punishment would be taken. I’ve actually woven an elaborate web for the Yuki. Don’t mistake pride and confidence in their strategy as stupidity...it’s far from that. If you only knew what I had planned then you would agree with me.
 
...well I take major offense XD.

Like said, That was more comic relief than anything else. I seriously want to go back and remove it even though I can’t. Any we already discussed that if it was brought to the yuki’s Attention as being a thing, action and punishment would be taken. I’ve actually woven an elaborate web for the Yuki. Don’t mistake pride and confidence in their strategy as stupidity...it’s far from that. If you only knew what I had planned then you would agree with me.
Shen, if everyone knew what you have planned for this RP they would either be impressed or terrified. In my case probably both
 
...well I take major offense XD.

Like said, That was more comic relief than anything else. I seriously want to go back and remove it even though I can’t. Any we already discussed that if it was brought to the yuki’s Attention as being a thing, action and punishment would be taken. I’ve actually woven an elaborate web for the Yuki. Don’t mistake pride and confidence in their strategy as stupidity...it’s far from that. If you only knew what I had planned then you would agree with me.

I didn't mean to come off as so aggressive Shen, I apologize really...

It's just this makes Konoha look really weak and incompetent, if they can just let anybody come in and beat up their civilians and they are unable to punish them at all it doesn't reflect well on the leaf. I guarantee if someone came in and did it to the Mist there would be consequences. That's my only complaint...well that and the fact that the Yuki can apparently solo Konoha by themselves. Just makes them look pathetic XD. Even if I am curious what you had in mind, I'm sure it was glorious XD

But really I get your point, it probably is annoying that some comedy piece is being taken so seriously, but if we just did nothing it would reflect poorly on Konoha and since I control it I did what I felt was right. I do apologize for making a mess of things...
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
I didn't mean to come off as so aggressive Shen, I apologize really...

It's just this makes Konoha look really weak and incompetent, if they can just let anybody come in and beat up their civilians and they are unable to punish them at all it doesn't reflect well on the leaf. I guarantee if someone came in and did it to the Mist there would be consequences. That's my only complaint...well that and the fact that the Yuki can apparently solo Konoha by themselves. Just makes them look pathetic XD. Even if I am curious what you had in mind, I'm sure it was glorious XD

But really I get your point, it probably is annoying that some comedy piece is being taken so seriously, but if we just did nothing it would reflect poorly on Konoha and since I control it I did what I felt was right. I do apologize for making a mess of things...

Kohona is recovering from an attack. The same one that their leader is now in a coma from. Jirayia, Kakashi, and Itachi are also away. So all their power players in the top 4 are gone. This is the lowest the leaf has ever been in a long time, and while they are down, the Yuki are demanding this out of principle, and people fighting on principle are dangerous. Especially since they leaf really shouldn’t be testing a foe when they aren’t bluffing, and threaten their populace all for the price of their own man back

Hit and runs against bigger targets often succeed if there is a superior strategy at play, that’s how a whole bunch of Vietnamese farmers beat the U.S. army. You’d be surprised.

It was more so my fault about not thinking about the ramifications, it’s not your fault.
 
Depending how this goes down and maybe what happens later on down the line, I won’t discount the possibility. Though that could only be disastrous XD
Hey, it makes a nice distraction for other villages to attack and possibly get the Yuki on their side if the attacking village promises to give them Kiro if they help them.

Mori: Could you not? I am trying to avoid that!
 
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