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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%
  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Tsuki: Come to think of it, being your political advisor doesn't sound like such a bad idea, I know you might need one.
Erm...yeah.... he will XD
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*sips tea*

You seem to be contemplative @Shen: Ghost Gym Leader

I'm gonna try to add some conclusion with some faux-jinchuriki's, though I wonder how much chaos I can actually cause this way. Katsuo's net however does throw a wrench into the system, accurately being able to distinguish who's moving over the net does pose some problems.

I'll have to just do micro-jamming with the gentle fist, create some blimps in his radar.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
well, you threw a wrench into team Mist's team work with your last post with Hama, basically implied that Hama doesn't trust Hyo and thinks she's conniving. She's already being subtlety categorized.
Actually no, she doesn’t trust her to he sure, but she didn’t have that leak through. She’s going by the evidence and Seiun’s personal experience betraying along with Kai’s hunter nin prowess to go by the other 3/4 of the team’s idea. Pretty logical
 
Actually no, she doesn’t trust her to he sure, but she didn’t have that leak through. She’s going by the evidence and Seiun’s personal experience betraying along with Kai’s hunter nin prowess to go by the other 3/4 of the team’s idea. Pretty logical
Her words were enough to imply it even without breaking expression

Hama gave a smile and nodded, closing her eyes. “Call me a sucker for happy endings, but I say we start with a more gentle touch. That’s where you come in Tsuki. You are more...watchful with your words and genuine. If she is a ninja, she could tell if one was lying such as Hyo or even me. Your unique in this respect. So when we establish first contact, you will be our speaker. Congratulations on becoming our spokeswoman~”
By default, she implies that Hyo is untrustworthy, or at the very least not as genuine as say, Tsuki.

Might be logical, but the slight is still there.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
By default, she implies that Hyo is untrustworthy, or at the very least not as genuine as say, Tsuki.

Might be logical, but the slight is still there.
Actually, ninjas are known to be spies and very untrustworthy in general. And to convince the jinchurki they want Tsuki, someone who is a very genuine person. Meanwhile seiun, Hyo, Kai, and even Hama all have their own lies that they could easily make in such a situation. Meanwhile Tsuki Hama has confidence lacks the ability to do so easily. Making her the prime candidate for a delicate matter such as this
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
@kyuukestu I believe your reading Katsuo's 'Krakens Roots' as I like to call them, the wrong way. Your plans are more flipped than you know, you won't be stopping them that easily.

Also, do any of us actually know the appearance of the Jinchuriki? Like there detailed appearance?
Since wanted posters were plastered in most places of most villages, that would be a given
 
Actually, ninjas are known to be spies and very untrustworthy in general. And to convince the jinchurki they want Tsuki, someone who is a very genuine person. Meanwhile seiun, Hyo, Kai, and even Hama all have their own lies that they could easily make in such a situation. Meanwhile Tsuki Hama has confidence lacks the ability to do so easily. Making her the prime candidate for a delicate matter such as this
Its logical yes, but casting her in the light of an untrustworthy person is still a slight regardless. Besides, Hama doesn't exactly know much about Hyo. And she called out Hyo's name as opposed to say, Kai.
@kyuukestu I believe your reading Katsuo's 'Krakens Roots' as I like to call them, the wrong way. Your plans are more flipped than you know, you won't be stopping them that easily.

Also, do any of us actually know the appearance of the Jinchuriki? Like there detailed appearance?
I'm not doing anything to the roots themselves, simply interfering with the chakra feedback so it doesn't get transmitted back to Katsuo.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Its logical yes, but casting her in the light of an untrustworthy person is still a slight regardless. Besides, Hama doesn't exactly know much about Hyo. And she called out Hyo's name as opposed to say, Kai.
Well Kai isn’t a liar, he is truthful...which would be a very big problem considering his ‘truths’

And Hama included herself in that list, so she wasn’t casting doubt on herself either
 
Well Kai isn’t a liar, he is truthful...which would be a very big problem considering his ‘truths’

And Hama included herself in that list, so she wasn’t casting doubt on herself either
Hama including herself in that list doesn't do much to mitigate the fact.

It's not a major slight, but she did essentially pass judgement on Hyo's character through a comparison with Tsuki.

While a few small slights don't really mean much, if they accumulate it'll create a subtle divide between the team.
 
Okay, back from the dead. So to speak. I have a question or two.

1. Are Tayuya & Takato also supposed to transform into a Jinchuriki for Hinagiku's plan?
2. Is Furijia gonna respond to Kakashi's general question (Though he meant it for her)?

Gonna post in a minute. Sorry again.
1. No
2. Yes

Forgot Takato even existed. I'll see if I can get a post up right now.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
@Shen: Ghost Gym Leader Sorry for the bother. But Katsuo made it clear that they were alone on island.
Plus, even if your ninja were there, Katsuo would know about all of them and have a rough idea of there location almost instantly.

Just because Katsuo said so doesn’t mean team mist and every other team is kicked out. It just makes it Katsuo hearsay. Do tell about this ‘instant’ detection
 
Just because Katsuo said so doesn’t mean team mist and every other team is kicked out. It just makes it Katsuo hearsay. Do tell about this ‘instant’ detection
I visualize it as a net of sea water that had thin threads of chakra imbued within each 'micro-stream'. These chakra-sensitive micro-streams then snake through the ground and pick up on changes occurring around them.

I'd say perhaps something akin to chakra receptors.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
I visualize it as a net of sea water that had thin threads of chakra imbued within each 'micro-stream'. These chakra-sensitive micro-streams then snake through the ground and pick up on changes occurring around them.

I'd say perhaps something akin to chakra receptors.
While the visual is very much appreciated, my question still remains on how they would be instantly detected on an island that’s easily several dozen miles in length
 
While the visual is very much appreciated, my question still remains on how they would be instantly detected on an island that’s easily several dozen miles in length
That's why I said chakra receptors. I'd visualize them conveying information in much the same way that Pein's rods do. So it's capable of sending signals over vast distances in real-time.

Well, just my conjecture though. Zander might've had something else in mind.
 
Just because Katsuo said so doesn’t mean team mist and every other team is kicked out. It just makes it Katsuo hearsay. Do tell about this ‘instant’ detection

I did tell about it in my last post to Kyuu explaining it. The tentacles are formed from a basically unlimited supply of sea water so there rooted all through the island floor. They detect movement, and nearby chakra signals. These signals then basically 'ripple' back through the tendrils. The tendrils are connected and controlled by Katsuo via an artificial nervous system extending off of his own. With his enhanced senses, he's able to track the point of ripple origin and detect the amount of bodies causing the disturbance. If he's come across the person before he'll likely be able to recognize them by there unique chakra signature.

Think electric impulses, but with a water stream and chakra bursts. Don't take this as a random broken ability Shen, my physics work out. I just took advantage of Naruto's foggy chakra limitations.

Frankly, just about anyone could do it. The only real skill needed other than similar jutsu is intense concentration to maintain the complex form of the tendrils and bubble simultaneously.

I'm honestly feeling like you've got a problem with most abilities that damper your plans. If you've got a problem with my move, please address it rather than assume I'm trying to run the whole rp how I see fit.
 
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Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
I did tell about it in my last post to Kyuu explaining it. The tentacles are formed from a basically unlimited supply of sea water so there rooted all through the island floor. They detect movement, and nearby chakra signals. These signals then basically 'ripple' back through the tendrils. The tendrils are connected and controlled by Katsuo via an artificial nervous system extending off of his own. With his enhanced senses, he's able to track the point of ripple origin and detect the amount of bodies causing the disturbance. If he's come across the person before he'll likely be able to recognize them by there unique chakra signature.

Think electric impulses, but with a water stream and chakra bursts. Don't take this as a random broken ability Shen, my physics work out. I just took advantage of Naruto's foggy chakra limitations.

Frankly, just about anyone could do it. The only real skill needed other than similar jutsu is intense concentration to maintain the complex form of the tendrils and bubble simultaneously.

I'm honestly feeling like you've got a problem with most abilities that damper your plans. If you've got a problem with my move, please address it rather than assume I'm trying to run the whole rp how I see fit.

You making quite the many assumptions about me and my personal character. I simply asked how it could be doing this, and yes, for people and things in the water that makes sense. But for people on land? No sense at all. And for it to have greater range than the byakugan screams broken.

Regardless, I’m just changing the detected target to Aisha instead to avoid this...thing...besides Aisha is already close by.
 
I did tell about it in my last post to Kyuu explaining it. The tentacles are formed from a basically unlimited supply of sea water so there rooted all through the island floor. They detect movement, and nearby chakra signals. These signals then basically 'ripple' back through the tendrils. The tendrils are connected and controlled by Katsuo via an artificial nervous system extending off of his own. With his enhanced senses, he's able to track the point of ripple origin and detect the amount of bodies causing the disturbance. If he's come across the person before he'll likely be able to recognize them by there unique chakra signature.

Think electric impulses, but with a water stream and chakra bursts. Don't take this as a random broken ability Shen, my physics work out. I just took advantage of Naruto's foggy chakra limitations.

I think you and kyuu cheat the system a bit much for my liking, then claim whatever you do isn't broken because anyone "can" learn it no matter how many precise components there are to it or how complex it is so that auto gives it a free pass.

This move quite honestly shits on any other sensory type and is completely unbalanced in any capacity.

I'm honestly feeling like you've got a problem with most abilities that damper your plans. If you've got a problem with my move, please address it rather than assume I'm trying to run the whole rp how I see fit.

I also agree with this strongly.
 
I know about those, but what of the rest of the teams?

Team Pakura has scattered coyotes on her island and is searching it with Yasu & Madoka.

Katsuo set up his sensory tentacles with Team Guren and is currently searching that.

Team Kakashi scattered his ninja dogs and asked Furijia to scan ahead on their island. Furijia found nothing but animals within her immediate Byakugan scan.

Hinagiku transformed into a Jinchuriki disguise and traveled with Sagiso doing the same. Not sure what the rest of my characters on that team is supposed to do.
 
I think you and kyuu cheat the system a bit much for my liking, then claim whatever you do isn't broken because anyone "can" learn it no matter how many precise components there are to it or how complex it is so that auto gives it a free pass.

This move quite honestly shits on any other sensory type and is completely unbalanced in any capacity.



I also agree with this strongly.
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It's an application of science. On a basic level the jutsu pans out, but while it shouldn't have a very high creation cost, the upkeep fee in terms of both chakra and mental capacity is sizeable.

I have 0 problems with the jutsu itself, though I'm mentally contemplating the detail in which it percieves things. Sensory overload could be a major drawback for this technique, though I don't have a solid base of max information processing capacity of a shinobi. The Byakugan for example, perceives a shit load of intormation, so much so that so much so that I personally think using all its abilities at once, to their utmost would render more information than one could feasibly process.

Observing things on a cellular level for a field with a radius of 20k, that'd be simultaneously observing several trillion things as an extreme lowball.
 
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