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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%

  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%
  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
Retro Master

Retro Master

5DigitNeb said:
I feel like we’re just lazy xD
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I’m the laziest one here XD

But of all the times for us to get lazy, it’s when we should be discussing the climax of the arc and discussing how to insert Shizi into the story.

Speaking of which, we need to figure out what happened to Shizi after his fight with Azumi. Did he leave the village again or did he return to the Sarutobi? I could write something in with Tsunade too but I need some clarification on this.
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Retro Master said:
This is definitely the calm before the storm. Things get eerily quiet right before the climax of the arc. I guess I should enjoy this cuz things might soon become chaotic. Since I’m bored though, I’ll probably have Kiro break down his perspective on the situation to Tayuya and Takako. Don’t really want to move them until we’ve finalized the upcoming events.

Also @kyuukestu Your thoughts on your Sarutobi leading the squad of Shizi, Zino and Shiho? I could write a post for Tsunade saying she sent them off once I get your approval on this.
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everyone: "Konoha has too many teams everything is unbalanced!"
*cue complaining*

also everyone: "Let's add one more Konoha team!"
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As a side note, Rakū will never be deployed for missions (at this point in time) and Hina would be downright furious if anyone forcefully deployed her. She's a non-combatant, more so that Kou or Tsuki. She'd probably take down the former in a fight, cause she does know the gentle fist, but she is first and foremost a Medical ninja/Nurse. Not really a field doctor.

Maybe she'll be combat savvy enough by Shippuden.

I have no issues with actually sending them though.
 
SageNeb

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Ok so I thought of a possible way to start the battle royale. Hina meets between Sagiso and Furijia and Shura. She sends furijia to kakahi’s team and then sends the others to team hina. Then they go east and meet team iwa. Team iwa sees the jinchuriki and tries to go for it. Cue the fight. Meanwhile team suna reaches team kakashi and they merge and head to island beta. Team sound goes there looking for intel, cue the fight. Team cloud hears the commotion and goes to team hina and iwa fight. So does team mist and they meet at the same time, cue fight. Takato in the midst of all this is trying to protect henshina. Cue escort team
 
Retro Master

Retro Master

kyuukestu said:
everyone: "Konoha has too many teams everything is unbalanced!"
*cue complaining*

also everyone: "Let's add one more Konoha team!"
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You bring up a great point though. Things are already unbalanced as it is. Adding another team might actually be too much.

We should probably get a better understanding on where and what Shizi has been doing before we make any decisions.

My idea is that after Shizi lost the scroll to Azumi, he could’ve done two different things. One, he just leaves the village again. @MegaloX I’m assuming you had an idea on how Shizi was handling himself for the past few years. Either way, Shizi seems to have been doing well for a missing nin of his age. I guess once he sees the bounty on the jinchuriki, he decides to go after it as well. A subplot being he also wants to get back to the Leaf.

The second option is that after the invasion, Shizi decides to go back to the Sarutobi and lay low with them for a few months until Konoha has cooled down from the war. Unlike Kiro, Shizi would probably be placed on probation or something. Probably Kyuu’s Sarutobi or just a Sarutobi in general vouched for him. From there we could easily say that’s why we haven’t seen him around.

For the backup squad, Kyuu’s Sarutobi could’ve recommended Shizi, citing this as a way to redeem himself. That or Tsunade herself was generous enough to give Shizi a second chance. Ofc, if we went by this, they would’ve been on their way by now and I could just Tsunade mention the backup team she sent off.

Either way, this still keeps Shizi’s backstory of resentment towards the Leaf going and allows him to flow seamlessly back into the story.
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

5DigitNeb said:
Ok so I thought of a possible way to start the battle royale. Hina meets between Sagiso and Furijia and Shura. She sends furijia to kakahi’s team and then sends the others to team hina. Then they go east and meet team iwa. Team iwa sees the jinchuriki and tries to go for it. Cue the fight. Meanwhile team suna reaches team kakashi and they merge and head to island beta. Team sound goes there looking for intel, cue the fight. Team cloud hears the commotion and goes to team hina and iwa fight. So does team mist and they meet at the same time, cue fight. Takato in the midst of all this is trying to protect henshina. Cue escort team
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Sagisō would probably straight up say no to Hina sending away Furījia. Kakashi has lost all trust from her the minute he cooperated with team Mist and gave Hama a vial of blood. She might not get her way, but she'll throw quite the temper tantrum.

She just walked by Team Iwa, she wouldn't go back there to essentially provoke a fight. Actually, the way the encounter goes is Hina does something like this;

Hina: *deadpan* Oh no, my nail broke. Whatever would I do if you stole the Jinchuriki while I was distracted?!

and then Zander just takes the Jinchuriki and he gets to deal with everyone gunning for his ass. (The fact that no one will let another team walk away with the Jinchuriki, and Hina's knowledge of so many teams being in such close vicinity means that she wouldn't mind handing over the Jinchuriki in the short-run because it'll only attract more attention and trouble for whoever she's with [the reason I didn't want her in the first place]. So once all the fighting starts she might gun for Henshina when everyone is exhausted and occupied.)

Team Kakashi is on Island Beta I believe, Zaku noted both them and team Mist being in the same general area as he's able to see both of them.

Also, at that point, I believe the escort team does this;

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and walks off with no one to stop them.
 
Retro Master

Retro Master

MegaloX said:
I'll do what I can lmao xD
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Fair warning though. The battles we do here are very competitive. It’s all strategy and almost whatever it takes to outsmart your opponent. I re-read your battle with Azumi and you were handling yourself pretty well though. But yeah, it’s kinda crazy out here and if you’re not prepared, your character will be taken out fast af.

Don’t worry though, it’s pretty fun at times too XD
 
Godjacob

Godjacob

Retro Master said:
Fair warning though. The battles we do here are very competitive. It’s all strategy and almost whatever it takes to outsmart your opponent. I re-read your battle with Azumi and you were handling yourself pretty well though. But yeah, it’s kinda crazy out here and if you’re not prepared, your character will be taken out fast af.

Don’t worry though, it’s pretty fun at times too XD
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Speaking as a guy whose characters on average are among lowest win percentages I can confirm this XD

But it's a good community all the same.
 
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