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Jagson

Jagson

Universe 8 characters continued
Name: Triston McNav
Appearance: Well built, He has Raven black hair, He wears a blue uniform with the words AOSHR on it's side.
powers: Able to control fire and clone himself
Strengths: He has leadership skills, strong for an average human. marksmen
Weakness: His cloning power was something he obtained. if he over uses it. It can severely injure if not kill him.
Personality: He is honest, respect full and brave

Name: Kathryn Leaf
Apperance: Long blonde hair, crystal blue eyes. She wears a long blue dress when she isn't fighting, though she looks like she's twenty she's actually in her mid to late forties.
Powers: Like most of her race she is able to manipulate energy to do her bidding.
Strengths: She is known to do everything she can to protect her people.
Weakness: She can get ahead of herself to the point that she leaves herself open for attack,
personality: Humble, a person who had to grow up fast, She cares and protects those she calls friends.

Name: Mallec Isthar
Apperance: Grey reptilian like skin. His slimy black hair is tied into dreadlocks stands at seven foot two. His finger nails look like claws
Powers: No powers but has an Echione a snake like being that comes out of his right arm to create a blade and whip which can be poisonous
Strengths: He is a powerful man among his people, was know for killing a bear like being with his bare hands. He can take plenty of hits and still go on.
Weakness: He is slow, He doesn't know the meaning of defense.
personality: He is a man of honor and integrity. If he see's someone who can match him in strength he will do what is necessary to take them on. He cares about his underlings though he doesn't show it.

Well that's six. I'll finish up the last four later.
 
BonslyJuice

BonslyJuice

New character! :^ )
Name: Rich
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Ability: Metallokinesis (Manipulation over Metal)
Personality: Quirky, insane, cruel, senseless, unpredictable
Appearance: 6'5", pale white skin, pitch black hair, green checkered suit, green dress shoes & green pinstripe fedora
Strengths: Can go through mental agony without batting an eye
Weaknesses: Cannot stay calm
 
Stormursa

Stormursa

Thank you both for the compliments. I've been trying to make much more discriptive and bookesk post. If you've read lord of the flies, kinda like that type of writing where it can paint a pretty cool picture.
 
BonslyJuice

BonslyJuice

It does require a certain taste.
I prefer writing with hard-hitting visuals, as well.
When I have a point to be made, I make it a separate paragraph, too, so that it sticks out more to the readers' eye, and they then are more likely to remember that info.
 
Stormursa

Stormursa

I love how it can really make you see the word. I've been thinking about doing a highly discriptive fantasy rp as fantasy novels are one of my favorites but I want to do some sketches of where most of the action should be taking place.
 
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