@DeprivedSpartan I think that could work like if everyone hide out in the entrance, but in the night Shawn goes deeper in. And everyone thinks he left. So they continue to gather supplies and make themselves at home temporarily before they decide to move out.
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Private/Closed [Under Construction] Outcasts(Official Reboot)—Discussion
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Darcel can heal Coal's arm tho
Coal is trying to keep his feelings in. As he just saw the only person that was family to him die.
‘Rock Elsa’
Frozen? More like Erosion.
I had to.
Frozen? More like Erosion.
I had to.
His power did come with temporary life giving to Rock's.
Coal can't just bleed out---
If he wants one arm or both arms, just hit up the healer.
If he wants one arm or both arms, just hit up the healer.
I was planning on introducing my second character later on in the story that would have....
Oh! Speaking of second characters.
During the time Shawn is missing, I'll work on my Villain. Build him up.
I've talked it through with Cloud, and she has given me permission to create a large group of metas and non-metas, all working together, under the leadership of Blake Phillips.
And I would like some of you to make new characters that are under his command so we can diversify the story a bit. This is the first major villain. I wanna make him count.
During the time Shawn is missing, I'll work on my Villain. Build him up.
I've talked it through with Cloud, and she has given me permission to create a large group of metas and non-metas, all working together, under the leadership of Blake Phillips.
And I would like some of you to make new characters that are under his command so we can diversify the story a bit. This is the first major villain. I wanna make him count.
Can we make sure to only introduce the group members later on, though? A sudden man and 10 new characters can really offset a story.
A characters whole arm of ripped off?? He's gonna die??
...although I’m sure you were just going to build up the villain, THEN the team. Right?
so should we not post their bios here to introduce them with your villain? I also second what @The Protato said.
We are already introducing villains? Not to be a jerk, but the story isn't even sturdy yet. There are characters bleeding out, not everyone's together, random things keep happening, and idk if its a good idea yet.
Of course. I wanted to have a few posts with Blake, and maybe another character under his command. Have small interactions, until the big reveal.
He has an army of metas and non-metas.
Sure. Why not? Gives me even more to work with.
If you want a character under command of my Villain, go ahead and make a sheet. Just make it clear who they work for. (They work for Blake, if you didn't get the message)
Don't worry. It'll be a buildup. Remember every villain Outcasts has ever had before? Yeah, we're not doing that. This villain will stick around, for a nice long while. Working behind the scenes and shit.
Alright.. But how does this 'Blake' even know of the outcast's whereabouts and the whole government situation? I didn't get to read the little thing you made about him.
Name: Jillian Stokes AKA Hurricane
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Power(s): She can create a tornado around herself. She molds the winds around her to create a massive toranado around her lower half and she floats in the center. While in this state, she can fly has increased speed, and can fire gusts of wind from the tornado itself.
Appearance: Her hair is bright orange, and stops at her shoulders. She wears a green kimono and shows signs of Japanese descent. She works for Blake
Name: Dakota Austin AKA Rocko
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Power(s): He can turn his limbs into stone and morph them into the tools he wants. He normally sticks to large fists and projects himself forward by springing his feet.
Appearance: He has a bald head, dark skin, and black eyes. He is muscular, which is noticable as he never wears a shirt. However he wears beige capri pants and black combat boots. He works for Blake
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Power(s): She can create a tornado around herself. She molds the winds around her to create a massive toranado around her lower half and she floats in the center. While in this state, she can fly has increased speed, and can fire gusts of wind from the tornado itself.
Appearance: Her hair is bright orange, and stops at her shoulders. She wears a green kimono and shows signs of Japanese descent. She works for Blake
Name: Dakota Austin AKA Rocko
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Power(s): He can turn his limbs into stone and morph them into the tools he wants. He normally sticks to large fists and projects himself forward by springing his feet.
Appearance: He has a bald head, dark skin, and black eyes. He is muscular, which is noticable as he never wears a shirt. However he wears beige capri pants and black combat boots. He works for Blake
Well, I was vague on how he works.
But I don't really wanna spoiling anything, so I'll be brief.
He has no powers, but his charisma is crazy good. He can rally others to his cause, and get just about anyone to follow him. He was originally leading a group of metas and non-metas against the government - and winning. Once the government realized that, they called a cease fire, and negotiated. Now, Blake works with the government. He's funded by them, and paid even more when he and his group complete a task given to them by the government. Just know, they don't at all work for the government, because they are believed to be powerful enough to destroy them.
Now, the government is becoming extremely concerned about our group, which they will label as 'Outcasts'. They're so worried, in fact, that they will soon approach Blake with a proposition.
Also, anyone want to come up with a cool name for Blake's group? I can't settle on any.
But I don't really wanna spoiling anything, so I'll be brief.
He has no powers, but his charisma is crazy good. He can rally others to his cause, and get just about anyone to follow him. He was originally leading a group of metas and non-metas against the government - and winning. Once the government realized that, they called a cease fire, and negotiated. Now, Blake works with the government. He's funded by them, and paid even more when he and his group complete a task given to them by the government. Just know, they don't at all work for the government, because they are believed to be powerful enough to destroy them.
Now, the government is becoming extremely concerned about our group, which they will label as 'Outcasts'. They're so worried, in fact, that they will soon approach Blake with a proposition.
Also, anyone want to come up with a cool name for Blake's group? I can't settle on any.
Welcome aboard.
The Mettatons.
The group’s ratings are too low to ever own such a name
My character is a villain too but I have him taking control of others that are weaker then him to do the fighting.
But @PumperPenny
They might have gotten a flip switched in their minds that made them perform better.
They might have gotten a flip switched in their minds that made them perform better.
Don’t act like you didn’t get the reference.
The whole Underground is watching, you know.
I like it
Come on. It’s just one more puzzle you gotta solve. You’ll be fabulous, darling. I promise.
In all honesty, I fell out with Undertale. It doesn't really appeal to me anymore.
The only thing you catch me doing anymore is either watching The Walking Dead, or reading The Walking Dead. Also, homework. While listening to The Walking Dead.
Depends. What are they receiving?
'The True Metas'
Wouldn't be right. The leader is a non-meta, and they have a ton of non-metas with them. None are biased too. They live together.
'UMT'
Sounds a bit too organized, but I'll consider it.
'The Infinitives'
Sounds like somethin' straight outta Marvel Comics. I'll keep my eye on this one.
'Broken Ring'
Sounds intriguing and mysterious. But why would they be called the 'Broken Ring'?
The only thing you catch me doing anymore is either watching The Walking Dead, or reading The Walking Dead. Also, homework. While listening to The Walking Dead.
'The Receivers'
Depends. What are they receiving?
'The True Metas'
Wouldn't be right. The leader is a non-meta, and they have a ton of non-metas with them. None are biased too. They live together.
'UMT'
Sounds a bit too organized, but I'll consider it.
'The Infinitives'
Sounds like somethin' straight outta Marvel Comics. I'll keep my eye on this one.
'Broken Ring'
Sounds intriguing and mysterious. But why would they be called the 'Broken Ring'?
I have a serious one.
UMHI
(United Meta-Human Initiative)
UMHI
(United Meta-Human Initiative)
... I also wanted to use a common awkward conversation starter as an abbreviation for an organization.
The Recievers - They are receiving all the negative thought about Metas and reversing it.
The True Metas - It’s based more along the lines that metas are really people who are willing to work with others. In a sense they are all Metas and a true Meta is a human being.
Broken Ring - A ring is often used a sign of commitment, like a wedding ring. However when a ring is broken, so is the commitment. So my logic is, that it has a double meaning. 1 - That they are breaking off everything they have to support this cause with an undying fashion, which would make sense as it is a somewhat hated minority, and 2 - the commitment it the public opinion on metas and humans working together and their actions show how it is being broken. EDIT Also it can stand for how their passion for their cause is infinite, much like a circle.
The True Metas - It’s based more along the lines that metas are really people who are willing to work with others. In a sense they are all Metas and a true Meta is a human being.
Broken Ring - A ring is often used a sign of commitment, like a wedding ring. However when a ring is broken, so is the commitment. So my logic is, that it has a double meaning. 1 - That they are breaking off everything they have to support this cause with an undying fashion, which would make sense as it is a somewhat hated minority, and 2 - the commitment it the public opinion on metas and humans working together and their actions show how it is being broken. EDIT Also it can stand for how their passion for their cause is infinite, much like a circle.