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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%
  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Ah, damn, he already ran away.

That blatant disregard of Mei's orders had better be well out of earshot.

He was a masterful tactician and war hero, think he would stay around a bomb after he has lit it? XD


I'd agree with Shen on this one. They haven't gotten any stronger by virtue of power, but rather they've only become more organized, and pompous on the Yuki's side. It does make sense though because almost a century of being a major influential force would cause that level of pride to seem into the bones of its members.

The Yuki clan simply acts as the more ostentatious noble clan, but it's not that uncommon in history. Especially in the east where Nobility counter for more and you could get executed for looking at a noble the wrong way.
Someone agreeing with me? Huh. That’s new.

Don't you people ever sleep?
Sleep is for Xenos
 
He was a masterful tactician and war hero, think he would stay around a bomb after he has lit it? XD



Someone agreeing with me? Huh. That’s new.
Alright, let me get pumped to floor this Ice cubes~

I might get a post in during school or when I get back.

"Beware the beauty shining in Mist, for she is made of Lava~"

Mei's Mizukage for a pretty damn good reason besides her reforms and the widespread support of the people, it still holds true that the Kage is the strongest ninja in the village.
 
I agree with your general points, but it seems you simply removed any and all clan flaws they had in canon to make them perfect. Removing the Branch Family Curse Mark, as well as their pompous and arrogant nature to purge them of any character flaws.
The curse mark wasn't a flaw, it was a system devised to keep the byakugan safe, the only flaw was the way the main house abused it. The curse mark is still present within the AU Hyuga clan.

Their nature...well, I guess I can somewhat agree in that respects. Though I would hardly call it a character flaw since it was never to the point where they needlessly aggressed people like the Yuki clan is doing now. Besides, they were prideful, but never wildly arrogant, a pride that they still maintain, and the reason why Hinagiku wasn't willing to take a more diplomatic stance with the Yuki clan. She understands Asuma's soft approach to dealing with the problem as more effective, but she, and the majority of the Hyuga Ocs I control would disdain such acts of subservience.

The clan as a whole isn't perfect, there are even some conflicts within the clan that I haven't really got around to explaining. There are only so many resources to go around so it's not like everyone is provided for equally. It's a meritocracy, so your results are what will get you any semblance of power within the clan.
 

sSoul

Previously Swirled

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
That's a bit overpowered, RIP me...so if Taiyo had FBS and potential other power ups and Tsuki will likely get her sword, cause no one else in the Yuki is even showing interest, then what's left for Seiun...I guess he gets to be the weak link of my OCs...

Wow...I agree with you, it’s seriusly overpowered. I do hope that Kyuu doesn’t give it these powers. As the Sharingan doesn’t automatically mean having all those powers like susanno. Kyuu, have an explanation?
 
Btw, I was looking through one of the old convos for Kyuu’s posts about sword fighting styles (For reasons ofc ;)) and I came across something really interesting. Maybe I’m late on this but Shen, did you get the idea for Jin’s name off of Kakashi’s character sheet for Jin Yuki? If so, I think it’s fascinating to see the amount of connections the old convos have for the present. Just seeing that made me put my phone down for a sec and think ‘No way!’ Those convos are filled with so much info! :D
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Btw, I was looking through one of the old convos for Kyuu’s posts about sword fighting styles (For reasons ofc ;)) and I came across something really interesting. Maybe I’m late on this but Shen, did you get the idea for Jin’s name off of Kakashi’s character sheet for Jin Yuki? If so, I think it’s fascinating to see the amount of connections the old convos have for the present. Just seeing that made me put my phone down for a sec and think ‘No way!’ Those convos are filled with so much info! :D


Hahahaha that’s actually a coincidence! Pretty funny actually
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Azumi is op untouchable only people capable to have fair fight are other op people pls nerf. Tomiko is op cuz she’s untouchable unless you have lightning style pls nerf hide in mole jutsu. Aisha is op, every battle finish in two sec cuz claws on neck pls nerf. Kenji is op, spam lightning style to counter and keep people out of range pls nerf. Madoka is op if she’s fast enough on every 1v1 she doesn’t even have to take damage to win pls nerf.



The tables have turned
 
Azumi is op untouchable only people capable to have fair fight are other op people pls nerf. Tomiko is op cuz she’s untouchable unless you have lightning style pls nerf hide in mole jutsu. Aisha is op, every battle finish in two sec cuz claws on neck pls nerf. Kenji is op, spam lightning style to counter and keep people out of range pls nerf. Madoka is op if she’s fast enough on every 1v1 she doesn’t even have to take damage to win pls nerf.



The tables have turned
Lmao the thing about Aisha is so true! :D
 
No... KYUU. HAVING A KETSURYUGAN?! How twisted... welp we’re dead. Better hope the Hyuga can protect
Ketsuryugan genjutsu follows the same rules as other dojutsu genjutsu, that is, it's ineffective against other dojutsu.
And the dragon is susanoo level
LMAO, whut? The Susano can get severed by swords now?

The Ketsuryugan's dragon can't even be used unless you're in hell-valley or whatever that place is called. It's the only area that has water with enough iron content to be controlled. By default, it can only be used in that area, or another area like that.

Other than being controlled through the dojutsu...its just a water dragon jutsu.
It literally does the exact same thing as Sharingan genjutsu except it's never been shown to be OP enough to control a Biju.

Also, the second technique doesn't exist within AU. Chino created that technique herself based on the Spores made by White Zetsu, but since the white zetsu part of the plot has been eliminated from this AU, it also means China has no way to study the spores and hence no way to create that jutsu.

In most situations the Ketsuryugan is basically...base Sharingan without the eye of insight, it's the most underwhelming dojutsu in the entire series as it's just an inferior Sharingan.

The only real edge it has its the ability to control iron rich liquids such as blood, but clearly it's capacity to do that is rather limited and it can't one shot people by controlling their blood.
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Ketsuryugan genjutsu follows the same rules as other dojutsu genjutsu, that is, it's ineffective against other dojutsu.

LMAO, whut? The Susano can get severed by swords now?

The Ketsuryugan's dragon can't even be used unless you're in hell-valley or whatever that place is called. It's the only area that has water with enough iron content to be controlled. By default, it can only be used in that area, or another area like that.

Other than being controlled through the dojutsu...its just a water dragon jutsu.

It literally does the exact same thing as Sharingan genjutsu except it's never been shown to be OP enough to control a Biju.

Also, the second technique doesn't exist within AU. Chino created that technique herself based on the Spores made by White Zetsu, but since the white zetsu part of the plot has been eliminated from this AU, it also means China has no way to study the spores and hence no way to create that jutsu.

In most situations the Ketsuryugan is basically...base Sharingan without the eye of insight, it's the most underwhelming dojutsu in the entire series as it's just an inferior Sharingan.

The only real edge it has its the ability to control iron rich liquids such as blood, but clearly it's capacity to do that is rather limited and it can't one shot people by controlling their blood.
"The dragon formed is strong enough to restrict the movements of Sasuke Uchiha's Susanoo" wiki
 
Kiro is op he makes you waste stamina and doesn't get hurt, autos genjutsu, and then appears with kunai on your neck.
Nah Kiro’s trash. His techniques requires so much chakra that he can barely sustain them. The only time his genjutsu worked are on peeps who have made eye contact with him. Applying a genjutsu with the sharingan in an RP shouldn’t be possible in the first place cuz everyone should know not to make eye contact. As for the kunai behind the neck, Kiro’s main thing is speed.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Ketsuryugan genjutsu follows the same rules as other dojutsu genjutsu, that is, it's ineffective against other dojutsu.

LMAO, whut? The Susano can get severed by swords now?

The Ketsuryugan's dragon can't even be used unless you're in hell-valley or whatever that place is called. It's the only area that has water with enough iron content to be controlled. By default, it can only be used in that area, or another area like that.

Other than being controlled through the dojutsu...its just a water dragon jutsu.

It literally does the exact same thing as Sharingan genjutsu except it's never been shown to be OP enough to control a Biju.

Also, the second technique doesn't exist within AU. Chino created that technique herself based on the Spores made by White Zetsu, but since the white zetsu part of the plot has been eliminated from this AU, it also means China has no way to study the spores and hence no way to create that jutsu.

In most situations the Ketsuryugan is basically...base Sharingan without the eye of insight, it's the most underwhelming dojutsu in the entire series as it's just an inferior Sharingan.

The only real edge it has its the ability to control iron rich liquids such as blood, but clearly it's capacity to do that is rather limited and it can't one shot people by controlling their blood.

Hm I suppose if the dragon can only be summoned there, and the denotation isn’t a thing, I suppose then it would work. Just watch that Op meter like a hawk, ight?
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Nah Kiro’s trash. His techniques requires so much chakra that he can barely sustain them. The only time his genjutsu worked are on peeps who have made eye contact with him. Applying a genjutsu with the sharingan in an RP shouldn’t be possible in the first place cuz everyone should know not to make eye contact. As for the kunai behind the neck, Kiro’s main thing is speed.
what's the point in trying to become original anymore ;_; godjacob teach me your ways
 
Azumi is op untouchable only people capable to have fair fight are other op people pls nerf. Tomiko is op cuz she’s untouchable unless you have lightning style pls nerf hide in mole jutsu. Aisha is op, every battle finish in two sec cuz claws on neck pls nerf. Kenji is op, spam lightning style to counter and keep people out of range pls nerf. Madoka is op if she’s fast enough on every 1v1 she doesn’t even have to take damage to win pls nerf.



The tables have turned

None of these characters have wins in this RP.

Tomiko has literally lost every fight since the 3rd Exam Prelims.

Azumi is the only OP one. Even then, she would have lost to Sagiso, the winner of the Zaku/Katsuo fight and Kiro if he actually tried.

Also LOL this is a gold post XD

The only real edge it has its the ability to control iron rich liquids such as blood, but clearly it's capacity to do that is rather limited and it can't one shot people by controlling their blood.

I've seen ATLA. Blood bending is OP as hell XD.

(Sneaking this in, almost done with class but then I gotta head home. Sorry.)
 
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