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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

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Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Again, sorry to have put you in that spot. But again he is punished by the Yuki, who themselves got nothing for threatening all of Konoha even though it was clearly said that we brought Kiro in for question which concerned national security. And they'll get nothing, not even a slap on the wrist for this to.

In all fairness, Mei was kept in the dark by much of the details, only hearing jin’s Side as well. Also, he was justified in a sense.

There's a difference between insults and death threats. And I don't count everything I see on screen. Otherwise we have to accept Mecha Naruto and ninja ostrichs.
Besides filler episodes introducing new characters or elements, it was giving us a flashback to an early time for some characters. Those are reliable. It happened, and even in the canon non filler episodes, danzo was very compatitive, saying Hiruzen wasn’t fit to be hokage and such.
 
Besides filler episodes introducing new characters or elements, it was giving us a flashback to an early time for some characters. Those are reliable. It happened, and even in the canon non filler episodes, danzo was very compatitive, saying Hiruzen wasn’t fit to be hokage and such.

Except when flashbacks contradict canon. Such as Kakashi taking the Chunin Exams at the same time Rin & Obito did despite having graduated and advanced in rank way earlier than them. Filler, even if it fits, can make canon characters are way OOC to fit the needs of said filler.

I guess if I were to TLDR my point the Yuki seem to force everyone else in the entire story to bend over to their whims and never have to face any consequences for what they do. Everyone else is instead at risk of consequences if they don't appease the Yuki. And I am just not a personal fan of it. They get everything and risk losing nothing.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
guess if I were to TLDR my point the Yuki seem to force everyone else in the entire story to bend over to their whims and never have to face any consequences for what they do. Everyone else is instead at risk of consequences if they don't appease the Yuki. And I am just not a personal fan of it. They get everything and risk losing nothing.
They only did this on one occasion, and that was with Kiro. As the same with any village or faction that you were to get in the bad side, there could be consequences. If you made enemies for the sound for instance. The Yuki is yet another clan/faction. And whenever they are involved, they will act in character. They are on the council of the mist, so I wouldn’t expect them to act any other way than in character
 
They only did this on one occasion, and that was with Kiro. As the same with any village or faction that you were to get in the bad side, there could be consequences. If you made enemies for the sound for instance. The Yuki is yet another clan/faction. And whenever they are involved, they will act in character. They are on the council of the mist, so I wouldn’t expect them to act any other way than in character

I have no issues with how you have them act. They are in character, and I can respect that.

Just unlike their counterpart Uchiha, when they do stuff like this they don't get the realistic punishments the Uchiha got. That's my issue more than anything else; that they make everyone else spineless in the plot and there is never a sense that they are at risk for anything with their bold actions. They'll leave with council support and praise rather than any risk of being targeted by the Mist for their actions or even criticism.

But that's just me, and my view of things should not be taken as the cold truth. Probably a minority on it if I had to imagine, just outlining a personal concern is all.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Just unlike their counterpart Uchiha, when they do stuff like this they don't get the realistic punishments the Uchiha got. That's my issue more than anything else; that they make everyone else spineless in the plot and there is never a sense that they are at risk for anything with their bold actions.

Well that’s just a personality trait. The Yuki (or Jin specifically) are bold, extremly bold and bold strong in the face of danger or overwhelming odds. And that’s the thing, you’d rather face a coward with a gun than a suicidal psychopath with a fork who’s willing to throw his life away. Jin doesn’t retreat nor hold back. He goes all in, all the time, and that worries people. He wields a big stick all the time and will always shake it if he is given a roadblock, something that other clans have a certain tact or diplomacy before getting to that stage.

But that's just me, and my view of things should not be taken as the cold truth. Probably a minority on it if I had to imagine, just outlining a personal concern is all.

Oh no worries, I’m always glad to answer or respond to question and concerns :)
 
Well that’s just a personality trait. The Yuki (or Jin specifically) are bold, extremly bold and bold strong in the face of danger or overwhelming odds. And that’s the thing, you’d rather face a coward with a gun than a suicidal psychopath with a fork who’s willing to throw his life away. Jin doesn’t retreat nor hold back. He goes all in, all the time, and that worries people. He wields a big stick all the time and will always shake it if he is given a roadblock, something that other clans have a certain tact or diplomacy before getting to that stage.

This goes on the assumption Jin has odds to overcome. When the Yuki always get their way, they don't have any odds to overcome. They are the favorites, not the underdog. Jin is the kinda person who in truth the council would conspired to remove from power or even assassinate if they could. It's pretty much how Danzo and the council viewed Fugaku and the Uchiha. But there is no tension or risk of that for the Yuki here, cause they are just gonna get what they want and its the entire rest of the cast who has to appease them. I respect Jin's personality, but if there is no risk it can go south for the Yuki it takes away from his bold stance given their is no accountability on anything against the Yuki.

Oh no worries, I’m always glad to answer or respond to question and concerns :)

Thanks, I feel I get way too opinionated in this RP for my own good. I wish I could just shut up and let things play out, and I'll try to do so in the future.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
This goes on the assumption Jin has odds to overcome. When the Yuki always get their way, they don't have any odds to overcome. They are the favorites, not the underdog. Jin is the kinda person who in truth the council would conspired to remove from power or even assassinate if they could. It's pretty much how Danzo and the council viewed Fugaku and the Uchiha. But there is no tension or risk of that for the Yuki here, cause they are just gonna get what they want and its the entire rest of the cast who has to appease them. I respect Jin's personality, but if there is no risk it can go south for the Yuki it takes away from his bold stance given their is no accountability on anything against the Yuki.



Thanks, I feel I get way too opinionated in this RP for my own good. I wish I could just shut up and let things play out, and I'll try to do so in the future.

That’s the thing. Jin is a celebrity, a matriarch, an idol. He has sold books, spoke lectures, and is a war hero as much as Mei, being right there in the thick of it, always leading from the front and never from behind. He was merciless in his war efforts, giving him a lot of sway, and several nicknames as well. He could attempted be assasinated by someone, although it would make mei’s Side even worse.

Actually, believe it or not during the Kiro situation they didn’t get what they wanted anyway, not really. They wanted Kiro back and didn’t get that. Instead Kiro stayed with the leaf after some rough treatement. And with Mei they were denied. In fact, the don’t seem to be getting much ‘hand gifted’ to them. They just have to fight for the ground they get. Every single inch.
 
Konoha was literally attacked just weeks ago, no where in the village is it the safest XD

And I still have Uchiha>Hyuga. Even if I know kyuu will do his best to make the Hyuga show up the Uchiha XD
Well according to everyone else, the Hyūga is the safest. Kyuu has already shown up the Uchiha with the Hyūga to the point where we have an Uchiha joining the Hyūga. I really don’t see how the Uchiha are better right now...
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Well according to everyone else, the Hyūga is the safest. Kyuu has already shown up the Uchiha with the Hyūga to the point where we have an Uchiha joining the Hyūga. I really don’t see how the Uchiha are better right now...

Especially with a massacre on the horizons

Though the Yuki Clan is pretty safe...they literally built a fortress and are building fortifications
 
Just because kyuu is shitting on the Uchiha in this AU doesn't make the Hyuga better than the Uchiha XD.

And Kiro is there cause he is a prisoner. And they wanted to avoid having the bias of the Uchiha watching over him as the Hyuga were just a third party between Danzo & the Uchiha while they wait for a meeting to decide what to do with Kiro.

EDIT

Also TLDR---Wait for Part 2 when the Sharingan get their upgrades.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Just because kyuu is shitting on the Uchiha in this AU doesn't make the Hyuga better than the Uchiha XD.

And Kiro is there cause he is a prisoner. And they wanted to avoid having the bias of the Uchiha watching over him as the Hyuga were just a third party between Danzo & the Uchiha while they wait for a meeting to decide what to do with Kiro.

This is very true too.
 
That’s the thing. Jin is a celebrity, a matriarch, an idol. He has sold books, spoke lectures, and is a war hero as much as Mei, being right there in the thick of it, always leading from the front and never from behind. He was merciless in his war efforts, giving him a lot of sway, and several nicknames as well. He could attempted be assasinated by someone, although it would make mei’s Side even worse.

This honestly just makes the Yuki out to be too perfect. As they are the Uchiha, but with more clout, favoritism and no flaws despite and incredibly flawed ideology. Plus between this and Damos killing the Seven Swordsmen with ease by himself I think you just want to discredit Mei as much as possible from her biggest accomplishment XD

Actually, believe it or not during the Kiro situation they didn’t get what they wanted anyway, not really. They wanted Kiro back and didn’t get that. Instead Kiro stayed with the leaf after some rough treatement. And with Mei they were denied. In fact, the don’t seem to be getting much ‘hand gifted’ to them. They just have to fight for the ground they get. Every single inch.

With Kiro it was only because they found out about Kiro's double dealing from Kiro himself. At that point, they didn't want or care about him much anymore as Jin only wanted to make him suffer. So it wasn't an actual loss. And yeah, they are "denied" by Mei but all this meeting did was discredit Mei and make the entire Yuki look better so they actually won where it mattered. Plus they'll get what they want behind her back anyway.
 
Especially with a massacre on the horizons

Though the Yuki Clan is pretty safe...they literally built a fortress and are building fortifications
Exactly!

In fact, the Uchiha are probably like third. While everyone keeps saying how supposedly ‘op’ the Uchiha are, the Hyūga are free to reign supreme!
Just because kyuu is shitting on the Uchiha in this AU doesn't make the Hyuga better than the Uchiha XD.
Yeah, in canon the Uchiha are widely known to be better than the Hyūga. But like you just said, in this AU, Kyuu is having the Hyūga shit on every other clan. (Maybe not the Yuki tho)
 
Yeah, in canon the Uchiha are widely known to be better than the Hyūga. But like you just said, in this AU, Kyuu is having the Hyūga shit on every other clan. (Maybe not the Yuki tho)

Oh believe me, I have no love for the direction the Yuki & Hyuga go in in this story. Even if I respect the passion kyuu and Shen put behind their creations, I fear they'll become what I hate about the Uchiha Clan and more.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
This honestly just makes the Yuki out to be too perfect. As they are the Uchiha, but with more clout, favoritism and no flaws despite and incredibly flawed ideology. Plus between this and Damos killing the Seven Swordsmen with ease by himself I think you just want to discredit Mei as much as possible from her biggest accomplishment XD
Except overall they are weaker than the Uchiha, without any special eye upgrades, susanoo, mygekyo, etc. and no powerhouses like Itachi or shiui. Any one of those factors are a huge step up for the Uchiha over the Yuki. The Uchiha are still stronger without a doubt.

Did you read the updated book of Xenos? Rule 40 may interest you in this case
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Oh believe me, I have no love for the direction the Yuki & Hyuga go in in this story. Even if I respect the passion kyuu and Shen put behind their creations, I fear they'll become what I hate about the Uchiha Clan and more.

As said, the Yuki Clan power level wise wont be changing at this point. Unlike the uchiha’s and senju’s fickle power levels. An I have to stand my ground with them so they don’t seem like chumps. I WANT to hype them up, not have them beaten down like Kyuu and others have been trying. I made a feel that they aren’t so easily trifled with. Heck, they even made an OC a slave already XD.
 
Except overall they are weaker than the Uchiha, without any special eye upgrades, susanoo, mygekyo, etc. and no powerhouses like Itachi or shiui. Any one of those factors are a huge step up for the Uchiha over the Yuki. The Uchiha are still stronger without a doubt.

Did you read the updated book of Xenos? Rule 40 may interest you in this case
What about the honor guard tho? They’re not fodder like probably a good chunk of the Uchiha clan not named Itachi, Shisui, and Fugaku. There’s an extremely tiny percent of Uchiha who hv MS and you have to take into consideration not all of them even awaken the Sharingan.
 
As said, the Yuki Clan power level wise wont be changing at this point. Unlike the uchiha’s and senju’s fickle power levels. An I have to stand my ground with them so they don’t seem like chumps. I WANT to hype them up, not have them beaten down like Kyuu and others have been trying. I made a feel that they aren’t so easily trifled with. Heck, they even made an OC a slave already XD.

Problem is you make everyone else in the story act like chumps around them. As they either force everyone else to bend to their will or simply gain favor with people over others. It's too much in the opposite direction for me.

The Yuki are not Tomiko, they are not weak or beaten down by their opposition IMO.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
What about the honor guard tho? They’re not fodder like probably a good chunk of the Uchiha clan not named Itachi, Shisui, and Fugaku. There’s an extremely tiny percent of Uchiha who hv MS and you have to take into consideration not all of them even awaken the Sharingan.

Let’s be honest here, Itachi could solo the whole Uchiha Clan, Hyūga Clan, and others. Throw him in and anyother powerful Uchiha and the Yuki are defeated. Same for any other clan
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Problem is you make everyone else in the story act like chumps around them. As they either force everyone else to bend to their will or simply gain favor with people over others. It's too much in the opposite direction for me.

The Yuki are not Tomiko, they are not weak or beaten down by their opposition IMO.

You only saw one instance when they were specifically trying to be behold and threatening. And it half worked. They never get fully what they want, and they were flat out out denied by Mei. I think your imagining this
 
Oh believe me, I have no love for the direction the Yuki & Hyuga go in in this story. Even if I respect the passion kyuu and Shen put behind their creations, I fear they'll become what I hate about the Uchiha Clan and more.
This passion is what Kishi must’ve had when he developed the Uchiha. Now that these other clans are getting the development they rightly deserve, the Uchiha will be exposed. I believe the reason why Kishi gave all those buffs to the sharingan in the first place were because he worried that fans might wonder why a byakugan user didn’t stop a MS Sasuke without the Susano when they had the chance.
Let’s be honest here, Itachi could solo the whole Uchiha Clan, Hyūga Clan, and others. Throw him in and anyother powerful Uchiha and the Yuki are defeated. Same for any other clan
No, that is complete bs.
 
This passion is what Kishi must’ve had when he developed the Uchiha. Now that these other clans are getting the development they rightly deserve, the Uchiha will be exposed. I believe the reason why Kishi gave all those buffs to the sharingan in the first place were because he worried that fans might wonder why a byakugan didn’t stop a MS Sasuke without the Susano when they had the chance.

They got buffs because Sasuke was the secondary protagonist. And the author needed reasons to have him keep up with Naruto, who had a Tailed Beast in his gut. So the Uchiha got imbalanced, with a flimsy argument that "the Senju were better so it's balanced" even though only ONE member had Wood Release.

You only saw one instance when they were specifically trying to be behold and threatening. And it half worked. They never get fully what they want, and they were flat out out denied by Mei. I think your imagining this

Denied by Mei, but gained council favor and discredited Mei in one swoop. They got far more out of this then they lost, and they'll end up getting what they want anyway.

Also saw your book. Good read my friend XD
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
They got buffs because Sasuke was the secondary protagonist. And the author needed reasons to have him keep up with Naruto, who had a Tailed Beast in his gut. So the Uchiha got imbalanced, with a flimsy argument that "the Senju were better so it's balanced" even though only ONE member had Wood Release.



Denied by Mei, but gained council favor and discredited Mei in one swoop. They got far more out of this then they lost, and they'll end up getting what they want anyway.

Also saw your book. Good read my friend XD

Those council members were gained from the standing he had combined with mei’s Blunder during the exams.

Also, only a part agreed with him, I’d say 1/3 or so. And he did take a blow at Mei, that was intentional. And he does in all fairness have her outnumbered there with the honor guard and himself, so she can’t exactly attack him or anything in retaliation.

Also, thanks XD. Does rule 40 shed some light?
 
They got buffs because Sasuke was the secondary protagonist. And the author needed reasons to have him keep up with Naruto, who had a Tailed Beast in his gut. So the Uchiha got imbalanced, with a flimsy argument that "the Senju were better so it's balanced" even though only ONE member had Wood Release.
Yes, that’s exactly why the Uchiha became op. But think about it this way. Not only are we doing an AU with keeping some of the same elements, but also we have extremely talented and passionate writers who are giving other clans to shine. In fact, the reasoning Shen gave for powering up the Yuki was specifically to be able to watch up with clans such as the Uchiha. You see where I’m going here? Though the amount of work being put into this is truly remarkable, I also share some similar fears and wonder what level of attention these clans will peak at.
 
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Don't you people ever sleep?

I was about to actually. Just got into a passionate discussion XD

Yes, that’s exactly why the Uchiha became op. But think about it this way. Not only are we doing an AU with keeping some of the same elements, but also we have extremely talented and passionate writers who are giving other clans to shine. In fact, the reasoning Shen gave for powering up the Yuki was specifically to be able to watch up with clans such as the Uchiha. You see where I’m going here? Though the amount of work being put into this is truly remarkable, I also share the some similar fears and wonder what level these clans will peak at.

Most of my cast are not even part of clans. So I do feel fear that I cannot keep up, or that certain clans will grow and outshine the others by an insane margin. I can try to buff up and give thought to the other clans, but I have far too many characters to keep track of anyway I don't have the time to give them the focus the Shen can give the Yuki or kyuu can give the Hyuga.
 
I only have one OC and my other character is the leader of the Uchiha so I don’t really have an excuse lel. The thing is, there’s no point in developing the Uchiha considering the amount of unfair development they got in canon. Adding on to the Uchiha might make them seem more op than they already are. The only thing I’m planning to work on is their fall from grace and ultimately, their downfall. Plotting for the coup, salty Uchihas, and other stuff like that is what I hope to incorporate. If anything, I’m actually trying to ruin them... which is kind of messed up. :(

Either way, they’re all going to die! >:D
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Kiro: The strongest clan? Last I checked, it sounded like the Hyūga clan is the safest place on the planet. Hell, even that other Uchiha knows this :D
I guess if I were to TLDR my point the Yuki seem to force everyone else in the entire story to bend over to their whims and never have to face any consequences for what they do. Everyone else is instead at risk of consequences if they don't appease the Yuki. And I am just not a personal fan of it. They get everything and risk losing nothing.
Proof Hyuga is the only s-oh wait you guys already know
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
Well according to everyone else, the Hyūga is the safest. Kyuu has already shown up the Uchiha with the Hyūga to the point where we have an Uchiha joining the Hyūga. I really don’t see how the Uchiha are better right now...
No he just wants them to be his ally
Just because kyuu is shitting on the Uchiha in this AU doesn't make the Hyuga better than the Uchiha XD.

And Kiro is there cause he is a prisoner. And they wanted to avoid having the bias of the Uchiha watching over him as the Hyuga were just a third party between Danzo & the Uchiha while they wait for a meeting to decide what to do with Kiro.

EDIT

Also TLDR---Wait for Part 2 when the Sharingan get their upgrades.
Oh yeah I bet In part 2 a clan that’s half dead will be SOOO OP
As said, the Yuki Clan power level wise wont be changing at this point. Unlike the uchiha’s and senju’s fickle power levels. An I have to stand my ground with them so they don’t seem like chumps. I WANT to hype them up, not have them beaten down like Kyuu and others have been trying. I made a feel that they aren’t so easily trifled with. Heck, they even made an OC a slave already XD.
Senju ain’t even in this au xd
Yes, that’s exactly why the Uchiha became op. But think about it this way. Not only are we doing an AU with keeping some of the same elements, but also we have extremely talented and passionate writers who are giving other clans to shine. In fact, the reasoning Shen gave for powering up the Yuki was specifically to be able to watch up with clans such as the Uchiha. You see where I’m going here? Though the amount of work being put into this is truly remarkable, I also share some similar fears and wonder what level of attention these clans will peak at.
I mean... can you write down how the clan area looks like? Could be useful for my future posts
I only have one OC and my other character is the leader of the Uchiha so I don’t really have an excuse lel. The thing is, there’s no point in developing the Uchiha considering the amount of unfair development they got in canon. Adding on to the Uchiha might make them seem more op than they already are. The only thing I’m planning to work on is their fall from grace and ultimately, their downfall. Plotting for the coup, salty Uchihas, and other stuff like that is what I hope to incorporate. If anything, I’m actually trying to ruin them... which is kind of messed up. :(

Either way, they’re all going to die! >:D
I can give some tips for better plot when u do this
Can I get a Yuki massacre? Just as an insurance policy.
Boi shen bout to make an essay and why tf no
 
Exactly!

In fact, the Uchiha are probably like third. While everyone keeps saying how supposedly ‘op’ the Uchiha are, the Hyūga are free to reign supreme!

Yeah, in canon the Uchiha are widely known to be better than the Hyūga. But like you just said, in this AU, Kyuu is having the Hyūga shit on every other clan. (Maybe not the Yuki tho)
I'm sorry, which clan has the Hyūga shit on? I mean, I've never even had the clan as a whole fight or even be as pompous and arrogant as they were in canon since I focused more on noble pride. The only thing I've changed about them is their internal structure, and it's not really a leap from where they were in canon but rather where they should've been the whole time given the almost feudalistic structure of the world. Most clans should be somewhere near that organized, because they've been a nation-state for who knows how many years before the concept of ninja villages started, and ninja villages have been around for almost 100 years already (20 years between each war, so 1st Shinobi war - 4th Shinobi war = 80 years, and we don't know how much time passed before the first war broke out. Maybe 2-5 years?)

If you've been one of the most influential clans in an area and you have one house to your name (e.g. how the Nara clan is shown in canon where they only have one house) then you've definitely been doing something wrong.
Oh believe me, I have no love for the direction the Yuki & Hyuga go in in this story. Even if I respect the passion kyuu and Shen put behind their creations, I fear they'll become what I hate about the Uchiha Clan and more.
I'd agree with Shen on this one. They haven't gotten any stronger by virtue of power, but rather they've only become more organized, and pompous on the Yuki's side. It does make sense though because almost a century of being a major influential force would cause that level of pride to seem into the bones of its members.

The Yuki clan simply acts as the more ostentatious noble clan, but it's not that uncommon in history. Especially in the east where Nobility counter for more and you could get executed for looking at a noble the wrong way.
Those council members were gained from the standing he had combined with mei’s Blunder during the exams.

Also, only a part agreed with him, I’d say 1/3 or so. And he did take a blow at Mei, that was intentional. And he does in all fairness have her outnumbered there with the honor guard and himself, so she can’t exactly attack him or anything in retaliation.

Also, thanks XD. Does rule 40 shed some light?
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That confidence is gonna end up with Jin getting floored by Mei one of these days. She's floored her subordinates for less mind you.
 
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