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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%
  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
Raiku: lol you think ima try to fight the HYUGA CLAN? No thanks, sort of trying to NOT get killed, thank you very much.

(Also still confused on why Kiro’s following him)
Didn’t Hinagiku send someone to retrieve Kiro? That could be a reason why he just goes to the inner grounds.
Kiro literally has no other friends lmao. His housemate hates him, he's terrified of Sagisō, and everyone else is technically his prison ward.
Ikr but that’s what Kiro gets for his earlier attitude lel
 
Uh Mei still has ears on them with that member their adding, and Hama pointed that out, Mei still seems very unaffected by that.
Very unaffected lmao, because Hyōryūgetsu doesn't report to Mei, but if Hama wants to believe that and possibly sow discord between the Yuki and Hōzuki then Mei will be a very happy bystander.

Never correct your enemy when they're making a mistake.

Hyōryūgetsu is actually there in case they actually succeed in capturing the Jinchuriki, it's more for the aftermath of what happens should they succeed. Can't have the story being told as 'The Yuki clan single-handedly accomplished meritorious services for the Mist by capturing a Jinchuriki', that'd be allowing you to rake in too much credit and rep.

She threw the Hōzuki clan in there just so officially they could say The Yuki & Hōzuki's combined effort blah blah blah,

Hyōryūgetsu is just there to divide the merit as far as Mei's concerned. But like I said, if Hama wants to sow discord between the noble clans then Mei won't be stopping her lol.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
@Shen: Ghost Gym Leader I was reminded of the flood when the organic forms came out and it made the scene more horrifying in my mind lel

Perfect timing for this type of story considering Halloween is also coming up. I can imagine Kai telling a campfire story about the rumor of the Hū clan, spooking everyone out. Ending with the fact Haiahu may still be out there... just wow

Flood? Well kinda as far as fleshmounds are concerned XD.

Funny how that timing came out huh? Between the hü’s Gory downfall and Halloween, three months in the making for this portion of this backstory y’all lol. Though nice creativity with the Kai campfire story idea, I’m half tempted to use that ;)
 
My fingers plead me to do smaller posts @.@ I really don’t want to go that much quality again XD. But thank you

I feel you. Part of my issue is that I need to cut my posts down given how much I have to react to (And other RPs) but I feel needed to do my best and give posts that at least try to match the quality of others here such as yourself.

Which can be draining, given how long it took me to get that reply up. And I don't feel satisfied with the end result. Though your words are nice to hear.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
I feel you. Part of my issue is that I need to cut my posts down given how much I have to react to (And other RPs) but I feel needed to do my best and give posts that at least try to match the quality of others here such as yourself.

Which can be draining, given how long it took me to get that reply up. And I don't feel satisfied with the end result. Though your words are nice to hear.
Honestly, the fact that you can keep up with all those Rp’s, school, and keep your quality up is one of the wonders in this world
 

sSoul

Previously Swirled
I have two plans for this next post, one Taiyo explodes like an emotional gallon and shouts at Sakura, two, Taiyo is mature and asks Sakura to help him calm down before he can explain anything. Vote for what you'd like best, and also, Inner Taiyo can't talk to Outer Taiyo if he's being emotional.
Sakura: I wasn't thinking that!
Inner Sakura: Suuuureee...
Sakura: Oh shut up you!
Wait what are you thinking? Am I missing some context?
 
No, it means even if Mori becomes an amazing person that brings people together and helps the people that need help, he’ll still not make it in life
Mori: I can cook, took care of myself for a while and didn't flood the house with Instant Ramen cups. How won't I make it in life and what is this talk about marriage?
 
I feel my post quality has gone to shit XD
What makes you say that?
Eh, guess I just feel I haven't put as much detail in them as before. Your Jin backstory being posted right before this doesn't help as a comparison XD (Awesome stuff BTW)
OH, it seems to be a matter of comparison rather than post quality itself
I feel you. Part of my issue is that I need to cut my posts down given how much I have to react to (And other RPs) but I feel needed to do my best and give posts that at least try to match the quality of others here such as yourself.

Which can be draining, given how long it took me to get that reply up. And I don't feel satisfied with the end result. Though your words are nice to hear.
Your issue is that you're tryingtto respond with all your characters at one and thus while your posts seem long its actually several short posts.

I'd recommend you take the approach Shen and I use and only focus on 2~3 character per post and making each post more detailed rather than adding more mini-posts.
Thanks, though I'd wager kyuu is better at this than I am.
I work very efficiently on 4 hours sleep :v

And I'd like to believe I type fairly fast so a few hundred words only takes several minutes. I spent more type thinking about phrasing and diction rather than actual typing.
I have two plans for this next post, one Taiyo explodes like an emotional gallon and shouts at Sakura, two, Taiyo is mature and asks Sakura to help him calm down before he can explain anything. Vote for what you'd like best, and also, Inner Taiyo can't talk to Outer Taiyo if he's being emotional.

Wait what are you thinking? Am I missing some context?
Just gonna say an aggressive little fire Boi isn't gonna make the Hyuga think molesting the daughter of the clan leader was a 'misunderstanding'
 
Katsuo: Ouch, still a fresh sting on that insult Nebby.

Kyuu, be careful, Yasu's essentially become a different person from what I can tell. Watch how much you progressed that character over that two month period. I know full well that you can handle steady power development, but even the hair itself seemed like a speedy process on Yasu, lol.
 
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