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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%
  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
Katsuo: Ouch, still a fresh sting on that insult Nebby.

Kyuu, be careful, Yasu's essentially become a different person from what I can tell. Watch how much you progressed that character over that two month period. I know full well that you can handle steady power development, but even the hair itself seemed like a speedy process on Yasu, lol.
Well, the hair is just a bunch of feathers bundled to look like hair. He already used feathers...so not much really changed.

I guess there's also the armor change, but that's more of an appearance quirk than power development.
Speaking of Chunin...

Zaku, Sagiso, Katsuo and Azumi are Chunin. Not sure if we decided Kiro was one as well or not. Just going off exam result memory.
Nope , Sagiso isn't a chunin
If you are gonna try and tell me to my face Sagiso is not Chunin based on the exams then I'll~!

Just write a comment here in disagreement XD
I would write with you, but I'm disinclined to argue about it, since Sagiso treated the exams like a tourist resort.
They don’t compare. Shikamaru had her right where he wanted, and controlled her every movement. And THEN he gave up. Sagiso just...gave up. She missed the important step
She didn't flat out give up, she ran out of chakra because of an experimental move I was trying which i determined was too OP for that point in time and thus wasn't fair for a genin to use. Hence instead of decapitating Katsuo via a hidden clone, her chakra fizzled out and both the jutsu she was using to hide the clone, and the clone itself went Poof.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Madoka: To be fair, I'm pretty sure Zaku burned those bridges. Not like we had much time to build a bond as we didn't speak to each other after the forest.
Actually no. They spoke during the prelims, Zaku helped her up. They spoke during the medical wing incident, and then again in the sound four chase where Zaku ‘accidentally’ saved her from an attack by reaver’s chainsaw blades
 
Actually no. They spoke during the prelims, Zaku helped her up. They spoke during the medical wing incident, and then again in the sound four chase where Zaku ‘accidentally’ saved her from an attack by reaver’s chainsaw blades

Madoka was speaking against/cursing out Zaku there, given he had just tried to kill Tomiko and had finished killing innocent nurses and medical nin on top of injured. And being struck by an attack to be "saved" is not something Madoka is gonna be much openly appreciative about given he fled right after.

The helping hand up was a nice little moment, just felt they needed more of those as most of their experiences were as enemies.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Madoka was speaking against/cursing out Zaku there, given he had just tried to kill Tomiko and had finished killing innocent nurses and medical nin on top of injured. And being struck by an attack to be "saved" is not something Madoka is gonna be much openly appreciative about given he fled right after.

The helping hand up was a nice little moment, just felt they needed more of those as most of their experiences were as enemies.
Eh true that. But they had a lot of connections, both enemy and friend and they didn’t have a bitter hatred for each other either. I think though they should have more interactions though
 
Eh true that. But they had a lot of connections, both enemy and friend and they didn’t have a bitter hatred for each other either. I think though they should have more interactions though
Zaku has friends..? Where? Show them to me. jkjk

I think considering that out of Madoka's two closest friends, Zaku brutally insulted one who was hospitalized, then proceeded to hospitalize the remaining one, connections would lean heavily towards the 'enemy' side.

I'm actually surprised they don't have a more bitter hatred to each other, seems like Yasu just reacted stronger than Madoka did to Zaku's taunting.
 
Zaku has friends..? Where? Show them to me. jkjk

I think considering that out of Madoka's two closest friends, Zaku brutally insulted one who was hospitalized, then proceeded to hospitalize the remaining one, connections would lean heavily towards the 'enemy' side.

I'm actually surprised they don't have a more bitter hatred to each other, seems like Yasu just reacted stronger than Madoka did to Zaku's taunting.

Becuase Madoka was supposed to be Zaku's "friend" in that situation.

Even if I agree. Madoka should hate Zaku's guts if I had to be honest.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Becuase Madoka was supposed to be Zaku's "friend" in that situation.

Even if I agree. Madoka should hate Zaku's guts if I had to be honest.
I’m sure she isn’t a fan of him right now if that’s what you mean XD. But the way she acted when she saw him protecting Kou amongst other things Madoka actually responded calm and like it was just a difference of opinion
Katsuo: Im friends with everyone except Kai.

Me: .....wow im writing this and you still sound delusional.

Katsuo: Hate only works when it comes from both sides.

Me: Pretty sure thats love to bud...
Kai: 10/10 would purge again. Bring in the fourth Reich
 
I’m sure she isn’t a fan of him right now if that’s what you mean XD. But the way she acted when she saw him protecting Kou amongst other things Madoka actually responded calm and like it was just a difference of opinion

Okay having Kou around does not act as a morality shield for Zaku XD.

If anything, she should have condemned him "corrupting" the kid.
 
True, hence the ‘amongst other things’ such as protecting her from a fatal attack, helping her up in the prelims fight, etc.

And Kou still thinks she’s a pervert XD.

Eh, those things do not outweigh the bad in my mind. I'll probably keep Madoka like that for consistency sake, but honestly she comes off as rather uncaring/jerkish about the people Zaku killed and the friend he tried to kill by taking it easy with him like this.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Eh, those things do not outweigh the bad in my mind. I'll probably keep Madoka like that for consistency sake, but honestly she comes off as rather uncaring/jerkish about the people Zaku killed and the friend he tried to kill but taking it easy with him like this.
Well is not her village. Why should she care? It’s a foreign squabble as far as she is concerned. Only the friend thing is a big deal breaker
 
Because it is innocent people freakin dying in mass? Not everyone is that uncaring like kyuu's characters, especially if Madoka found out a "friend" turned out to be a crazy murderer like this.
wooooow, niiiicceee

It's honestly a matter of ideals rather than emotion, because Nadeshiko is one of the more extreme variants to Strength-based Hierarchy as a social structure within the ninja world.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Muhhammad who's lost faith in the world would be more appropriate.

Katsuo: Zaku's easy to beat if you punch him faster than he can react. Or crowd him from every angle. Basically swarms and fists.

Me: Says the guy who barely managed a tie with him.
Tie with Curse Mark Zaku. Ahem. No small feat there XD
wooooow, niiiicceee

It's honestly a matter of ideals rather than emotion, because Nadeshiko is one of the more extreme variants to Strength-based Hierarchy as a social structure within the ninja world.
Well you do have rather uncaring characters. Baiyan, Sagiso, and Mei are all sagiso’s personality XD
 
Well you do have rather uncaring characters. Baiyan, Sagiso, and Mei are all sagiso’s personality XD
It's not uncaring but rather than you guys approach situations with the moral PoV of someone in the 21st Century which makes your character swift to sacrifice themselves for 'friendship', or 'moral justice' or some other Anime-MC-esque reason. My characters are just more practical-minded.
 
It's not uncaring but rather than you guys approach situations with the moral PoV of someone in the 21st Century which makes your character swift to sacrifice themselves for 'friendship', or 'moral justice' or some other Anime-MC-esque reason. My characters are just more practical-minded.

I get the reasoning, but it kinda causes your characters personalities to bleed into each other. They all seem like variations of Wyst.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
It's not uncaring but rather than you guys approach situations with the moral PoV of someone in the 21st Century which makes your character swift to sacrifice themselves for 'friendship', or 'moral justice' or some other Anime-MC-esque reason. My characters are just more practical-minded.

*Looks at Zaku, kai, Reaver, Kin, and other characters I control*

Uh. Are you sure about that?


Also baiyan showed no fear with reaver, Sagiso has never felt in trouble or even winded until she had her arms broken, not even against kai
 
*Looks at Zaku, kai, Reaver, Kin, and other characters I control*

Uh. Are you sure about that?


Also baiyan showed no fear with reaver, Sagiso has never felt in trouble or even winded until she had her arms broken, not even against kai

Yeah, this is my big thing. Nothing that happens phases those characters. Even if a situation goes south for them, they have the exact same calm composed and practical mindset. The most we've gotten is Sagiso worrying about her sister being trapped in a cave for literally one post before going back to her usual attitude.

Doesn't make for good tension. Even Azumi had emotional bursts vs. Reaver. And she's the most practical of my cast. But just difference in styles I suppose.
 
I get the reasoning, but it kinda causes your characters personalities to bleed into each other. They all seem like variations of Wyst.
Their rationale is similar but that about where all the similarities stop.
*Looks at Zaku, kai, Reaver, Kin, and other characters I control*

Uh. Are you sure about that?


Also baiyan showed no fear with reaver, Sagiso has never felt in trouble or even winded until she had her arms broken, not even against kai
Kai just about sacrificed himself for friendship, so I'm very sure :v

None of my characters are damsels, their all designed to be confident and strong-willed. Why would Baiyan even fear Reaver? On the matter of Sagiso, that's because of the tactical approach to battle that I impose on my characters. Sagiso never really felt she was at risk of dying. The closest any of my characters have been to dying is probably Baiyan.
 
that's because of the tactical approach to battle that I impose on my characters. Sagiso never really felt she was at risk of dying.

And that is a problem IMO. If there is no risk or fear that the character might not make it, there is no tension in the fight. And it undermines what the opponent tries to do.

It's not being a damsel vs. not being one. It's about momentary cracks of emotion beyond calm composure. Sagiso was literally chakra drained and being bearhugged by Kidomaru to death yet her demeanor never changed.

Even Reaver, a guy whose persona is built on being the big scary monster, had moments where that cracked when things got hard for him.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
None of my characters are damsels, their all designed to be confident and strong-willed. Why would Baiyan even fear Reaver? On the matter of Sagiso, that's because of the tactical approach to battle that I impose on my characters. Sagiso never really felt she was at risk of dying. The closest any of my characters have been to dying is probably Baiyan.

Reaver is basically a giant metal killing machine with several bloodstained trophies all around his suit from people he has killed, alongside a brander that takes their own blood and makes a trophy. Not to mention a super deep voice with sawblade extensions amongst other things. That is a serious reason to be afraid. Even Kiro was deathly afraid of him.

Even Reaver, a guy whose persona is built on being the big scary monster, had moments where that cracked when things got hard for him.

^this
 
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