Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

[Godjacob]

Alright, here is my sample for the Fanon Explosion Corps. Might edit an ability or two.

Explosion Corps
1. Hiroshi | A bold individual, natural leader who is openly confident and at times a bit reckless. But is always one ready to take charge and can be inspirational when the situation calls for it | Explosion Release (Specialist)
2. Saki | A mute in the most literal sense of the word. Speaks with her actions rather than words, and is more analytical about situations. Always quick yo keep Hiroshi in check | Explosion Release + Odor Based Genjutsu
3. Akio | A bash "man's man" who isn't afraid to jump head long into a fight. Is incredibly prideful, but also has an iron will and treats his scars as badges of honor. A man without fear. | Explosion Release + Fire Release
4. Isao | A reserved, if not overly sarcastic individual who tends to be a bit quippy on the battlefield and appears carefree. But he can take things seriously when the situation calls for it | Explosion Release + Wind Release
5. Kaoru | A go getter by nature, with infectious energy and little concept of personal space. She is the most supportive and encouraging member of the team...though prone to temper flares | Explosion Release + Kickboxing Taijutsu
6. Minori | The "average joe" in the sense that he lacks any extreme personality quirks. Tries to be a team player and keep a level head on everyone, though is met with mixed results and is often the playful teasing target of the group | Explosion Release + Medical Ninjutsu

 

[sSoul]

Alright, here is my sample for the Fanon Explosion Corps. Might edit an ability or two.

Explosion Corps
1. Hiroshi | A bold individual, natural leader who is openly confident and at times a bit reckless. But is always one ready to take charge and can be inspirational when the situation calls for it | Explosion Release (Specialist)
2. Saki | A mute in the most literal sense of the word. Speaks with her actions rather than words, and is more analytical about situations. Always quick yo keep Hiroshi in check | Explosion Release + Odor Based Genjutsu
3. Akio | A bash "man's man" who isn't afraid to jump head long into a fight. Is incredibly prideful, but also has an iron will and treats his scars as badges of honor. A man without fear. | Explosion Release + Fire Release
4. Isao | A reserved, if not overly sarcastic individual who tends to be a bit quippy on the battlefield and appears carefree. But he can take things seriously when the situation calls for it | Explosion Release + Wind Release
5. Kaoru | A go getter by nature, with infectious energy and little concept of personal space. She is the most supportive and encouraging member of the team...though prone to temper flares | Explosion Release + Kickboxing Taijutsu
6. Minori | The "average joe" in the sense that he lacks any extreme personality quirks. Tries to be a team player and keep a level head on everyone, though is met with mixed results and is often the playful teasing target of the group | Explosion Release + Medical Ninjutsu

Taiyo: I like these guys, they seem cool.
Inner Taiyo: Its cause of the Explosion Theme
Taiyo: and so what if it is?

 

[Godjacob]

Taiyo: I like these guys, they seem cool.
Inner Taiyo: Its cause of the Explosion Theme
Taiyo: and so what if it is?

Hiroshi: Course we are. In fact, you can say we are the bomb!
Saki: *Smacks the back of his head*

 

[sSoul]

Hiroshi: Course we are. In fact, you can say we are the bomb!
Saki: *Smacks the back of his head*

Taiyo: And your explosive personality makes you all the more likable.
Inner Taiyo: Now lets just hope that Sakura doesn't try to smack us again.
Taiyo: The last time hurt, fourtunately I was able to keep my emotions in check and not trash the place.
Inner Taiyo: yeah, but what if we let loose with our emotions?
Taiyo: Sounds fun...

 

[Grand Master Koop]

I don't get why people think puns blows cause these puns are a blast

 

[Godjacob]

I don't get why people think puns blows cause these puns are a blast

Yang: I know. I can't even C4 the problem.

*Shoves her back into Fiction Roleplay*

 

[kyuukestu]

*Flops*

I don't really wanna write a post just to say they departed ~w~

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....

The only Hyuga returning from this mission will be Shura -probably, right after this I'll thrust Sagiso and Furijia into their development-type arcs. It'll take...a few months in RP for Furijia's arc...she'll likely be solo the whole time...unless I make some minor Ocs. Doubt I'll do that.

Hinagiku will leave with Furijia, and Sagiso will be leaving to become a mercenary.

You have between now and the end of this arc to try influencing Furijia's development -if you so desire- she'll be a different girl the next time she appears in Konoha.

Oh, @Rohan Kishibe I'll need Shura to deliver a few messages to the Hyuga clan for Hinagiku...but I feel like I might forget. If you remember, please remind me.

Hmmm, I think that's all I had to say? I'll try to churn out a post.

 

[Godjacob]

Hinagiku will leave with Furijia, and Sagiso will be leaving to become a mercenary.

I feel like this would cause a lot of problems for Konoha for the Hyuga Head to straight up abandoned the Leaf like this. It feels like it should be a more complex process then "hey Shura go send a note to the Hyuga peace."

 

[sSoul]

I feel like this would cause a lot of problems for Konoha for the Hyuga Head to straight up abandoned the Leaf like this. It feels like it should be a more complex process then "hey Shura go send a note to the Hyuga peace."

I think Hinagiku is only leaving momentarily, like on a long business trip, and even if Hinagiku just abandoned the leaf, I feel like shed be hunted down and killed on sight, probably making Shuts or some other Hyūga the person in charge.

 

[kyuukestu]

I feel like this would cause a lot of problems for Konoha for the Hyuga Head to straight up abandoned the Leaf like this. It feels like it should be a more complex process then "hey Shura go send a note to the Hyuga peace."

'-'

What gave you the idea she'd be abandoning the leaf? She'll just be watching over Furijia while the girl goes through her potentially traumatic growth exercise.

If I was gonna abandon the leaf I wouldn't have bothered to send a note.

I think Hinagiku is only leaving momentarily, like on a long business trip, and even if Hinagiku just abandoned the leaf, I feel like shed be hunted down and killed on sight, probably making Shuts or some other Hyūga the person in charge.

This is more correct, she'll be out of village temporarily.

Edit:

And no, we will not be putting a Chunin in charge of the Hyuga clan. The letter is for something else entirely.

 

[Grand Master Koop]

Oh, @Rohan Kishibe I'll need Shura to deliver a few messages to the Hyuga clan for Hinagiku...but I feel like I might forget. If you remember, please remind me.

Got it

 

[sSoul]

"Well, excuse me princess

Mori is Link confirmed.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Mori is Link confirmed.

Hahahaha that was a good one XD

 

[kyuukestu]

Since there hasn't really been any down time which wasn't glossed over in time skips, I haven't gotten any chance to explore Sagisō’s non-combative side.

As such ;

Kiro gets pranked -

Takato gets pranked -

I'll take votes to see which is wanted more, and as a bonus Furijia will probably try to get back at Taiyo in some way.

On a side note, Sakura shouldn't have too high of an expectation fot Furijia. She did well against Taiyo because the situation had no real pressure. It'll be a totally different performance once we actually get into the battle.

 

[Grand Master Koop]

Prank Kiro

 

[sSoul]

Kiro gets pranked -

My vote

Furijia will probably try to get back at Taiyo in some way.

That's be fun to see.
Inner Taiyo: I dare her, it won't end well for her. Let's just say, she'd have a pain where she shouldn't.
Taiyo: No, she will not, I don't think I'd harm her in any way, shape or form
Inner Taiyo: If you're angry enough, yes you will.

 

[SageNeb]

Taiyo gets pranked

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

I'll take votes to see which is wanted more, and as a bonus Furijia will probably try to get back at Taiyo in some way.

For kissing her? What’s she gonna do? Kiss back? XD

Kiro gets pranked -

Now we can add Kiro getting pranked to his long growing list of humiliations

 

[kyuukestu]

My vote

That's be fun to see.
Inner Taiyo: I dare her, it won't end well for her. Let's just say, she'd have a pain where she shouldn't.
Taiyo: No, she will not, I don't think I'd harm her in any way, shape or form
Inner Taiyo: If you're angry enough, yes you will.

Sagisō & Hinagiku: <-- No words needed.

Well, I'm trying to find a good balance. Hinagiku would disapprove of anything too terrible, but I need to display childishness in a way that doesn't automatically equate to timidness, because they're not the same, and Furijia personality trait is childish not timid.

 

[kyuukestu]

For kissing her? What’s she gonna do? Kiss back? XD



Now we can add Kiro getting pranked to his long growing list of humiliations

Eh, Furijia doesn't know about that part, but the end result is basically what I'd thought of.

Tit for tat, ripped her clothes, so she'll do the same. She'll realize after the deed is done that it wasn't the best of ideas, but I haven't decided on it yet so I'm still toying with ideas.




He's gotta start somewhere *shrugs*

I haven't decided whether it'll be a prank-prank, or just putting Kiro into an awkward situation.

My Nadeshiko girls have... well, no real sense of shame or modesty, because they've only dealt with other females.

 

[sSoul]

ripped her clothes, so she'll do the same. She'll realize after the deed is done that it wasn't the best of ideas, but I haven't decided on it yet so I'm still toying with ideas.

The only difference is that he doesn't have a replacement.

 

[Godjacob]

On a side note, Sakura shouldn't have too high of an expectation fot Furijia. She did well against Taiyo because the situation had no real pressure. It'll be a totally different performance once we actually get into the battle.

Sakura: Well, excuse me for having faith in people.
Inner Sakura: See, this is why you need to be more cynical.
Sakura: Oh shut up you.

In truth she made that judgement based off the Takato fight. "Pressure" or not she basically fought him to a draw after Takato had training with a Sannin, what the heck is she supposed to think?

 

[kyuukestu]

The only difference is that he doesn't have a replacement.

Yea, i might settle for making faces at him, or something equally inane.

 

[sSoul]

Yea, i might settle for making faces at him, or something equally inane.

Wait till he takes a shower, steal his clothes

 

[kyuukestu]

Sakura: Well, excuse me for having faith in people.
Inner Sakura: See, this is why you need to be more cynical.
Sakura: Oh shut up you.

In truth she made that judgement based off the Takato fight. "Pressure" or not she basically fought him to a draw after Takato had training with a Sannin, what the heck is she supposed to think?

A draw? I think an onlooker would've been more easily able to spot Taiyo's repeated screw ups. I can't say she did anything particularly impressive.

She dealt literally 0 Damage to him on her own, she scored hits by Taiyo turning himself into a lightning rod, and him walking int range of.her gentle fist, and you'll note she couldn't even shut down his chakra points because he blocked with his puppet arms.

On the other hand he scored quite a few direct hits and was even toying with her at the start of the battle.

 

[kyuukestu]

Wait till he takes a shower, steal his clothes

Might rub poison ivy into them

 

[Godjacob]

A draw? I think an onlooker would've been more easily able to spot Taiyo's repeated screw ups. I can't say she did anything particularly impressive.

She dealt literally 0 Damage to him on her own, she scored hits by Taiyo turning himself into a lightning rod, and him walking int range of.her gentle fist, and you'll note she couldn't even shut down his chakra points because he blocked with his puppet arms.

On the other hand he scored quite a few direct hits and was even toying with her at the start of the battle.

Again, Sakura caught the very tail end of the fight. Not all the details that led to that point.

Taiyo's screws up and Furijia taking advantage are still a credit to Furijia as it is part of strategy. Also "toying" is being incredibly generous there to say that's what Taiyo was doing.

But I digress. Sakura's evaluation is based on what bit she saw of it. And in her eyes, Furijia has objectively improved since she last saw her which is true. She went from a non-fighter to sparring with a Sannin student is her view of it.

 

[sSoul]

Might rub poison ivy into them

That'll add fuel to the fire, literally, Taiyo is going to give Furījia a third degree burn if unrestrained. Good thing Sakura exists lol.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Wait till he takes a shower, steal his clothes

Erm...you seem very excited about this XD

 

[sSoul]

Erm...you seem very excited about this XD

Just looking for ways to help, also I want to let Taiyo get angry to greater degrees. Eventually I hope he almost murder a main villain in his rage lol, but hey, someone gotta stop him lol.

 

[kyuukestu]

Again, Sakura caught the very tail end of the fight. Not all the details that led to that point.

Taiyo's screws up and Furijia taking advantage are still a credit to Furijia as it is part of strategy. Also "toying" is being incredibly generous there to say that's what Taiyo was doing.

But I digress. Sakura's evaluation is based on what bit she saw of it. And in her eyes, Furijia has objectively improved since she last saw her which is true. She went from a non-fighter to sparring with a Sannin student is her view of it.

Hmmm, I'd question why she thinks Furijia is a non-fighter. She wouldn't have been sent on the chase the sound mission if she was a non-fighter.

That'll add fuel to the fire, literally, Taiyo is going to give Furījia a third degree burn if unrestrained. Good thing Sakura exists lol.

Indeed, Sakura will need to heal Taiyo afterward. Her presence is a God send.

Though, that does remind me. If anyone wants to make a contract with either of Hinagiku's summoning animals, then she'll teach you.

 

[Godjacob]

Hmmm, I'd question why she thinks Furijia is a non-fighter. She wouldn't have been sent on the chase the sound mission if she was a non-fighter.

.....she literally talked with Furijia and helped rescue her during the Sound Chase Arc when Tayuya and Kai were by her.

 

[SageNeb]

Just looking for ways to help, also I want to let Taiyo get angry to greater degrees. Eventually I hope he almost murder a main villain in his rage lol, but hey, someone gotta stop him lol.

get him to get the eight tails, i'll help you. i wanna see sage mode fbs version 2 taiyo

 

[kyuukestu]

.....she literally talked with Furijia and helped rescue her during the Sound Chase Arc when Tayuya and Kai were by her.

Right, I remember, but what I'm asking is why Sakura gave her that low a mental evaluation like non-fighter.

I get that Furijia didn't do any fighting during that arc, but was it so bad she wasn't even considered a viable combatant?

 

[sSoul]

get him to get the eight tails, i'll help you. i wanna see sage mode fbs version 2 taiyo

So ladies and gentlemen, Taiyo gets to destroy Pain xD.

 

[Godjacob]

Right, I remember, but what imI asking is why Sakura gave her that low a mental evaluation like non-fighter.

I get that Furijia didn't do any fighting during that arc, but was it so bad she wasn't even considered a viable combatant?

Well, considering she found her knocked out and Furijia seemed scared and panicky when Sakura talked to her, she just made an educated guess.

Plus you know, Furijia was knocked out crashing into a tree.

 

[kyuukestu]

So ladies and gentlemen, Taiyo gets to destroy Pain xD.

Idk I'd still put my bets on Pain for that fight. The only thing that would help you there is Sage mode.

Well, considering she found her knocked out and Furijia seemed scared and panicky when Sakura talked to her, she just made an educated guess.

Plus you know, Furijia was knocked out crashing into a tree.

That's a misleading phrase :T

She was caught under Tayuya's genjutsu which she didn't have the state of mind to dispell.

 

[Godjacob]

Idk I'd still put my bets on Pain for that fight. The only thing that would help you there is Sage mode.

That's a misleading phrase :T

She was caught under Tayuya's genjutsu which she didn't have the state of mind to dispell.

I'm aware, but the situation Furijia was in and her state when Sakura talked with her after left Sakura to believe she was either a support ninja or a non-fighter. Or someone with little experience in the field, as she had the same panic on her first major mission with Kakashi.

 

[SageNeb]

So ladies and gentlemen, Taiyo gets to destroy Pain xD.

Bow down to your new god

 

[kyuukestu]

I'm aware, but the situation Furijia was in and her state when Sakura talked with her after left Sakura to believe she was either a support ninja or a non-fighter. Or someone with little experience in the field, as she had the same panic on her first major mission with Kakashi.

Given that she would've made the connection between her past self and Furijia shouldn't she have been more wary of judging Furijia a non-fighter.

Like I'm not concerned with the fact that Sakura thinks Furijia improved greatly, but I am disgruntled by the assessment of non-fighter.

If the rest of us adopt the idea that Furijia's initial level is 'non-fighter' that'll seriously limit how much I can develop her because it'll be viewed as too large a strength increase for too short a time period.

Academy student level to Sannin disciple level in 3 months already gives the impression of a stupidly large growth rate and that'll become a problem.