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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%

  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%
  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
Retro Master

Retro Master

Godjacob said:
Tayuya: FUCKING FINALLY! This battle has been a total waste of time!

Honestly Tayuya already has regrets letting Sagiso take over if this was the end product she got from it XD
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Shen: Ghost Gym Leader said:
Kiro? Serious? For once in his life?

Kinda a bummer that Sagiso will get no lasting damage though :p
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I mean he’s been serious. Perhaps actually performing the actions would be the right way to describe it.

It’s only for 20 seconds so it probably won’t even be much anyways.
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Retro Master said:
Lmao and Kiro is an expendable prisoner at this point. Might as well leave him to die.
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Nah, to tell you the truth both Kiro and Tayuya can walk sideways in the Leaf Village and do just about whatever they want as long as it doesn't damage the village much.

Since Hinagiku promised to keep them safe as prisoners, it's already a matter of Hyuga pride. Any attempts to harm them shall be taken as a direct slap to the Hyuga's metaphorical face/reputation and will be retaliated against in kind.
 
Retro Master

Retro Master

kyuukestu said:
Nah, to tell you the truth both Kiro and Tayuya can walk sideways in the Leaf Village and do just about whatever they want as long as it doesn't damage the village much.

Since Hinagiku promised to keep them safe as prisoners, it's already a matter of Hyuga pride. Any attempts to harm them shall be taken as a direct slap to the Hyuga's metaphorical face/reputation and will be retaliated against in kind.
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So Kiro can go out and eat at Ichiraku’s whenever he wants? That’s cool. Also, if Kiro were to get attacked or something, would the Hyūga actually retaliate?
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Retro Master said:
So Kiro can go out and eat at Ichiraku’s whenever he wants? That’s cool. Also, if Kiro were to get attacked or something, would the Hyūga actually retaliate?
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You guys weren't restricted to the Hyuga manor from the start ~w~

kyuukestu said:
"In that envelope, you'll find keys and a basic map of clan compounds. Your residency is highlighted, just follow the legend. If you wish to leave clan compounds then you'll need an escort, but apart from that- you're free to go. Ta-ta~"
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As for the retaliation part. If he's not the aggressor, then it'll be taken as a slight to the Hyuga and they will retaliate -albeit, perhaps not physically.
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Retro Master said:
I don’t think Kiro would like an escort following him around. Well Christmas is coming up so maybe that’s their present? Freedom to wander the village without an escort?
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Lmfao.

No. '-'

You're always being followed though, so the escort is rather perfunctory. I could see Hinagiku agreeing to that 'present' given some persuasion, but she'd probably just personally keep an eye on him.

In fact, she might even rope him into touring the Christmas festival along with her daughters. Speaking of the festival, I need to design several Yukata's for that...
 
Retro Master

Retro Master

kyuukestu said:
Lmfao.

No. '-'

You're always being followed though, so the escort is rather perfunctory. I could see Hinagiku agreeing to that 'present' given some persuasion, but she'd probably just personally keep an eye on him.

In fact, she might even rope him into touring the Christmas festival along with her daughters. Speaking of the festival, I need to design several Yukata's for that...
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Poor Kiro, can’t even eat his ramen in peace.

Oh yeah, Kiro’s gonna have to deal with that festival too. Should be fun.
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Retro Master said:
Poor Kiro, can’t even eat his ramen in peace.

Oh yeah, Kiro’s gonna have to deal with that festival too. Should be fun.
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If you marry Sagiso then your restrictions will be dropped with all due haste.

Just putting that out there :blush:

Regarding marriage though, specifically anything that might blossom between Taiyo and Furijia, that's a bit trickier to deal with. There are a few ways I can see that going;

1) Taiyo marries into the Hyuga clan. (It'd be a bit weird for the Clan head of the Hyuga to have been married out into another Clan...it'd be rather embarrassing for the whole Clan.)

2) They marry but Furijia, and all her children, remain Hyuga in name. (This'll produce a rather interesting character trait to explore much later where how these Hyuga-born children would interact with their various half-siblings who would be named Akagami.)

3) Furijia declines to take up the position as Clan Head in favor of marrying into the Akagami Clan. (This'll be sorta embarrassing for the Clan as well, but they can swallow that, it's not too big of a deal. The Clan may however, keep tabs on the Akagami Clan because we can't have unchecked Byakugan babies running around.)

Shen: Ghost Gym Leader said:
Oh! Which reminds me, did Sagiso ever tell anyone about kai’s blackmailing incident?
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Just the people that were there knew, so Shura and Furijia.

She just resolved to screw Kai over later i.e. all the gloating expressions she would've given him while she got him (temporarily) arrested and Kiro detained.
 
Mystic Zander

Mystic Zander

kyuukestu said:
Alright, finally thought of something that won't result in Kiro's death and/or shattering of his bones

Sagiso will be into the Flower Dance, which is quickly becoming a Mist exclusive move since it hasn't been used since Kai :v

That means though, that her Chakra will be spent in 7 attacks.

If Kiro takes these attacks like he took that first kick then... R.I.P

1. The starter move is a Fouette, a High Whip-Kick from Savate. It's ained straight at Kiro's head.

The Fouette when performed by a martial artist accelerates the leg into the opponents face by exerting the muscles and tendons in the thigh and using the knee as a pivot.

It accelerates from 0 to 20 mph in a third of a second, so you can imagine how fast a Chakra fueled kick will be going. Considering the distance between them...the kick lands almost instantaneously. Besides its sheer speed, Sagiso will also be using the hair wrapped around Kiro's leg to screw over his footing - he'll regain that in the next kick though.

If Kiro takes that kick like he did the wind shadow then I'll opt to just call it a really bad concussion.

2. The second kick uses the same leg. While Kiro is still reeling from the 1st kick the second will be a drop kick aimed at the joint on his shoulder.

That'll force his weight downward and reflexively he should tense his legs, but it doesn't really matter.

Since she's aiming for the shoulder joint, there's a chance of dislocating his arm, but that's just bonus points cause she'll now be in position for kick #3

3. With one leg resting on Kiro's shoulder she'll pull a back flip. The leg she has still on the ground will rush up and clock Kiro in the chin.

This blow has the highest likelihood of knocking Kiro unconscious, but more concussions is fine too. She'll transitioning to blow number 4.

4. While in mid-air and with Kiro likely very disoriented from two blows to the head in the past 4 seconds or so, she's going to use her hair to pull his legs from under him.

Because she's pulling from his legs, and she'll be flipping, they'll be inverted with Kiro's legs pointed upward and his head directed toward the ground. Once Sagiso passes the half-full mark she'll grab Kiro's legs, hook her own legs under his armpits (obstructing joint motion and restricting his arm movement) and pile drive him into the ground. That makes 3 blows to the head so i really hope he isn't taking these undefended.

5. She'll roll off Kiro and use her hair like rope to fling him around. She'll be tossing hin towards the training grounds so that the Training halls don't get damaged anymore.

(Ah, yes this does imply that from here on her hair won't be wrapped around his legs anymore)

6. Following another Wind Shadow to catch up to Kiro's air borne body, she'll be knocking him skywards with another kick.

7. Now that he's nice and air borne and probably very concussed, the rest of her Chakra goes into... I think the Jutsu was Great Task of the Dragon


She'll be spent after that.

Fun fact, #4 was originally a knee-dive but I felt like trying to crush Kiro's ribs and internal organs was too severe. So I was kinda stuck there for a bit.


The first 3 kicks will encompasses about 2 seconds altogether. The Fouette is a fraction of a second, the drop kick is moving from his temple to his shoulder so its an equally short time, so the bulk of time spent is actually on the third kick.

Just like try not to break your neck or anything.

OH, and she's coming for Mori after this. :blush:



Questions and Queries, I can have her do less damage in some places if you want.

Or of you're very confident I can take the Flower Dance to version 2 where instead of the version she's used on Kai, you'll get a brand new version modelled of the Nadeshiko Style nin-taijutsu.

That version is vastly more powerful because it's a more complete nature transformation. It's like adding the cutting power of wind nature directly to the body. Shizuka was able to cleave pretty deeply into a robot with a kick, so I figure it'll do wonders to flesh xD
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*Neck cracks* Ya know....sometimes you sound so cocky it makes me wanna....*neck crack* take Sagiso out in a single blow. *Runs fingers along oc sheets*
 
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