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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%

  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%
  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

Godjacob said:
I mean, the Doki are not slow pokes. I get the strat but don't mistake their size for being slugs.
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Not slow pokes, but they'd be attacking something equally as fast —if not faster— that's bouncing around their bodies, perhaps in places its cumbersome for appendages to reach. Going between the legs, swinging off knees, elbows and their clothing, scrambling up their backs. (Not necessarily with her hands mind you, wires are a very effective means of travel here.)

Shen: King of the Mist said:
Are we forgetting chakra eels? Those things can come right from the doki and phase through objects. So Tayuya could be being shielded by shield Doki arm with a coiled up chakra eel all around it. That’s a pretty effective barrier...
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The chakra eels are a problem, perhaps the biggest problem in this battle. I'll have to see how their actually utilized before I can say anything about them.
 
Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Godjacob said:
Calling that her win is being extremely generous. They tied at beast and their final clash left Tayuya helpless and without Doki or Chakra which is how Madoka easily captured her in the puppet prison.

Fact is Kai took out all 3 Doki, pushed Tayuya to Curse Mark 2+ all by himself and still had her in such a prone position. It was his win.
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She drained him of all chakra and left him with one arm, all while one doki remained. All the while he high-tailed it out of there with her hot on his trail. He basically played hide-and-seek with her until he found Taiyo, and then worked with him to finally take out the third one. But upon doing so, he had no tools or chakra left, and Tayuya still had curse mark. So he bluffed and asked for an alliance.

She did win
 
Godjacob

Godjacob

Shen: King of the Mist said:
She drained him of all chakra and left him with one arm, all while one doki remained. All the while he high-tailed it out of there with her hot on his trail. He basically played hide-and-seek with her until he found Taiyo, and then worked with him to finally take out the third one. But upon doing so, he had no tools or chakra left, and Tayuya still had curse mark. So he bluffed and asked for an alliance.

She did win
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Tayuya used up her Curse Mark 2 by that point and Taiyo (Cause he was spent) did nothing to the final Doki. It was still around when Kai & Sagiso left to go to Kiro and was taken out by a lone Ice Drone.
 
Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Godjacob said:
Tayuya used up her Curse Mark 2 by that point and Taiyo did nothing to the final Doki. It was still around when Kai & Sagiso left to go to Kiro and was taken out by a lone Ice Drone.
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Actually no, Taiyo used his puppet parts, sprinting needles, shooting poison gas to obstruct Tayuya’s vision, hence blinding the doki since she is their eyes, allowing Kai to actually get close to it.
 
Godjacob

Godjacob

Shen: King of the Mist said:
Actually no, Taiyo used his puppet parts, sprinting needles, shooting poison gas to obstruct Tayuya’s vision, hence blinding the doki since she is their eyes, allowing Kai to actually get close to it.
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Which is reaching to say this equals them "finally take out" the third one. It was still good to fight after this skirmish (Which is all that was) before Kai did the real work to take it out one v. one. The fact you can't see why someone who is supposed to be a psudo-Jonin in your own words performing like this is problematic is my issue.
 
Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Godjacob said:
Which is reaching to say this equals them "finally take out" the third one. It was still good to fight after this skirmish (Which is all that was) before Kai did the real work to take it out one v. one. The fact you can't see why someone who is supposed to be a psudo-Jonin in your own words performing like this is problematic is my issue.
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Plus that battle royal where the whole team Kohona focused on her :/

I’m not so messed up on her end because she took on SOO many people and continued fighting, but more so on Sakon/ukon’s end
 
Godjacob

Godjacob

Shen: King of the Mist said:
Plus that battle royal where the whole team Kohona focused on her :/
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Again, we discussed why this wasn't impressive in convo. It was one exchange of attacks that Jirobo saved her from after her Doki dodged a couple strikes. Literally nothing any of them couldn't have done. Just funny to me how you claimed the Sakon fight was a disservice and don't see how the Tayuya fight with Kai was similar. The Sound 4 were disserviced in general.
 
Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Godjacob said:
Again, we discussed why this wasn't impressive in convo. It was one exchange of attacks that Jirobo saved her from after her Doki dodged a couple strikes. Literally nothing any of them couldn't have done. Just funny to me how you claimed the Sakon fight was a disservice and don't see how the Tayuya fight with Kai was similar. The Sound 4 were disserviced in general.
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Kidomaru had a fair showing, taken out by unexpected jinchurki friendly fire.

Given Tayuya could have been better, but I’m just saying it’s not as bad as you claim
 
kyuukestu

kyuukestu

kyuukestu said:
She stood steadily, and her clarion voice rang swept across the battlefield, "Shura you've already seen inside the box right? We're retreating!"

This situation was currently beyond their ability to handle, they needed to regroup, reorganize and return with a vengeance. Since they already had a clear idea of what exactly was in that box, they could first retreat then choose whether or not they wanted to risk another battle. However, at the moment a tactical retreat was what Sagisō deemed to be the best course of action. The area around her and Takato immediate exploded with a massive cloud of smoke as Sagisō set off almost 10 smoke bombs simultaneously, using the cover to escape.
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A moment of silence for my attempt at trying to avoid this whole fiasco...


Anyway, I went through and these are how Kai dealt with Tayuya's genjutsu prior to meeting up with Taiyo.
Shen: King of the Mist said:
Kai injected himself with one of his needles, putting a anti sleeping drug that he had shown he had earlier, giving himself a dose of energy, nutrients, chakra, and all the essentials a warrior of the mist would need. As his vision slowly came back to him, the effects of the drug was superior then that of the genjustu. He slowly stood up from his kneeling position, staring down Tayuya.
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Ninja Drugs. Yuki approved method.
Shen: King of the Mist said:
Kai felt like all those years ago, pinned down in a hopeless situation. Alone, a cell could do nothing but die. He was that cell. A phantom version of Kiro stood before him, just outside his reach. He laid his eyes on him.

“Kiro...I cant do this alone...I have to...work as a cell...for the mist!!!!”

In an instant, outside the genjustu, the wyvern like ice drone, the same one that had been his first justu all those years ago, had stabbed Kai in the side. Kai had ordered it to attack, the genjustu fading from him. The creature seemed to melt a bit around it’s face. A single drop of melting ice dropped from his face like a tear, splattering on the tree stump along with kai’s blood. Kai, now snapped out of the genjustu stared back at tayuya, his mask falling from his face, revealing a grin on his sleek face.
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Flashback.
Shen: King of the Mist said:
Before he could make a organized through about it, he felt a stinging pain from behind him. Out of his chest, came a chakra eel, sapping what little chakra he had left! He grabbed his stomach, backing up and propping himself up on a trunk of a tree. He breathed heavily, his innards churning and eyes blurring.
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Failed to deal with it.
 
Godjacob

Godjacob

kyuukestu said:
A moment of silence for my attempt at trying to avoid this whole fiasco...


Anyway, I went through and these are how Kai dealt with Tayuya's genjutsu prior to meeting up with Taiyo.

Ninja Drugs. Yuki approved method.

Flashback.

Failed to deal with it.
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So basically including the Bitch Slap (Which I guess we would put under rule of funny for reasons it failed? XD) Tayuya had four major Genjutsu attempts and it worked...once.

....

Well more than I thought honestly upon memory so props to you.
 
Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Godjacob said:
So basically including the Bitch Slap (Which I guess we would put under rule of funny for reasons it failed? XD) Tayuya had four major Genjutsu attempts and it worked...once.
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Hm? I only recall two.

And that slap would have worked if t were just that or even a needle, as you only shrouded his vision, he still remembers what’s right in front of him
 
Godjacob

Godjacob

Shen: King of the Mist said:
Ah apparently. The first seemed to be a minor genjustu. So the drugs should have been a reasonable enough to deal with it. The pain at first, added with the additional effects of the drugs themselves
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Just saying for a Genjutsu specialist not even batting .500 against a guy in her big fight isn't a good showcase.

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Godjacob said:
Tayuya then played a tune on her flute, one that would easily be mistaken as her giving commands to her Doki to try and gain control from Azumi. When in truth, it would be a subtle Genjutsu on Kai. One that would put his mind & senses in a bit of a daze; almost like he would be in a fog with the faint sounds of Kiro's voice in the distance to lead him away from them and hopefully keep him from being able to pay attention to their conversation.
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This Genjutsu didn't just make it black. It effected his senses as well and even produced an echo of Kiro's voice to try and lure Kai away. Pretty detailed Genjutsu all things considered.
 
Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Godjacob said:
Just saying for a Genjutsu specialist not even batting .500 against a guy in her big fight isn't a good showcase.

Also


This Genjutsu didn't just make it black. It effected his senses as well and even produced an echo of Kiro's voice to try and lure Kai away. Pretty detailed Genjutsu all things considered.
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Oh really? I didn’t know that...my bad on that one
 
Godjacob

Godjacob

Shen: King of the Mist said:
Oh really? I didn’t know that...my bad on that one
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Yeah, no worry I get it. :)

Just felt Tayuya could have done much better than she actually did and it really was a disservice to her as much as you felt Sakon was a disservice to him (Maybe not as much but comparable to a degree).

Bitch Slap was a golden moment I will never regret, just wished she had been better before then to help soften the blow.
 
DarkHydraT

DarkHydraT

Godjacob said:
This RP is turning into "how to make Mori suffer" more and more XD
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So within 24 hours it went from "What's super effective against Reaver's suit?" to "How to make Mori suffer?", I can get behind both topics. Mori is going to need some serious retribution after this though, and he might decide to puncture the corners of the card if King Mori can feel pain.
 
Shen: King of Digimon

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
On the plus side....MS paint strikes again
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DarkHydraT

DarkHydraT

Shen: King of the Mist said:
Beleive it or not, MS paint is WAAAAY easier to do than traditionally, and is easier on the fingers thankfully. Although in my opinion the traditional arts turn out better. But I do appreciate the liking of it XD
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The traditional arts do feel a bit more like characters to me personally, but that don't take away the fact that you do an amazing job at both the art forms!
 
DarkHydraT

DarkHydraT

Shen: King of the Mist said:
Yeah the third drawing pad filled up now... so much digimon and naruto in those things XD. Most are horrible doodles that I will never post, I’ve just been showing you guys the highlights
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Honestly, I think the doodles would be fun to see. That way we won't just take you drawing for granted and you might discover some hidden gems that have just a minor defect
 
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