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Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

First Exam:

  • Written exam

    Votes: 5 41.7%
  • ??? New exam

    Votes: 7 58.3%

  • Total voters
    12
  • Poll closed .
Hey everyone. Just wanted to apologize for my absence. I've been really sick and apparently I missed a good chuck of story. I was already seven pages behind. So rather than trying to catch up and throw some half-a88ed attempt at a response I'll just drop out. It's not like I was really in a fight or anything anyways. I don't think I'm active enough to really keep this going. Thanks for having me though. And if anyone wants to do a small thread just us please do message me. I can handle one-on-one rp's a lot better than my experience here.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
So wouldn’t a byakugan user be able to see that it was Obito under the mask?
Probably a special material, given its obito’s mask of all people.

Hey everyone. Just wanted to apologize for my absence. I've been really sick and apparently I missed a good chuck of story. I was already seven pages behind. So rather than trying to catch up and throw some half-a88ed attempt at a response I'll just drop out. It's not like I was really in a fight or anything anyways. I don't think I'm active enough to really keep this going. Thanks for having me though. And if anyone wants to do a small thread just us please do message me. I can handle one-on-one rp's a lot better than my experience here.

Ah sorry to hear that. I hope you had a good time roleplaying here for the time you were here
 

sSoul

Previously Swirled
Hey everyone. Just wanted to apologize for my absence. I've been really sick and apparently I missed a good chuck of story. I was already seven pages behind. So rather than trying to catch up and throw some half-a88ed attempt at a response I'll just drop out. It's not like I was really in a fight or anything anyways. I don't think I'm active enough to really keep this going. Thanks for having me though. And if anyone wants to do a small thread just us please do message me. I can handle one-on-one rp's a lot better than my experience here.
Unfortunate to see a talented RPer go, but I wish you luck in your future endeavors.
 
How would the byakugan not see under a face mask? Unless it's crafted from very special material which is able to block the byakugan, then there's no reason to believe he byakugan couldn't see under it. There are few things which have proven to be capable of blocking the Byakugan, and the only one I can think of is the barrier jutsu performed by the Sound 4.

I don't think Neji would've helped them though, and the mask episodes are mostly gags.
yeah ok
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Yeah the byakugan can see all that
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I've been looking around for information from the Data Books and things like that and trying to filter what sounds plausible to what sounds more like garbage, and I have found a site that hosts the translations of the databooks, but that's more of a side-note to what I actually want to talk about.

The same site does seem to have done their own little compilation of World Lore. It's specifically stated as 'Theories and Worldbuilding' and seems to be a combination of actually cannon data, and their own little theories based on circumstantial evidence. They, for example, have proposed a very compelling theory as to why Obito was able to control Yagura.

I ended up there because I was looking for information on Mei since I need to know what I'm gonna be working with, particularly a few claims of her being able to wield lightning release, which I wasn't too sure of. I've been putting a lot of research into the Mist, since the land of water is more my territory that the land of fire, with my main Oc's background being set there (Sagisō, Lianhua,). I've tried looking up a Terumi clan but, of course, there seems to be nothing of that sort, though oddly enough there are several well-made OC-Terumi Clans, and even more interesting is that a member of one of these clans is named Taiyō and specializes in nintaijutsu. It's a different type of nintaijutsu that FBS, but it was a pretty interesting find all the same. I'll leave the link to his page here; Taiyō.

Well, I'll try to get a post up later today, but I'll be immersed in a bit of research.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
Also, I plan on making a mute character mostly because I want to see him interact with Baiyan

Hmm...I’d prefer if we would have more development on characters we already have for the moment. Such as you character shiho. I only imagine shiho as being a female shura that appears to fight with him once he’s in a fight. She could use some development
 
I was gonna introduce Baiyan in this arc...as she'd have gotten word that after they(Nadeshiko) sent their kunoichi to Konoha for the exams she never came back and since Baiyan was already traveling it'd make sense for her to check things out. Then I held off cause I already don't know what to do besides training for Sagisō and adding another character into the mix really isn't helping my situation. Though, if anyone wants to meet her while they're traveling now, then I'm open to that. I have an interest in trying out her fighting style, and I want to actually get into a battle to see what problems I encounter. Preferably a female OC so I don't have to go all out with all my plans to pull a win to avoid Nadeshiko tradition.

I'm still going with the same basic concept of having her arrive at the hidden leaf looking for Sagisō, but she'll arrive after Sagisō has already left.

I was also going to have Furījia make an appearance, since what better way for the Hyūga to show sincerity than for an heiress-candidate to be the one singing. (Working with the idea of a meritocracy the heiress won't be set in stone, but instead the most talented Hyūga will be assigned the status of candidate and the one that prevails, in the end, will be given the true title of heir. {Similar to how eastern empires have many 'princes' and the one to inherit the throne isn't necessarily the eldest, but the Crown prince who's proved himself most capable})

Also, while reading I've come upon the issue of grave robbers, and as a solution (Since I don't want to impose the Main-Branch System) Hyūgas, upon their death, have their eyes removed or destroyed before burial.
 
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sSoul

Previously Swirled
I've been looking around for information from the Data Books and things like that and trying to filter what sounds plausible to what sounds more like garbage, and I have found a site that hosts the translations of the databooks, but that's more of a side-note to what I actually want to talk about.

The same site does seem to have done their own little compilation of World Lore. It's specifically stated as 'Theories and Worldbuilding' and seems to be a combination of actually cannon data, and their own little theories based on circumstantial evidence. They, for example, have proposed a very compelling theory as to why Obito was able to control Yagura.

I ended up there because I was looking for information on Mei since I need to know what I'm gonna be working with, particularly a few claims of her being able to wield lightning release, which I wasn't too sure of. I've been putting a lot of research into the Mist, since the land of water is more my territory that the land of fire, with my main Oc's background being set there (Sagisō, Lianhua,). I've tried looking up a Terumi clan but, of course, there seems to be nothing of that sort, though oddly enough there are several well-made OC-Terumi Clans, and even more interesting is that a member of one of these clans is named Taiyō and specializes in nintaijutsu. It's a different type of nintaijutsu that FBS, but it was a pretty interesting find all the same. I'll leave the link to his page here; Taiyō.

Well, I'll try to get a post up later today, but I'll be immersed in a bit of research.
Taiyo: looks really handsome, as a fellow Taiyo I can respect this.
 
Not fatal, just unnecessarily ruthless. He’s sort of brimming with rage at the moment. Just more so being passively rude. But dont worry, I doubt he’ll be doing more of that...probabaly...
They're not fatal, but they could've been.

That senbon could've lodge itself in that girl's throat, and do I even need to explain how freezing somebody's face could be fatal?

Ignoring the first two is already passive enough, any more and we'll have a revolt on our hands. For one outright harming people in broad daylight is forcing Konoha to take action whether they want to or not. The civilians won't sit still if their village proves to be so utterly incapable of defending them.
 

Shen: King of Digimon

Previously Shen: King of the Mist
I would have Danzo act on this, or somebody in the Konoha highers up. But I'd need time for a response.

But yeah, Kai is really, really pushing what he expects to be able to get away with. The Yuki clout can only go so freakin far in Konoha soil.

More so partial comic relief as rather than all seriousness. But I don’t believe he will be doing more of that. Jin wouldn’t approve of kai’s actions There either, but he couldn’t quite break kai’s temper during training unfortunately
 
*sees opportunity to get Taiyo to drunk* wanna see that or no. Also I have a name for a custom eye for anyone to use. It is called the Kuroakugan, so yeah, have fun, Idk what the powers should be but that's up for interpretation.
Drunk Taiyo sounds amazing, I am expecting that he's gonna flirt with either Sakura or Tsunade. Both of them could seriously harm him, just look at Sakura beating a creep
 
*sees opportunity to get Taiyo to drunk* wanna see that or no. Also I have a name for a custom eye for anyone to use. It is called the Kuroakugan, so yeah, have fun, Idk what the powers should be but that's up for interpretation.
Oh, almost forgot

here's a list of real & fan-made dojutsu that I found, some of them are good, some straight up hax, and others rip-offs from other anime xD

http://narutofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Dojutsu (Dojutsu)

My favorite is the Gengan, since it isn't too OP, comes with slight nerfs and drawbacks for its abilities, and reminds more of both the Alpha Stigma, from the legend of the Legendary Heroes, and Campione!
 
My favorite is the Gengan, since it isn't too OP, comes with slight nerfs and drawbacks for its abilities, and reminds more of both the Alpha Stigma, from the legend of the Legendary Heroes, and Campione!

-Isn't too OP
-Gives you 5+ powers

I hate Dojutsu XD. But yeah I do like certain concepts, even if I have a pre-disposed bias against that branch of Kekkei Genkai.
 
-Isn't too OP
-Gives you 5+ powers

I hate Dojutsu XD. But yeah I do like certain concepts, even if I have a pre-disposed bias against that branch of Kekkei Genkai.
Lmfao, read the abilities first. The 2nd, 3rd, and 4th abilities combined are barely on par with the byakugan. I would even say the first four combined would barely equal the byakugan, but I'm not sure how to interpret the first ability.

The fifth ability is Yin-Yang release...and as long as you're not dropping meteors on people it's usually not hyper OP.
 
I joked that someone could have the powers of the Sage of Sixth Paths and you'd think it wasn't OP, but now I have actual proof XD
Eh, I'm obviously not talking about the Sage of Six Path, since what he does is straight up a creation type ability. I think we're talking about different scales here. The Sage of Six paths uses Yin-Yang release and creates the 9 Biju, Madara uses it to drop Meteors, since those are high-end skills, and we've ruled them out, Yin-Yang release would be something akin to Yaomomo's creation quirk, which is versatile, but not really OP (yet).

Btw Kyuu are you looking for a song for Furijia to sing now?
Hmmm, not really. I might have her sing something if I think of something, but otherwise, I'll stick with Furījia's shy character and she won't sing.
 
I don't think we get many examples of "low level" Ying-Yang release. And the fact you ignore the high level stuff exists doesn't mean that they do not and someone with something like that would be stupidly OP. But at this point being OP is the goal more than character or story progression so what do I know XD

Though that concept is kinda near, just fear that higher levels of it would be abusable.
 
I don't think we get many examples of "low level" Ying-Yang release. And the fact you ignore the high level stuff exists doesn't mean that they do not and someone with something like that would be stupidly OP. But at this point being OP is the goal more than character or story progression so what do I know XD

Though that concept is kinda near, just fear that higher levels of it would be abusable.
*shrugs*

Any single concept no matter how meager it may seem is OP when taken to an extreme, people can get very creative. People can get very creative. The only things I rule out as OP are already at god-level in their most meager form, things like Casuality Manipulation, or Authority type abilities, which are practically Omnipotent from the get-go.

Anything else merely has the potential to reach omnipotence.
 
*shrugs*

Any single concept no matter how meager it may seem is OP when taken to an extreme, people can get very creative. People can get very creative. The only things I rule out as OP are already at god-level in their most meager form, things like Casuality Manipulation, or Authority type abilities, which are practically Omnipotent from the get-go.

Anything else merely has the potential to reach omnipotence.

And this is the reason power escalation I fear will become an issue down the road. And things are gonna get OP silly like the War Arc which was the low point of Naruto for me. Anyway gotta go eat dinner, be back soon :)
 

SageNeb

Previously 5DigitNeb
And this is the reason power escalation I fear will become an issue down the road. And things are gonna get OP silly like the War Arc which was the low point of Naruto for me. Anyway gotta go eat dinner, be back soon :)
hmm depends on what u define op. i personally am not one that wants perfect susanoo since i think thats op and the only ability i'd want from it i can do without it. so im just gonna use my variation of armored susanoo. honestly if retro wants kiro to get perfect susanoo, i dont really care. besides, im more troubled on what ms abilities i should get
 
And this is the reason power escalation I fear will become an issue down the road. And things are gonna get OP silly like the War Arc which was the low point of Naruto for me. Anyway gotta go eat dinner, be back soon :)
Hmmm, well that's quantitative power escalation, which does get choppy like in DBZ, what I consider OP is qualitative power escalation, where it's not just a matter of figures and numbers to determine how strong someone is.

For example between general views of Super-speed, and Campione's concept of Godspeed, I'd chose godspeed any day. Godspeed doesn't actually influence your 'speed' at all, what it does is, and a paraphrase from memory, Reduce the time it takes to go from Point A to Point B. Essentially, it's a very specific form of time manipulation. So what if you can run a kajillion miles per fraction of a second? You'd never really be able to outspeed a user of Godspeed because they'd reach to 'a Point B', say the sun, from a 'point A', earth, in an infinitesimally small amount of time by simply adding 0's to the right of the decimal point.

They never really have a constant 'speed' because they manipulate is essentially time.

Of course, within the confines of the world, no one is running from America to Europe in one femtosecond even though it's theoretically possible. So it's an OP ability with the extremes simply ruled out.

Stupidly strong abilities are anything like Casuality manipulation, which distorts cause and effect.

Take a few statements with a cause and an effect.

Cause - Wystria thrust her spear forward.
Effect - Kevin is stabbed.

Now invert them

Cause - Kevin is stabbed.
Effect - Wystria thrust her spear forward.

Since Kevin getting stabbed becomes the cause of the event, it must chronologically have come before Wyst thrust her spear. Since he would've been stabbed before he thrust her spear, her spear thrust hence becomes undodgeable because the effect now precedes the cause. This is simply the lowest level of Casuality manipulation that only takes two directly related events. Add even more events and form complex sequences and you have someone who's essentially unstoppable unless confronted by someone with a power that is just as hax.

Wyst thrust her spear forward
Kevin is stabbed

Kevin is stabbed
The heart is pierced

The heart is pierced
Kevin dies

Using three sequences of cause-effect and manipulating them all you hence have a situation where the cause is 'death' and the effect is the 'attack'. Using the same logic, because his death is the cause it must've happened first and hence you've died before the person has even attacked.

Casuality manipulation is particularly OP because it allows the wielder to dictation events without a Why because why is usually determined by Casuality itself. E.g. You left the stove on and your house burnt down.

Leaving the stove on is the cause, and the effect is the house burning down.

Since it ends up warping everything from time-space, to logic and reasoning, it becomes an insanely BS power.

Though of course, you can also take something as simple as flame manipulation and push it to an unreasonable extreme to create a stupidly strong ability. Since it requires energy to break chemical and atomic bonds (They conversely release energy to form bonds) you'd simply have to magnify the heat of the flame to the point where it forces things around it to enter a state of Heat Decomposition.

Now you have a flame manipulation ability that essentially forces things to break down on the molecular level.

The hax are everywhere :v
What you really need is just people who use abilities reasonably.
Where is Furijia right now anyways Kyuu
I haven't decided, she's likely at the Hyūga mansion since there'd be no reason to carry a genin to face off with the Yuki clan.
 
Taiyo is getting girls without even trying, and let's be honest. He would make a great sage, he can't be worse than Orochimaru
If you consider getting rejected by both Azumi and Sakura as ‘getting girls without trying’ then yes, you’re right. The only girl he’s gonna get is Tsuki... Yes everyone, I’m a Taiyo x Tsuki shipper. Surprise surprise :p
 
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