Private/Closed Naruto AU RP: discussion

[Shen: King of Digimon]

It will be the Orochimaru invasion, which will get veeeeery interesting. Also, in case you were curious about my Zaku beating up girl statement before:

 

[SageNeb]

Tragic Backstory: Okay... not every character with a tragic backstory is a Mary Sue. I could’ve made a character with a perfect backstory where nothing has gone wrong and they’re always in a good mood. Unfortunately that’s not my style. Plus, the backstory shouldn’t determine if a character is a Mary Sue cuz no matter what the backstory is, there isn’t enough evidence in just a backstory. Plus, nearly character in Naruto had a tragic backstory, with that logic, you’re saying they’re all Mary Sues.
Special Connections: Let’s see, I don’t think you’re talking about Orochimaru cuz that would just nullify this point so it must be Mei. I think it’s just a combination of her generosity and the fact that being the only Uchiha in a village that would like the extra firepower would draw a lot of attention on you. Plus there’s a lot more on this topic I’ll delve into later down the storyline so plz be patient.
Special Abilities: Sharingan. I don’t know what else I can say here. Maybe Kiro shouldn’t have the sharingan?
Easy Fights: So against Taiyo and Kilka, they were both weakened and exhausted to the point where they were easily caught off guard. The fact that they didn’t expect the sharingan helped Kiro’s case. And let’s be honest here, I doubt any of the other characters would have had trouble with them. For Tomiko, let’s see, Tomiko broke his rib, caused him to activate his sharingan when he didn’t want to, kept getting back up no matter how many attacks Kiro threw at her. Let’s be honest here and say that if I didn’t say anything, Tomiko would’ve kept getting back up and Kiro would’ve lost cuz I was not gonna do the same thing. The only reason she stopped was cuz of Yasu intervening and even then... (insert deleted rant on Tomiko here). Basically thx Jacob cuz if it was a quick fight, then it would help this point.
Groups: No, that’s not happening.
Looks: Comes with the package of being an Uchiha. Too bad none of them actually use their looks.

looks was mostly a joke, uh wasn't Godjacob saying like ALL THE TIME about how Tomiko barely got a scratch in? wtf lol ok uh yea thats stupid that Kiro shouldn't have sharingan and that made me laugh about mei well I don't really mind and tragic backstory yeee XD

 

[sSoul]

Also the fact that "the doors have eyes" philosophy is taken to the extreme is kinda scary, for all I know, Taiyo could be in the bathroom, doing his business or even practicing jutsus and someone else could be watching him and he'd never even know. Back on the Orochimaru invasion Arc, the potential fights I'm most excited for is Taiyo vs Kiro 2, Taiyo vs Kin, and Taiyo vs Azumi 2. And I bet there will be even more OC matches to get hyped about.

 

[SageNeb]

kiro will probably just be with mei the entire time or something.

 

[Retro Master]

XD also yea I sort of do. Also I could think of a few ways to improve Kiro after the massacre... Have you figured out yet your response to that situation I talked about before? With Raiku?

I don’t remember what situation you’re talking about lel

Even if I wanted to make Raiku a girl magnet it's a bit too late considering a, you already got that role, b I never mentioned it before, c no girl OC from the Leaf would even have a trace of ever being attracted to him XD

A: Since when can only one character be a girl magnet.
B: Lel, I never mentioned it until my last post cuz I just remembered that was a trait the Uchiha have.
C: Why is that? Raiku seems like a way better character for a female to be attracted to.

 

[Retro Master]

I think we are waiting for Kiro, Lako, Katsuo, and Hashima

Kiro will show up a little bit before the matches begin. Remember, he’s knocked out with a lot of chakra loss. So go on ahead and I’ll bring in Kiro when it’s time.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Yeah, that’s the thing about the ninja world, you don’t know who’s watching it listening in. Truly terrifying sometimes. BUT the Orochimaru invasion will get awesome with all the possibilities of battles and places your trying to protect/destroy, people you want to kill or save, and many other things. Kai would just want his mist ninjas in safety, after all Xenos aren’t people lol

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Kiro will show up a little bit before the matches begin. Remember, he’s knocked out with a lot of chakra loss. So go on ahead and I’ll bring in Kiro when it’s time.

Okay! So just Katsuo and Lako. Then @Mystic Zander @Zcraftgaming , you guys are up!

 

[sSoul]

I think I wanna make a female OC for the Orochimaru Invasion Arc.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Feel free to do so, just make a character bio for her

 

[sSoul]

Name: Tsuki Yuki
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Jutsu type: specializes in Ice Ninjustu and Genjutsu, peferring not to endeavor in Taijustu but has knowledge of it nonetheless
Description: flowing black hair, pale, wears a sky blue jacket, a torn hidden mist headband
Bio: lived a relatively peaceful life, with few occasional struggles, resulting in her passive aggressive nature. Naive, initially thought Orochimaru was just a regular sensei, taking in a few lucky ninja to be taught his ways. Later, she grows a great hatred for him when she finds out about the curse marks.
Likes: Peace, Nature,
Dislikes: War, Orochimaru
Missions completed: 10 D Rank, 5 C Rank, 0 B, A or S Rank

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Name: Jenna Atsumi
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Jutsu type: All types of Jutsu, even willing to learn forbidden jutsu; specializes in Ice Ninjustu
Description: bright blue hair, pale, wears a sky blue jacket, a torn hidden mist headband
Bio: lived a relatively peaceful life, with few occasional struggles, resulting in her passive aggressive nature. Naive, initially thought Orochimaru was just a regular sensei, taking in a few lucky ninja to be taught his ways. Later, she grows a great hatred for him when she finds out about the curse marks.
Likes: Peace, Nature,
Dislikes: War, Orochimaru
Missions completed: 10 D Rank, 5 C Rank, 0 B, A or S Rank

Woah woah. The jutsu type is as OP as they get lol. Able to learn all types of jutsu is a gigantic feat in itself, even the immortal Orochimaru can’t learn them all, and he has an entire village of resources lol. That’s the only flaw I have in it. Also ice style can only be learned by the Yuki clan, which is native to the mist village. So before I accept this bio, you may need to address these things

 

[sSoul]

I see, I'll drop Genjustu, I hardly know it exists and Forbidden Jutsu because I doubt this character will accomplish such feats. Also I can change her last name so that issue will be resolved. Thank you Shen.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

I see, I'll drop Genjustu, I hardly know it exists and Forbidden Jutsu because I doubt this character will accomplish such feats. Also I can change her last name so that issue will be resolved. Thank you Shen.

Still, all types of jutsu I was mainly referring to elelmental. Orochimaru’s great goal In life is to learn all jutsu and all elemental types, which he has yet to do even now, she can’t learn all elemental types, that would put her above the skill of everyone in this universe that’s not Akatsuki level or higher

 

[SageNeb]

C: Why is that? Raiku seems like a way better character for a female to be attracted to.

Sorry, not would, DOES.

 

[SageNeb]

Kanshi: Kai... it appears we have female kin

 

[sSoul]

Oh that's what you meant, I was referring to the basic three types of Jutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu, she obviously can't learn all types of Ninjutsu. Apologies for the confusion.

 

[SageNeb]

Kai would just want his mist ninjas in safety, after all Xenos aren’t people lol

same with Kanshi but specifically Kai

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Kai:....! So we do! It would pleasure to meet her, we have so much to talk about!

Also, your bio is accepted Souldemon

 

[SageNeb]

I now realize Jenna is an elaborate attempt to become a ship of Raiku. Niet.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Kai: YOU CANNOT MATE WITH A XENO!!!!

 

[SageNeb]

Genjutsu, Taijutsu, and Ice-Style Ninjutsu. Interesting... though I think Kinjutsu, or forbidden jutsu should be a bit rare, it's a bit weird for ALL our OC's to have one.

 

[SageNeb]

Kai: YOU CANNOT MATE WITH A XENO!!!!

Kanshi: I agree... if you are truly loyal like your kin, I'd suggest procreating with a fellow Kiri-nin.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Genjutsu, Taijutsu, and Ice-Style Ninjutsu. Interesting... though I think Kinjutsu, or forbidden jutsu should be a bit rare, it's a bit weird for ALL our OC's to have one.

Actually I think there’s only 2 OC’s that have shown to have that. Kai and Sagiso, as far as I remember

 

[SageNeb]

Raiku: uhhh... lol. I'm married to my clan.
Kiro: *kills clan*
Raiku: ;-; u killed ma wife.

also teh situation I meant was his sword drawn to Kiro's neck with EMS asking why he killed everyone he loved

 

[SageNeb]

Actually I think there’s only 2 OC’s that have shown to have that. Kai and Sagiso, as far as I remember

exactly

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Raiku: uhhh... lol. I'm married to my clan.
Kiro: *kills clan*
Raiku: ;-; u killed ma wife.

also teh situation I meant was his sword drawn to Kiro's neck with EMS asking why he killed everyone he loved

Just...perfect XD


Kai: At least we still have ours!
-Azumi looks over-
Kai:..:.Right?

 

[sSoul]

Jenna: But I haven't done anything yet, I'm so confused
*cries

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Kai*brings out a chart* Don’t fret! I have complied 62 reasons as to why Mating with xenos is wrong! We’ll get those vile thoughts out soon enough!

 

[sSoul]

Jenna: *sniffles Okay, lemme hear them.

 

[SageNeb]

Kanshi: look at what you did! Normally I wouldn't care about Xenos unless they're from the Sand, BUT YOU MADE OUR KIN CRY. YOU SHALL PAY!!!
Raiku: hold up fam, i got a paper saying I left the leaf for Kiri.
Kanshi: Oh... well a Kiri-nin can't possibly do wrong, welcome to our village. But if you betray us.... prepare to die.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

I imagine if Raiku defected to the mist, Kai would treat him like a father treats his daughters new boyfriend lol.

Kai: ....And number 62, the offspring would be a half Xeno abomination, if one of the parents are still loyal to another, and must be confiscated.

 

[SageNeb]

Raiku: wait... technically doesn't that mean I'm not a Xeno?
NO YOU STILL MUST NOT GO TO JENNA!! it's a forced marriage...

 

[Retro Master]

Wait, so is Raiku and Jenna the first ship?!

 

[SageNeb]

No it's Kilka x Taiyo. Also do you have an updated respond for Kiro yet?

 

[sSoul]

Funny how both of my OCs have a ship...

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Kai: -Kai.exe is processing- ...I suppose it wouldn’t...I have to check the 62 rules again!

Kai would have a lot of actions to do if this kicks off haha

 

[SageNeb]

Raiku: noo, I don't wanna ship. Unless it's one of my followers. Like Saizo.
Saizo: What? I'm only loyal to Lord Danzo!
Raiku: You'll see...

 

[kyuukestu]

looks was mostly a joke, uh wasn't Godjacob saying like ALL THE TIME about how Tomiko barely got a scratch in? wtf lol ok uh yea thats stupid that Kiro shouldn't have sharingan and that made me laugh about mei well I don't really mind and tragic backstory yeee XD

Pulling an untouched is easy. The most damage Sagisō's taken has recoiled from her jutsu, and the one suicidal attack from Kai. And even Kiro couldn't have dodged that one. Attacks with absolutely no regards to one's life are the most difficult to deal with because you're opponents looking to trade death blows. Especially for a Taijutsu specialist like Sagisō.

Sagisō: This is why I hate these fanatical freaks...

Still, all types of jutsu I was mainly referring to elelmental. Orochimaru’s great goal In life is to learn all jutsu and all elemental types, which he has yet to do even now, she can’t learn all elemental types, that would put her above the skill of everyone in this universe that’s not Akatsuki level or higher

Hmmm, checked the Wikia, and Orochimaru has all nature transformations and wood style. He just doesn't have the combined kekkei genkai nature transformations; boil, storm, glass, dust etc.

 

[Shen: King of Digimon]

Pulling an untouched is easy. The most damage Sagisō's taken has recoiled from her jutsu, and the one suicidal attack from Kai. And even Kiro couldn't have dodged that one. Attacks with absolutely no regards to one's life are the most difficult to deal with because you're opponents looking to trade death blows. Especially for a Taijutsu specialist like Sagisō.

Sagisō: This is why I hate these fanatical freaks...



Hmmm, checked the Wikia, and Orochimaru has all nature transformations and wood style. He just doesn't have the combined kekkei genkai nature transformations; boil, storm, glass, dust etc.

Orochimaru still doesn’t have them all then, just most. Also, Sagiso did take a few hits from the barrage of needles from the ice titan being destroyed, if I remember. But yeah, fanatics are the tricky ones muhaha